英语写作高分必备22高考读后续写高分技巧

高考读后续写高分技巧

2.（•浙江高考）2018阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文续写的词数应为左右150It wassummer,and my dad wantedto treatme toa vacationlikenever before.He decidedto takeme ona tripto theWild West.We tooka planeto Albuquerque,a bigcity inthe stateof NewMexico.We reachedAlbuquerque inthe late afternoon.Uncle Paul,my dadsfriend,picked us up fromthe airportand droveusup to hisfarm inPecos.His wifeTina cookedus adelicious dinnerand wegot toknow hissonsRyan andKyle.My dad and Ispent thenight inthe guestroom of the farmhouselistening tothe frogsand waterrolling downthe rivernearby.Veryearly inthe morning,Uncle Paulwoke usuptohave breakfast.zzThe daystartsat dawnon myfarm,he said.After breakfast,I wentto helpAuntTina feedthe chickens,while my dad wentwith Uncle Paul totake thesheep（吃草）out tograze.I wasimpressed tosee my dadandUncle Paulridinghorses.They lookedreally cool.In theafternoon,I askedUncle Paulif Icould take a horseride,and hesaidyes,as longas mydad wentwith me.I wasntgoing totakeahorse ridebymyself anyway.So,mydadand Iput onour newcowboy hats,got onourhorses,and headedslowly towardsthemountains.Dont belate forsupper,Uncle Paulcried,“and keepto〃〃the trackso thatyou dontget lost!OK!”mydadcried back.After awhile UnclePauland hisfarm housewere out of sight.It wasso peacefuland quietand thecolorsofthebrown rocks,the deepgreen pinetrees,and thelateafternoonsun（编织的）mixed tocreate amagic scene.It lookedlike abeautiful wovenblanket注意续写部分分为两段，每段的开头spread outupon theground justfor us.语已为你写好Suddenly alittle rabbitjumped outin frontof my horse.We hadno ideawhere we were andit gotdark.练考场审题I精准审题谋篇布局Step1:文体记叙文时态一般过去时第一段交代故事的背景介绍了度假的原因和地点第二段简单地介绍了旅途原文分第三段对在农场的日常活动的简单介绍第四段和续写故事的展开有很大的关系这一段讲到了如何发生了我和爸爸去骑马的故事而续写的内容就是在此基础上展开根据第一段所给首句Suddenly alittle rabbitjumped outin frontof这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从出现后带来的反应扩my horse.rabbit展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首写作思句相呼应第二段首句是这一We hadno ideawhere wewere andit gotdark,句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱-----不要误了吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写头脑风暴字字珠玉Step2:⑴美词previous;in vain;at thepoint of desperation;a faintvoice（）佳句2©Frightened asI was,I triedto keepmy balanceto preventme from fallingoff.©Fortunately,minutes later,the horsestopped beforea river,out ofbreath,and sodid I.@What wecould dowas togo back along the previous track slowly.斟酌词句妙笔生花Step3:要点这个出其不意的出场让我的马疯狂地跑起来1一般表达This unexpectedappearance mademy horserun wildly.句式升级（定语从句）This unexpectedappearance frightened myhorse,which madeit runwildly.要点尽管我很害怕，我努力不（让自己）掉下马来2:一般表达Although I was frightened,I triednot tofall offthe horse.句式升级（倒装句）Frightened asI was,I triedto keepmy balanceto preventme fromfallingoff.要点我们只能沿着之前的路慢慢走回去3:一般表达We couldonly go backalong theprevious trackslowly.句式升级（主语从句）我们所能做的只有沿着之前的路慢慢走回去What wecould dowas togo backalong theprevioustrackslowly.衔接过渡斐然成篇Step4:Suddenly alittle rabbitjumped outin frontof myhorse.This unexpectedappearancefrightenedmyhorse,which madeit runwildly.I triedmy besttocontrol it,but invain.Frightened asIwas,I triedto keepmy balanceto preventmefromfallingoff.Fortunately,minutes later,the horsestopped beforea river,outofbreath,and sodid I.At thatmoment,mydadalso cameup.Seeing IwasOK,he wasquite relieved.But itwas clearthat wegot lost.We hadno ideawhere wewere andit gotdark.We didn/t knowwhere thefarmhouse was.What wecould dowas togobackalongtheprevious trackslowly.But itwas reallydifficult forus insuch adark situation.Just aswewereatthe pointofdesperation,we hearda faintvoice fromthe distance.It mustbeUncle Paul,I said.So wecried backwith excitement.Finally,UnclePaulsafelybrought usback home.What anamazing ride!1阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文续写的词数应为左右150A Vacationwith MyMother。