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学年高中书面表达主题分类训练篇2023-202410灾害防范
1.(2023•江苏省・期中考试)假定你是李华,你校外教Smith先生因为家乡遭遇了地震,心情低落请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,要点包括.表示同情;
1.介绍同学们给予灾区的帮助;
2.表示愿意帮助外教3注意词数左右;L
80.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯2Dear Mr.Smith对伤员采取适当的急救措施;©give the wounded proper first aid measures减轻病人的痛苦
②alleviate thesufferings of the patient【高分句型】(弓导的条件状语从句,
①If aperson hasan accident,he needsmedical carebefore adoctor canbe found.if I引导的时间状语从句)before(弓导的主©Therefore,it isnecessary that we knowhow to give thewounded proper first aid measures,that I语从句)【结构布局】引言点明演讲的主题;中心说明急救的意义(挽救生命,减轻痛苦等);结尾呼吁学习急救知识【拓展词汇】起很大作用,有很大的影响;
①make agreat difference呼吁
②appeal to【拓展句型】例如,当人们窒息时,分秒必争©For instance,when peopleare choking,every minutecounts..在烧伤的情况下,矢口道如
②In thecases ofburns,knowing how to treat them properlycan easediscomfort何正确治疗它们可以缓解不适(•江苏省泰州市•单元测试)假定你是李华,你的同班同学王刚的家乡遭受台风()
6.2022Typhoon Mujigae的袭击,洪水毁坏了家园你作为班长给他写一封信,内容如下()表不安慰和关心;1⑵提供帮助注意⑴词数左右;80⑵可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯【答案】Dear WangGang,
①Words failme toconvey myworry whenI heardthat ahorrible andsevere TyphoonMujigae hityourhometown andyour houseis in ruins.I amwriting toextend sincerepity andcare for you.You musthave suffereda lotfrom theaccident.
②However,if youwere braveenough notto letout acry,which isadmirable.Anyway,It cantbe betterif you can liftyour spiritsto faceup to the result.Plus,we willspareno effort to help you.Weve madea donationof somemoney,expecting itcan helpyou gothrough thedifficulty.As for the lessonsyou havemissed,I am willing tohelpyoumake themup.Remember,I wontbe faraway.Hope youcan haveyour troublesremoved soon.Your sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】请你以李华的名义给同班同学王刚写封信,认真审题,全面的表达要点,不能遗漏注意本文使用一般将来时和一般现在时,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出同时灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采【亮点词汇】成为废墟l.inruins遭受
2.suffer from放出,发出
3.1etout.乐意做某事
4.amwillingto do sth【高分句型】
1.Words failme toconvey myworry whenI heardthat ahorrible andsevere TyphoonMujigae hityour(引导时间状语从句;引导宾语从句)hometown andyour houseis inruins,when that(弓|导条件》犬语从句;
2.However,if youwere braveenough notto letout acry,which isadmirable.if which引导非限制性定语从句)【结构布局】引言写信目的中心表不安慰和关心结尾表达愿望【拓展词汇】面对
①be facedwith/in faceof造成
②bring about
①It isreally amazingthat theonce-ruined townhas nowbeen transformedinto abeautiful place,full oflife.经满目疮痍的城镇已经变为一个美丽的生机勃勃的地方,真是令人惊讶.希望这一变故不会给你带来太多不便
②I hopethe changewill notcause youtoo muchinconvenience(•安徽省安庆而期中考试)为了提升学生在自然灾害中的应急能力,学校组织了一次地震逃生
7.2022演练,请你给校英语报写一个报道,内容包括:()时间和地点;1
(2)逃生技能;
(3)活动效果注意()词数左右;1100
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯【答案]An earthquake drill Anearthquakedrillwas heldin our school yesterday.After wehad twoclasses,ourteacher gaveus someinstructions onwhat to do duringthe drill.
①When thealarm rang,all ofus studentshid ourselvesin saferplaces.
