Unit 8 Detective stories-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年九年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（牛津译林版）（解析版）

Unit8Detective stories单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度★★☆☆☆推理故事★★☆☆☆侦探故事

一、话题分析本节课属于人与社会主题下的主题群“历史、社会与文化”，子话题为“公共秩序与法律法规，个人信息安全与国家安全意识:主要是让学生学写侦探故事，培养学生写作的能力教育学生遵纪守法，不做违法的事该板块的活动主题是“创作我的推理故事”，话题是“如何编写一则侦探小故事”以参加写作比Millie赛为背景，呈现了发挥想象力和逻辑思维能力创作自己的推理故事的文章在写作过程中要注意所写Millie故事的细节，如案发时间和地点、目击者的证词、嫌疑人的特征等同时也要求同学们能写出各种场合下的安全防范措施

二、教学目标通过本课时的学习，学生能够.通过讨论分析范文，总结归纳侦探故事的文章结构1,正确使用所学结构和表达编写一则侦探故事或续写故事的结尾

2.分析与评价自己和同伴的作品

3.感知逻辑推理能力的重要性，提升推理能力的同时感受侦探推理写作的趣味性和严谨性，培养写作兴趣4to do witho前几天有人闯入他们房子，所以他们得防范任何危险

2.Their houseby someonethe other day,so theyhave toany danger.【答案】was broken into guard against【详解】闯入为固定短语，和主语之间是被动关系，结合句意可知应用一般过去时的被动语态，break into主语是单数,be动词用was；guardagainst“防范have to后加动词原形故填was broken into；guard againsto事实证明，杰克是在外面被刀所伤，回家后失血过多死亡

3.It thatJack was wounded with a knifeoutside and after he got back home.［答案］turned outbled to death【详解】表示“证明是，结果是，为固定短语根据句意可知本句是一般过去时；表示turn outbleed todeath“失血过多死亡”，bleed的过去式bled故填turned out；bled todeatho.他宁可被误认为是凶手，也不愿意说出真相4He would rather.【答案】be mistakenfor a murderer thantell the truth【详解】根据句子可知空处应填“被误认为是凶手，也不愿意说出真相“宁愿做wouldratherdo thando sth.某事也不做某事”;动词，“误解”,“被误解”;名词，“凶手；说出mistake be mistaken murderertell thetruth”真相，故填bemistakenfor a murderer thantell thetrutho汤姆相信星座与性格的形成无关

6.Computer systems.【答案】wonl bebrokenintoeasily any more【详解】分析句意可知此句是一般将来时,且是否定句，应用won，t+动词原形breakinto“闯入”，主语是动词之间是被动关系，所以此处应用一般将来时的被动语态will bedone；easily“容易地”，副词修饰动词；不再”故填not...anymorewont bebrokenintoeasily anymore安迪急于回到工作岗位，把手机的事情抛诸脑后

8.Peter wasto catch the subwaywhen Isaw himyesterday.【答案】in ahurry【详解】匆忙；“匆忙做某事”,是固定短语故填in ahurry“be in ahurryto dosth inahurry警方证实这对夫妇的独子已失踪超过一个月

9.The policeconfirm that the couplesonly sonfor overa month.【答案】has beenmissing【详解】根据中文提示，空白处应填入表示“已失踪”的英文表达，且动词时态应搭配时间状语“for overamonth”，选用现在完成时，表示状态的持续missing丢失的，the couplesonly son这对夫妇唯一的孩子，是第三人称单数故填has beenmissing事实证明，受害者是在外面某个地方受伤，回家后失血过多死亡

10.It that the victimwas woundedsomewhere outsideand afterhegotback home.【答案］turned outbled todeath【详解】根据句意可知用一般过去时“事实证明it turned outthat；失血过多死亡”bleed todeath,bleed的过去式bledo故填turned out；bled todeatho

二、补全对话选75W:Nick,Did youhear about the murderin Junein NanjingM:No,I didnt.1・,NancyW:One evening,a mankilled hiswife,an old man and another man.M:Oh,dear!He must be crazy.

