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学年高中书面表达主题分类训练篇2023-202410个人情况
1.(2020・四川省资阳市•期中考试)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况请给他回信,内容包括⑴学校的体育场馆;⑵主要的运动项目;⑶你喜欢的项目注意⑴词数左右:100⑵可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯专注于事情积极的方面而不是
②Focus onthe brightside ofthings insteadof complainingthe negativesides.抱怨消极的方面.学校
③It isschools responsibilityto helpdevelop theirstudents awarenessof theimportance ofkeeping fit有责任帮助学生们明白保持健康的重要性
5.(2020,天津市・月考试卷)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友很想了解该活动你于当晚给回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,内容包括⑴成Chris Chris人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等);()对活动的感受;2⑶对自己未来的展望.注意⑴词数不少于100;⑵可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;⑶开头已给出,不计入总词数参考词汇成人礼the coming-of age ceremony新冠肺炎CO VID-19Dear Chris,Im soglad tohear fromyou.Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris,Im veryglad tohear fromyou.
①I amwriting to you to introduce the following adultceremonyactivities organized by our school on March
3.The coming-of-age ceremony,usually at the age of18for boysand girls,symbolizes themarch towardsadulthood.In theceremony,we lookedback onthe processof ourdevelopment andexpressed ourgratitude toourparents for their upbrinHine•
②Besides,at theevent scene,we listenedcarefully tothe speechesgiven bythe representatives of our teachers and the students,which madeus veryinspired andmoved.The ceremonyis designedto makeus understandmaturity andsense ofresponsibility.As anew generationof teenagers,I mustbe motivatedto study hard,grow upto becomea usefulpersonforthecountry tosociety.Yours,Li Jin【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇应用文,话题为你校于月日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友很想了解该活动你68Chris于当晚给回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用,可适当添Chris加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯【亮点词汇】回顾
①look backon.向某人表达感谢
②express ourgratitude tosb目的是
③be designedto【高分句型】
①I amwriting to you to introduce thefollowing adultceremony activitiesorganizedbyour schoolonMarch
3.(动词的・ed形式作定语)
②Besides,at theevent scene,we listenedcarefully tothe speechesgiven bytherepresentativesofour(动词的形式作定语;弓导的非teachersandthestudents,which madeus veryinspired andmoved.-ed whichI限制性定语从句)【结构布局】引言说明写信目的中心介绍成人礼活动内容;对活动的感受结尾对自己未来的展望【拓展词汇】在岁时
①at theageof1818
②congratulate.・.on对......祝贺做出贡献
③make contributionsto【拓展句型】©During thecoming-of-ageceremony,the headmastercongratulated uson steppinginto theadult,reviewing在成人礼上,校长祝贺我们步入成年阶段,回顾我们所经历的成长the growthperiod that we experienced.期
②we allwatched thevideo offormer students/alumnus fightingagainst theepidemic,which lefta deep.我们都观看了前学生/校友抗击疫情的视频,这给我们留下了深刻的印象impression onus(•山西省大同市•期末考试)假设你校正在组织题为的英语征文比
6.2023The personwho inspiresme”赛,请你写一篇短文参赛内容包括
(1)该人物的简单介绍;
(2)激励或鼓舞你的原因注意词数左右;1100可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯2The personwho inspiresme___________________________________________________________________【答案】The personwho inspiresmeSu Bingtian,the firstChinese athleteto competein themens100-meter trackand fieldfinal at theOlympic Games,was one of theHPeople WhoMoved Chinain
2021.(该人物的简单介绍)He ismy hero,who inspiresme deeply.Actually,what impressesme mostis hisprocess tosuccess as well assetting the record.Injury frompractices andcompetitions seriouslyaffected hiscareer andonce heeven planned【高分句型——]to retire.But itwas thecall towin gloryfor ourmotherland and challenge himselfthat brought【高分句型二】.激励或鼓舞你的原因him back.He trainedharder thanbefore andall hisefforts paidoffLearning fromhim,111studyhard,face difficultiesandchallengemyself bravelyto contributemore toour表达决心country inthe future.【解析】高分句型一Actually,what impressesme mostis hisprocess tosuccess as well assettingtherecord.分析本句话使用了引导的主语从句翻译其实,最让我印象深刻的是他成功的过程以及他创造what纪录的过程高分句型二分But itwas thecall towin gloryfor ourmotherland andchallenge himselfthat broughthim back.析本句话使用了强调句型翻译但是,是为祖国争光、挑战自我的号召把他带回来的本文是一篇提纲类书面表达,需要写的内容已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文,一定要谈谈自己的看法需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少
