Unit12写作指导（记述自己的周末活动）人教版英语七年级下册15

七年级英语下册Unit12写作指导【写作目标】用英语记述自己周末所做的事情【写作任务】假如你是李斌，现在是周六晚上九点，你的澳大利亚笔友Alex发来电子邮件询问你今天过得如何、都做了些什么请你写一段话回复他的电子邮件【指点迷津】记述周六一天所做的事情属于记叙文，其写作要点如下

（1）内容首先总述自己今天的感受（如快乐、忙碌、充实等），然后分述自己一天所进行的活动，最后再次对这天的情况进行总结概括

（2）人称以第一人称为主

（3）时态一般过去时【谋篇布局】“我”的周六总述

（1）今天我度过了快乐且充实的一天■感受and fulfillingday today.上午⑵早晨我早早起床,在公园跑了五公里In themorning,I and

（3）享用了美味的早餐后，我先做了我的作业,然后看了一本关于科学的书After enjoyinga delicious breakfast,I andthenNext,1分述■下午活动

（5）下午我和朋友们参观了一个农场

（4）接着，我打扫了房间，并帮助父母做午饭In theafternoon,1with myfriends.

（6）在那儿，我们一起种树、给奶牛挤奶和摘水果我们从辛苦劳作中获得了很多乐趣There,we plantedtrees,andtogether Wefrom thehard work.晚上⑺刚才,我弹了一会儿钢琴Just now,I for a while.总结

（8）总的来说，这是劳逸结合的一天概括.it wasa dayof workand rest【巧衔接】★本文在记述一天的活动时，使用了表示时间顺序的过渡词和短语，例如in themorning、after、nextin theafternoon、just now,它们的使用增强了叙事的流畅性，使文章更具逻辑性和连贯性★本文使用了总述一分述一总述的段落结构来组织全文，在引出主题、提供详细信息和总结感受之间建立了一种连贯性和平衡性此结构使文章的脉络更加清晰，帮助读者更好地跟随和理解作者的思路【连句成文】同学们，根据【谋篇布局】的练习，赶快动笔回复Alex的电子邮件吧！Dear Alex,Good evening!Yours,Li Bin【收藏夹】m用建点良周末生话carry things for oldpeople helplittle children with their studies帮帮老人拿东西助小孩子们学习pick uprubbish in the communityclean upbulletin boardsorganize books在社区捡垃圾清理布告栏整理书籍【小试身手】假如你是张婷，你在朋友圈分享了几张上周日在某社区做志愿者工作的照片，你的同班同学Cindy看过后给你发来一条微信请根据微信内容写一段话回复她CindyHi,Zhang Ting!I reallylike yourphotos.Did you do thevolunteer afe#work inyour communityIthink itis meaningful有意义的•I dlove tohear moreabout it.Who did you doit withWhatdidyoudo thereAlso,when willyoudoit againV mreally interestedin joiningyounext time.Let meknow assoon asyou can.©@J【答案】［谋篇布局］1I had/spent a happy2got up early;ran five kilometers in the park3did my homework first;read a book about science4cleaned rooms;helped myparents tocook lunch5visited a farm6milked cows;picked fruit;got lotsof/a lotof/so muchfun7played the piano8All inall［连句成文］Dear Alex,Good evening!I hadahappyand fulfillingday today.In themorning,I gotupearlyand ranfivekilometersinthepark.After enjoyingadeliciousbreakfast,I didmyhomeworkfirst andthen readabookaboutscience.Next,I cleanedrooms andhelped myparents cooklunch.In theafternoon,I visitedafarmwithmy friends.There,we plantedtrees,milked cowsand pickedfruit together.We gotlotsof funfrom thehard work.Just now,I playedthepianoforawhile.All inall,it wasa dayof workand rest.Yours,Li Bin［小试身手］One possibleversion:Hi,Cindy!Im happyyou likemy photos.Last Sunday,I didsome volunteerwork withmyvolunteer clubfriends ina munitynear ourschool.We carriedthingsforold peopleandhelped littlechildrenwiththeirstudies.Also,we cleanedup themunity.Whats more,we organizedthe booksinthemunity library.All inall,we hadfun makingthe munitymorebeautiful andbringing happinessto thepeople there.We’11go thereagain nextSundaymorning.If youhave time,join us!。