2.W:Yes,he was arrested inAnhui Provincea monthlater.M:

3..The murderwas Looterrible.W:

4..But the man hasa13-year-old soninamiddle school.M:

5.!The boyhas noparents anylonger.A.Whats itaboutB,Does hehave acriminal recordC.You arerightD.Has hebeen arrestedE.I don9t thinksoF.What apityG.He must be chargedtodeath【答案】【小题】1A【小题】2D【小题】3G【小题】4C【小题】5F【分析】本文主要谈论一起谋杀案【小题】句意:它是关于什么的考查情景交际题根据下文1One evening,a mankilled hiswife,an old man and（一天晚上，一个男人杀了他的妻子，一个老人和另一个男人）结合句意可知选another man.A【小题】句意:他被捕了吗考查情景交际题根据下文回答2Yes,he was arrested inAnhui Provincea monthlater.（是的，他一个月后在安徽省被捕）可知问句是一般疑问句，结合句意和语境可知选D【小题］句意:他必须被处死考查情景交际题根据下文（谋杀危害极大的）3The murderwas tooterrible.结合句意可知选G【小题］句意:你是对的考查情景交际题根据上文“他必须被处死谋杀危害极大的”结合句意可知4选C【小题］句意:太遗憾了!考查情景交际题根据上文5But the man hasa13-year-old soninamiddle（但是他有一个岁的儿子在上中学）和下文（这个男孩再也没有父school.13The boyhas noparents anylonger.母了）结合句意和语境可知选FfX——-9实战演练（）-（2018上・江苏•九年级统考期末）假设你叫李华，昨天晚上你看完电影在回家途中目击了一起抢劫案.请就以下信息，以李华的名义写一份给警方的书面材料，要求词数左右.材料的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总100词数.案发时间昨天晚上大约九点案发地点电影院附近的一条街道拐角处作案人情况两个男子，一个戴着墨镜的高个子，一个矮个子受害人情况一位年轻的女士，戴着一条金项链和一块金手表你正在街道上走着，突然听到身后有人呼救.你看到两个男子正抢劫一名女子.女子和他们进案发经过行了激烈的搏斗.当你赶到时，两个劫匪已各自骑着自行车逃跑.女子的金表被抢走了，但幸运的是女子没有受伤.Dear Sir/MadamIm writingto report a robbery to you._____________________________________________________________________________________I hope theinformation will help you catch the robbers.Yours faithfullyLi Hua.【满分作文】Dear Sir/MadamIm writingto reporta robberyto you.At aboutnine lastnight,I was on the way back home from the cinema whensuddenly I heard someone crying for help from behind.!turned around and found a tallman with a pairof darkglasses anda short man robbing a young woman at the street corner near the cinema.The womanwore agold necklaceand agoldwatch.She putup agood fightwith them.I rantowards thembut whenI arrived,the tworobbers hadridden theirbikesaway.They robbedthe womanof hergold watch,but luckily,the womanwasnt hurt.I hopethe information will help you catch the robbers.Yours faithfullyLi Hua.【解题思路】题目要求写一份书面材料，向警方报告昨晚在电影院附近发生的抢劫案本文属于材料作文，为警察提供一份目击证明根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯【写作步骤】第一步:说明写信的意图第二步:说明事件发生的时间，所看见的事情的经过，包括受害人财物的损失和嫌疑人的情况，长相等信息第三步:告别语，希望早日抓到嫌疑人【亮点词汇】reporta robberyto...;crying for help;turned around;ridden...away;catchtherobbers.【高分句型】At aboutnine lastnight,!was on the way backhome from thecinemawhen suddenly Iheard someonecrying for help（引导的时间状语从句）frombehind.”when

（二）（2018・九年级单元测试）根据下面提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，描述一起谋杀案件.昨晚点到点之间，人民路上发生了一起谋杀案，被害者是一名司机，四十多岁

