Unit5TheValueofMoney读后续写作业设计（教师版）

读后续写作业设计（教师版）Book3Unit5江西师大附中姚晨欣课文素材库I微技能语料出处

1.Two richbrothers,Roderick andOliver havemade abet.

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22.Young man,would youstep insidea moment,please

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3.T wassailing,and towardnight Ifound myself

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244.He givesthe clerkthe banknote.The clerkdropsHenrys coat.Then hefolds thebill andslowly unfoldsitagain,as iflooking atsomething hecant believeis there.且物乐

1.Its littletoo bright,isnt it

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2.Never mind,with a broad smile

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11.happily Whatluck!Brother,what luck!

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13.in arude mannerSee himthere,pointing to

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14.looking athim with a frownIts allwe havein your

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15.trying notto showhe isangry Isuppose agentlemanlike youonly carriesvery largebills.语言训练场II汉译英你愿意为大选的结果下个赌注吗？

1.made abetAre youwilling tomake abet onthe outeof theelection他犹豫着向她走了一步叩

2.stHe tooka hesitantstep towardsher.委员会履行了赋予它的职责

3.carry outThemittee carriedout theduties entrustedto it.他把杯子打落，摔成碎片

4.dropHe chippedthe cupwhen hedropped it・・.经济前景一片光明5brightThe outlookfor theeconomy isbright..他的人生观十分豁达6broadHe hasabroadoutlook onlife.我不允许你用那种粗鲁的语气和你妈妈讲话

7.in arude mannerIcant haveyou speakingto yourmother in a mdemanner..他沮丧极了，皱着眉头看着这一片狼藉8looking athim witha frownHewas verydepressed,looking atthe messwithafrown..他小心翼翼的把它放入了盒子里，然后上了锁9take itcarefullyTaking itcarefuHy,he putit into the boxand lockedit・・.突然间，他十分生气地摔碎了那个杯子10angryAngrily,he brokethat glasssuddenly.美文体验馆IllOne longagomorning,the hotsummer sunclimbed tothe topof thesky.By noon,flowers droopedd氐垂.Birds stoppedsinging.Lan,who walkedto visither grandmotheron Sundays,grew hotterand hotter.As shepassed anenormoushouse,she spotteda beautifultree.Its branchesspread wide,and theirleaves createda shadyspace nexttothe road.Lan sat down inthat shadeto rest.How nice and cool!1she thought.nI stillhave along walkaheadof me,but Ican sit here for a while.Lan waswrong.Less thana minutelater,the doorof theenormous houseopened witha bang.Aboy rushed out and shouted,You cantsit there!Thats mytree!Chens tree!”He woresilk trousersandcarried agolden toypony.Maybe itsyour tree,but you dont own the shadebeneath it,1replied Lan.“Yes,I do,declared Chen.I owneverything aboutthat tree,even the birds!Youll haveto paytosit there.nPay youcried Lan.Shade belongs to everyone.1Not myshade,said Chen.If Ibuy your shade,may Istop hereon Sundaysthis summernasked Lan.nI supposeso,”saidChen.Lan reachedinto hertwicemended pocketand handedover her only coin.Thats allthe moneyIhave,she said.Fine!”said Chen.But remember,you boughtthe shade.Nothing else!Every summerSunday,Lan stoppedto sit in Chensshade onthe wayto her grandmothers.Sheoften calledthe birdsin the tree.The birdswould flydown andgather aroundher.Alone in his toyfilledbedroom,Chen watchedLan talk and laugh with the birds.Shes tellingstories/he thought.It looksfun.Should Icharge her more money when she stays longer11Then herememberedshed hadonly onecoin inher pocket.However,when autumn arrived,Lan nolongerwalked to her grandmothers.Chen missed seeing her talking tothe birds._________________________________________On a Sunday,Lan appearedas expected.____________________________________________主题语境人与自我文章出处年第一学期南京六校高二联合调研试题2022—2023正文英文词数续写第一段首句个单词，续写第二段首句个单司326,871词数Lan,who walkedto visithergrandmotheron Sundays,satdowninatrees shadeto rest.But aboy calledChenOpening Para.110insisted thatthetreewas hisso thatLan neededto payto sithere.故事脉络After payChen Lansonly coin,every summerSunday,WhatLan stoppedto sitin Chensshade onthe wayto herUseonegrandmother^.But Chenbegan tothink aboutwhether hesentenceto BuildupPara.101kshould charge hermorefor sittingunder thetree longer,summarize the续写第一段owever,when autumnarrived,Lan nolonger walkedto hermainidea ofgrandmothers.each paragraphChen missedseeing hertalking tothebirds...Climax ResolutionOn aSunday,Lan appearedas expected...续写第二Ending段快乐与分享，金钱与友谊故事主题Why第一人称、记叙、描写写作手法HowLan ChenHowniceandcool!she体现出Chen的体现对这棵Lanthought.nI stillhave along占有欲较强，树的喜爱以及找walk aheadof me,but Ican固执且自私地A boyrushedout到乘凉之所的快sithereforawhile.n认为这棵树是andshouted,人物分析乐nYou cantsit属于自己的there!Thats my“Maybe itsyour tree,but Lan认为大树是tree!Chens tree!每个人的，而不youdontowntheshade是一个人独有的beneath it,”replied Lan.体现了较Chen低的分享欲以虽贫穷很善及最初的自私Lan reachedinto herLanShes telling良，即使心理和对钱的twicemended pocketand Chenstories/hehanded over heronly的要求她并不认thought.nIt looks重视程度coin.Thats allthe money同，但她还是妥fun.Should IIhave,she said.协了charge hermoremoney whenshestays longer,用必乐IN房子旁边的大树Chen语言风格平实质朴Para12Alone inhis toyfilledbedroom,Chen watchedLan talkand laughwith thebirds.Shes tellingstories,H按时Chen还是可能会he thought.HIt looksfun.Should Icharge hermore考虑到Lan,甚至在心理伏笔/照应moneywhenshestayslongern Thenhe remembered上有一丝关心她，所以shed hadonly onecoin inher pocket.However,when Chen有可能改变他的autumnarrived,Lan nolonger walkedtoher固执且自私的想法grandmothers.QI:How didChenmissLan afterher disappearanceQ2:Whether wouldChen changehis opinionabout chargingLan more问题素材功能Week afterweek,Chen playedalone inhis合成形容词产生强烈对toyfilled room.比突出主人公的孤独情绪The pictureof Lan*s chattingwith birdscame toQihis mindagain.动词表达体现出Chen对的怀念之情Lan谋篇布局续写第一段Looking atLan*s coin,Chen wonderedwhat to现在分词短语，用具体do if she came back to sitinhis shade.动作表达出Chen睹物思人之情感Should hecharge heragain,or shouldhe give并列疑问句表达出the coinback内心的思想斗Chen争Q2现在分词短语对主语的Many monthslater,the summersun returned,补充说明表达出hot asever.Chen stoodby hiswindow eachChen十分想再次见到的Sunday,looking forwardto Lan心理活动Lans ing again.Q3:What wouldChen doWould hechange alotQ4:What wouldLans attitudebe问题素材功能At thesight ofher,Chen racedoutside.Without几个连续性动词的使用hesitation,he reachedinto hispocket,pulled表达出Chen见到LanQ3out Lans coin,and handedit back.激动的内心以及态度的转变谋篇布局续写Lan wastoo surprisedto believeit,so she用直接引语和表示情绪第二段asked indoubt,H This summer,yourshade的形容词体现出Lan对belongsto everyone”Yes,replied Chen,”于态度转变的诧ChenNow,please,call thebirds downfor us.Lets tell异Q4the stories.”现在分词短语作伴随状They beganto playwith birdstogether,语表达出最终二人和laughing cheerfully.解，故事圆满结束【素材积累】Para

