【名师】2022-2023学年小升初英语易错点专练08书面表达15篇（广州教科版专版，含答案）

小升初英语易错点专练08书面表达篇（广州教科版专版）15

一、书面表达题型的命题特点书面表达以图画、图表或文字说明等形式呈现，旨在考查学生运用英语笔头表达的综合能力，考查学生基本的遣词造句和连句成篇的能力，以及观察力、想象力和发散性思维能力

二、书面表达六步法

1.审确定文体记叙文、说明文、或是应用文（书信、日记）及基本要素5W1H:When（时间）、Where（地点）、Who（人物）、What（什么事）、How（怎么样）、Why（为什么）确定人称和时态

2.抓抓要点，确定主要内容

3.扩扩展成句句子宜短不宜长，句型宜简不宜繁

4.连连句成文注意句与句之间、段与段之间的过渡，适当添加过渡词或短语，使文章更加自然、流畅

5.改查漏改错通读几遍，看行文是否通顺，要点是否齐全，词数是否符合要求，大小写、标点符号、单词拼写是否正确

6.抄认真抄写注意书写规范、整洁写作展示Part I【范例】请你描述一下校园操场学生们的活动【写作准备】表达兴趣爱好的词汇短语:skate滑冰ski滑雪run跑步jog慢跑人们通常会有哪些活动，不少于45词13许多野生动物处于险境，濒临灭绝，请用不少于5句话说说为了保护动物我们应该做什么，不应该做什么？14假设你的名字叫做Tommy,请根据以下思维导图写一封电子邮件给你的朋友Mike告诉他你的“广州之旅”计划，邀请他一同游玩，不少于45词fiom Jime.21st.to Jrnie26th15写一则关于你周六活动的日记注意日记的格式，词数不少于45词内容包括