11112.案发时，有人听到被害者求救受害人受了刀伤，流血过多而死

2.警方已经悬赏五万元，以获取重要线索

3.如果你有任何信息，请拨打和警方联系4110【满分作文】Last night,a murdertook placebetween elevenand twelveon RenminRoad.A driverwas murdered.He was in hisforties.At thetime of the crime,someone heardhim shoutingforhelp.The victimwas attackedwith aknife andbled todeath asa result.So far,the policehave offereda reward of50,000yuan forimportant clues.If youhave anyinformation,please call/contact the police on

110.【写作思路】本文属于材料作文，描述一起谋杀案件根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容【写作步骤】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起第一步:认真审题审好题是写好书面表达的关键审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求构思提纲有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键第二步:初写短文一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然第三步:修改润色修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等【亮点词语】以及【高分句型】take place,at thetime of,victim,asa result,so far,clue contactoLast night,a murdertook placebetween elevenand twelveon RenminRoad.A driverwas murdered.He wasin hisforties.At thetime of the crime,someone heardhim shoutingforhelp.The victimwas attackedwith aknife andbled todeath asa result.So far,the policehave offereda rewardof50,000yuanfbr important clues.If youhave anyinformation,please call/contact thepolice on

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（三）（上•九年级单元测试）请根据以下线索写一篇句意连贯的小故事2017我婶婶一直和她的一个新邻居相处得不好，婶婶说他看起来很不友好；L.一天，我婶婶回到家，发现她昨天刚买的项链不见了；

2.她回想自己去过哪儿，觉得可能是那个邻居偷了她的项链，因此她决定立刻报警；,突然有人敲门，原来34是她的新邻居；.他手里拿着项链，说昨天在门口发现的；

5.婶婶很感激他，并愿意和他交朋友6【满分作文】My auntgot alongwell withall herneighbours except theman who lived next door.My auntsaid hedidnt lookfriendly at all.One day,when myaunt camehome fromwork,she realizedthat she had lost her new necklace which she had boughtthe daybefore.She was very worried.She recalledwhere shehad beenjust then.She thoughtthat perhapstheman wholived next door hadstolen her necklace.So sheplanned tocall thepolice at once.Just then,someone knockedat the door.It wasthe youngman,her newneighbour.She wasshocked that hernecklacewasin his hand.He toldher thathe founditat the doorway.And hethought itmust bemy aunts,so hecame to return it.Yes,that*s true.It wasthe necklacethat myaunt lost.My auntwas verythankful.She toldher newneighbour thattheycould begood friendslater.【解题思路】点睛这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般过去时，可把提示的内容逐条翻译并拓展成不同的句子，最后把这些句子连在一起即可这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅【解题步骤】第一步:首先介绍故事的背景和主要人物第二步:详细描述事件,阿姨在回家的时候意识到她丢失了项链，她怎么想的，她打算怎么做，等等第三步:构建情节可以先写阿姨丢失了项链并怀疑是邻居偷的，然后写她打算报警，接着写邻居来归还项链，最后写阿姨对邻居的感激和愿意成为朋友【亮点词汇】get alongwell with,nextdoor,at all,the daybefore,just then,atonce,knock at,in hishand,atthedoorway等【高分句型】My auntsaid hedidn!t lookfriendlyatall./One day,when myaunt camehome fromwork,she realizedthatshehadlosther newnecklacewhichshehadboughtthe daybefore./And hethought itmust bemy aunts,so hecame等多种复杂从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点toreturnit.

