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制作make/produce松了口气（）breathe asigh ofrelief/let outa longsigh ofrelief情绪类快乐happiness/joy无法避免unavoidable/inevitable【典型句式】[高分句型1]Without delay,he and his grandpaset towork,dropping the villagers9candles together（运用了现在分词作状吾）with allhis owntreasured onesinto amelting pot.t[高分句型2]As itturned out,the villagerswho went to the house and witnessed the candles cheered up,（运用/弓导定语从句）surprised andteary-eyed.who I.【参考范文】3When he felt hungry,his mothercame backwith afull boxof cookies.Theyre allfor you,my dearsonJ saidMom with a caringsmile.Mom toldhim that his brothershad goneto visithis grandparentswith his dad.Thinking thathe couldenjoy allthe cookiesalone,Brutus waswild withjoy.With mouthwatering,Brutus wolfeddown fourcookies before hefelttoo fullto havemore.Every dayBrutusenjoyed playingtoys,having deliciousfood andwearing newclothes withouthis brothersbothering.In thisway,he spentfive daysas anonly childbefore hefelt theempty housewas tooquiet.Heneeded someoneto playwith.Although hewas welldressed,food didnttaste goodwithout anyonetoshare with.He beganto misshis brothers.He realizedtheir companywas whathe neededmost.I wishIwerent bethe only child anylonger,he thought,falling asleep.The nextmorning,a pillowhit Brutuson the head,waking himup.To hisgreat delight,Brutus sawhis brothersback!He satup immediatelytohug themand wouldnever wishto separatefrom them!【写作指导】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述有好吃的，好玩的，穿的也好，但这一切Brutus都不得和其他三个兄弟分享他厌倦这样的生活，一天晚上对着星星许愿，希望自己是家里唯一的孩子第二天起床后他发现其他三个兄弟都不见了踪影，感觉自己的愿望实现了，整个早上享受着不用和他人分享的生活.段落续写1

①根据第一段首句“当他感到饥饿时，他的母亲带着一整盒饼干回来了”可知，下文可描写妈妈告诉其他兄弟的去向，以及他独自享受美食、玩具和衣物的场景Brutus

②根据第二段首句“就这样，他作为独生子女度过了五天，才觉得空房子太安静了”可知，下文可描写他开始想念兄弟们，明白了有他们的陪伴他才会快乐.续写线索妈妈回家——独自享用一切—五天后感觉无聊——意识到兄弟的陪伴很重要——2兄弟们回来.词汇激活3

①看起来seem/look like/appear

②想者没想B withoutthinking anymore/without furtherthought/without secondthought

③获得gain/obtain/achieve

④提高情绪类improve/get better/enhance

①担心的worried/anxious/apprehensive

②快乐happy/contented/pleased【典型句式】[高分句型l]The opponentsdidnt thinkhighly of me,so theydidnt thinkthat Iwould be able tokick（引导的宾语从句）the ballso powerfully,that[高分句型2]Now I have realizedthat Ialways likedthis sport,but myproblem withit hadsomething to（引导的宾语从句，以及省略的定语从句）do withthe lackof encouragementI got.that that.【参考范文】5My heartturned cold./dont have fifteen dollars.I tookthe photoenvelope andwalked away,withmy cheeksred aftermy reply.Next,we stoppedat theride-on toycars in the mallsfood court.Therewerent anyother kidsthere.My kidsclimbed on them enjoyingthemselves verymuch.After awhile,we weretired sowe unwrappedour lunchesthat I had broughtfrom home.Although the malls foodcourt was near,I didnthave extramoney.It wasearly forlunch,but we were hungry.As wewere hawingour lunch,the youngwoman cameup andpressed somethinginto myhand.Shesaid,Here.Take yourfamily outfor icecream afterlunch.I wassurprised.I managedto saythankyou“as sheturned andwalked away.Then Ilooked downat whatshe hadgiven me.The billstotaledfifteen dollars.Tears rolleddown mycheeks asI quietlyfinished mysandwich.The doubtsin my heartmelted awayand myfaith wasrenewed.Kindness canchange someonesdark momentinto abright one.【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和丈夫刚买了一套房子，一些意料之外的开支使他们的预算比以往任何时候都要紧张，作者带孩子们去当地商场的摄影棚里拿孩子们的肖像照的故事段落续写L

