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Unit1Know yourself!单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度推荐信人物介绍(朋友、同学等)本单元话题为写一封推荐信该板块的活动主题是“推荐班长”,写作要求是以班级中选班长为主题语境,假设你的班级正在推选班干部,请联名写一封推荐信,向老师推荐一名同学,David担任某个职位当我们介绍人物时,我们要把自己介绍的人物写得个性鲜明,能明确表现这个人的思想品质或性格特点给看推荐信的人留下深刻印象本单元写作要求同学们能用所学的词语和句型简单地介绍自己或他人写作目标在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点
1.职位特点概括候选人的性格和能力,并使用细节和例子来支撑观点2运用所学知识按照推荐信的结构写一封推荐信
3.学会观察、了解同伴,学习同伴的优秀品质,并通过向他人推荐同伴反思自己的不足常用表达
1.We arewriting to recommend...as our new monitorto...我们写信是为了推荐…作为我们的新班长…
2.He/She hasmany strongqualities forthis position.他/她胜任这个职位有许多优点
3.He/She alway s/often/never
11.A mancan dono morethan hecan.凡事都应量力而行
12.A mancannot spin and reelat thesame time.——心不能二用
三、健康与心态
1.An applea daykeeps thedoctor away,一天一苹果,不用请医生
2.Prevention is better thancure.预防胜于治疗
3.All workand noplay makesJack adull boy.只工作,不玩耍,聪明小伙也变傻
4.Health isnot valuedtill sicknesscomes.病时方知健康可贵
5.A closemouth catchesno flies.病从口入
6.A goodmedicine tastesbitter.良药苦口
7.Good healthis overwealth.健康是最大的财富
8.Happiness liesfirst ofall inhealth.幸福首先在于健康
9.Cheerfulness ishealth,its opposite,melancholy,is disease.欢乐就是健康,忧郁就是病痛
10.He ishappy thatthinks himselfso.自乐者常乐
11.Content isbetter thanriches.知足者常乐【万能写作模板】模板
①Dear,It ismy great pleasure to recommend(要推荐的人)to you.During his/her graduateyears he/she wasmy.As his/herI found him/her(介绍与此人的关系)His/Her performancein the school yearswas outstanding.First,he/she hadbeen andshowed greattalents in.Inaddition,he/she has a verypleasant personality.He hasdeveloped a strong senseof,and working with him/her is always.I canstate that he/she has all thequalities ofbeing.(介绍此人的能力)Therefore,I hererecommend him/her to you with all myheart.©Should youfavor him/her with a positionin yourcompany/Should youaccept him/her inyour universityI amsure that his/her futureconduct/academic work will proveworthyof yourconfidence.I lookforward tohearing fromyou at the earliestpossible moment.模板
②Dear,It affordsme muchpleasure to recommend(要推荐的人)to you.During his/her graduateyears he/she wasmy.Ashis/her Ifoundhim/her.(介绍与此人的关系).His/her performancein the school yearswas outstanding.First,he/she hadbeen andshowed greattalents in.Inaddition,he/she has a verypleasant personality.He/she hasdeveloped astrong senseof andworkingwith him/her isalwayspleasant.I canstate that he/she hasall thequalities ofbeing.(介绍此人的能力)Therefore,I recommendhim/her to you withall myheart,should youfavor him/her witha positionin yourcompany/should youaccept him/her inyour universityI amsure thathis/her futureworkwillprove worthyof yourtrust.I lookforward tohearing fromyou atthe earliestpossible moment.yours sincerely,Li ming模板
③Dear,I take the pleasure in recommending to you(被推荐的人或物).I hope you will be interestedin(him/her).There areseveral reasonswhy I think is a good choice,firstly,(理由一)・secondly,(理由二).last butnot least,(理由三).in aword,(总结)I would be mostgrateful if you would like to consider myrecommendation.模板
④Dear,I amso delightedto knowthat(对方需要推荐的事宜).With referenceto yourrequirements,I shallrecommend(要推荐的人/物)to you.The reasonsas follows.First,(推荐理由1).In addition,(推荐理由2).Whats more,(推荐理由3).If youhaveany otherquestions,please letme knowwithout hesitation.Yours sincerely,模板
⑤Dear Sir/Madam,As Professorof,1am verypleased to recommend,one ofmy favorite—,for hisapplication to your.I was very impressedby whoserich knowledge and keeninsight in the subjectindicates that he wasavery intelligentindividual inthe field.Based onmy interactionwithhim,I believe that possessesvery strongcapability.Moreover,it isworth notingthathestood outof hisclassmates for.In addition,hasapleasant personality anda highmotivation,and he always behavesin goodmanners.Therefore,I donot hesitateto recommendhim asan idealcandidate for the postyou advertised.I amsure youwillmake awise decisionin hiringhim.Yours sincerely,Li Ming典例指引If moreinformation regardingthis promisingis needed,please feelfree tocontact me.经典例题:假如你是一名初三学生张华,你要写一封推荐信给班主任Mr.Lu,告诉他你想推荐Millie做班长请根据下列信息,写好这封信Millie具备做这个职位的突出品质:L她足够自信,能把任何事做好…(举1例)
