中考英语作文评分标准

河南中招英语作文评分标准评分原则

1..总分分，按个档次给分中档属于第三档（分）21557-9评分时，先跟据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求

3.来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分.总词数不足的，可在本题总得分中扣去分41评分时应注意的主要内容为内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和正确性、I上下文的连贯性和语言的得体性各要素的权重大体为卷面书写（分），内容1分（其中要点分，语意连贯分），语法结构、单词拼写、标点（分），9544词数（分）1拼写与标点符号是语言正确性的一个方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑【各档次的给分范围和要求】第一档（分）写出全部内容要点，语句流畅基本无语法和词汇方13-15面的错误，少数错误主要是由于较高级词汇或复杂结构所致词数达到要求基本无单词拼写和标点错误第二档（分）写出大部分要点类容语句较流畅有少量语法和词10-12汇方面的错误，但不影响理解有少量单词拼写和标点错误第三档（分）写出部分要点语句基本通顺有一些语法和词汇错误，7-9有少量单词和标点错误这一现象，存在两种不同观点:有些人认为有必要另一些人认为没有必要跟老师学比自己学好可以巩固课堂所学内容可以学到更多的东西容易养成依赖习惯学生需要时间休息请您根据以上提示,以为L.Trainin.Clas.o.Famil.Teache.Necessar.题，写一篇.词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点文12章开头已给出.不计入总字数参考词汇巩strengthen要求层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译I..Trainin.Clas.o.Famil.Teache.N ecessary______________________________________________________nt.abou.it.【参考范文】.....L.Trainin.Clas.o.Famil.Teache.Necessary..Mor.an.mor.middl.schoo.student.ar.goin.t.aLkind.o.trainin.classe.o.havin.famil.teacher.a.weekend.Ther.ar.tw.differen.viewpoint.abou.it...Som.think.Lnecessary.Firstly.it.mor.effectiv.t.stud.wit..teache.tdes.the.ca.lear..lo.more.Other.thin.i.unnecessary.Fo.on.thing.stu dent.ca.easil.for.th.habi.o.dependence.Fo.another.student.nee.tim.t.rela.fro.tim.t.time...Lm.opinion.whethe..trainin.clas.o.famil.teache.i.neede.jus.depends.Lyo.ar.reall.ver.wea.a.o.intereste.i..certai.subject.mayb.it.O.fo.you.Bu.b.sur.t.choos..goo.an.suitabl.clas.o.teacher.otherwis.i.woul.b..wast.o.tim.an.money..最近，你班同学就“父母是不是最好的老师”这一话题展开了讨论有些9人认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然请根据下表提示，写一篇短文介绍讨论结果以和你的个人观点观点o原因同意不完全同意教会如何生活过分溺爱1指出缺点，指明方向强加兴趣、价值观2教会富有爱心希望值过高3要求.根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯;

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11.们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure,为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压Better Life”力的好办法，与同学分享，内容包括同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；•我的压力是什么；•・我是如何成功缓解我的压力的注意文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名词数短文的开80-100;头已给出（不计入总词数）Less Pressure,Better LifeHello.boy.an.girls..Pressur.i..seriou.proble.i.today.world.Stud ent.i.ou.clas.ar.und__________________e.to.muc.pressure.That’.all.Than.you.参考范文Less Pressure,Better LifeHello,boys andgirls!Pressur.i..seriou.proble.i.today.world.Student.i.ou.clas.ar.unde.to.muc.pressure.Som.student.can.ge.o.wel.wit.thei.classmates.whil.other.ma.worr.abou.th ei.exams.・evening,.ha..tal.wit.m.mother,.tol.he..wa.no.lazy,.reall.fel.tired.,neede.tim.t.relax.M.mothe.agree.wit.m.a.last.S..thin..conversatio.wit.parent.i.necessar.t.solv.th.problem.,..That.all.Than.you!.你心目中的好老师是什么样子的？一名受欢迎的老12师应该有什么样的特点围绕这个主题，用英语写一篇词左右的短文80The GoodTeacher inYour Heart.Firstly..teache.shoul.b.abl.t.pla.diff eren.role.i.school.H.ca.car.abou.u.lik..mother.H.ca.giv.u.knowl edge.H.ca.pla.game.an.discus.problem.wit.u.lik..friend..Secondly..teache.shoul.b.patien.an.helpful.Whe.w.ar.i.trouble.h.・ca alway.hel.u.pati ently.y-.Fourthly..teache.shoul.b.fun.H.ca.mak.hi.clas.interestin.an.mak.u.laugh..爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪假设你是李明，你们学校的13正在举办主题为“付出即是收获”的征文活动，请你联“English Garden系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿要求.文中不得出现真1实人名和校名等相关信息词标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数…