①由第一段首句内容“我的心凉了‘我没有美元小可知，第一段可描写作者没有钱买多15余的肖像，带着孩子在商场玩耍的过程

②由第二段首句内容“当我们正在吃午饭的时候，那个年轻女人走过来，把什么东西塞到我手里”可知，第二段可描写肖像画室里的年轻女人送给作者一些东西，以此来帮助作者和她的孩子们.续写线索拒绝购买多余的肖像——带着孩子离开——带孩子们在商场玩耍——吃午餐2——年轻女人送给作者一些东西-------------两人进行简短交流——感悟.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）3行为类

①走开walk away/go away

②玩得开心enjoy oneself/have agood time

③改变change/transform情绪类

①累的tired/sweatful

②吃惊的surprised/amazed【典型句式】[高分句型（运用了现在分词作状语）1]My kidsclimbed onthem enjoyingthemselves verymuch.[高分句型（运用了2]Although themails food courtwasnear,I didnthave extramoney.although引导让步状语从句）[高分句型（运用了引导的时间3]I managedto saythank youas sheturned andwalked away.as状语从句）half fish,Im alsoafraid ofreal fish-and ofanything elsethat mightbe swimmingin thedirty water/9Dont beembarrassed,“I said.Were allafraid ofsomething.Im totallyscared ofsnakes and the dark,（牛油果）um,avocadosAvocados”Max smiled.“I knowit soundsstrange/91said.But they9re justso slimy（黏）!”（怪物）“Look out!Max joked.The bigavocado monsteris comingto slimeyou.You lookout!”I replied.A giantfish monsteris headingyour way.”Soon,wewereboth laughing.That brokethe iceenough forme tosay,“You mightfeel betterif youtake a lookat whatsactually under the water.（护目镜）I grabbedtwo pairsof gogglesfrom abin and put onepair on.“Ill gofirst J I said,thenwent underfbr afew secondsbefore comingup.Nothing scary,“I reported.Max hesitated,then putontheother pair,took adeep breath,and wentunderthe water foraboutthree seconds.注意续写词数应为左右；L150请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答

2.“Any lakemonsters“I askedwhen heappeared from the water.In myexperience,laughing a little about the thingthat scaresyou canmake iteasier totalk aboutit..阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文2In the village whereCharles lived,high in the FrenchAlps,December usuallybrought garlandsscentedwith pine.Each Sunday,villagers wouldwalk downdecorated streetsto theold stoneWishingHouse.There,for thefour weeksbefore New Year,they wouldlight candlesin the house andshare theirstoriesand prayfor thenext newyear together.Charles lovedthe glowof the candles.But thisyear,World WarII changedeverything.Charless fatherand brotherwent todo theirmilitaryservice.Families neededration couponsfor thingslike butterand sugar.Because candleswerecostly andhard tofind,the housewould nothave anycandles thisyear.Charles wasthinking aboutall ofthisas hestepped slowlyout ofbed onemorning.He puton hiswarmest clothes and headedout todo hischores.He openedthe bigbarn door,sunbeams streaminginto thebarn.He lookedup to the loftwhere histreasurebox hid.The boxheld fishingline,a driedsnakeskin,a whistleandhis birthday candles.Eachyear on hisbirthday,one newcandle wouldappear onhis cake.After makinga wish,hed quicklyblowout thecandles,clean themoff,and carefullyput theminto thebox fornext year.When hischores weredone,Charles climbedthe ladder and openedhis treasurebox.He counted10candles.The coolwax withalready meltededges gavehim anidea.Charles wrappedthecandlesin hishandkerchiefandputthem carefullyinto hispocket.He hurrieddown theladderandran tothe house.“Mama!Grandpa!I knowhow we can havecandles for the Wishing House!^^he criedas hethrewopen thedoor.How his mother asked.“I couldcollect peoplesused candlesand makenew ones.Maybe wecould meltthem down.”Its awonderful idea/9said grandpa,Til help you.”注意续写词数应为左右；

1.150请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答

2.Charles andhis grandpavisited everyhouse andshop in thevillage.In theWishing Housewere thefour candlesCharles hadmade.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文

