高中英语---读后续写素材：人与动物精彩描写

读后续写素材人与动物精彩描写关于狗的神态描写How to make the dog inyour writingvivid andeye-catching

1.Upon hismasters arrival,the dogleapt tohis feet,snorted happilyand boundedforward,高兴狗狗）（可怜狗狗）

2.The dogcurled intoa weClump andlay shiveringon the ground.（胆

3.A wareof theimmense danger,the crippleddog was doing impressionof acorpse.怯狗狗）（伸

4.He stretched,shook himselfand circledseveral timesbefore droppingto the ground.个懒腰抖抖身，保证有个好睡眠）（警觉狗狗）

5.With prickedears,he watchedfor amoment and then yawned.

6.Lying on the ground,the dogkept hiseyes wideopen,ears flat,a vibratinggrowl deepin（别惹我，后果自负）his chest.（我想静静,不想理你）

7.The dogwandered offto resther nosesin herpaws.

8.Dogs takemuch pleasurein rollingand rubbingtheir necksand backswith theirpaws.（调皮狗狗）

9.Seeing themeat in the mastershand,the littledog waggedits tailand watchedwith（馋狗狗）hopeful eyes.

10.At thesight ofa strangerapproaching the house,thedogwatched him,ears up,head（高度戒备狗狗）slightly cocked.

11.The dog,when intentlywatching avdslowly approachingthe prey,kept one of its（伺机——扑，成fore-legs doubledup fora longtime,ready for the nextcautious step.败在此一举）（天真烂

12.Little puppiesenjoy playinggrowling andbiting eachothers facesand legs.漫小可爱）

13.The doggot worried,crawling uparound theold mansfbet as if toseek forsafety and（好怕怕，别过来）warmth.人与动物的读后续写集锦A heroicdogLike mostdogs whosehomes aresituated onlarge plotsof land,one NewZealand dogregularlywent offexploring throughthe farmlandaround hishome forhours ata time.But asLouie,a sheepdogrescued froma shelterwhen he was justa puppy,got older,his tripsgotshorter andshorter.Now that Louie is12years old,he choosesto stayclose tohome andhardly evergoesout toexplore anymore,which iswhy hisfamily wasso worriedwhen herecently disappearedanddidn*t returnhome asusual.“My motherwas alittle upsetas hehad stoppedhis wandering,“said MarolynDiver,whoseparents ownLouie/We werevery concerned that he might forgetwhere hishome was.But thankfully,（崩Louie turnedup atthe housea fewhours later.He lookedso tiredand hadbasically justcollapsed溃），“Marolyn said.We wereconcerned thatsomeone mighthave hurthim.But thenwe realizedtherewas asmall noteattached toLouies collar.After readingthe note,I feltcomplete reliefand relaxed,andthen myheart melted/9“Louie isthe heroof theday,“read thenote,which waswritten bya neighborabout amileaway.He ledme toMaddy indistress stuckunder apile ofbranches.Cheers,Rob.“According toRob,Louie waswaiting forhim athis houseand demandedto befollowed.Rob saidthat hewas100percentsure thatLouie knewwhat hewasdoing,and leadinghim toMaddy washis purefocus,“Marolynexplained.注意所续写短文的词数应为左右；