（四）（上•九年级课时练习）今天早上，有人在一家工厂里发现了一具尸体被害者是一名工程师，男性，2018岁，被刀所刺，因流血过多而死亡根据警方的推断，此案发生于凌晨三点至四点之间，而且工厂不是案40发现场目前，警方悬赏十万元人民币寻找破案线索请根据以上提示，用英语写一篇词左右的短文描述80这起案件写这篇短文时，你可以从以下四个方面构思.案发时间和地点；

1.被害人性别、年龄、职业等信息；

2.案件分析；

3.警方动态4_______________________________________________________________________________［满分作文］Someone found a deadbody ina factorythis morning.The victimwas aman whowas anengineer andhe was40years old.The victimwaswoundedwithaknife andbled todeath.The policesupposed thatthe murderhappenedbetween3a.m.and4a.m.Besides,the factproved thathe waskilled somewhereelse andthen broughtto the factory.Thepolice are offering a rewardof100,000yuan for any cluethat leadsto thearrest of the murderer.【解题思路】这是一篇给材料作文，要求用英语写一篇短文描述所发生的案件根据所给材料内容可知本文主要用一般过去时态，人称主要是第三人称【解题步骤】在写作的时候，要根据提示内容把所发生的案件用英语正确地表达出来可以从以下四个方面构思.案发时间和地点；1,被害人性别、年龄、职业等信息；

2.案件分析；

3.警方动态4在表述时语言应该符合英语语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写；做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系另外，可以用上一些句型、短语，较高级的语言，这样会使文章更出色【高分句型】（主从复合句，从句作主Besides,the factproved thathe waskilled somewhereelse andthen broughtto thefactory.句的宾语）（定语从句）The victimwas aman whowas anengineer andhe was40years old.今一真题感悟（以思维导图的形式呈现）Part1:introductionIntroduce thebackground andmain charactersof thestory.Part2:Main body

1.The timeand locationof theincident;Detective

2.Information on the victimsgender,age,occupation,etc;story

3.Case analysis;

4.Police updates.素材宝库Part3:EndingHope thepolice cansolve the case.【词汇积累】

一、重点单词.偷;窃取

1.steal vt项链

2.necklace n.钻石

3.diamond n.

4.a diamondnecklace震惊的

5.shocked adj.珠宝;首饰

6.jewellery n.许多珠宝

7.lots ofjewellery

二、重点短语

3.dosthfor a living makealiving因谋杀罪被捕

4.be underarrest for murder被捕

5.be underarrest=be arrested

三、重点句型布鲁斯和邻居相处和睦除了住在隔

1.Bruce getsalong withall ofhis neighboursexceptthemanwholivednextdoor.壁的那个男人

2.No oneknows whathe doesforaliving.没有人知道他靠做什么为生警察告诉他一些价值连城的珠宝被盗了

3.The policetold himthat somevaluable jewelleryhad beenstolen

四、侦探福尔摩斯五十句名言.我追求精神上的兴奋1I pursuespiritual excitement..许多被绞死的人死得冤枉2Many of the hangedman isdead wrong..嫉妒是性格的奇异转换器3Jealousy isa singularconverter character..感情作用会影响清醒的理智4The emotionalqualities willaffect toclear reasoning..不用动脑筋，我就活不下去5Dont think,I cantlive.,谦虚和骄傲都是与事实相悖而行的6Modesty andpride areback anddone withfacts..除去其他的因素，剩下的必是事实了7To getrid ofother factors,the restmustbethetruth.•我向来不作任何例外定律没有例外8I nevermake anyexception.Law is no exception..对于装病，我认为我有能力写个专论9For fakingit,I thinkI havethe abilityto writea monograph..生活之谜是任何大脑也发明不出来的10The riddleof lifeis beyondthe contrivanceof anybrain also.这是一个要抽足三斗烟才能解决的问题ILThis isa smokefoot threemeasures tosolve theproblem.•再也没有比显而易见的事实更虚伪的了12No morehypocritical thanobvious fact..世上的事都是前人做过的，没什么新鲜的13There ispredecessors did,nothing new..生活之谜是任何聪明的大脑也发明不了的14Any cleverbrain mysteriesof lifeis alsoinvented.探案过程中，我是最后的最高的上诉法庭6The crimein theprocess,I isthe highestcourt ofappeal in the final..我决定站在犯人这一边，不站在死者那一边16I decidedto standin theprisoners side,not on the sideof thedead..即使是最好的女人，也决不能完全信赖她们17Even thebest woman,never entirelytrust them..探案过程中，我是最后的，最高的上诉法庭18The crimein theprocess,I amthe last,the highestcourt ofappeal..对于伟大的心灵来说，世界上没有微小的事情19For greatminds,there isno smallthing in the world.不论案件如何复杂，人们总能寻求出一个解释