2.她也聪明,总是能想出好主意…(举1例)
3.她有条理…(举1例)o
4.她善于使用颜色来改善自己的情绪…(举1例)注意:
1.词数90左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.文章须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺Dear MrLu:Yours sincerelyZhangHua【审题解读】
1.根据提示,确定人称用第一人称
2.文章需要介绍姓名,年龄,联系方式等,用一般现在时,句子之间要恰当的使用连词,使上下文连贯通畅
3.文章的词数60左右【审题思路】这篇作文是人物描写类的文章,要求描写的主要方面文章已经给出,记得每一方面都要举出例子来丰富内容,文章的时态使用一般现在时,时态则是第三人称在写作时要注意运用多种句式,避免句式过于单一,除此之外,还要多使用连接词,使文章层次更加清晰【佳作欣赏】Dear MrLu:Im writing to recommendMillie as our monitor.I thinkshe hasall thenecessary qualities.To beginwith,she is confidentenough to do anything successfully.She nevergives upwhen she has difficultywith herstudy.Besides,Millie isso smartthat she can come up with many good ideas.For example,she suggested that weshould starta studygroup andwe allmadegreat progress.Whats more.Millies deskisalwaysorganized andclean.Its easyfor her to keep everything in order.Millie is also good at usingcolor to change hermoods.When shefeels blue,she willwear redcloths sothat itcan cheerher up.【重点短语】necessary qualities必要的品质have difficultywith herstudy在学习上有困难make greatprogress取得很大进步be good at doing擅长做某事keep everythingin order让一切保持井然有序【重点句型】l.She is confident enoughto doanythingsuccessfully,她足够自信,做什么事情都能成功
2.Millie isso smartthatshecancomeup withmany goodideas.米莉是如此聪明以至于她能想出很多好主意
3.She suggestedthat weshould starta studygroup.她建议我们组建一个学习小组
4.When shefeels blue,she willwear redcloths sothat itcan cheerherup.当她感到忧伤时,她就会穿红色衣服以便于使她振作实战演练-学生会要选新一届主席假设你叫Kitty,请根据以下提示和要求给校长写一封推荐信(信的开头和结尾已给出)提示:
1.推荐Daniel担任学生会主席:
2.推荐他的原因(包括能力、性格特征等内容自拟):
3.列举Daniel的一些事例要求:
1.有真情实感,语义连贯中心突出,详略得当;
2.词数100-120左右Dear Principal,I am writing to recommend Danielas thenew chairperson of theStudents Union.I thinkhe will be anexcellentchairperson becausehe hasmany goodpersonal qualities.I hope that you agree with me.Yours sincerely,Kitty【思路解读】
①题材和要求这篇作文要求我们以Kitty的身份给校长写一封推荐信,推荐Daniel来担任学生会的主席并在信中说明推荐他的原因,并列举Daniel的一些具体事例证明
②主要内容要求我们写的是推荐信,信中应主要包括以下内容:首先在信的开头应点明写信目的;然后介绍Daniel的基本情况和你推荐他的理由,并用具体事例证明;最后对这封信的主题加以强调因此这篇作文我们可以分三段来叙述
③时态全文应以一般现在时态第三人称单数来叙述,要特别注意谓语动词形式的变化,并正确使用be动词的形式
④句式写作时,应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能逐词翻译,而应从句子的整体考虑,使用符合英语习惯的句式,如简单句:主谓宾结构或主系表结构穿插使用较复杂的句式,如复合句和并列句,以及一些复杂的结构,如非谓语动词、插入语、固定短语和句型等同时应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅【写作步骤】第一步首先用两句话点明了写这封信的目的第二步文章的主体在这一段中作者主要介绍了Daniel的基本情况以及他的优秀品质,这也是你推荐他当学生会主席的理由第三步文章结尾最后一段作者用两句话再次重申主题,并表达了校长能同意自己,的推荐的愿望,结尾比较合理”【满分作文】Dear Principal,I amwriting to recommend Danielas thenew chairpersonof theStudents*Union.I thinkhe willbe anexcellentchairperson becausehe hasmany goodpersonal qualities.Daniel is very helpful.He alwaysdoes extra work inclass.At school,he alwayshelps otherstudents withtheirschoolwork.He isalso cleverand hard-working.He isgood atChinese andEnglish.He always gets good marks in tests.Daniel isalso organized and neverforgets to do thethings heplans to do.He hasorganized manyafter-class activitieswell.I thinkDaniel wouldbe a great chairpersonof theschool StudentsUnion.I hope that you agree with me.Yours sincerely,Kitty【高分句型】短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语,短文中长短句结合,简单句.复合句穿插使用,使文章富于节奏的变化如Atschool,he alwayshelps otherstudents withtheir schoolwork.He isgood atChinese andEnglish.He always gets goodmarks in tests.Daniel isalso organizedand neverforgets todo thethings heplans todo...T thinkDaniel wouldbe a greatchairperson of theschool Students1Union.1hope that youagree withme等等
(二)假设你想推荐你们班的班长李梅做学生会主席,请根据下列内容写一封推荐信内容提示见下表基本信息九年级学生,16岁个人品质精力充沛,活跃;有耐心主要特长英语说得好,善于与人合作相关经历曾当过班长,得到师生的赞扬今年8月,成为“2015田径世锦赛”志愿者,……最喜欢橙色,它可以带来好运和成功注意事项1,推荐信须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.“相关经历”一栏中省略部分须用2-3句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