7.2023•贵州省贵阳市・期末考试请你根据2022感动中国年度人物杨宁的简介,按照以下要点用英语写一篇发言稿,在班会课上介绍其事迹杨宁女,苗族,1985年10月出生2010年,杨宁大学毕业后毅然回到家乡,当起了大学生村官,在村里一干就是6年,用心为村里人解决生活中的种种困难,赢得了群众的真情拥护,并带领乡亲们脱贫2023年3月获评”感动中国2022年度人物、她的事迹;1你的感悟2注意字数词左右;1100可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数3Dear classmates,Thats all.Thank you!【答案】Dear classmates,【高分句型Today,Id liketointroduceYang Ningto you,who isthe2022Touching ChinaPerson of the year.一】Yang Ning,female,Miao people,was bornin October
1985.After graduatingfrom universityin2010,she chosetocome backto herhometown withouthesitation andbecame alocal villageofficial.Then,she has beenworking therefor6years tosettle allkinds ofdifficulties thatthe localpeople met,winning thesincere support(她的事迹)of themasses.Besides that,she ledthe villagersout ofpoverty.What atouching person!From her[高分句型二】(你的感悟)story,I learnedthat weshould studyhard to become the person likeher.Thats all.Thank you!【解析】高分句型一:Today,Id liketointroduceYang Ningtoyou,who isthe2022Touching ChinaPerson oftheyear.翻译今天,我要向大家介绍的是杨宁,他是年“感动中国年度人物“2022分析本句使用了引导的非限制性定语从句who高分句型二From herstory,I learnedthatweshould studyhard tobecome theperson likeher.翻译从她的故事中,我了解到我们应该努力学习才能成为像她一样的人分析本句使用了引导的宾语从句that提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型
8.2023・安徽省・模拟题假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Bill上周三邀请你观看了他参加的留学生中文辩论赛,并在获奖后向你征求改进建议请你用英文给他写一封邮件,内容包括祝贺获奖;1提出建议;2表达祝愿3注意词数左右;180开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数2Dear Bill,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Bill,Congratulations!
①It cameas nosurprise thatyour teamwon the debate competition.Im deeplyimpressedby yourexcellent debatingskills andquick wit!As foryour performance,you weredoing amazinglywell duringthedebateexcept forsomestumbles.Otherwise,you wouldhave gotyour ideas across better.
②I understandits reallychallenging forforeign language learners to speak Chinese withareat fluency.lt calls for tremendouspractice withnativespeakers.And I am alwaysready if you needhelp.Congratulations againiWishyou continuedsuccess andprogress!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇应用文,话题为假定你是李华,你的英国朋友川上周三邀请你观看了他参加的留学生中文B辩论赛,并在获奖后向你征求改进建议请你用英文给他写一封邮件,根据要点应确立用第二人称和一般过去时态;写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用,可适当添加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯【亮点词汇】除之外;
1.except for使..…被理解,表达;
2.get across需要
3.callsfor【高分句型】(方式主语,弓|导主语从句)
①It cameas nosurprise thatyour teamwon thedebate competition,it7that(省略
②I understandits reallychallenging forforeignlanguagelearnerstospeakChinesewith greatfluency.了引导的宾语从句)that【结构布局】开头祝贺获奖;中心提出建议;结尾表达祝愿(•浙江省金华市•期末考试)假定你是李华,校英文报社专栏正开展,
9.2023People ThePerson IAdmire征文,请你写一篇介绍身边某位名人的英语短文,内容包括Most”
(1)该人物的生平;()他(她)的主要事迹;2
(3)你的评价注意()词数词左右;1100
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯【答案】Dear Peter,I ammore thandelighted tohear fromyou.You askedme inyour lastletter aboutthe physicalexercise in ourschool andthefollowinginformation maygive you a roughsketch.
①To beginwith,a splendidcew stadiumhrs beenbuilt up,which hasbecome thenew landmarkin ourschool.Moreover,with thestadium setup,a widerange ofsports eventsare abletobeheld,of whichping-pong,football aswell asrunning competitionsenjoy greatpopularity.
②As forme,Im fondof basketballsince it hasbeer giving me strength to face the challenges in my life.All inall Isincerely inviteyou tocome toour schooland seefor yourself.zYours,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于英文书信,根据提示信息要求给回信,介绍一下你校学生体育运动情况文章可Peter主要采用一般现在时,第一人称来写【亮点词汇】首先;
①to beginwith各种不同的
②a widerange of【高分句型】
①To beginwith,a splendidnew stadiumhas beenbuilt up,which hasbecome thenew landmarkin ourschool,(引导的定语从句)which(
②As forme,Im fondof basketballsinceithas beengiving mestrength tofacethechallengesinmylife,since引导的原因状语从句)【结构布局】引言写信目的;中心具体介绍体育运动情况;结尾表达情感【拓展词汇】加深
①deepen魅力
②charm强身健体
③build upones strength【拓展句型】©Near theplayground standsthe newlybuilt stadium,where varioussports eventsincluding basketball,table,新建的体育馆矗立在操场附近,包括篮球,乒乓球和足球等各种运tennis andfootball matchescan beheld动项目都可以在那里举行
②I amparticularly fondof basketballbecause ithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfront thechallenge inmy(我特别喜欢篮球,因为它给了我面对生活中的挑战的力量)life.