②As soon as teachersand studentsrandownstairs one by one,we finallygot togetherat theplayground.Hold onand protect the headwith apillow.Inother cases,drop to the ground and getunder cover.Find atable orother pieceof furnitureand hang on untilthe shakingstops.Through thedrill,we havelearned how to escapein anemergency.I thinkit isimportant for us toremain calmandknow whatto do.【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇报道,话题为为了提升学生在自然灾害中的应急能力,学校组织了一次地震逃生演练,请你给校英语报写一个报道写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用,可适当添加一定的衔接语,以使行文连贯【亮点词汇】
②Hold on坚持,稍候
③hangon【高分句型】(引导的时间状语从句)
1.When thealarm rang,all ofus studentshid ourselvesin saferplaces.when(
2.As soonas teachersand studentsran downstairsonebyone,we finallygot togetherat theplayground,as引导的时间状语从句)soonas【结构布局】引言时间和地点中心逃生技能结果活动效果
8.(2022•四川省南充市・月考试卷)假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Johnson的家乡遭遇了特大洪涝灾害,他的家乡受损严重,他本人也受伤了根据以下要点,请你用英语给写一封邮件Johnson
(1)安慰和鼓励;
(2)为他提供帮助(如募捐等)注意()词数左右;1100
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯Dear Johnson,Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Johnson,r mso sadto knowthat aheavy floodstruck your hometown the other day.T mwriting tooffer mygenuineconcern andsincere backup.
①I knowthat your hometown hasbeen badlydestroyed andyou arephysically hurtand mentallyaffected aswell.I dofeel badabout thisand Ihope youcan getrecovered soon.Meanwhile,never lose heart anddon tforgetI amby yourside thoughI cannot flythere tofight againstthe disasteralongside you.
②I havebeerraising money and collecting useful items foryou,which willbe sentto youas soonas possible.Wish youall thebest.And feelfree tocontact meif youneed anymore help.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇应用文提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主,词数左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯80【亮点词汇】不久前某一天;
①theotherday灰心
②loseheart【高分句型】
①I knowthat yourhometown hasbeen badlydestroyed andyou arephysically hurtand mentallyaffected as(引导的宾语从句)well.that
②I havebeen raisingmoneyandcollectingusefulitemsforyou,which willbe sentto youas soonas possible,(引导的非限制性定语从句)which【结构布局】引言安慰和鼓励中心为他提供帮助结尾祝愿
9.(2022•河北省・单元测试)根据提示内容,写一篇完整的短文⑴今年来全球极端气候和重大自然灾害越来越频繁,其中很大一部分是由人类活动所造成的⑵自然灾害的频繁发生警示人们要保护环境我们可以植树节能减排;企业也应技术革新;全社会必须遵循原则共同努力3R注意⑴词数左右;100⑵可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯【答案】Over thepast years,there hasbeen frequentextreme weatherand naturaldisasters,such asfloods,earthquakes andso on,killing millionsof peopleand destroyingcountless homes.Improper humanactivitiescontribute a lot tothose disasters.
①What wedo isthreatening humansurvival anddevelopment.
②So it is hightime that we protectedour environment.We studentsare supposed to reduce the useof vehiclesand save resourceslike waterand electricity.The factoriesalso havebeen takingvarious measures,including theuseof newtechnologies,to reducepollution.Therefore environmental protection hasto bea community——wide effort,and everyonecan helpby followingthe goldenrule:reduce,reuse andrecycle.【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇短文写作,话题为介绍全球极端气候和重大自然灾害,写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用,可适当添加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯【亮点词汇】例如
①such as造成,导致
②contribute to应该
③be supposedto do【高分句型】(弓导的主语从句)
①What wedo isthreatening humansurvival anddevelopment,what I(虚拟语气)
②So it is hightime thatwe protectedour environment.【结构布局】引言介绍自然灾害现象中心分析原因;采取的措施结尾表达愿望,共同努力【拓展词汇】激发人彳门的于不保意识©arouse/raise peoplesawareness ofenvironmentalprotection.努力做某事
②make aneffortto dosth【拓展句型】
①If wedont take action toprotecttheenvironment onwhich weare relying,we willhave toface an.如果我们再不采取措施保护我们赖以生存的环境,我们将不得不面对越来越increasingly terriblesituation糟糕的情况(DEfforts aresupposedto be madeto remindthe publicofthe importance ofprotecting theenvironment.应当努力唤醒公众,让大家认识到保护环境的重要性
10.(2021•江西省赣州市・单元测试)假定你是李华,美国笔友Dave为中国战胜新冠肺炎的壮举感叹万分!特地写信向你咨询如何在日常生活中预防新冠肺炎,请你以李华的名义给他写一封回信包括要点如下⑴对于国家战胜新冠肺炎后能胜利开学的感受⑵就如何在日常生活中预防新冠肺炎给出你的建议参考词汇:新冠肺炎口罩注意⑴词数左右COVID-
19.The protectivemask TOO⑵可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯Dear Dave,Glad tohear fromyou!Yoursm,Li Hua【答案】Dear Dave,Glad tohear fromyou!Thanks tomy greatcountry,the wholenation unitedand defeatedCOVID-19successfully.So I am morethan proudthatwe can goback toschool now.