3.词数在80个左右,信的开头,结尾已在答题卷上给出,不计入总次数;参考词汇2015田径世锦赛the2015World Championships志愿者volunteerDear Principal,I amwriting to recommend our monitor Li Mei as the chairpersonof ourschool.I thinkLi Meiis the most suitable person to be the chairperson.We hopethat you can agree.Yours sincerely【思路解读】
①题材和要求该题目属于记叙文写作,但写作时要按推荐信的格式写
②主要内容内容是根据所给的信息,推荐你班的班长李梅做学生会主席
③时态和人称应该用第三人称来叙述作文内容;时态采用一般现在时为主,用过去时描述相关的经历;
④写作指导在写作时应承接短文开头和结尾;本文首先从基本信息入手,然后介绍她的个人品质、主要特长及相关经历要求语句通顺、意思连贯【写作步骤】第一步,表明写作意图——介绍好朋友;第二步,具体介绍好朋友的个人基本信息及爱好等;第三步,介绍你喜欢他的理由【满分作文】Dear Principal,I amwriting to recommend our monitor LiMei as thechairpersonof ourschool.(点题)She isa Grade9student andshe is16years old.(基本信息)She isenergetic andactive.She isalso patientenoughto waitfor usfor along timewithout gettingangry.(个人品质)Whafs more,she speaksgood English and isgood atworkingwith others.(个人特长)She hasonce been a monitorand wonhigh praisefrom theteachers andstudents.Shealso workedasa volunteer atthe2015World Championshipsin August.She tookforeign playersto theright place.Shefelt busyand tiredbut itwas meaningful,she thought.(个人经历)She likesorange best,because itcan bringher goodluck and success.(个人爱好)I thinkLiMeiis the most suitable person to be thechairperson.We hopethat you canagree.(希望)Yours sincerely【亮点词汇】energetic andactive,meaningful【高分句型】
1.She hasonce beena monitorand wonhigh praisefrom theteachers andstudents.
2.She likesorange best,because itcan bringher goodluckandsuccess.
(三)学生会要选新一届主席假设你叫Kitty,请根据以下提示和要求给校长写一封推荐信(信的开头和结尾已给出)提示:L推Daniel担任学生会主席;
2.推荐他的原因(包括能力、性格特征等,内容自拟);
3.列举Daniel的一些事例要求:
1.有真情实感,语义连贯,中心突出详略得当;
2.词数100〜120左右Dear Principal,I amwriting torecommend Danielasthenew chairpersonof theStudents1Union.Kitty【思路解读】
①题材和要求这篇作文要求我们以Kitty的身份给校长写一封推荐信,推荐Daniel来担任学生会的主席,并在信中说明推荐他的原因,并列举Daniel的一些具体事例证明
②文体推荐信
③时态全文应以一般现在时态、第三人称单数来叙述,要特别注意谓语动词形式的变化,并正确使用be动词的形式【写作步骤】这篇作文我们可以分三段来叙述第一步首先在信的开头应点明写信目的作者首先用两句话点明了写这封信的目的第二步介绍Daniel的基本情况和你推荐他的理由,并用具体事例证明文章的主体在第二段,这一段中作者主要介绍了Daniel的基本情况以及他的优秀品质,这也是你推荐他当学生会主席的理由第三步最后对这封信的主题加以强调最后一段作者用两句话再次重申主题,并表达了校长能同意自己的推荐的愿望,结尾比较合理【写作提示】写作时,应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能逐词翻译,而应从句子的整体考虑,使用符合英语习惯的句式,如简单句主谓宾结构或主系表结构穿插使用较复杂的句式,如复合句和并列句,以及一些复杂的结构,如非谓语动词、插入语、固定短语和句型等同时应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅【满分作文】Dear Principal,I amwriting torecommend Danielasthenew chairpersonof theStudents1Union.I thinkhe willbe anexcellentchairperson becausehe hasmanygoodpersonal qualities.Daniel isvery helpful.He alwaysdoes extra work inclass.At school,he alwayshelps otherstudents withtheirschoolwork.He isalso cleverand hard-working.He isgood atChinese andEnglish.He alwaysgets goodmarksintests.Daniel isalso organizedand neverforgets todo thethings heplans todo.He hasorganized manyafter-class activitieswell.I thinkDaniel wouldbe a great chairpersonof theschoolStudents*Union.I hopethat youagree withme.Yours sincerely,Kitty【亮点词汇】Excellent,helpful,hard-working【高分句型】短文中长短句结合,简单句、复合句穿插使用,使文章富于节奏的变化最后短文中还使用了一些较好的句型和短语,如At school,healwayshelps otherstudents withtheir schoolwork.、He isgood atChinese andEnglish.Healways getsgoodmarksintests.Daniel isalso organizedand neverforgets todo thethings heplans todo.I thinkDanielwouldbe agreatchairpersonof theschoolStudents*Union I hopethat youagree withme.等等
(四)假如你是Cindy,向你班主任推荐David任新班长,请包括下面要点,用英语写一封推荐信
1.个性好(2点并举例)
2.对颜色感兴趣,经常告诉同学如何用色彩改变心情(举例)
3.同学有青春期问题的时候主动帮助(举例)注意事项
(1)必须包含所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
(2)词数90词左右Dear Mr.Wu,【思路解读】
1.题干解读题目要求根据提示要点,写出David能胜任班长的理由,包括个性优点等,要分别举例说明,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语他/她总是/经常/从不4・・・・isveryconfident/clever/helpful/hard-working.非常自信/聪明/乐于助人/勤奋
5...We think...is themost suitable/right person to be....…我们认为…是最合适的人…写作隹架设计
6.We hopethat youagree with us.