3.Brutus hadeverything in the world:good food,good toys,and goodclothes.But theproblem wasthathe had to sharethem allwith histhree otherbrothers,Mack,Jack andRobert.Brutus hadto share his favoritecookie boxwith Mack,who alwaysfinished the whole boxbeforeBrutus couldtakeabite.He alsohadto sharehistoys withhis youngestbrother Jack,who alwaysendedup breakingthem.Brutus alsohad theunfortunate privilegeof beinggiven hisolder brotherRobertshand-me-downs ofold clothes.Brutus hatedsharing andwished hehad nobodytosharehis belongingswith.uWhy cantI betheonly child”Brutus sighedas hestared at the stars.“I wishI had no stupidbrothers/9Brutus demandedatone sparklingstar.To hissurprise,the starsuddenly twinkledand felltowards hisdirection.The starinched closerandcloser to his bedroomwindow.He screamedand triedto wakehis brothersup butit was too late.The starcrashedinside theirroom,followed byan ear-splitting explosion.The nextday,Brutus wokeup witha badheadache.He rushedtohisbrothers9beds toask themifthey wereokay butwas quicklyshocked to see that their bedshad beenempty.They werenowhere tobefound.Brutus had the fortuneof spendingthewholemorning playingwithhistoys.He putonhisbrothersbrand newclothesandsneakers whichfit himperfectly.As hewas checkinghimself inthe mirror,hesuddenly realizedthathiswish hadcome true.His brotherswere goneand hehadthewhole worldtohimself.注意“I canget usedto this,“he saidto himselfhappily续写词数应为左右；

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150.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答2When hefelt hungry,hismothercame backwithafull boxof cookies.In thisway,he spentfive daysas anonlychildbeforehefelt theempty housewas tooquiet..阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文4It wasa Saturdayafternoon.I washaving lunchwhen Dadtold me to getready.I becameunhappy.Idont likeSaturdays!Even thoughits aholiday fbrmost children,it isnot fbrme becauseI needto gotofootball club.Many kidslove sports,but Iam notone of them Jprefer to stay athome andread.I dontlikerunning,so ina team amabad player.The coachis tiredof meand my teammates sometimesthink rmuseless.Ihaveno ideahow toplay footbalLUsually,after practicemyteammateswould askme tostay outofthe gameand Iwould justnod.Last Thursday,the coachtold usthat wewould becompeting withsome otherteam ina monthand（对手）（呆many peoplewould cometoseethe game.Our opponentswere thelast winnerand I froze住）at thethought ofthe embarrassment.T wouldface ifthe teamlost becauseofme.So I decided to practice hardforthematch and I wenttopracticeevery singleday.（不愿意的）After onemonth,when thegame daycame myteammates werereluctant to take me inthe team,andI also wishedtostayaway fromthe groundas well.But asluck wouldhave itthey wereshortof oneplayer andhadnochoice butto takeme inthe team.Our teamwas namedthe BigBlues.There wasa greatcheer onour arrivalinthefield.I gotverynervous.The gamestarted andwithin twominutes,I gota bluecard.By thetime I was allowedback thescorewas twogoals foreach teamand thenext goalwould decidethe winningteam.注意续写词数应为左右；:

1150.请按如下格式在相应位置作答2When theball cametowards me,Ifroze.All myteammates rantowards meto liftmeinthe air..阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文5“Wake up,Mom!^^I feltalittlehand on my faceand reluctantlyopened myeyes.There wasmyson,ready tostart the day.Ialsoheard mybabies awakeinthenext room.Ready ornot,thedayhadbegun!I lovedbeing home with mylittle ones,but Ifelt theweight ofthe worldonmyshoulders.Myhusband andI hadjust boughta house,and someunexpected expensesmade ourbudget tighterthan ithadever been.I wasweary ofspending morepennies.We werentfoolish withour money.We workedhard.We weredoing allthe rightthings,but wehad hadone financialdisappointment afteranother.I wasgoing to pick upmy kidsphoto portraitsfromthestudio atthe localmall.Despite oursmallbudget,it wasimportant tometohave picturesof mychildren asthey weregrowing up.The previous（优惠券）week,Ihadfound acoupon andused somechange fromthe carto buya$

7.99portrait package,and todaywas theday Iwastopick upthe portraits.Since wewere goingtothemall,Idecidedto makeitan outingand packedsome sandwichesfor usto eatatthefood court.Whafs more,there aremanyride-on toycars inthemallsfoodcourtfor funand forfree.After breakfast,we wentoff.After weparked,we walkedinto theportrait studioatthemall,and Iapproachedthe counter.The youngwoman smiled.“May Ihelpyou”“Yes,Im heretopickup ourphotos.”The womanasked myname andopened herdrawer.Ah,yes,here they are.Arent theyjust soadorable^She tookoutthe photos,andthesmiling facesof mykids warmedmyheart.“Yes,theyaregreat.Thank youJIsaid.She putthephotosinto anenvelope.Then shespread outadditional photosof mykids thatI hadnt（推车肖）ordered.I knewwhat thatmeant.The upsellpitch was coming.“Would youlike topurchase theseextra portraitsThey areonly fifteendollars apiece!”she smiledsweetly.注意续写词数应为左右；

1.150请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答

2.My heartturned cold.I donthavefifteendollars.As wewere havingour lunch,the youngwoman cameup andpressed somethinginto myhand.参考答案【参考范文】