1.150至少使用个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

2.5续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

3.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语

4.Paragraph1Once Robfound Maddy,Louie helpedhim digherout.______________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:，“That nightwe werevery worriedabout LouieMarolynsaid.【参考范文】Once Robfound Maddy,Louie helpedhim digher out.According toRob,Louie pulledat branchesanddug herout oftheground.Rob saidthat assoon asMaddy wasfree,both dogsran toa nearbypond andjumpedinto itand beganto drinkwater.Then hegave Louiea hugehandful ofdog biscuitsas athank-you.He knewthatLouiemight getin troublefor beinglate forhome,so hethought he would writeasmall noteto explainwhy Louie was absent.“That nightwe werevery worriedabout Louie,“Marolyn said.He couldhardly walkand lookedterrible.We wereconcernedthat hemightnot makeit throughthe night.Thankfully,Louiewasback tonormalthe nextmorning whenRob cameby withMaddy fora visit.Marolyn said,It haschanged thewayI lookat him.And Ithink myparents feelthe sameway.Im soproud ofhim.”02阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文续写的词数应为左右150It wasoneofthe hottestdays ofthe dryseason.We hadnot seenrain inalmost amonth.The cropswere dying.Cows hadstopped givingmilk.The streamswere longgoneback into the earth.If wedidn*t seesome rainsoon wewould loseeverything.I wasin thekitchenmaking lunchforthe family whenI sawmy sixyear-old son,Billy,walking towardthe woods.I couldonly seehis back.He wasntwalking in his usual way.He wasobviouslywalking witha great effort,trying tobe asstill aspossible.Minutes afterhe disappearedinto the woods,he camerunning outagain,toward thehouse.Moments later,however,hewasonce againwalking inthat slowand purposefulstep toward the woods.This activitywent onfor overan hourwalking cautiouslyto thewoods,then runningback tothehouse.Finally,my curiositygot thebest ofme.I creptout ofthehouse andfollowed himon hisjourney.；He wascupping both hands infront ofhim ashe walkedbeing verycareful notto（拍打）spill the water he carried.Branches andthorns slappedhis littleface but he didnottry toavoid them.He hada muchgreater purpose.As Ileaned againsta treeto spyon him,I sawthe mostamazing site.Several largedeer appearedthreatening infront ofhim.But Billywalked rightup tothem.I almostscreamed forhim toget away.And Isaw ababy deerlaying on theground,obviously sufferingfrom heavyloss of water andheat exhaustion,lift itshead with（舔饮）great effortto lapup thewater inmy beautifulboys hand.Paragraph1When thewater wasgone,Billy jumpedup torun backtothehouse._______________Paragraph2And laterI knewwhat wasgoing on.__________________________________________【参考范文】When thewater wasgone,Billy jumpedup torun backtothehouse.My curiosityonceagain droveme tofollow himback.After hereached thekitchen,he turnedonthe tap.As hewastrying hard to cupbothhandsto receivethewater,it was still runningaway throughhisfingers.And healso hadgreat difficultyturning offthetapwith handsoccupied.He seemedtobe sosorry andselfcondemned forhis wastingofwater.Wearing anote ofupset onhisface,hecarriedit carefullytowardthewoods.And laterI knewwhat wasgoing on.It begantomakesense tome whyhe wasntwalkinginhisusualway.I stoodontheedge ofthewoodswatching themost beautifulheartworking sohardtosave alife.As mytears beganto hittheground,they weresuddenlyjoined byother drops...and moredrops.It was as ifthe natureitself wasmoved bythegreateffortmade bymy sonand beganto weepwith pride.03阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文续写的词数应为左右150（皮衣制作工）Little snowhad fallenthis winter.For Reuventhe frierJ itwas abadyear,and afterlong hesitationhe decidedto sellZlateh theold goat.The townbutcher hadofferedeight silvercoins forthe goat.Reuven toldhis oldestboy,Aaron,to takethe goattotown.Aaron understoodwhat itmeant,buthehad toobey hisfather.His sisterscriedloudly.Aaron tookalong twoslices ofbread toeat onthe road.He neededto deliverthe goatbyevening andreturn thenext daywith themoney.While thefamily saidgoodbye,Zlatehstood aspatiently asever.Zlateh trustedhuman beings.The sunwas shiningwhen Aaronleft.Suddenly theweather changed,and afterawhile itbeganto snow.Soon theirpath wascompletely coveredand Aarongot lost.Beneath thesnowAarons bootstouched thesoftness ofa plowedfield.He realizedthathewas no（哀鸣）longer onthe road.Zlateh bleatedasifasking tobe takenhome.Aaron looked（雪橇）around hopingto finda farmerdriving asleigh alongthe way.But hecould seenothing.Aaron knewthat ifthey didnot findshelter,they wouldfreeze todeath.Suddenly hemadeout theshape ofa hill.When hecame nearit,he realizedthat itwas alarge haystack（大干草堆）covered bysnow.Aaron knewthat theywere saved.When hereached thehay,he duga nestfor himselfandthegoat.It wasalways warmin thehay.And haywas foodforZlateh.Zlateh,sat downand seemedto haveregained herconfidence inman.Aaron atehisbread,but afterthe difficultjourney hewasstillhungry.He lookedat Zlatehand realizedthathewouldnot bestarved todeath.Goafs milkwas sweet.Zlateh atefrequently andherbody gaveforth ananimal warmth,and Aaronhugged hertightly.The snowfell for3daysand thewind quieteddown.Paragraphl:.On themorning ofthe fourthday,Aaron heardthe ringing of sleigh bells._____Paragraph2:The news that Aaron and Zlateh were coming up the road wasa great joy in thefamily._【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写【详解】这是一篇记叙文通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了父亲为了Reuven度过艰难冬季，决定卖掉家里最老的山羊一长子负责将送到屠Zlateh,Aaron Zlateh户那里换钱，在途中，他们遭遇了风雪天气，寻得了大堆干草堆，又饿又冷Aaron的情况之下，的羊奶给了温饱历经三天的风雪天气终于停了下来，Zlateh Aaron在一位过路农民的帮助之下，他和羊一起回家与家人团聚续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是On themorning ofthe fourthday,Aaron heardthe（第四天早上，听到了雪橇的铃声）所以应该写ringingofsleighbells.Aaron Aaron从干草堆里出来后发生的事情，由首句的，可“Aaron heardthe ringingif sleighbells知，要描述的内容应该是和羊如何获得雪橇主人的救助，比如大声呼喊；同Aaron时，由于前文提供的线索“Goafs milkwas sweet.Zlateh atefrequently andher bodygave（羊奶是甜的频繁地吃forth ananimal warmth,and Aaronhugged hertightly.Zlateh干草，她的身体发出动物般的温暖，紧紧地拥抱着她）可知，本段还应该Aaron描写在与羊建立了深刻感情之后的不忍分离等；第二段开头是Aaron Thenewsthat（和AaronandZlatehwerecominguptheroadwasagreatjoyinthefamily.Aaron Zlateh在回家路上的消息，使全家人都非常高兴）本段应该描写家人的反应,情节和细节上要回应上文，尤其突出描写父亲的反应和变化,比如父亲改变的对羊的态度，不再卖掉或给与羊奖赏等，文末要进行主题升华还要注意所续写短文的词数应为左右，按要求完成写作任务150【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子如高级词，匚L getout of;make upones mind;point out;rush out;in tears;think of.复合句式2（弓导定语从句）Aaron shoutedloudly tothe peasantwho drovethe sleighfor help,who IAarontold themin tearshow hehad foundthe haystackand howZlateh hadfed himwith（引导宾语从句）her milkinthepast fewdays,howNobody everagain thoughtof sellingZlateh,who hadbeen animport familymember to（引导非限制性定语从句）them,who。