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云大附中2023年10月高三统测小作文致贺辞假定你是某国际学校学生会代表李华,你将在你校国画比赛Chinese PaintingCompetition颁奖仪式上致辞请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿
1.表达祝贺
2.总结活动写作题目分析01作文题目要求考生以学生会代表的身份,在国画Chinese PaintingCompetition比赛颁奖仪式上发表讲话首先,要想写好这篇演讲稿,考生需要理解题目所给的特定情境即在国画比赛颁奖仪式上致辞,这决定了语言风格、内容和语气的选择另外,致辞的内容上,演讲稿应明确向大家表示祝贺此时,祝贺用词的准确性和和语言情感的真诚性都是考生需要多加注意的在对活动做总结方面,要求考生对“国画比赛”的目的有全面的理解文化传播目的和艺术教育意义,并且对活动的过程有精炼概述的能力02写作示范129wordsLadies andGentlemen,Esteemed Teachers,and FellowStudents,Good afternoon!Im LiHua,representing ourstudent union.Im thrilledto speakatthe conclusionof ourChinese PaintingCompetition.Congratulations to all participants!Your involvementhas demonstratedaprofound lovefor traditionalChinese art.Regardless ofwinning,each brushstrokecontributedwas a unique culturalexpression.This competitionhas beena spectacular journey fromthe enthusiasticparticipationin thebeginning to the displayof skilland emotionin eachartwork.Weve seenanoutpouring oftalent,with everypainting tellingauniquestory andcelebrating ourheritage.Our sincerethanks gototheteachers andjudges,whose guidanceand fairjudgmenthave beeninvaluable.Lets continueto cherishthese momentsthat reinforce ourcultural roots.To everyparticipant,may thisexperience inspireyour artistic journeyforward.Thank you!03写作技法分析总体上看,这篇演讲稿语言使用清晰准确,有效传递了作文题目要求的内容(表达祝贺和总结活动)讲稿结构清晰,有得体的对演讲听众的称呼(Ladies andGentlemen,Esteemed Teachers,and FellowStudents),有体面的开头(寒暄和自我介绍)、有详实的中间部分(祝贺、总结活动)以及恰当的结尾(感谢和前瞻)这种组织结构使内容条理清晰,不但在演讲中易于听众理解,更重要的是易于阅卷人快速阅读获取考试要求的对应写作信息另外,精准的用词写作增色不少,如“profound love/5“spectacularjourney,”outpouringof talent/9都增加了该篇写作的表现力和感染力最值得一提的是,写作中展现了她对“国画比赛”的目的透彻理解“reinforceourculturalroots”04词汇和表达积累
1.represent v.代表
2.conclusion n.结束
3.congratulations n.祝贺
4.1nvolvement n.参与
5.demonstrate v.展现
6.brushstroke n.笔触
7.outpouring n.倾泻(情感表达)
8.heritage n.遗产
9.reinforce v.加强
10.artisticjourney艺术之旅链接高考【年月浙江高考英语应用文】20211假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍活动安排;
3.表达祝愿注意
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯【参考范文】Dear friends,Im LiHua.On behalfof our school,Im delightedto extendour warm welcome toyou.Your visitbears greatsignificance.To welcomeyou,a varietyof activitieshave beenarranged.What comesfirst isto visittheschool historymuseum,where you can gaina deeperinsight intoour schoolsdistinctivedevelopment.Additionally,as scheduled,we11pay avisit tothe SongCity,atheme parkin whichyoucanhave ataste ofa rangeof ancientChinese cultures.My dearfriends,your visitsurely willpromote ourfriendship.Sincerely wishyourexperience memorableand rewarding!Thank you.小练笔2023年5月19日云南师大附中高三年级统测小作文假如你是李华,下周一英国学校航天社的同学将访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞请你为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括
1.表示欢迎
2.介绍活动安排写作示范Honorable guests,As arepresentative ofour school,I wouldlike toextend awarmwelcome toallof you.Weare honoredto haveyou visitour campusand sharewith usyour passionfor spaceexploration.During yourvisit,we haveplanned numerousactivities foryou togain knowledgeandexperience aboutthe fieldof aerospacescience.You willhave theopportunity toattendlectures byour scienceteachers,participate ininteractive workshopson spaceexploration.We will also inviteyou totour ourcity observatory,where youcan learnmore aboutthefield ofastronomy andwitness thebeauty ofthe starsand planets.We hopethat thisvisit willbe anenriching andrewarding experiencefor allof usand thatitwillalsofoster greaterunderstanding andappreciation betweenour twocountries.Onceagain,welcometoourschool.Thank you.。