20.No matterhow complexcases,people canalways seekout anexplanation..奇怪的是，打字机也像手写一般能表现出一个人的性格21Oddly,typewriter isalso likea handwritingcan showa personspersonality..我好动不好静，一遇无事可做的时候，我就会心绪不宁起来22I cantactive static,once had nothingtodo,I willbe restless.•只要你懂得怎样使用报纸，华生，报纸便是非常宝贵的工具23If youknow howto usenewspaper,Watson,newspaper isa veryvaluable tool..世界上最危险的一种人，福尔摩斯说，就是漂泊孤独的女人24One of the mostdangerous maninthe world,Sherlock Holmessaid,is wanderinglonely woman..我向来不猜想猜想是很不好的习惯，它有害于作逻辑的推理25I neverguess.Guess isa badhabit,it isbad forlogical reasoning..你有保持缄默的了不起的天赋，华生，有你做伙伴真是太难得了26You havegreat talents,to remainsilent Watson,have yourpartner isreally bad..不论多么天衣无缝的犯罪，只要是人做的，就没有解不开的道理27No matterhow perfectthe crime,as longas peopledo,there isno solutiondont open..自从莫里亚蒂教授新近死了以后，句子大全伦敦变成了一座极度乏味的城市28Since professorMoriarty diedrecently becamean extremelyboring cityof London..华生，这不属于你的职业范围，不是生理上的问题，而是心理上的29Watson,this doesnot fallwithin thescope ofyour career,not physical,but psychological..我决定永远不要有任何偏见，事实指向哪里，我就会乖乖地跟到哪里30I decidedto neverto have any prejudice,facts pointto where,where Iwould obedientlyfollow..她本身无害，而且往往是很有用的人，但却总是引起别人犯罪的因素31She itselfis harmless,and tendto bevery useful,but italways causesothers tocommit acrime..一个医生误入歧途，他就是一流的罪犯，因为他既有胆识，又有知识32Led astrayby adoctor,he isa first-class criminals,because hehave courage,and knowledge..不要让一个人的外表影响你的判断力，这是最重要的感情会影响理智的33Dont leta personsappearance affectyour judgment,this isthe mostimportant.Feelings willaffect therational..除非两台打字机下载文档都相当新，否则没有哪两台打字机打出的字一键下载全文是一模一样的34Unless twotypewriters arenew,no twotypewriters typewords arethe same..生活枯燥乏味大胆和浪漫似乎在这个充满邪恶的世界里消失了35Life dull,boring paper.Bold andromance seemsto havevanished inthis fullof evilintheworld..一个为艺术而艺术的人，常常从最不重要和最平凡的形象中获得最大的乐趣36A manof artfor artssake,often fromthe leastimportant andthe mostordinary inthe imageof thegreatest pleasure..命运知识难以捉摸啊，如果来世没有报应，那么这个世界就是一场残酷的玩笑37Fate elusiveknowledge ah,and if theworldshould not,then theworld isa crueljoke..人不要在说明事实的理论上打圈圈，应该配合理论的说明，慢慢解开事实的真相38People donttell youthefacton thetheory ofcircle,should coordinatetheory showsthat slowlyunravel thetruth..在没有得到任何证据的情况下是不能进行推理的，那样的话，只能是误入歧途39Under thecondition ofwithout anyevidence isnot reasoning,in thatcase,only ismisguided.教育是没有止境的，华生课程一门接一门，精益求精，这件案子很有启发性