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1.对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分2凡不写任何内容，抄袭、所写内容无法看清者一律给分河南中考英语作文预测

（一）2016每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功

1.请你用英语写一篇词以上的短文，谈谈你在成长过程中所经历的最大的80一次蜕变内容要求.变化前后分别是什么样子的？.促成你12转变的主要原因是什么？.你为变化而付出了怎样的努力？注意短文3中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息I used to bea naughtyboy andmy motherusedto be angryw ithme.Now Id liketo sayI vechanged alot.In fact,It isbeca useofmy mother s diaries.One dayI sawmy mother s diarybook byaccident whileI was1ooking formynotebook.I wassurprised andbegan toread my mothers diaries.In herdiaries,sheshowed herdeep lovefor me.She alsoexpressed herdisappointment when I mademistakes.She saidshe lovedme somuch andshebelieved Icoul dbeagood boy.IJcouldn thelp cryingafter readingmymothersdiaries.Since thatday,I havechanged alot.I workhard andshare somehouse work.I11try tounderstand mymothersfeelings..最近，你们班就“幸福是什么”进行了一次讨论,学生们发表了自己的看2法，他们认为.认真学习是幸福，父母总是关心他们的生活与健康,是幸1福有时当他们做错了事，周围的人会帮助他们改正，他们感到幸福

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3.你同意同学们的看法，你认为当你做……你也会感到幸福要求:

①第三要点的内容需用三到四句话展开合理想象，进行适当发挥；

②词数左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数80Happiness isfor everyone.Some studentsthink happinesscome sfromstudying hardat theirlessons.Their parentsare alwayst akinggoodcare oftheir lifeand theirhealth.They feelhappy.Somestudents saywhen theydo something wrong,peoplearound themwill helpthem tocorrect it.They believethis ishappiness.I agreewith them.I lovemy friendscongratulating mewhenIenj oysuccess.When Ido somethingkind toothers,like congratulatingthem,I feelhappy,too.When wethink ofthese things,we realizethat happinessis allaroundus.“安全你我他,幸福千万家”，关爱生命，确保平安，让我们的生活更

3.为题写“Keeping safeathome/at school/on theroad…一篇词左右的英语短文80要求补全标题条理清晰，语言流畅；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名内容包括:？⑵1Is itimportant to keep safe…Why doyou thinkso,3How canyou besafe...Keeping safe at schoolIt s important for us to keepsafe atschool andit willmake uss tudybetterand livemore happily.In orderto keepsafe atschoo1,wemust dolike these.First,be inorder whenwe aregoing upstairs ordownstairs.Second,make sureto besafe whenwe ared oingsports.Try nottobehurt.Third,know aboutsome knowledge ofsafety.Its helpfulto us.If wefollow theadvice,we11make ourselvessafeatschool.

4.醉酒驾车,已经成为的社会问题,越来越受到许多人不遵守交通规则，仍酒后驾车，对自己和他人的安全不负责的关注,根据下面提示,写篇/MW词左右80的短文,谈你的看法现象后因为酒后驾车，给自己和他人和很多家庭带来伤害果建为了自己和他人的安全，呼吁司机不要酒后驾车，呼吁更多严格的议规则和制度出台提示词酒后驾车不负责的交通事drunk drivingirresponsible故对.....造成伤害traffic accidentdo harmto---Everyone shouldobey thetraffic rules.Yet thereare stillmany不负责任的）people drunkdriving.Itsirresponsiblef notonly tothedrivers themselvesbut alsothe others.Many driversdrive veryfast in the street,or eveninthecrowde dtrafficwhile theyare drunk.Drunk driverscaused alot ofacci dents.Thousands ofpeople werekilledand manymore wereinjured everyyear.In orderto keepthe publieJsafe,we shouldnt drunkdrive.We mustobey thetraffic rules.If youdrink toomuch,you shouldntdrive byyourself.You dbettertake ataxi orask othersfor help・The governmentissupposed tomake moreserious rulesand lawsas soonas possible.

5.Keep HealthyEveryone wantstokeep healthy today,especially ourstudents.,But wedon tpayattention toour health.Some ofthem goto schoolwithout breakfastinthemorning.Some studentsand pupilsplay computergames orwatch TVall day,especially atweekends.Many boyst hinkit is coolto drinkor smoke.It isimportantforus tohave goodhabits.We shouldeat breakfastevery morning.We canwatch TVor playgames fora shorttime,then havea rest.We alsocan takepartin someclubs.I thinkitisnecessary forustokeephealthy..以a（我想为学校做一件事）.为题写一

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