1.“Any lakemonsters”I askedwhen heappeared fromthewater.He laughedand pointedat someharmlesslittle fish.Only smallfish.Max decidedto waitit outonthedock thatday,but hewas actuallyswimminginthelake beforethe endofthecamp!Seeing himswimming happilyinthelake,I wasrelievedand relaxed.In themeantime,Iwaslost inmy thought:Nearly everyoneIve metis afraidofsomething andhow toget overit meansa lot.In myexperience,laughing alittle about the thingthat scaresyou canmake iteasier totalk aboutit.And thentaking babysteps tolearn moreaboutthe thing forinstance,looking intodirty waterwithgoggles oncan actuallybeabig helpin overcomingthe fear.The problemis thatmost peoplehold theirfears closely,because ifspart ofwho theyare.If youarent ready to faceyour fear,you probablywontovercome your fear.If yourereadytomove forward,facing your fear bravelyis thefirst steptotake.【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者几周前参加了一个夏令营，第二天由于天气炎热，老师带大家去玩水降温，作者发现游泳水平最好的却悲伤地坐在码头上，作者询问Max才得知他害怕水里的一些鱼和其他一些小生物，作者不断鼓励并率先跳下水告诉他没Max Max,什么可怕的，犹豫了一下也潜入水中Max.段落续写2

①由第一段首句内容“‘湖里有怪物吗？’他从水里出来时我问他“可知，第一段可描写Max的回答以及作者看到在水里游泳的感悟Max

②由第二段首句内容“根据我的经验，对让你害怕的事情笑一笑可以让你更容易谈论它”可知，第二段可描写作者对克服恐惧的感悟，勇敢面对恐惧是第一步.续写线索3决定坐在码头等——感到轻松——陷入沉思——感悟——勇敢面对是克服恐惧的第一步Max.词汇激活行为类4

①出现appear/turn up

②陷入沉思be lostin onesthought/fall intothought

③克月艮情绪类overcome/get over

①快乐happily/delightedly

②放松的relieved/eased【典型句式】[高分句型1].In myexperience,laughing alittle aboutthethingthat scaresyou canmake iteasier to（由关系代词引导的定语从句）talk aboutit.that[高分句型2].The problemis thatmost peoplehold theirfearsclosely,because itspart ofwho theyare.（由引导的表语从句、引导的原因状语从句和引导的宾语从句）[高分句型that becausewho3].（由引导的条件状语If youarent readyto faceyourfear,you probablywont overcomeyourfear.if从句）.【参考范文】2Charles andhis grandpavisited everyhouse andshop inthevillage.Chilly windand snowpushedagainst themat everyturn,but Charlessheart wasconsumed withhappiness andwarmth,imagining thenewcandles hecould make.Madam SirCould youspare afew oldcandles forthe NewYear saidCharles,holding outa basketfrom doorto door.When thelast doorhad closed,they headedhomewithawide varietyof candlesof differentcolors andsize.Looking atthe goodharvest,Charles breatheda sighofrelief.Without delay,he andhis grandpaset towork,dropping thevillagers candlestogether withallhis owntreasured onesinto amelting pot.In theWishingHousewere thefour candlesCharles hadmade.They weresmall,and theywere nottheregular NewYear candles.Each wasa blendof differentcolors,glowing inthehouse.Charles smiled,knowing hisfriends wouldsee itand believeNewYearwascomingafter all.As itturned out,thevillagers whowenttothehouseandwitnessedthecandlescheeredup,surprised andteary-eyed.Thecandles arebeautiful,arent they,Grandpa”Charles whispered.Beautiful!,grandpa nodded.Sometimes,difficulties andadversity areunavoidable,however,wecanbring sunshineand hopewith awarmheart.Maybe,this iswhat NewYear isall about.【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了查尔斯的父亲和哥哥去服兵役了家庭需要黄油和糖等食品的定量配给券因为蜡烛很贵，而且很难找到，所以今年家里不会有蜡烛于是他提议收集人们用过的蜡烛，制作新的最终在爷爷的帮助下，查尔斯制作并点亮了蜡烛.段1落续写

①由第一段首句内容“查尔斯和他的爷爷参观了村里的每家每户”可知，第一段可描写他们收集蜡烛的经过

②由第二段首句内容“许愿屋里放着查尔斯做的四支蜡烛”可知，第二段可描写村民看到点燃蜡烛之后的反应和感悟.续写线索参观—收集蜡烛——制作蜡烛——点亮蜡烛——感悟

2.词汇激活行为类3开始:set to/start to。