SectionⅦReadingforWriting有关旅行计划的电子邮件

有关旅行计划的电子Section VHReading forWriting-------邮件本单元的写作任务是读理查德给小李介绍旅行计划的电子邮件后，给朋友写一封介绍旅行计划的电子邮件I.PrewritingI Learningto writeafter themodelDear XiaoLi,My timehere inChina isgoing well.I lovemy newschool andclassmates.Over the Octoberholiday,my parentsand I are planning to goto Xianto seethe Terracotta Army.Fve heardthatit isan amazingsight,and Icant waitto go.To methe storyof theTerracottaArmyisalmost unbelievable.Ifs amazingthat thereare morethan8,000statues,and noone inmoderntimes knewabout themuntil the1970s.Were alsoplanningtovisit severalother placesin Xian.My dad and Iare both lookingforward to going to the ShaanxiHistory Museum,because mydad loveshistory and I have！heard thatthis museumis knownas aChinese treasurehouse”Were also going totheXian CityWall anda fewother famoussights.Were taking the train,leaving theday beforethe Octoberholiday begins.Were arrivingat930am andwill startsightseeing rightaway,so Ihope wesleep wellon thetrain!I guessthats allfor now!Ill writeagain soonand sendphotos!Do youhave anyplans fortheing holidayHope tohear fromyou soon.Your friend,RichardII Preparationfor writing—Words andphrases

①利用如下take advantageof©as follows

③游览

④出发take atour set out/off

⑤七日游

⑥欣赏风景a sevendaytrip enjoy the scenery

⑦leave for动身去某地

⑨即将来临⑩乘公共汽车around thecomer takea busII.Whilewriting假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩请你给你的好友李华写一封分享你的出行计划email,要点.元月日下午点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海，到上海后入住预订酒店，休1212息一晚.第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品

2.第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌

3.元月日乘坐高铁返回424注意.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

1.词数左右5100参考词汇:高铁预订迪士尼乐园high speedrailway bookDisneyland recreation游乐设施纪念品上海科facilities souvenirShanghai Scienceand TechnologyMuseum技馆东方明珠Oriental Pearl TowerStep1List theoutline ofthe passage.Paragraph1I willhave a fourday tripto Shanghaiwith my family.Paragraph2What weshall doevery daywhile in Shanghai.Paragraph3How aboutthe planfor yourwinter holidayStep2List the words,phrases andsentences.

1.Words andphrases

①预订

②登记book vt.check in提前

④同时’§in advanceat thesame time

⑤四天的旅行afourday trip

2.Sentences

①随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天asAs thewinter holidayis ing,I willhave afourday tripto Shanghaiwith myfamily.

②到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网上预订，这样我们才有足够的精力去参观上海so thatUpon arriving inShanghai,we willcheck in the hotelfor agood restfirst,which willbebooked onlinein advance,so thatwe canhave enougheneigy tovisit Shanghai.

③下午我们将登上东方明珠，在那里我们可以欣赏到上海的全景from whichWewill climb the OrientalPearlTowerin theafternoon,from whichwe will enjoythe whole view of Shanghai.Step3Draft thearticle byusing the following words.，as so that,besides,from whichDearLi Hua,How iseverything goingAs thewinter holidayis ing,I willhave afourdaytripto Shanghaiwithmyfamily.Here ismy plan.We areleaving Lilingfor Shanghaiby thehigh speedrailway ataround200p.m.onJan.21st.UponarrivinginShanghai,we willcheck inthe hotelfor agood restfirst,whichwill bebooked onlinein advance,sothatwe canhave enoughenergy tovisit Shanghai.Onthe secondday,we aregoing tothe Disneylandto experienceall kindsof recreationfacilities,and buysome souvenirsat thesame time.On thethird day,we willvisit ShanghaiScienceand TechnologyMuseum inthe morning.Besides,we willclimbtheOriental PearlTowerintheafternoon,from whichwe willenjoythewholeviewofShanghai.On Jan.24th,wewilltake thehigh speedrailway backto Liling.How aboutthe planfor yourwinter holidayI amlooking forward to yourreply.Yours,Wang MingIH.Postwriting-polishing thepassageExchange yourpassage withyour partner,and payattention tothefollowingpoints.□

1.1s therea clearpurpose forthe trip□

2.Does eachparagraph havea clearmain idea□

3.Does thewriter usethe presentcontinuous tensefor futureplans□

4.Does thewriter usemas,stops,and questionmarks correctly□

5.Are allthewordsspelt correctly□

6.Are allthe propernouns capitalised写作要点Time andtravel destinationOverthe Octoberholiday,my parentsand Iare planningto goto Xianto seethe TerracottaArmy.Some otherplaces ofinterest MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoing totheShaanxi HistoryMuseum.We arealsogoingtotheXian CityWall anda fewother famoussights.Means oftransport Weretakingthetrain,leaving theday beforetheOctoberholidaybegins.亮点表达.旅游计划1

①My travelplan isas follows.我的旅行计划如下

②Here/Below ismy travelplan.这儿/下面是我的旅行计划

③Winter holidayis ing.I havea planfor it.寒假要来了对此我有一个计划.旅游目的地2©This month,I willtravel toChangsha andZhangjiajie withmy twofriends,which issupposedto bea sevendaytrip.这个月，我将和我的两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游，这应该是一次七日游

②Im planningto travelto Suzhou,a citycalled EasternVenice.我计划到苏州旅游，它被称作东方威尼斯

③The MayDay ising/approaching,andIam goingto travelto Shanghaito seeits beautifulscenery.五一就要到了，我要去上海旅游，看看它美丽的风景.动身及交通工具3

①Im planningtogothere bytrain ande backby bus.我计划乘火车去那儿，乘公共汽车回来

②We willsetouton10th June.我们将于月日出发610写作技巧增加亮词的“出镜率”，变消极词汇为积极词汇阅读中能认识但写作中不会用的词汇属于消极词汇，写作中能运用自如的词汇为积极词汇，也就是平常所说的“第一反应词”积极词汇量的多少直接决定着英语作文表达水平的高低现在很多考生的困难是，头脑中的很多词汇介于积极词汇与消极词汇之间；另外，很多背到的消极词汇如果较长时间不接触就会变成陌生词汇因此同学们要做的事情就是迅速扩大消极词汇量并且保持接触的频度，力争使其变成积极词汇很多同学作文驻足不前的一个重要原因是反复用初中学过的简单词汇，背了大量的亮词妙语而不用建议大家在想到一个表达时，务必要想一想还有没有更好的表达方式，这就是我们平时常讲的“头脑风暴法”例如想表达“美丽的”这个含义，大家首先想到的是，那么在下笔时，要想一想还有没有更出彩的表达，“beautiful如或等再如表达“困难的”时，大家常用那是不是“attractive”“charming”“difficult”,用或更与众不同呢？“tough”“challenging”。