①Knowing that you havedifficulty indefeating COVIDHere aresome tipswhich benefitus quitea lotto preventthevirus.Above all,youd betterstay athome as often as possible,and weara protectivemask ifyou haveto goout.What more,open thewindows torefresh theair inroom regularly.
②At last,it willbe ofgreat helpto washyour(肖毒水)hands carefully with some disinfectant5so asto killviruses completely.I dohope you will findmy suggestionsuseful.【解析】【思路点拨】Yours,Li Hua本文是一篇回信,属于应用文人称为第二人称为主,时态为一般现在时要求学生根据所给内容提示完成写作,注意过渡词的使用,以使行文连贯尽量使用自己熟悉的句式注意书写工整【亮点词汇】由于;幸亏
①thanks to尽可能经常地
②asoftenaspossible【高分句型】Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr.Smith,I wasshocked atthe newsabout theearthquake inyourhometown.
①Its understandablethat yousinkinto sadness.Upon hearingthe news,all thestudents in ourschoollend ahelping hand.
②We haveraised somemoney,which willbe putinto yourbank account.Besides,we havealso collectedsome basicnecessities,such asclothesand foodforthevictims.We hopeour smalldeeds canbe ofsome help.I wishnone ofyour familygot injured.If youneed anyhelp,please donthesitate tocontact me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】本文为一篇应用文写作,话题为假定你是李华,你校外教先生因为家乡遭遇了地震,心情低落请Smith你用英语给他写一封电子邮件写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用,可适当添加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯【亮点词汇】
①be shockedat对.......感到震惊犹豫
②hesitate to【高分句型】(引导的宾语从句)
①Its understandablethatyousink intosadness.that(弓|导的非限制性定语从句)
②We haveraised somemoney,which willbe putinto yourbank account,which【结构布局】引言表示同情中心介绍同学们给予灾区的帮助©Knowing thatyou havedifficulty indefeating COVID-19,Here aresome tipswhich benefitus quitealotto preventthevirus.(动词的・ing形式作状语;which引导限制性定语从句)肖毒水)
②At last,it willbe ofgreat helpto washyour handscarefullywithsomedisinfectantso asto killviruses(作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语)completely,it【结构布局】引言引出话题;中心预防新冠肺炎的建议;结尾表达期待【拓展词汇】面对压力
①be facedwith stress保持良好的心态
②keep agood state积极的态度
③a positiveattitude【拓展句型】.我想强调乐观态度的重要性
①Id liketo stresstheimportanceof adoptinga positiveattitude.无论一切看彳以
②No matterhow difficultthe situationseems,there isalways somethingtobegrateful for多么难,总有可以感恩的东西
2.(2023・月考试卷)假定你是李华,你校将举办以“急救”为主题的英语演讲比赛请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括⑴急救的意义(挽救生命,减轻痛苦等);
(2)呼吁学习急救知识注意⑴写作词数应为左右;⑵请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答80Ladies andGentlemen,Im Li Hua.Thank you!【答案】Ladies andGentlemen,Im Li Hua.Its mygreat privilegeto deliver a speechthemed onfirst aid.Undoubtedly,it isof significanceforus to learn some knowledge about first aid inour daily life.
①If aperson has accident,he reedsmedical carebefore adoctor canbe found.
