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原文呈现In thefirst andsecond grades,I wasextremely shy.I hadfriends,but itjust wasntin mypersonalityto bevery outgoing,even ifI knewsomeone well.I waseven quieterwithstrangers,and soI wasntvery goodat meetingnew people.I wasafraid thatI woulddo orsaysomething wrong.（僻静的）So inour schooPsannual grandplay,I usuallysat ina secludedcomer towatchthe performancealone.I hopedto sitin thebackground andwatch theactors sweatin frontof all thosepairs ofeyes.One dayin the third grade,my teacherMrs.Sally calledme into her officeand said,“Oh,Mary,youre greatat memorizingthings,and youhave sucha sweetpersonality.Perfectfor Jenny!”But Ibowed myhead anddared notspeak.The teachersaw thisand thensaidJOf course,plenty ofgirls wouldlove the role,and1could findsomebody else.But Ihopeyou couldtry itfor me.I hadyou inmind forJenny whilewriting theplay!If youreallydont wantto,I wontforce you.If syour choice.”（风车）My mindwas spinningfaster thanthe windmillon theschool playground.Mrs.Sally,whom Iloved andadmired,wanted me to playthis role.She believedin me.My eyesmovedacross theroom toa posterI hadnever noticedbefore.It showeda shootingstar andreadJlf youreach forthe stars,you mightat leastgrab apiece of the moon.^^I lookedintoMrs.Sallys shiningblue eyesand saidJOkay,Ill try.I realizedit wastime tothrow offmyshy maskand showthe worldwho Ireally was.In thefollowing five months,the teachertaught mehow toset,put onmakeup,memorizelines,create costumesand soon.Gradually,I mastered my lines and songs.Paragraph1The bigday cameat last.Paragraph2At thattime,Mrs.Sally came backstage forher finalcheck-up andnoticedmy nervousness.下水作文:The bigday cameat last.Given thatI hadgot wellprepared forthe annual grand playafterfive monthsof professionaltraining fromthe teacher,I steppedconfidently totheback of the stage.With Mrs.Sallys encouragingwords stillcircling inmy mind,I hadthefaith thatI couldmake ittoday.Standing behindthe curtains,I stillmemorized thelinesand practicedsongs,imagining myselfacting on the stage.However,the warmingupmusic,the flashingstage lightsand thecheering audienceall broughtmebackto reality.And therealizationthrew meinto asea of nervousness again.98At thattime,Mrs.Sally camebackstage forher finalcheck-up andnoticed mynervousness.Gathering meintoherarms,she comfortedme thatI wouldcertainly bringthebest outin theperformance withso muchpractice.Encouraged andrelieved,I wasready.Now cameour showtime.The next15minutes witnessedour amazingperfomiaDce,everyone immersedin the role andI totallyforgetting my nervousness.When theplayended withour bowof thanks,the hallexploded withthunderous applause,indicating thatwehad madeit.My classmatesand friendscame gatheringaround me,congratulating meon the success.But bestofall,the expereiencehelped methrow offmy shymask,leadingthe shy girl ontothe pathto becomingoutgoing.110文章大意I usedto bean extremelyshygirl.No experiencefor schoofsannualgrandplay.Oneday inthethirdgrade,my teacherMrs.Sally encouragedmetoact apopular roleJenny.screwed/plucked/mustered upmy courageto playtheroleand determinedtochallenge myself.With thehelp ofMrs.Sally.I graduallymasteredmy linesandsongs.Write forplotParagraph1:The bigday cameat last.Ol:How did I feelbefore theperformance Q2:What didI thinkof WhatdidIdoParagraph2:At thattime Mrs.Sally camebackstage forher finalcheck-up andnoticedmynervousness.QI:What wasMrs.Sallys reactionto mynervousness Q2:How didI playtheroleHow didI feelQ3:How aboutthe finalperformanceHow didI feelthen语言积累Q4:How canyou designthe endingmore appealingand meaningful.被紧张充满，我感觉心跳加快，以至于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软，我的手紧紧地抓住1我的戏服Seized/Consumed/Overcome/overwhelmed bya surgeofnervousness,felt myheartwas poundingso wildlythat mythroat tightened,my knees felt weakand my handsgrabbed/squeezed mycostume tightly.（倒装）我一复习台词一阵紧张感让我脸更红
2.Hardly hadI reviewedmylineswhen aflush ofnervousness deepenedthe redof mycheeks.（独立主格）我深呼吸，开始复习台词，手抖得厉害/手心冒汗
3.I tooka deepbreath andstarted toreview thelines,myhandsquivering violentlysweating.回想过去五个月的训练，我似乎对自己有了信心（现在分词作状语
4.look back）on...Looking backonthefive monthsof practice,I seemedto have confidence in myself.我一路小跑到学校大厅的后台（）
5.jog/trotI joggedall theway tothe backstageoftheschool hall.我找到内心深处一个真正的自我，一个深藏很久的更加勇敢和外向的我（同位语，
6.定语从句）I founda newperson insideme,a muchmore daringand outgoing person who had beenhiddenall along.然而，我正准备上台作，这时，我几乎要晕倒，脑海一片空白（
7.be about to dosth）when...However,I was aboutto go onstage when I feltalmost faintedand mymind wentblank.参考范文The bigday cameat last.I joggedall theway tothe backstageoftheschool hall.Cameras werelighting upin alldirections.Looking backonthefivemonthsof practice,Iseemed tohaveconfidenceinmyself.I founda newperson insideme,a muchmore daringandoutgoingpersonwhohadbeen hiddenall along.However,whenIwasabouttogoonstage,my heartwas poundingso hardthat mythroat tightenedand mykneesfeltweak.At thattime,Mrs.Sally camebackstage forher finalcheck-up andnoticed mynervousness.It doesntmatter howyou dotonightJshe said.“Youve alreadyshown howwonderfulyou are.Looking intoMrs.Sallys shiningblue eyes,T calmeddown andthenwalked ontothe stagewith hiswarm wordslike aray ofsunshine.When Ifinished myperformance,the audienceburst intoapplause.The scenemade mefeel myselffloating inanocean ofhappiness.It dawnedon methat itwas theencouragement frommy teacher,that helpedme findthe confidenceto succeed.。
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