6.我们希望你同意我们的意见引言Introduction介绍自己的身份和被推荐人的关系简要的说明推荐的目的和背景描述被推荐人的个人信息主题Body列举被推荐人的优点和特长详细阐述被推荐人的成就和表现推荐信说明为什么被推荐人适合接受所推荐的奖项或机会L对被推荐人表示支持总结Conclusion鼓励希望意见被采纳署名并注明日期附言Complimentary CloseL表达对收信人的感谢和祝愿素材宝库【词汇积累】
2.写作指导写作时要与题干提示紧密结合,用第三人称来写作,时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误【满分作文】Dear Mr.Wu,I amwriting torecommend Davidas ournew monitor.I thinkhe hasmany strongqualities for the position.To beginwith,its veryorganized ofhim tokeep everythingin order.He isnot onlymodest butalso veryhard-working.Although healwaysgetshigh marks,he nevershows offin frontof us.Besides,David isquite helpful.Wheneverwe havedifficulties withour study,he helpsus patiently.Whafs more,he issuch aconfident boythathebelieves thatitshe who can shape his life.David iscurious abouteverything.He learnsnew knowledgein manyways,such asbooks andtheInternet.David hasagreatinterest incolors.He oftentells ushow touse colorstochangeour mood.For example,I failedmylast exam.David advisedme towear redclothes tocheer meup.It workedand Iwasverythankful tohim.Whenever thestudents meetyouth problems,he willoffer to help him.For example,a fewdays ago,Bob quarreledwithhis parents.He wasinabad moodand didntwant totalk to his parents.He offeredto helpBob andsuggested thatBob should write to his parents and tell them what he thought.Now Bobhas madeupwithhis parents.I thinkDavid is themost suitableperson to be our monitor.I hopethatyouagreewithme.Yours sincerelyCindy【高分词汇】Patiently,modest,hard-working,helpful,patiently,thankful【高分句型】
1.To beginwith,its veryorganized ofhim tokeepeverythinginorder.He isnot onlymodest butalso veryhardworking.
2.Although healwaysgetshigh marks,he nevershows offin frontof us.Besides,David isquite helpful.Whenever wehavedifficulties withour study,he helpsus patiently.
3.Whafs more,he issuch aconfident boythathebelieves thatits hewhocanshapehislife.
4.He offeredto helpBob andsuggestedthatBobshouldwritetohisparentsandtellthemwhathethought.
(五)假设你叫李明,你们班级要选拔新班长,你想向班主任王老师推荐张航请根据表格内容,写一封80词左右的推荐信给王老师信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数姓名张航特长精通电脑,擅长演讲性格、品自信、勤奋、谦虚、有条理、乐于助人质个人事迹经常花很多时间组织课外活动,从不介意为班级做额外的工作,总是尽最大努力帮助同学,深受同学们欢迎Dear Mr.Wang,Pm writing torecommendZhang Hangas ournew monitor...I hopeyou canconsider my recommendation.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【思路解读】这是一篇提示性作文,要求李明的名义向王老师推荐张航作新任班长【主要内容】首先介绍推荐的人是谁,被推荐人有何性格特征,有何兴趣爱好,最后介绍个人事迹【人称时态】人称以第三人称为主,时态为一般现在时在叙述时要条理清楚,有理有据句式正确,不要出现语法性错误【解题步骤】第一步文章开篇点题,说明了写信的目的,以及被推荐人是谁第二步紧接着介绍了他的性格特征和兴趣爱好等等,叙事较为全面第三步希望对方采纳建议【满分作文】DearMr.Wang,Im writingtorecommendZhang Hangas ournew monitor.I thinkhe hassome strongqualities forthis position.Zhang Hang isconfident.He isgood atmaking speeches.He alsodoes well in computers.He ishard-working,modest andorganized.He oftenspends lotsof timeorganizing after-school activities.He isvery helpfultoo.He neverminds doing extrawork for our class.He alwaystries his best tohelp otherstudents.He isvery popularwith us.I thinkZhang Hangis themost suitablepersonto beourmonitor.I hopeyou canconsider myrecommendation.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【高分词语】be good at;do wellin;spend...doing sth.;try one*sbest todosth.;mind doingsth.;be popularwith等【高分句型】I thinkhe hassome strongqualities forthis position.I thinkZhang Hangis themostsuitablepersontobe ourmonitor.I hopeyou canconsider myrecommendation.这些都是宾语从句Im writingtorecommendZhang Hangas ournew monitor.Tm writingtorecommendZhangHangas ournew monitor.这些都是包含了动词不定式作目的状语的句子总体上看,内容详细全面,语言丰富,结构合理,是一篇不错的习作-(2022年•四川眉山•中考真题)本周日上午,一些外国学生将到三苏祠参观,现三苏祠急需招募十名志愿者假定你是李华,请写一封电子邮件推荐自己要点包括
1.自荐目的:成为志愿者;
2.个人信息:身份,年龄,性格(外向、善于与人相处),本周日上午有空;
3.个人优势:擅长英语;
4.表达期望:获得机会并能做好,请本周五前回复注意
