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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文When I was inmiddle school,my socialstudies teacherasked me to enterawriting contest.I saidno withoutthinking.I didnot lovewriting.My familycamefrom Brazil,so Englishwas onlymy second language.Writing wasso difficultandpainful forme thatmy teacherhad allowedmetopresent mypaper on the sinkingofthe Titanicby actingout aplay,where Iplayed allthe parts.No onelaughed harderthanhe did.So,why didhe suddenlyforce meto dosomething atwhich I was sureto failHisreply:Because Ilove yourstories.If yourewilling toapply yourself,I thinkyouhave a good shotat this.Encouraged byhis words,I agreedto giveit atry.I chosePaul Reveres horse asmy subject.Paul Reverewas asilversmith（银匠）in Bostonwho rodea horseat nighton April18,1775to Lexingtonto warnpeoplethat Britishsoldiers werecoming.My storywould comestraight fromthe horsesmouth.Not abrilliant idea,but funny;and unlikelyto beanyone elseschoice.What didthe horsethink,as hesped throughthe nightDid heget tiredHavedoubts Didhe wantto quitI sympathizedimmediately.I gottired.I haddoubts.Iwanted toquit.But,like Revereshorse,I keptgoing.I workedhard.I checkedmyspelling.I askedmy oldersister tocorrect mygrammar.I checkedout ahalf dozenbookson Paul Revere fromthe library.I evenread afew ofthem.When Ihanded in the essayto myteacher,he readit,laughed outloud,and said,“Great.Now,write it again.I wroteitagain,and againand again.When Ifinallyfinished it,the thoughtof winninghad givenway to the enjoymentof writing.If Ididntwin,I wouldntcare.注意:

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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答A fewweeks later,when Ialmost forgotthe contest,there camethe news.I wentto myteachers office after the award presentation.原文大意作者“我上初中时很不喜欢写作，加上英语又是他的第二语言，所以很多时候的英语写作任务，老师都是让他用表演来代替可是，这次老师却力劝他去参加写作比赛试试“我”最终决定以PaulRevere，horse的口吻来进行写作创作准备过程中，“我”自我怀疑过，想放弃过，最后还是通过不懈努力，向姐姐和老师请教，泡图书馆阅读原著，反复修改直至完成了写作这时，发现和享受写作的过程相比，比赛结果早已不重要了续写思路分析看第一段给出的首句，我第一反应这个news应该就是比赛结果得了第一再结合第二段首句的after the award presentation,说明第一段要写颁奖所以第一段我写的就是得知获奖“我”的惊讶的反应和颁奖仪式上的激动和感动第二段主要是“我”和老师的对话，表达感激之类，觉得自己对话写的有点老套最后，呼应文中Revere，horse也是不放弃keep going.所以最后我以onceoverwhelmed with self-doubt,just keepgoing likeRevereshorse,for unexpectedchangeis aheadawaiting you.结尾基于以上分析，下水文是这样写的A fewweeks later,when Ialmost forgotthe contest,there camethe news.My namewason thetop ofthe winnerlist—I gotthe first prize!My mouthdropped openandI wasfrozen tothe spoton hearingthe astonishingnews.On theaward ceremonythenext day,when I was awardedthe certificate,thunderous applauseechoed inthe hall.The wholeprocess of writing flashingin mymind,I couldnthold backmy tearsandneither couldI uttera singleword,just givinga deepbow.I wentto myteacher sofficeafter theaward presentation.uCongratulations!”Myteacher gaveme abig hug,“The storyis reallycreative andattractive.“Thank you,my dearteacher.But foryour encouragementand guidance,Iwouldnt havehad thecourage totake thechance andchallenge myself.I offeredmysincere gratitude.Its yourperseverance thatcounts.Happy tosee youvebeenimmersed inthe charmofwriting“From thiscontest,I realizedthat onceoverwhelmedwithself-doubt,just keepgoing likeRevered horse,for unexpectedchangeis aheadawaiting you.附两篇参考范文参考范文一A fewweeks later,when Ialmost forgotthe contest,there camethe news.I wasinformedthat I won thefirstprizeinthewriting contestand that there wouldbe anawardpresentation intwo days.Iwasso happyto hearthe newsthat Iimmediatelyshared itwith myteacher.I knewyoud win!I amproud ofyou.You madeit!”hesaid excitedly.Then camethe bigday.When Iwas invitedtothestage toreceive theaward,I expressedmy thanksto myteacher.I said,Its youwho makeme fallinlove withwriting,my socialstudies teacher.Without yourrecognition andguidance,I couldnthave writtenthis article.Again thankyou verymuch!^^I wentto myteachers officeaftertheawardpresentation.My teacherwaswaiting forme.Holding myhands,he saidCongratulations!You areagoodwriter,so keep writing.You know I didntlike writingbefore,but nowI amcrazy aboutit!I willtry mybest tocreate goodworks.I saidseriously.Since then,I havewrittenmany goodworks andnowIam afamous writer.I owemy successto mysocialteacher whois abeacon inmy lifeontheroad towriting.参考范文二Weeks passed.I forgotthe competition.Then camethe news.What amazedme wasthatIwonfirst place!Words failedto expresshow excitedIwas.Upon hearingthat,our teachershouted withdelight,and myclassmates staredat mein opendisbelief.A foreignstudent likeme,struggling tolearn Englishas asecondlanguage,couldwin aprize.An awardceremony washeld afterwards.My teacher,standing intheaudience,smiled,his eyesfull oflaughter.After thetheawardceremony,I wentto myteachers office.No soonerhad Italkedwith himthan asmall ladywith theother winnerscame in.She madeher waydownthe lineof winners,congratulating eachof usand shakinghands.After afewawkward seconds,she clearedher throatand explainedthattherehad beenanembarrassing mistake.Iwasactually thesecond!But recallingthe wholeprocess,Ididnt feeldisappointed atall whenhearing this.I gota tastefor writingand moreimportantly,I learnedto respecta writerslabor andperseverance.With thatin myheart,I stillkeepwritingtoday.。