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10.形容词作状语补充说Alone inhis toyfilledbedroom,Chen watchedLantalkandlaughwiththebirds明主语的状态【参考范文】Chen missedseeinghertalkingtothebirds.Week afterweek,Chen playedalone inhis toyfilledroom.The pictureof Lan*s chattingwith birdscame tohis mindagain.Looking atLans coin,Chenwondered whatto doifshecamebacktositinhisshade.Should hechargeheragain,or shouldhe givethecoin backMany monthslater,the summersun returned,hot asever.Chen stoodby hiswindow eachSunday,looking forwardto Lansingagain.0aSundayLan appearedas expected.At thesight ofher,Chen racedoutside.Without hesitation,几he reachedinto hispocket,pulled outLanscoin,and handedit back.Im sorry,he said.nYou didn*tneed topay me.Lan wastoo surprisedto believeit,so sheasked indoubt/Thissummer,your shadebelongstoeveryoneYesJ repliedChen.n Now,please,call thebirds downfor us.Lets tellthe stories.They beganto playwith birdstogether,laughing cheerfully.技能锻造营IV倒装.定义1英语最基本的词序是主语在谓语动词的前面如果将句子的主语和谓语完全颠倒过来，这称之为完全倒装如果只将助动词或情态动词移至主语之前，谓语的其他部分仍保留在主语的后面，这称之为部分倒装作用2写作中适当用一些倒装句式定会使文章表达更生动、有力.用法3完全倒装1完全倒装是将谓语的全部放在主语之前，此结构通常只用于一般现在时和一般过去时两种On her她左边坐着她丈夫left sather husband..你要的书在这儿Here isthe bookyou want部分倒装2部分倒装是指将谓语的一部分，如助动词或情态动词，移至主语之前只有努力才能成功Only byworking hardcan onesucceed..我以前没见过她Never haveI seenher before实践

4.lNo soonerhad Igot homethan itto rain.2Only afterhe hadspoken outthe worddid herealize hehad madea bigmistake.3So unreasonablewas hisprice thateverybody startled.4Hanging onthe wallwas asplendid painting.⑴我刚到家就下起了雨⑵只有当他已经说出那个字后才意识到自己犯了个大错误⑶他的要价太离谱，令每个人都瞠目结舌墙上挂着一幅精美的图画4。