1.词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息参考词汇三苏祠Sansu TempleDear Sir/Madam,Ham gadto see your notice volunteers wantedSome foreignstudentsYours,Li Hua【思路解读】
①题材推荐信的一种——自荐信
②时态一般现在时【写作步骤】第一步,提出申请第二步,说明自身基本信息和长处等信息第三步,希望对方给予机会,希望早日来信【满分作文】Dear Sir/Madam,I amglad toseeyournoticevolunteerwanted.Some foreignstudents willvisit SansTemple hisSunday morning.Im willing tobe a volunteer.Let meintroduce myselfto you.Im amiddle schoolstudents.Tm15aged.Tm anoutgoing boy/girl whocan alwaysgetalong with others.As for the time,I willavailable thisSunday morning.My oralEnglish isso excellentthat Ihave nodifficulty communicating with foreign friends.More importantly,I knowa lotSansu culture.Tm sureI can help them have a better understanding of each other.T believeI canimage itif yougive mea chance.Please replayme byFriday!Yours,Li Hua【亮点词汇】willing to,outgoing,get alongwith others,available,excellent,have nodifficulty communicatingwith,have abetterunderstanding ofeach other【高分句型】
1.My oralEnglish isso excellentthat Ihave nodifficultycommunicatingwithforeignfriends.
2.Im sureIcanhelpthemhave abetterunderstandingofeachother.
(二)(2019中考真题)假设你叫李磊,你们班级要选拔一个新班长,你想向班主任孙老师推荐王蒙请根据表格内容,写一封大约80词左右的推荐信给孙老师信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数姓名王蒙特长精通电脑,擅长演讲性格、品质自信、勤奋、谦虚、有条理、乐于助人个人事迹经常花很多时间组织课外活动,从不介意为班级做额外的工作,总是尽努力协助同学,深受同学们欢迎Dear MrSun,rm writingtorecommendWang Mengas ournew monitor.I hopeyoucanconsider myrecommendationoYours sincerely,Li Lei【思路解读】
①题材推荐信
②时态文章以第
一、三人称,一般现在时为主,注意主谓一致问题;【写作步骤】第一步,提出申请第二步,说明被推荐人的基本信息和个人品质、长处等信息第三步,希望对方给予机会,希望早日来信【满分作文】Dear Mr.Sun,Im writingtorecommendWang Mengas ournew monitor.I thinkhe hassome strongqualities forthis position.Wang Mengisconfident.He isgoodatmaking speeches.Healso doeswellincomputers.He ishard-working,modest andorganized.He oftenspends lotsof timeorganizingafter-school activities.He isvery helpfultoo.He nevermindsdoingextraworkforourclass.He alwaystries hisbesttohelp otherstudents.He isvery popularwithus.IthinkWang Mengisthemostsuitablepersontobeourmonitor.I hopeyoucanconsider myrecommendation.Yours sincerely,Li Lei
①题材这篇作文要求我们写一封电子邮件,介绍学校推荐志愿者的情况
②时态文章以第
一、三人称,一般现在时为主,注意主谓一致问题;【写作内容】短文的主要内容应包括同学们推荐Jim的理由;推荐Jane的理由;自己的观点以及原因写作时要将这些内容都包括在内,不能遗漏要点【写作步骤】文章的层次和结构,可以分成三段或是四段第一步首先点明文章的主题,因此这个讨论第二步然后分两段或一段介绍同学们推荐Jim或Jane的理由第三步最后一段表明自己的观点【写作方法】需要注意英语表达和汉语的不同,使用符合英语语法的句型和短语,多使用简单句,注意句子之间的过渡和连接也可以使用一些高级句型和短语,增强文章的表现力,使文章意思连贯,表达流畅点睛这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求介绍了学生们推选志愿者的情况,并表达了个人观点首先这篇短文内容完整,结构清晰,包含了题目中的所有要点,分成了四段表述,比较有条理其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,符合英语表达习惯【满分作文】Dear Mr.Wu,We havediscussed whetherJimorJaneshouldbe thevolunteerforthe eventof the2,500th anniversaryofthe foundingofYangzhouCity.Different groupshave differentrecommendations.Jim andJane aretwo candidates.Group Aof the class strongly recommend Jim.Because Jimis oftenpraised byteachers forhis excellentgrades.Though afew words,he learnsabout thehistory ofour YangzhouCity.Also hespeaks Englishwonderfully.However,GroupBthink Janeisbetter.Its truethat JanesGrades arenot sogood,but she is willing todoextra workforthe classin herspare time.In myopinion,I preferJane tobe thevolunteer.As weall know,avolunteermust begoodatcommunication and beready todevote his/her time to peoplein trouble.And Janehas thequality.Ihopemy emailwillbeof somevalue to you.Yours sincerely,【高分句型】
一、Personal Qualities
1.be skillfulat/show greatskill atsth精通…
2.a boy with great potentiality/ability有着极大的潜力/能力的男生
3.have agift for有某事的天赋
4.be anexpert in是某方面的专家
5.speak fluentEnglish讲流利英语
6.hasapositive influenceon sth对某事有积极的影响
7.be highlycompetent forsth在某事上有竞争力的