②Therefore,it isnecessary thatweknow howtogive thewounded properfirst aid measures.Knowing knowledgeabout first aid willhelp usmakegood judgments.With thehelp of correct first aidmeasures,we canalleviate thesufferings ofthe patient.Whats farmore importantis thatwe can reducethe possibility of disability andsave lives.Life isprecious.To savelives,everybody shouldknow somefirst aidfor arainy day.Thank you!【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇应用文,话题为以“急救”为主题的演讲,一般现在时为主写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确适用可适当增加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯【亮点词汇】发表演讲;
①deliveraspeech
②With thehelp of在.......的帮助下;减轻,缓和©alleviate v.【高分句型】(弓导的条件犬语从
①If aperson hasan accident,he needsmedical carebefore adoctor canbe found.if I句;引导的时间状语从句)before(作形式主语,
②Therefore,itisnecessary thatwe knowhowtogivethewoundedproperfirst aidmeasures,it引导主语从句;特殊疑问词+不定式作宾语)that【结构布局】引言说明演讲目的中心点明急救的意义(挽救生命,减轻痛苦等)【拓展词汇】
②get injured【拓展句型】(学习一些急救能力是很重要的)
①It isimportant forus tolearn somefirstaidability.(简而言之,学校的急救课程
②In short,a firstaid courseattheschool isa necessarypart ofour education.是我们教育的一个必要部分)(•江苏省扬州市•月考试卷)假定你是李华,得知你的美国网友的家乡发生山火,房屋被烧毁,
3.2022Bill他现在住在临时避难所请你写一封邮件慰问他,内容要点如下⑴询问受灾情况,表示关心;⑵鼓励他振作起来,重建家园注意⑴词数左右;100⑵可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;⑶开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数参考词汇山火临时避难所mountain firetemporary shelterDear Bill,Yours,LiHua【答案】DearBill,On hearingthe newsthat thedestructive mountainfire brokeout inyourhometown,Iamextremely worriedaboutyou.Are youor your family injuredYour housewas burneddown andyou areliving inthe temporaryshelter now.How aboutthe conditionsthere Doyou haveenough clothesand foodThefire hascaused greatdamage toyourfamily,but Ifirmly believethat allthings willget better.Cheer up!Im sureyouwillrebuild yourhometown soon.Anyway,tomorrow isanother day!Yours,【解析】略LiHua
4.(2022•安徽省蚌埠市・单元测试)最近学校正在展开一场急救知识普及活动,就此你所在的班级举行了一场讨论会,并提出以下几点建议现请你根据以下要点以为题写一篇文章,说明发First Aidin Fires”生火灾时要注意的几点事项,贴在班级的板报上内容包括.不要惊慌,保持冷静;
1.室内有浓烟时,身体尽量低一些,用湿毛巾捂住鼻子和嘴巴逃出;
2.不要乘坐电梯或从高层跳下;
3.你自己的好的建议4注意词数个左右;L80,可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯2First Aidin Fires[答案]First Aidin Fires
①It isimportant toknow whattodowhen youare in dangerous situationssuch asafire.When youare caughtin a fire,dont panic.Firstly,you shouldcall119and reportit tofiremen atonce.
②Ifyou are in thick smoke,keep closetotheground arduse awet towelto coveryour mouthand nose.Secondly,dont takea liftor jumpfrom ahigh building.Thirdly,dont be unwilling toleave yourmoney orother thingsbehind.You shouldtry toget awayfrom the fire asquickly asyoucan.After all,life ismore important.Once yougetout ofthefire,dont goback intoit again.【解析】【思路点拨】本文话题为一篇说明文,说明发生火灾时要注意的几点事项写作时,应注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,以充实文章内容【亮点词汇】处于危险的情况
①indangerous situations
②be caughtin…被困于......惊慌
③panic
④beunwillingtodo…不愿意做.....
⑤get awayfrom...远离.....【高分句型】(作形式主语,
①It isimportant toknow whattodowhen youare indangerous situationssuch asafire,it不定式作真正的主语;引导的宾语从句;引导的时间状语从句)what when(引
②If youareinthicksmoke,keep closetothegroundanduse awet towelto coveryour mouthand nose,if导的条件状语从句)【结构布局】引言说明建议的原因中心说明发生火灾时要注意的儿点事项结尾自己的建议及总结【拓展词汇】依某人来看
①as faras sb.be concerned
②be ofsome helpto…对......有所帮助在某方面给某人建议
③give/offer sb.advice/tips/suggestions onsth.【拓展句型】
5.(2022•山东省烟台市・单元测试)假定你是李华,你校将举办以“急救”为主题的英语演讲比赛请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括()急救的意义(挽救生命,减轻痛苦等);1()呼吁学习急救知识2注意⑴写作词数应为左右;80()请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答2Good morning!Thank you!【答案】Good morning!It isimportant forustolearnsomeknowledgeabout firstaidinourdailylife.
①If apersonhason accident,he needsmedical carebefore adoctor canbe found.
②Therefore,itisnecessary thatwe knowhowtogive thewoundedproperfirstaidmeasures.Knowing knowledgeaboutfirstaid willhelp usmake goodjudgments.Withthe helpofcorrectfirstaidmeasures,wecanalleviate thesufferings ofthe patient.Whats farmore importantisthatwecanreducethepossibilityofdisabilityandsavelives.Life isprecious.To savelives,everybody shouldknow somefirstaidfor arainy day.Thank you!【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇应用文,话题为以“急救”为主题的演讲,文章主要用第
一、三人称和一般现在时来书写要点提示已给出,动笔前,应明确写作要点,不能遗漏,并对要点做适当的思路拓展,以充实文章内容写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确适用可适当增加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯【亮点词汇】。