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一、画面定格01人物动作的画面定格如:(2020杭州高级中学等五校联考)They stoodthere fora moment,side byside,waiting for the rushingholiday currentand for their placein it.Then thedaughterglanced overand momentarilyregarded hermother.And slowly,almost reluctantly,she placedher armwith apparentlyunaccustomed affection around hermother sshouldersand gentlyguided herback into the deluge.如His hardwork paidoff!Holding the soda tinfirmly,Reuben rushedfortheshopto buythe brooch.The momenthe gotthe beautifulbrooch,he burstthrough thefrontdoor andplaced itin Dora,s hand.Never hadDora receivedsuch agift.Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.如The butterflycleaned hertears onthe face,No.God felta bitrelieved andsaid,u Tomorrowyou canbecome humanagain.But sheshook herhead andsaid,“No,I wantto be a butterflyfortherest of my life...”Then thebutterfly wou1dstay togetherwith herlover forever.On thetop of the mountain,she seemed to enjoythe sunrise andthe sunsethappily with them.特殊寓意的写景画面
(1)The skywas abillion pureeyes oflight andthe grassgreen underfoot,itwas asif nightand dayhad become one beautifulmoment.Dawn hadcome.天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起,脚下是青草,仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻黎明已经来临黎明到来的画面
(2)Dawn sentshimmering raysover theplacid ocean,bestowing agolden pathfromthe shoreto thehorizon.黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线,留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路黎明到来的画面
(3)The crystaland ceruleanwater wasgentle as I wadedthrough it,the sunsetlikeorange paintonablue canvas.当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时,日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料美好日落时的画面
(4)The lingeringsunlight wasobliterated bythe rapidlyfalling night,resembling apitch-black curtaindraped overthe sky.逗留在天际的最后一逑阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除,就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖(日落时的画面)
(5)The moonunder siegeby starsseemedtolighten thenight bringingforth starsthatshone andhung in the blackness.The neverending blacknessconsumed everything.被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜,带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切(描写夜空的画面)
(6)Looking up,I sawthesunshine brighterthan Iever knewbefore.I sawa treeinthedistance glistengently asit reflectedthe sunsrays.My consciousnessebbed awaywiththeheat.I tooka fewblinks before I landedwitha thud.抬头一看,我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光,发出柔和的光辉我的意识随着热度而衰退我眨了眨眼,然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中,恢复了知觉(特殊寓意)
(7)Dotted withglittering stars,the sky,midnight blue,gave thescene afairytalequality.缀满星光的天空,午夜的蓝色,给了这一场景一个童话般的质量(神话般美丽的夜空画面)
(8)Kissed bythe rain and glistening,the wetground iscold underfoot.A denseearthlysweet smellrises fromthe ground,enveloping everythingwithin itssoftembrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷,被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起,把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里(雨后清新的画面)The raindrummed onthe window,bidding farewellto thelast beamof sunlight.雨水打着窗户,向最后一缕阳光告别(雨水来临的画面)
(9)The leavescrunched beneathmy feetasIstrolled downthe street.Occasionally,one wouldfall pastme,lightly swayingas theair gentlycarried itto the ground.我在街上漫步时,树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响偶尔,有叶子会从我身边掉下来,轻轻地摇晃,缓缓落到到地面描写落叶的画面
二、对话收尾1Chester saidhis fathertold himhe hadtried tosearch forhim andhisbrother,butbothbrothershadchangedtheirlastnames.He doesremember meandmy olderbrother and he toldme thathesbeen lookingfor usever sincewe lostcontact,“he said.Chester saidhis brotherhas sincef1own toColombia tobereunited withUrrea as well.When askedhow thereunion withhis fatherwill changehislife,Chester said,“I gotfamily everywhere,so itmight leadto manymoretrips now.”2WhatwasmostfascinatingaboutthereunionisthatShavialsomovesothers.Ninasfamilyhadmovedtoabiggerapartment.I veheard amazingstories aboutdogsloyalty,but I never imaginedthis sortof thingwould everhappen tome.Evennow,I canhardly believethis dogtraveled such a longdistance tofind us,“saidNina,“I wouldnever givethis kindof friendaway again.Inevergrow tiredofrepeating this―animals arethe mostdevoted andloving creatures.They needour loveand care.”3Her husbandspoke to the director ofHeightvale,DoloresHaworth.Soon sheoffered hima jobworking forthe company.She said,“He justhada brilliantworking attitudeand isdefinitely thetype ofemployee weare lookingfor.I wastold,he doesthis forfree,imagine hisjobs ifhe was being paid.I methim andhe wasa lovelyand politeyoung manandhehas alreadystarted workingforus.”4•••They hungall thethings backtothewall.Jack askedPaisley,“Are youreallywilling tolead atough lifewith me”She pattedaway theashes onhandsand lookedat thewalls withloads ofstuff onthem satisfactorily,saying,Yes!For me,it isnot asuffering tolive.