8.be enthusiasticabout对某事有热情
9.show greatinterest in.在某事上展示出很大的兴趣
10.Mature,dynamic andhonest.思想成熟、精明能干、为人诚实
11.Excellent abilityof systematicalmanagement.有极强的系统管理能力
12.Ability to work independently,mature andresourceful.能够独立工作、思想成熟、应变能力强
13.A personwith abilityplus flexibilityshould apply.需要有能力及适应人
14.A stablepersonality andhigh senseof responsibilityare desirable.个性稳重、具高度责任感
15.Mature,dynamic andhonest.思想成熟、精明能干、为人诚实
16.Excellent abilityof systematicalmanagement.有极强的系统管理能力
17.Ability towork independent1y,mature andresourceful.能够独立工作、思想成熟、应变能力强
18.A personwith abilityplus flexibilityshould apply.需要有能力及适应力强的人
19.A stablepersonalityandhigh senseof responsibilityare desirable.个性稳重、具高度责任感
20.Work wellwithamulti-cultural anddiverse workfore已能够在不同文化和工作人员的背景下出色地工作
21.Bright,aggressive applicants.反应快、有进取心的应聘者
22.Ambitious attitudeessential.有雄心壮志
1.1Initiative,independent and good communicationskill.积极主动、独立工作能力强,并有良好的交际技台匕目匕
24.Willing towork underpressure withleadership quality.愿意在压力下工作,并具备领导素质
25.Willing toassume responsibilities.应聘者须勇于挑重担
26.Mature,self-motivated andstrong interpersonalskills.思想成熟、上进心强,并具极丰富的人际关系技巧
27.Energetic,fashion-minded person.精力旺盛、思想新潮
28.With apleasant matureattitude.开朗成熟
29.Strong determinationto succeed.有获得成功的坚定决心
30.Strong leadershipskills.有极强的领导艺术
31.Ability towork wellwithothers,能够同他人一道很好地工作
32.Highly-motivated andreliable personwith excellenthealth andpleasant personality.上进心、强又可靠者,并且身体健康、性格开朗
33.The ability to initiateand operateindependently.有创业能力,并能独立地从业
34.Strong leadershipskill whilepossessing agreat teamspirit.有很高的领导艺术和很强的集体精神
35.Be highlyorganizedandefficient.工作很有条理,办事效率高
36.Willing tolearn andprogress.肯学习进取
37.Good presentationskills.W良好的表达能力
38.Positive activemind essential.有积极、灵活的头脑
39.Ability todeal withpersonnel atall levelseffectively o善于同各种人员打交道
40.Have positivework attitudeandbewilling andable towork diligentlywithout supervision有积极的工作态度,o愿意和能够在没有监督的情况下勤奋地工作
41.Young,bright,energetic withstrong career-ambition.年轻、聪明、精力充沛,并有很强的事业心
42.Good peoplemanagement andcommunication skills.Team player.有良好的人员管理和交际能力能在集体中发挥带头作用
43.Able towork underhigh pressureand timelimitation.能够在高压力下和时间限制下进行工作
44.Be elegantand withnice personality.举止优雅、个人性格好
45.With goodmanagerial skillsand organizationalcapabilities.W良好的管理艺术和组织能力
46.The mainqualities requiredare preparednesstoworkhard,ability tolearn,ambition andgood health.主要必备素质是吃苦耐劳精神好、学习能力优、事业心强和身体棒
47.Having goodand extensivesocial connections.AW良好而广泛的社会关系
48.Being active,creative andinnovative isa plus.思想活跃、有首创和革新精神尤佳
49.With goodanalytical capability.有较强的分析能力
50.take initiativetodosth主动性做某事
51.gain thefirst gradescholarship得到一等奖学金
52.一个全面发展的学生an all-around studentwith excellentgrades inall subject
53.被授予…的奖项be given/awarded the title of
54.have agift for有天赋
55.be skilledin擅长
56.be experiencedin有经验
57.speak fluentEnglish能说一口流利的英语
58.a boywith greatability是一个能力很强的男孩
59.an all-around studentwith excellentgrades是一名全能的学生
60.in excellentgrades inall subjects各科成绩优异
61.gain/win thefirst prize/place,win agold/silver/copper medal,被授予…称号/获得一等奖/名次,获得金/银/铜奖
62.outgoing,easy toget alongwith,enthusiastic,enthusiasm ispart ofhis character.外向、易于相处、热情、热情是他性格的一部分
二、必备句型
(一)交代消息来源、写明写信的目的
1.1am both honored and pleased torecommend...我很荣幸也很高兴推荐・・・2,Having learnedthat yourcompany isin needof somepart timesalesman,I ambothhonoredandpleasedto recommendLiming,one ofmy schoolmatestoyou.得知贵公司需要一些兼职推销员,我很荣幸也很高兴向你们推荐我的一位同学李明
3.1t iswith greatpleasure thatI takethis opportunityto give...我彳艮高兴借止匕机会・・・
(二)介绍荐原因一能力、奖项、学历、优势等1,他获得了优秀毕业生的称号,是一位热情积极向上的年轻人,具有很强的潜力Awarded withthe title oftheExcellent Graduate,he is an enthusiasticand progressiveyoung manwith highpotentiality.