40.Education isa never-ending,Watson.Course doorafter door,excellence,thecase is instructive..不寻常的现象总能给人提供一些线索，而没有什么特征的案子却是难以侦破的41Unusual phenomenonalways canprovide cluesto theperson,and nocaseisdifficult tosolve..所谓事件，只要没有解决方案，就很容易解决看起来没有犯罪的普通特征真的很棘手42The so-called event,as longas thereisnosolution,it iseasy tosolve.Look ordinarycharacteristics ofno crimewas reallytricky..我完全没有虚度此生，如果我生命的旅程到今夜为止，我也可以问心无愧地欣然接受43I haveno worth-while,ifthejourney ofmy lifeuntil tonight,I alsocan havea clearconscience toembrace..一般来说，越是好奇的事情，越是熟悉的真相，越是平常和那些很平常的情况，令人困惑44Generally speaking,the morecurious things,after thetruth,familiar withthe moreusual andthose veryordinary caseisconfusing..我的体质非常特别工作的时候一点儿也不觉得累，如果闲着无事反而会使我委顿不堪了45My bodyis veryspecial.Work Idont feeltired,if idlenothing wouldmake mefaint..生活很枯燥我的生活就是不要在平庸中消磨时间让我祝福这些小箱子46Life isvery dull.My lifeis todont idleaway ourtime inmediocrity.Let methe wishesthese littlecases..她无依无靠，到处为家她有足够的钱供她从一个国家到另一个国家，从一家旅馆到另一个旅馆47Her helpless,for thehome everywhere.She hasenough moneyfor herfrom onecountry toanother,from onehotel toanotherhotel..我们必须深入生活，只有如此才能获得新奇的效果和非同寻常的配合,而这本身比任何想象都有刺激性48We mustdeep intolife,only thencan obtainthe effectofthenovel andextraordinary,and thisitself stimulatingthan anyimagined..有一句老格言说道，当你排除了不可能的情况后，其余的情况，不管是如何的不可能，却必定是真实的49There isan oldadage says,when youeliminate theimpossible,the restofthesituation,no matterhow impossible,but itmustbetrue.由于我的存在，伦敦的空气得以清新在我办的一千多件案子里，我相信，我从未把握的力量用错地方

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五、通用开Because ofI,in Londonto freshair.In holdingmore thanone thousandcases,I believethat Imnever sure.头

1.Mr Wangwas anoldman.He livedalone andwent to the parkevery dayto practisetai chi.21m writingto reporta robberyto you.

3.At aboutnine lastnight,I wason thewaybackhomefromthecinemawhensuddenlyIheard someonecrying for helpfrombehind.

4.Someone found a deadbody ina factorythis morning.The victimwasamanwhowas anengineer andhe was40years old.

5.Last night,amurdertook placebetween elevenand twelveon RenminRoad.

六、通用中间段

1.Mr andMrs Zhangcalled thepolice.Detective Liarrived infive minutes.He askedthe Mrs Zhang whetherthey hadseen anything unusual the night before.They saidthat they had notbecause theywere having a party.

2.At the crime scene,Detective Lifoundaknife and a gun.He noticedthat therewas somewhite powderon the gun.Detective Lichecked theknife andthe gunfor fingerprints.The powderonthegun turnedout tobe cookingflour,and thefingerprintswere leftby Zhou Ming.Detective Lireturned to the flats and arrested the cook for murder.

3.1turned aroundand founda tallman witha pairof darkglasses andashort manrobbing ayoungwoman atthe streetcornernear thecinema.The womanwore agold necklaceandagold watch.She putup agood fightwith them.

七、通用结尾

1.1hopethe informationwillhelpyoucatchtherobbers.

2.Yes,thats true.It wasthe necklacethat myaunt lost.My auntwasverythankful.She toldhernewneighbour that theycould begood friendslater.【写作模板】

3.The policeareofferinga rewardof100,000yuan forany cluethat leadstothearrest ofthe murderer.模板

①Dear Sir/MadamIm writingto reportarobberyto you.At aboutnine lastnight,!wasonthewaybackhomefromthewhen suddenlyIheardsomeonecryingforhelp frombehind.I turnedaroundandfoundaman witha pairofandashortmanrobbingawomanatthestreetcornernearthe.The womanworea necklaceandawatch.She putup agood fightwith them.I rantowards thembut whenIarrived,the tworobbers hadridden theirbikes away.They robbedthe womanof herwatch,but luckily,the womanwasnt hurt.I hopetheinformationwillhelpyoucatchtherobbers.Yours faithfullyLiHua.模板

