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在高考英语读后续写中,情绪描写可以推动情节的发展,或者说情节发展到一定程度主人公会呈现出不同的情绪情绪描写在展现人物性格,故事发展,价值引领等方面都有重要作用大部分的读后续写除了在情节上遵循的原则之外,还有一条暗线,即人物是从“负向情绪,“conflict—solution”negative”最终转化到正向情绪,比如从到;从到;从positive”anxious calmsad happydesperate到充从到等等hopeful,worried relieved描写情绪通常会有两种方法第
一、直接描写,即句子中直接出现表示情绪的单词或者短语比如Nervous andanxious,he pacedup and down inthe room.第
二、间接描写,即通过表情和肢体动作或者环境烘托来体现人物的某种情绪如:此句就是采用He stormedout of the room,slamming thedoor heavilybehind him.动作描写来表现人物的“愤怒和生气”直接描写的方法和语料(跟句型搭配在一起如分词做状语、倒装……)用情绪形容词做伴随状语首先,以描写开心喜悦为例我们要积累表示“开心,L喜悦”的形容词比如;等例happy,delighted,cheerful,joyful,merry,thrilled excited句.Delighted,he openedthe boximmediately andread theletter writtenby hisfather开心不已,他立刻打开盒子,读了父亲写来的信.用无灵主语,以表示情绪的名词作为主语2名词
①a flush/flood/wave/ripple/wave/sense of+joy/happiness+sweep over/flood表示“一股……之情涌上例句over/rush through/surge through+sb Theaudience观众疯狂鼓掌,applauding wildly,she felta senseof happinesssurging throughher body.她感到很开心
②情绪名词+seize/dominate/overcome/overwhelm/consume/swallow/take over/take被某种情绪支配例句:hold of/get thebetter of/take controlof+sb Seizedby terror,.看至可怕的熊,她被恐she couldntmove aninch atthe sightof thefrightening bearU惧支配着,一动不敢动
③情绪名词某种情绪爬上心头+creep onsb Awave ofpanic crepton Marrywhen she当玛丽独自走在黑暗的小路上时,一阵walked throughthe trailalone inthe darkness.恐慌向她袭来与倒装和联合使用例句
3.so...that...as if/though Sofurious washe thathe feltas if她气得肺都要炸了her lungswere toexplode.间接描写方法及语料网上曾经有一段很火的话你要写风,你就不能只写风,要写树梢弯度,写湖面波纹,写树叶婆娑的声音要写屋檐边悬挂的风铃响,写轻舟语竹筏轻轻漾,秋千轻轻晃写不听话的衣角和发梢,写抓不住的气球,写握紧的伞柄,写拨云见日的山,写卷起又落下的浪,甚至是一场散了的雾其实读后续写的情绪描写也是一样如果你要写快乐,你就不能只写快乐你要写天真烂漫的笑容,写余音绕梁的笑声;要写清风拂面,冬日暖阳;写清澈的眼神,写一切你向往的美好和止不住的嘴角上扬方法
一、神态表情、肢体动作(仅举几例)表示开心his facelit up,smile fromear toear;eyes sparkled/twinkled/glowed/shone withjoy;jump upand down;throw armsto…表示伤心.the airtears streamdown theface,bury one/s facein hands;sob bitterly..表示生气stamp onesfeet;glare atsb;bite one/s lips;clench one/s fist;face flushred;.表示内疚和惭愧shout atthe topof onesvoice;storm outoftheroom..her faceflush.表示焦虑red/burned;lower/duck/hang oneshead..pace upanddown/back andforth;.表示紧张feel as if sittingon pinsand needles..palms/hands/forehead weresweating;legs wereshaking/trembling/shivering/quivering;heart race;cloth wassoaked withsweat;face pale/turn pale;knees shookuncontrollably;my hairstand onend...方法
二、巧用修辞手法(包括比喻、夸张、俚语等)The smileon herface shonelike adiamond.!feel likeI amfloating inan oceanof happiness.His wordspierce melike asword.Roars andscreams piercedthe silencewith needle-like shrillness.She wasrestless,feeling asif sittingon pinsand needles.I wasstuck inthe forestlikea wanderingsleep.lt seemedasifthe worldwere comingto anend.He feltover themoonwhen hearingthat shewas employed.With butterflyin herstomach,she wasunableto uttera word.He rushedto theboy asquickly ashis legscould carryhim asifwith aspring inhis steps.句型
三、用环境烘托表达情绪正向情绪(总体感觉风是轻柔的,太阳是暖人的,雨是滋润的……)彳列句With gentlebreeze kissingher cheeks,she wentcamping withher friends.Thesunset castan orangeglow onthe ground,the motherand hisson startedthe carandhit theroad again.Rays ofsunshine floodedin throughthe window,warming thewholeroom aswell asour heart.负向情绪例句There wasa deadlystillness inthe house.A heavysilence blanketedtheroom.The never-ending darknessconsumed everything.。