2.她的学习成绩始终保持在最高水平,这是她的学习热诚和聪明才智的结果Her academicrecord wasconstantly maintainedatthetop level,which resultedfrom herdevotion tostudy andintelligentnature.
3.我发现他勤奋、干练、诚实、勤奋、可靠
4.1have foundhim tobe hard-working,competent,honest,diligent,reliable...
(三)表达希望和感谢
1.我毫无保留地向你推荐黎明如果您有任何关于他的背景或资格的问题,请不要犹豫给我致电12345oI recommendLiming toyou withoutreservation.If youhave anyfurther questionswith regardtohisbackground orqualifications,please donot hesitateto callme at
12345.
2.如果他能加入公司,他将充分发挥他的潜力/才能而你的公司将会受益匪浅所以我强烈建议你……If hecan jointhe company,he willgive fullplay tohis potential/talent.And yourcompany willbe greatlybenefited.SoI stronglyrecommend...toyou.
3.如果这个建议能得到您的认可,我们将不胜感激Should thisrecommendation gainyour favorableconsideration,it wouldbe highlyappreciated.
一、X开头句用礼貌的语言开头,例如“DearSir/Madam,或“To WhomIt Mayconcern,等
二、X中间句
(一)介绍自己要推荐的人
1.1amwritingtorecommend...,whose nameis forthe positionof[Position].我写信推荐…担任…,他的名字是…
2.1have known...for longtime andhave foundhim/hertobe anoutstanding[StudentAVorker/].我认识…,发现他/她是一位杰出的[学生/工人]
3.We arewritingtorecommend...asournew monitorto...我们写信是为了推荐…作为我们的新班长…
4.1t isagreathonor for metorecommend toyou...我很荣幸向你推荐…
5.1takethepleasureinrecommendingtoyou...我很高兴向你推荐…
6.1t affordsme muchpleasure torecommend you...我很高兴向你推荐…
7.Its agreatpleasureand honorformetorecommendLi leitoyou.我很高兴也很荣幸向你推荐李雷
8.The reasonswhy I recommend...toyouare asfollows./Irecommend...forthefollowing reasons.First ofall,...Besides,...Last butnot least,...我推荐…给您的信息如下/我建议…原因如下首先此外最后不能不提
9.1stronglyrecommend...toyouforthereason that...我强烈建议…因为…
10.With referenceto yourrequirements,I shallrecommend you...根据你的要求,我建议你…
(二)推荐理由列出被推荐人的优点和特长,并给出具体的例子
1.He/she isa very...and...young man/woman.他/她是一个非常…和…的年轻男人/女人
2.Easy-going andcongenial,withastrong senseof responsibilityandgoodteam-spirit.为人谦和友善,做事态度认真,有强烈的责任感和良好的团队精神
3.Having playeda coupleimportant rolesinthestudent organizations,honing theinterpersonal communicationskillsand organizationalcapability.曾担任学校社团职务,培养了良好的人际交往技巧与组织能力
4.He isan all-around studentwith excellentgrades inall subjects,hehasbeen giventhetitleoftheexcellent student”.他是个全能的学生,各科成绩都很好他被授予“优秀学生”的称号
5.As aboywithgreatpotential,he isgoodatsolving difficultproblems.作为一个很有潜力的男孩,他善于解决难题
6.Liming,a graduatefrom Pekinguniversity,majors incomputer softwaredesign.李明,北京大学计算机软件设计专业毕业
7.He hasenjoyed thereputation/titleofthe excellentgraduate.他享有优秀毕业生的美誉
8.Theres nodoubt aboutit------she ismore intelligentand diligentthan others.毫无疑问,她要比其他的学生聪明和勤奋许多
9.He ispowerful enoughto influencethe othermembers oftheclass/committee他有足够的力量影响委员会/班级的其他成员
10.heiscapable withoutbeing aggressive,modest withoutbeing affected.他很能干,但不是逞强好胜,谦逊但不是做作
11.It isuniversally acknowledgedthathis/her personalityis outstanding.You are always optimistic,energetic,andenthusiastic inyour workand life.He/She isalways willing tohelpothers andhaveastrong senseof responsibility.众所周知,他/她的个性出众你在工作和生活中总是乐观、精力充沛、充满热情
12.He isnot afraidof difficultiesand challenges,and youare always willing tostrive forexcellence.He hasa strongsenseof teamspirit andare alwayswillingtowork together.他不怕困难和挑战,而且他总是愿意追求卓越他有很强的团队精神,总是愿意一起工作
