高中英语译林版选修一：Unit 4 Period 4　Integrated skills

1915.3The poemwas inspiredby Frosts longwalks in the countrysidewith EdwardThomas,a fellowpoet.4In the poem,Frost talksabout thechoice betweentwo forestpaths.5The poetuses theimage ofa forkintheroad tosymbolize anychoice inlife.Activity4DiscussionWhat,s yourunderstanding of the poem答案Answers mayvary.Activity5Writing outlineAccordingto theexercises above,we canlearn whenwriting apoetry review,we canuse thefollowingoutline.Here isa poemtitled___________________________________________________________It goeslike this______________________________________________________________...wrote thispoem inorder to_____________________________________________________写作指导本单元的写作任务是写诗歌评论，抓住诗歌的主题，写出诗歌大意，并说明诗歌中所蕴含的寓意写作步骤一般是“三段式”，具体为第一段简要介绍诗歌的作者及内容第二段详细论述诗歌的主题第三段写出启迪与感想常用表达

（一）开头常用句式Here isa poemtitled“”by...,which enjoysgreat popularityamong readers.这是……写的一首题目是……的诗，它深受读者欢迎

（二）主体常用句式

1.Young aswe are,we cometo realizethat aslong aswe try,nothing isimpossible.尽管我们年轻，但我们认识到只要我们尝试，一切皆有可能

2.She oftenencourages meto faceeverything,sadness orhappiness.她常常鼓励我要面对一切，无论是悲伤还是幸福记住，

3.Remember,the bestlove isto loveothers unconditionallyrather thanmake demandson them.最好的爱存在于对别人的爱胜于对别人的索求之上

（三）结尾常用句式

1.V mdeeply movedby theabove poemreminding us of theimportance oftrying toseize everychanceto dowhat weshould beforeit stoo latein ourlife.我被这首诗深深地打动了，它提醒我们及时抓住机遇做好生活中该做的事情的重要性我

2.We shouldcall onpeople allover theworld tochange ourlifestyles beforeall hopeshave gone.们应该号召全世界的人们在希望破灭之前改变我们的生活方式■写作实践请给唐朝诗人李绅的《悯农》写一篇诗歌评论，要求写出这首诗的大意，并说明诗中所蕴含的作者的感情悯农唐/李绅锄禾日当午，汗滴禾下土谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦Sympathy onthe FarmersAtnoon,farmers areweeding,Down thefield,sweat isdropping.Who knowsrice ona dish,Every grainis fullof toiling注意,结合短诗的内容，适当展开想象；1突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语义连贯；

2.词数左右

3.80第一步审题谋篇［审题］写作要求是写《悯农》的诗歌评论写作时应注意下面几点.确定文体这是一篇夹叙夹议文写作时注意夹叙夹议文的写作特点1主体时态文章应以一般现在时为主

2.主体人称由于是评论一首诗歌，所以人称应该以第三人称为主

3.［谋篇］本文可以分为三段第一段诗歌的作者李绅；时代唐朝；地位深受欢迎第二段介绍诗歌所表达的内容第三段诗歌的写作意图及现实意义第二步遣词造句［核心词汇］

3.frequently掉到土里

4.fall into the soil美味的

5.delicious

6.提西星某人....remind sbof…［连词成句］这里有一首李绅写的诗，题目为《悯农》

1.Here isa poemby Li Shen andit istitled“Sympathy onthe Farmers”.李绅深受中国读者欢迎

2.LiShenis popularwith Chinesereaders..夏日正午时刻，虽然外面天气炎热，农民依然在地里除草3weedAlthough it is hotoutside atthe summernoon time,the farmersare stillweeding inthe fields..他们全身湿透，汗水频繁地掉在庄稼生长的土地上4They arewet allover andtheir sweatis frequently falling into the soil.The cropsgrow there.我认为对今天的年轻一代来说，理解这首诗歌并珍惜每粒粮食是很重要的

5.I thinkit svery importantfor the young generationtoday tounderstand thepoem andtreasure everygiain.第三步句式升级用过去分词作后置定语以及定语从句将句和句合成一句话

1.12】】Here isa poemtitled“Sympathy onthe Farmers”by LiShen whois populaiwith Chineseeade s.用引导的倒装句改写句

2.as3Hot asit isoutside atthe summernoon time,the farmersare stillweeding inthe fields.用的复合结构和引导的定语从句改写句

3.with where4】】They arewet allover withtheir sweatfrequently fallingintothesoil,where thec opsg ow.用抽象名词+主语从句”结构改写句

4.“it isof+5I thinkit sof great importance that theyounggeneiation today should understand thepoem and treasureevery grain.第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇词左右的英语短文80【参考范文】Here isa poemtitled“Sympathy onthe Farmers“by LiShen whois popularwith Chinesereaders.It goeslike thisHot asitisoutside atthe summernoon time,the farmersare stillweeding inthefields.They arewet allover withtheir sweatfrequentlyfallingintothesoiL wherethe cropsgrow.Butwho knowsexactly allour foods,the deliciousdishes onour table,come fromthe hard work ofthefarmersLi Shenwrote thispoem inorder toremind peopleoftheimportance ofthe farmershardwork.Ithink itsofgreatimportancethattheyoung generationtodayshouldunderstandthepoemandtreasureeverygrain.。