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bring whatyou havewritten to a naturalconclusion orasummary.Marks willbe awardedfor content,organization,grammarand appropriateness.Failure tofollow theaboveinstructions mayresult ina lossof marks.范文My Opinionon ForcedRetirementBefore thereform andopening upin1980s,everything in China wasplanned bythegover errt.People intowns andcities wereassigneda jobafter graduation,and wouldretire atfixage.Now abouta quarterof centurylater,great changeshavetaken placeinChina,but thepolicy offorced retirementremainsunchanged.This naturallycauses muchdebate.In myopinion,forced retirementis notreally suitablefor thecontemporarysociety.Firstly,forced retirementmay leadto muchwaste ofenergyand expertise.At theage setfor retirement,that is,55year oldfar womenand60for men,moss arestill at thebest statein termsof jobperformance.By thistime,mastof themmay haveworked forabout30years,and thisgivesthem valuable experience and expertise whichdoes notexistamong youngerpeople.Besides,attheage of50s or60s,people usuallyhave abetter understandingof thesocietyand oflife,so theycan makemore sensibledecisionthan youngerpeople.So forcingpeople toretire at50s or60s willnecessarily leadtoagreat lossfor thesociety.Secondly,forced retirementmay alsocause problemsfarthe retired.The purposeof retirementis togive peopleachance Inrest andto enjoy their life.But infact theoppositeis usuallytrue.The averagespan oflife inChinais above70,so whenpeople retireat50s or60s,they stillhaveabout onethird oftheirlifeleft.Most retiredpeoplefind itdifficult toadjust tothe“new life”.Recently1read anarticle onproblems troublingthese seniorcitizens.The authorhas listedmental disorderand poorfamilyrelation asthe mostserious difficulties.The authoralsospeculates shatif peopledo notretire soearly,maybe manyofthem canavoid suchproblems.Lastly,forced retirement can notreally offermore jobopportunities.Many peoplewho supportthe forcedretirementpolicy believethat forcedretirementcanleadto manyvacancies,which canhelp toease thetension of1employment inChina.But thisis notthe case.As Chinaspopulation hasgrown veryquickly in the pastdecades,thejobs thatthe retiredpeople canprovide accountfor onlyatiny amountof jobsrequired bythe young.Besides,asociety shouldtry tocreate newjob positionsrather thanrobbingjobs fromthe old.From theabove discussion,we cansee thatforcedretirement isexerting negativeinfluence on the societysinceit wastesvaluableexperienceandexpertise,causestrouble tothe oldpeople andcannot reallyachieve thepurposeof creatingmore jobopportunities.As thesocietyis attachingmore importanceto freedomand personalvalues,people shouldbe allowedto maketheir owndecisions astowhen toretire.附专八作文必备句型(强烈推荐)to beginwith,then,furthermore,finally(强烈推荐)to startwith,next,in addition,finally first(强烈推荐)and foremost,besides,last butnot leastmostimportant ofall,moreover,finally(适用于两点的情况)on theone hand,on theother hand(适用于两点的情况)for onething,for anotherthingin parison,likewise,similarly,inthesamemanneron theother hand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,in contrast,onthecontrary,pared with..・,...。