13.With othersto achievethe bestresults.You havea goodcommand ofEnglishandarealwayswillingtohelp otherslearnEnglish.You haveastrong abilitytoadapt tonew与其他人一起实现最佳结果你的英语掌握得很好,而且总o是愿意帮助别人学习英语你有很强的适应新事物的能力
14.He/She alwayswillingtolearn newknowledgeandskills.You arealwayswillingto expressyour opinionsand haveastrongabilityto thinkindependently.他总是愿意学习新的知识和技能你总是愿意表达自己的观点,并且有很强的独立思考能力
15.His excellentqualities andgreat successare admirable.他的优秀品质和巨大成功令人钦佩派结尾句l.In conclusion,I stronglybelievethathe wouldbe anexcellent fitfor Position.总之,我坚信他非常适合担任这个职位2,His/Her Qualitiesmake him/her astand outStudent/Worker/who wouldrepresent yourSchool/Organization.他/她的素质使他/她成为一名杰出的学生/工人/代表你的学校/组织
3.1highly recommendhe forthis positionand amcertain thathe/she willbe anexcellent Leader/etc.for yourSchool/Organization,我强烈推荐他担任这个职位,并确信他/她将成为你们学校/组织的优秀领导者
4.1naword,he wouldbea goodchoice.I wouldbe gratefulifyou wouldliketoconsidermyrecommendation.总之,他是个不错的选择如果你愿意考虑我的推荐,我将不胜感激
5.1hopeyoucan givehim achance.I believehe willmake agreat contributionto yourcompany.我希望你能给他一个机会我相信他会为贵公司做出巨大贡献
6.1hopethatyouwouldtake myrecommendation intoconsideration/account.我希望你能考虑我的建议※落款Sincerely,[Your Name]【优秀素材】假设你的班级正在推选班干部,请联名写一封推荐信,向老师推荐一名同学担任某个职位Dear MrWang,We arewritingtorecommend Cheng Lan asournewmonitor.We thinkshe wouldbe anexcellent monitorbecauseshe hasmany strongqualities forthis position.Cheng Lanis activeand confident.She isnever shyand likestalking topeople.She isnot afraidof speakingin frontofa lotof peopleeither.This isan importantquality foragoodmonitor.Cheng Lanisalsohard-working.She alwaysfinishes allher homeworkearly anddoes someextrawork,so shewouldhave thetime andenergy tobeamonitor.Besides,Cheng Lanisanorganized person.She canplan allher thingswell.She alwayspays attentionto eveiydetailwhen organizingclass activities.We thinkChengLanistheright persontobeourmonitor.We hopethatyouagreewithus.Yours sincerelyLiYan WangDawei【谚语积累】
一、勤奋、意志与成功
1.Where there isawill,thereisa way.有志者事竟成
2.No pains,no gains.没有付出就没有收获
3.Constant drippingwears awaya stone.水滴石穿,绳锯木断
4.Care anddiligence bringluck.谨慎和勤奋才能抓住机遇
5.Genius isnothing butlabor anddiligence.天才不过是勤奋而已
6.Great hopesmake greatman.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物
7.Industry isthe parentof success.勤奋是成功之母
8.No rosewithout athorn.没有不带刺的‘玫瑰
9.There isno royalroad tolearning.书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟
10.No wayis impossibleto courage.勇者无惧
11.Success belongsto thepersevering.坚持就是胜利
12.The finestdiamond mustbe cut.玉不琢,不成器
13.Adversity makesa manwise,not rich.逆境出人才
二、学习方法与态度
1.Practice makesperfect.熟能生巧
2.It isnever tooold tolearn.活到老,学到老
3.Reading isto themind whileexercise tothe body.读书健脑,运动强身
4.A manbecomes learnedby askingquestions.不耻下问才能有学问
5.Learn andlive.活着,为了学习
6.Knowledge startswith practice.实践出真知
7.Books andfriends shouldbe fewbut good.读书如交友,应求少而精
8.Complacency isthe enemyof study.学习的敌人是自己的满足
9.Knowledge makeshumble;ignorance makesproud.知识使人谦虚,无知使人傲慢
10.Knowledge advancesby stepsand notby leaps.知识只能循序渐进,不能跃进。