1.7点起床，洗脸，做早操；

2.7:30吃早餐；

3.上午写作业，看书；

4.下午跟朋友一起打乒乓球；

5.晚上看半小时电视，和父母聊天；9点睡觉参考答案1Yesterday wasMothers Day.I wantedto makemy mumhappy.In themorning,!cleaned thehouse.After that,I wentto the flower shopto buysomeflowers.As soonas mymum cameback,I sentthe flowersto herand gavehera kiss.In theevening,I madea cardfor mymum andshowed itto her.Mymum wasvery happy.2There arefour seasonsin ayear.They arespring,summer,autumn andwinter.It oftenrains inspring.We canplant treesand flowers.Summer isveryhot.Its agood ideato goswimming andenjoy the beautiful beach.Autumn isthe bestseason forharvest.We canpick upfresh fruit.Winter iscold.We cango skiingand makea snowman.I loveall theseasons,becausethey arenice.3Childrens Dayis coming.There aregoing tobe manyactivities in myschool onthat day.The activitiesare singing、dancing magicshows modelmakingcooking andso on.I planto takepart in the modelmaking becauseIlike makingthings.Im surewe willhave agood timeon ChildrensDay.4Its asunny daytoday.Many peopleare doingall kinds of activitiesatthe park.Some areplaying badminton,some areskating,some areridingbikes,some arewalking dogs,I amreading underthe tree.The airis freshhere.I cansee flowerseverywhere andhear birdssinging.I feelrelaxed.5Many peoplelike doingsports.My favouritesport isplaying tabletennis.I oftenplay itwith myclassmates afterschool.Sometimes I play itwith my parents.Playing table tennis makesme strong,healthy andhappy.Ihope tobe atable tennisplayer whenI growup.6The SpringFestival isthe mostimportant festivalin China.Before theSpringFestival,people alwaysclean theirhouses andgo to theflower fair.They buyflowers,new clothesand manyother things.During theSpringFestival,people greet each other.Children getlucky money.They usuallyhavebig mealsand talkabout theirdays.7My nameis Ben.I am10years old.I amtall andthin.I likeplayingsports.Now I am studyingin aprimary school.I learnChinese,maths,Englishand manyother subjectsat school.Iaminterested inall subjects.I workhardand Iam oneof thebest studentsinmyclass.8I havea pet.Its adog.Ifs twoyears old.Its beautifuland clever.It hastwobig eyes.Its colouris white.It lookslike snow.Every timeI comebackhome,it willwait forme atthe door.I goout towalk thedog afterdinnerevery day.When Iam happy,it playswith me.When Iam sad,it stayswith me.The dogis mygood friend.9Dr SunYatsen wasa veryfamous andimportant personin Chinesehistory.He wasa greatleader.He triedto freethe Chinesepeople andmaketheir livesbetter.He lovedthe Chinesepeople andthe Chinesepeople lovehim.Today manystreets,schools andparks havehis name.What agreat man!10I usuallyget up at6:30in the morning,then Iwash my face andbrushmy teeth.I havebreakfast at7:00and thengo toschool athalf pastseven.Ihave fourclasses inthemorningand twointheafternoon.I gohome atsixoclock andthen havedinner with my parents.After dinner,I goout towalkmy dog.At10oclock,I goto bed.11The Mid-Autumn Festivalis oneof thetraditional Chinesefestivals.ltis oftenheld inSeptember.We usuallyget togetherand havea bigmeal.In theevening,we eatdelicious mooncakeswhile watchingthebeautifulmoon.TheMid-Autumn Festivalis avery nicefor Chinesepeople.12The DragonBoat Festivalis celebratedon thefifth dayof thefifthmonth inthe Chinesecalendar.People alwayseat ricedumplings andwatchdragon boatraces tocelebrate it.We caneat allkindsofdelicious ricedumplings.Dragon boatraces arevery popular.Its excitingto watchthedragon boatrace.13Many wild animals are in dangernow.Some ofthem haveno placestolive in.Its timefor usto savethem andprotect the Earth.First,we shouldplantmore treesand givethem agood placeto livein.Second,we shouldntkillwildanimalsor buythings madefrom animalsin danger.Third,weshouldnt pollutetheEarth.Lets savethe animalstogether.14Dear Mike,The summerholiday iscoming.I willgo travellingin Guangzhouwithmy parentsfrom June.21st toJune26th.We willgo thereby train.People saythatGuangzhou isa modernand beautifulcity.We planto visitGuangzhouTower,climb BaiyunMountain andenjoy deliciousfood.I cantwait totravelthere.Will youjoin usYoursTommy15S aturday,May.20th.SunnyToday isSaturday.I gotupatseven.I washedmyfaceand didmorningexercises.At7:30I havebreakfast.I didmy homeworkand read books inthemorning.In theafternoon,Iplay tabletenniswithmyfriends.In theevening,I watchTV forhalf anhour andtalk withmy parents.I goto bedat9oclock.play badmintonkT羽毛球play basketball才丁篮球play football踢足球playtabletennis打乒乓球play volleyball打排球swim游泳skip跳绳play thepiano弹钢琴play theguitar弹吉他play theviolin拉小提琴do somereading/readbooks看书【写作步骤】

1.开头引出人物活动场所，点明活动地点例Look,the childrenare inthe playground.

2.正文详细介绍题中各个人物正在做的事情例Some ofthem areplaying badminton.

3.描述人物的状态或心情伊］:They playhappily.【参考范文】Many childrenareinthe playgroundnow.Some boysareplaying basketballor football,some girlsare readingbooks underthe tree.Ilike skating.So Iam skatingwithmybest friendJudy.We playhappily.强化训练Part II1昨天是母亲节请结合图片内容并适当发挥写一篇45词左右的文章具体描述你为母亲做了什么？你的母亲感受如何？2请结合图片分别描述春夏秋冬四个季节的特点及适合进行的活动，不少于45词“六一儿童节就要到了你校将举行欢庆六一的活动活动有唱歌、跳舞、魔术表演、模型制作、巧手烹饪等，请你写一篇45词左右的文章说说你打算参加哪个活动以及参加这个活动的原因4请观察图片，用不少于45词写一写在公园开展的活动和景象请你描述一项你最喜欢的运动不少于45词greeteachother,get luckymoney请结合图片和提示说说中国的传统节日The SpringFestival,不少于45词clean thehouse gototheflowerfair请你写一篇自我介绍从年龄、外貌、爱好、习惯等方面进行描述，注意不要出现真实的姓名和学校信息要求表达准确，语句通顺,不少于45个单词Introduce Myself8你有养宠物吗？你最喜欢什么动物？它有什么特点？你为什么喜欢它？请你写一篇不少于45词的习作与我们分享一下介绍一位你熟悉的名人或偶像，不少于45词10请以“My dailylife”为题，写一篇不少于45词的习作介绍你的日常生活请结合图片写一习作说说中国传统节日“The Mid-Autumn Festival”人们通常会有哪些活动，不少于45词12请结合图片写一篇习作说说中国传统节日“The DragonBoat Festival”。