2.(2020・安徽省・历年真题)你校正在组织英语作文比赛请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括人物简介;L.尊敬和爱戴的原因2注意,词数左右;
1100.短文题目已为你写好2The personI respectmost【答案]The personI respectmost My mother isthepersonI respectmost.She playsan important role inmylife,not onlyasamother butalso asa friend.As amother,she takesgood careofthefamily andshe isnever upset about mymistakes.She workshard inthecompany.Shes alwayswarm-hearted andready tohelp others.
①She cetsa good example tome so that Ihave learned to work hard and respect people around.
②As afriend,she knowsr lotabout meand givesme门help whenevets necessary.Mymotherhas agreat influenceon meand Irespect hermost.【解析】【思路点拨】这是一篇命题作文,需要写的内容已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文,一定要谈谈自己的看法需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式【亮点词汇】发挥重要的作用
①play animportantrole
②not only...butalso...不仅....而且.......树立良好的榜样
③seta goodexample
④have agreat influenceon...对......有很大影响【高分句型】(弓
①She setsagoodexample tome sothat I havelearnedtoworkhardandrespectpeoplearound.sothat I导的状语从句)(弓导的状语
②As afriend,she knowsa lotabout meand givesme helpwhenever itsnecessary,whenever I从句)【结构布局】引言人物简介中心尊敬和爱戴的原因结尾进行总结【拓展词汇】值得做的©rewarding
②A smilecan helpus getthrough adifficult situationand findfriends ina worldfull ofstrangers助我们度过难关,帮我们在一个充满陌生人的世界里找到知己
3.(2020・全国・历年真题)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导邮件内容包括剧情简介;L.指导内容;
2.商定时间地点3注意词数左右;L
100.结束语已为你写好2【答案】Dear MissEvans,
①I amwriting thisemail toenquire abouta shortplay,which myfriend andI haveadpated froma textbookarticle.The detailsare asfollows.@The playis abouthow fourstudents fromdifferent culturalbackgrounds get to know each otherbetter.We changedsome ofthe linesto makethe scriptmore suitablefor aperformance.However,we arestill unsureaboutthe overall quality ofour play.As aresult,could youplease takea lookat ourrehearsal andgive ussomeadvice Wewill beavailable from3to5p.m.this Friday,attheschools mainhall.Thank youvery muchand wehope tohear fromyou soon.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】这是一篇提纲类作文,需要写的内容已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文,一定要谈谈自己的看法需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少【亮点词汇】互相了解©getto knoweach other整体质量
②overallquality排练
③rehearsal【高分句型】
①I amwriting thisemail toenquire abouta shortplay,which myfriend andI haveadpated froma textbook(引导的非限制性定语从句)article,which(
②The playis abouthow fourstudents fromdifferent culturalbackgrounds getto knoweachotherbetter.how引导的宾语从句)【结构布局】引言写信目的中心剧情简介;指导内容;商定时间地点结尾表达感谢【拓展词汇】焦虑
①anxiety困扰
②bother困惑
③confuse面对,
④be facedwith/in faceof【拓展句型】面对如此多的困难,我不得不向您求
①Faced with/Facing somany difficulties,Ihaveto turntoyoufor help.助
②Im wonderingif youcould beso kindas tooffer mesome practicaladvice sothatIcould getrid ofthe我想知道您是否可以给我一些实用的建议,让我摆脱困境dilemma.
4.(2021•浙江省・单元测试)假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括询问近况;L,分享班级最新消息、;
2.表达祝愿3注意:词数左右;L
80.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯2【答案】Dear Peter,I amLi Hua,oneofyour Chinesestudents fromClass Two.
①Hearing thatyou havegone backhome on sickleave,I amreally sorryand wantto knowif youare feelingbetter now.I hopemy goodnews foryou willsweep awaythe shadowof disease.
②Last month,an Englishfestival washeld inourschool,and ourclass performeda songwhich youtaught usatthe festival.®As soonaswefinishedthe song,all theaudience gaveus warmapplause.If onlyyou hadbeen there.We allmiss youvery muchand wishyouaquick andcomplete recovery.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况,分享消息和表达祝愿【亮点词汇】请病假,休病假
①onsick leave一扫而空,扫除
②sweep away【高分句型】©Hearing thatyou havegone backhome onsickleave,Iamreally sorryand wanttoknowifyouare feeling(动词的形式结构作状语;引导的宾语从句;引导的宾语从句)better now.-ing thatif
②Last month,an Englishfestival washeldinourschool,and ourclass performeda songwhich youtaught usat(引导的定语从句)thefestival,which(弓导的时间状语从
③As soonaswefinished thesong,all theaudience gaveus warmapplause,as soonas I句)【结构布局】引言介绍写信目的,询问近况中心分享班级最新消息结尾表达祝愿【拓展词汇】利|用©make useof/take advantageof参加©participate in【拓展句型】.毫无疑问,学生们©There isno doubtthat studentsthink highlyof sucha meaningfuland rewardingfestival对这样一个有意义、有意义的节日评价很高。