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写作是四项语文技能中不可分割的一个重要部分,更是语言生成能力的重要表现形式该部分要求考生考生根据题示进行书面表达考生应能1准确使用语法和词汇语言的准确性是写作中不可忽视的一个重要方面,因为它直接或间接地影响到信息的准确传输应用语法结构和词汇的准确程度是写作部分评分标准中的一项重要内容2使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思任何一篇文章都需要有一个主题,作者应该围绕该主题,借助一些句型、词组等的支持,清楚、连贯地表达自己的思想浙江卷写作第二节,读后续写或概要写作,两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使用读后续写提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写150词左右,将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文阅卷时将主要考虑以下内容
1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;
2.内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况;
3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;
4.上下文的连贯性概要写作提供一篇350词以内的短文,要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要阅卷时主要考虑以下内容
1.对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;
2.应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
3.上下文的连贯性;
4.对各要点表达的独立性情况样题第二节:读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事A funnything happenedto Arthurwhen hewas onthe waytowork oneday.As hewalked alongPark Avenuenear theFirstNational Bank,he heardthe sound of someonetrying tostarta car.He triedagain andagain butcouldn tget thecar moving.Arthur turnedand lookedinside at the faceof ayoung manwholooked worried.Arthur stoppedand asked,“It lookslikeyouve gota problem,“Arthur said.I’m afraidso.V min abig hurryand Ican,,t startmy car.“Is theresomething Ican doto help”Arthur asked.Theyoung malookedat thetwo suitcasesin theback seatand thensaid,“Thanks.If youre sureit wouldnt betoo muchtrouble,you couldhelp meget thesesuitcases intoa taxi.”“No troubleat all.V dbe gladto help.”The youngman gotout andtook oneof the suitcases fromtheback seat.After placingit onthe ground,he turned to gettheother one.Just asArthurpicked upthe firstsuitcase andstarted walking,he heardthe lougnoise ofan alnrin.It wasfrom the bank.There had been arobbery(抢劫)!Park Avenuehadbeenquiet amoment before.Now theairwas filledwith thesoundof the alarmand theshouts of peoplerunning fromall directions.Cars stoppedand thepassengersjoined the crowd in front ofthe bank.People askedeach other,“What happened”But everyonehad adifferent answer.Arthur,still carryingthe suitcase,turnedtolook atthebank andwalked rightinto the young womanin front of him.She lookedatthesuitcase andthen athim.Arthur wassurprised.“Why isshe lookingat melike that”He thought.The suitcase!She thinksI mthebank thief!”Arthur lookedaround atthecrowdofpeople.He becamefrightened,and withoutanother thought,he startedto run.注意
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph1As hewas runningsArthur heardthe youngman shoutingbehind,“Stop,s top!Paragraph2The taxistopped infront ofthe Police Station andArthur...参考答案:读后续写:One possible version One possibleversionAs hewas running,Arthur heardthe youngman shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Arthur immediatelyrealized thattheyoungmanwas thebank robber.So Arthurdidn tstop,but continuedtorun untilhe sawand caughta taxiinfrontpf him.He quicklyputthesuitcasein thecar andsaid to the driver,“Pleasehurry tothe PoliceStation.I havea caseto reportto thepolice;;;the manshoutingbehindis thebankthief!’The taxiraced awaytothe PoliceStationlike anarrom.The taxistopped infrontofthePoliceStation andArthursaid tothe policewho hadbeen waitingand whohad alreadyreceivedthe robberyreport,This suitcaseis thatofthebankrobber.It maybe filledwith themoney stolenfrom thebank,I handit toyou.Please getready toarrest theman”评分原则
1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分
2.评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分
3.词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分
4.评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑1与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;2内容的丰富性和对所标出关词语的应用情况;3应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;4上下文的连贯性
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑
6.如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数降低一个档次第二节:概要写作(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要Getting ridof dirt,in theopinion ofmost people,is agoodthing.However,there isnothing fixedabout attitudes todirt.In theearly16th century,people thoughtthat dirt on theskinwas ameans toblock outdisease,as medicalopinion haditthat washingoff dirtwith hotwater couldopen upthe skinandlet illsin.A particulardanger wasthought tolie inpublicbaths.By1538,the Frenchking hadclosed thebath housesinhis kingdom.So didthe kingof Englandin
1546.Thusbegan along timewhen therich andthe poorin Europelivedwith dirtin afriendlyway.Henry IV,King ofFrance,was famouslydirty.Upon learningthat anobleman hadtaken abath,the kingorderedthat,to avoidthe attackof disease,th,e noblemanshould notgoout.Though thebelief inthe merit(好处)of dirtwas long-lived,dirt hasno longerbeen regardedas anice neighborever sincethe18century.Scientifically speaking,cleaning awaydirt isgoodto health.Clean watersupply andhand washingarepractical meansof preventingdisease.Yet,it seemsthatstandards ofcleanliness havemoved beyondscience sinceWorldWar ILAdvertisements repeatedlysell theideaclothes needtobe whiterthan white,cloths eversofter,surfaces toshine.Has thehate fordirt,however,gone toofarAttitudes todirt stilldiffer hugelynowadays.Many first-time parentsnervously tryto warntheir childrenofftouching dirt,which mightbe responsiblefor thespreadof disease.On thecontrary,Mary Ruebush,Americanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourages childrento playin thedirtto buildup astrong immune system.And thelatter(后者)position isgainingsome ground.参选答案Onepossibleversion People have mixedopinions towardsdirtonour skin.(要点1)For along timein history,people ofsome Europeancountries,such asFrance,believed thatdirt protectedpeoplefrom gettingill.(要点2)However,people beganto changetheirattitudestodirt about200years ago.Peoplehavebeentold thatwashing dirtoff ourbody cankeep ushealthy.(要点3)However,some scientistsbelieve thatexposure tosomedirt mayhelp ourimmunesystem.(要点4)评分原则
1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分
2.评分时,先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后绐分
3.词败少于40的和多于80的,从总分中减去2分
4.评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑1对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;2应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;3上下文的连贯性;4对各要点表达的独立性情况
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑
6.如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数降低一个档次。