三、主题升华1Everyonehasonepersontheylookuptoasarolemodel.To methere isnoneother thanmy mom.She hasbeauty,brains,and oneof thebest heartsI know.Withouther inmy life,I wouldhave noidea whetherI canbeafamous dancea.Someday,whenI amolder andhave childrenof myown,I hopeI canbe justas greata parentasmy mom.母爱的深远影响2….I amextremely unhappyabout it.I think money doesn,t equalhappiness.And freelife stylealso doesnt equalhappiness.The realhappiness isthat everyoneloveseach other,and doeseverything usefulfor oursociety.Most ofmy classmatessupportme.But someof themthinkmoneyis everything.In myopinion,money canttake theplace ofeverything,such asyour life,your timeand yourhappiness.表达自己的价值观3“Two reasonsaccount forthat youwon,“the teacheranswered.First,youve almostmastered oneof themost difficultthrows inall ofjudo.Second,the onlyknowndefense forthat moveis foryour opponentto grabyour leftarm.It is yourbiggest weaknessthat makesyou winthe match.As aproverb says,Every coinhastwo sides.’Making fulluse ofyour strengthisyourachievement.Please rememberthatin nocase willyou giveup especiallyin trouble.God isfair toeveryone.借用名言警句来升华主题
四、结尾留白1While shewrapped them,I tooka deepbrea thand askedJoy,“Do youhavedinnerplans”I explainedthat I d liketo waita bitbeforeIwent backto thehospital-gave Graceand herhusband sometime alonewith baby.Would youbeinterested injoining meinabite toeat”I asked.Idlove to,v shereplied,her eyessparkling likediamonds.And,this wasthe beginningoftheend tomy monthsofheartbreak followingBetsy sdeath.故事结尾留白,给予读者想象空间2The beggarhesitated fora moment,then hedecided toopen it.He declaredaloud,“Who caresHe wantedme tohave itanyway.I mightaswellenjoy itnow.With that,he unwrappedthe whitetissue paper,but tohis surprise,there wasnohard rockcandy inside.Instead,into hisfingers fella shinywhite pearlworththousands ofdollars.
五、首尾呼应12017年浙江高考题开头I hadan interestingchildhood.It wasfilled withsuprises andamusements,all becauseofmymother—loving,sweet,yet absent-minded andforgetful.One strangefaimlytrip wetook whenI waseleven tellsa lotabout her.结尾Despite mom,sbeingabsent-minded andforgetful,she wasstill akind andnicemom.22018年浙江高考题开头It wassummer andmy dadwanted totreat meto avacation likenever before.He decidedto takemeona triptotheWild West.结尾:Never hadI hadsuchathrilling yetdangerous vacationbefore.The specialtriptotheWild Westwas deeplyengraved inmy mind.32016年浙江高考题开头:A funnything happenedto Arthurwhen hewas onthe wayto workone day.结尾What afunny day.Arthur couldntstop laughingwhenever helooked backonthis hilarious搞笑的experience.。