②Lastnight,amurdertook placebetween onRoad.A driverwas murdered.He wasinhis.At thetime ofthecrime,someone heardhim shoutingforhelp.The victimwas attackedwithaand asaresult.So far,thepolicehave offeredarewardofyuan forimportantclues.If youhaveanyinformation,please call/contact thepolice on

110.典例指引写作要求:Tips银据图片信息和笠点提示，事写一则使探故手・A descriptionofthecrime・Any objectsor cluesfound atthe sceneofthecrime・A descriptionofthe suspectHe wasmurdered.Start Idont know.Iveneverlooking forclues.seen himbefore.・How thedetective findsthe criminal【满分作文】Mr Wangwas anoldman.He livedalone andwent tothe parkevery dayto practiset*ai chi.One day,W MerdWidn ant gssee neiogr hbhoe uarrs,Mr andIllMharvseZtohchaencgk,thneoseticed thatMrYo Wurae nugnd hear darrne ostt gonetothepark thatmorninganything.We were havingaforfingerprints.formurder.party.as usual.Mrs Zhangbecame worried.So togetherwith herhusband,she wentto knockon Mr Wangs door.As theyknocked,they noticedthedoorwas notlocked.They pushedthedooropen andsaw MrWang.He wasdead ontheground.Mr andMrs Zhangcalled thepolice.Detective Liarrived infive minutes.He askedthe MrsZhang whethertheyhad seenanything unusualthe night before.They saidthattheyhadnotbecause theywerehavinga party.Detective Lialso interviewedanother neighbour,Zhou Ming.He wasa cook.He saidthathewas workingat hisrestaurant the nightbefore and did not know anything aboutthecase.At thecrime scene,Detective Lifoundaknife anda gun.He noticedthat therewas somewhite powderonthegun.Detective Lichecked theknife andthegunfor fingerprints.The powderonthegun turnedout tobe cookingflour,andthe fingerprintswere leftby ZhouMing.Detective Lireturnedto theflatsandarrestedthecookformurder.Later,ZhouMingadmitted thathe killedMrWangsothat hecould steal200,000yuan fromhim.【解题思路】在写作过程中要注意所写故事的细节，如案发时间和地点、目击者的证词、嫌疑人的特征等同时也要求同学们能写出各种场合下的安全防范措施【写作步骤】第一步:引出人物，介绍王先生是一个孤独的老人，每天去公园练习太极拳第二步:描述事件背景,王先生的邻居张先生和夫人发现王先生当天没有像往常一样去公园，引起他们的担忧第三步:展开情节，详细描述侦探李的调查过程，包括询问邻居、检查犯罪现场等，并通过这些线索揭示出周明是罪犯第四步:揭示真相和结局,通过侦探李的调查，进一步揭示出周明杀害王先生的动机和计划，最终周明被逮捕【亮点词汇】arrived in;five minutes;arrived infive minutes;atthecrime scene;turnedout;arrested for;murder;steal from.【高分句型】（主从复合句，主从句作为状语）l.So togetherwith herhusband,she wentto knockon MrWangs door.（并列句主谓结构）

2.Mr andMrsZhangcalled thepolice.Detective Liarrived infive minutes.（由引导的宾语从

3.He askedthe MrsZhang whethertheyhadseenanythingunusualthenightbefore.whether句）4,He saidthathewas workingat hisrestaurantthenightbeforeanddidnotknowanythingaboutthe.（由引导的宾语从句）case that,JiJrdP*■,■■

一、完成句子结果是那个嫌疑犯与本次谋杀案无关I.It turnedout thatthesuspectthe murder.【答案】had nothingtodowith【详解】havenothingto dowith”与.....无关”，根据turned可知，从句也用一般过去时,故填had nothing。