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教案(二次备课)课题书面表达Writing Howto keep healthy教学目标考查学生应用各项语法知识,正确进行书面表达的能力,善于理解要点提示的内容,抓住要点和中心思想的能力而且书面表达也是中考英语试题的重要组成部分,也是让初中生望而生畏的难点因此,要提高学生的写作能力,教师必须加强对写作的指导,利用写作课加强对书面表达的训练教学重点
1.培养学生审题的能力;
2.培养学生快速构思,罗列提纲的能力;
3.指导学生掌握书面表达句型结构的组织技巧教学难点
1.学生能选择适当的动词和基本的句型;
2.学生快速构思过程中的逻辑能力训练教学过程Stepl.Lead in以图片导入众所周知的新冠疫情,我们应该意识到健康的重要性让学生谈一谈平时生活中怎样保持健康Students:exercise more,eat more healthy foodand less junk food,go tobed andget upearly,washhands beforeeatingStep
2.Writing书面表达(25分)今年的新型冠状病毒使很多人处于危险中,我们必须认识到健康对每个人都很重要假定你是李华,请你以“How tkeep healthy”为题,根据下列提示写一篇介绍如何保持健康的文章要点提示
1.我们必须每天早上吃早饭,不吃早饭对我们的胃不好;
2.我们应该走路或骑自行车去上学来代替乘公交车;
3.放学后可以和同学一起打半个小时的篮球来放松自己;
4.吃更多的健康食品,少吃垃圾食品;
5.在公众场合必须戴口罩,而且要勤洗手;
6.总之,我们要尽力养成好的生活习惯,努力让自己越来越健康注意
1.词数110词左右;
2.要点提示均须涉及,可以适当增加细节;
3.字迹工整,卷面整洁;
4.文中不得出现真实姓名,校名,地名参考词汇新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus;胃stomach(s);代替instead of;口罩mask(s)Step
3.Examine thetopic审题审题五要素体裁,时态,人称,提纲,要点学生来说审题五要素,然后由老师给出正确答案体裁(记叙文),时态(一般现在时),人称(第一人称We),提纲(beginning,body,ending),要点(要点提示1-5)Step
4.Make anoutline歹!J提纲学生讨论开头,主体和结尾分别应该写什么内容,然后老师再指导beginning(开头)今年的新型冠状病毒使很多人处于危险中,我们必须认识到健康对每个人人都很重要(put many people indanger,we mustrealize its...)body(主体)5points(要点提示中的1-5点内容)ending(结尾)总之,我们要尽力养成好的生活习惯,努力让自己越来越健康(all in all/inaword,try tohave goodliving habits,zhealthier and healthier)Step
5.List themain expressions列出主要表达方式(主要是要点提示中的1-5点内容)学生讨论需最用到哪些短语和句型,然后师生一起修改确认
1.必须,吃早饭,每天早晨,对我们的胃不好(must,eat breakfast,every morning,be bad for)
2.应该,走路上学,骑自行车上学,代替乘公交车should,walk to school,ride bikes toschool,instead of taking a bus
3.放学,可以,和同学打篮球,半个小时,放松我们自己after school,can,play basketballwithclassmates,for halfan hour,relax ourselves
4.更多健康食品,少垃圾食品morehealthfood,less junkfood
5.在公共场所,戴口罩,勤洗手in publicplaces,wear masks,wash hands more oftenStep
6.Use somelinking wordsor phraseas possibleas youcan尽可能使用连词或是短语学生们尽可能列举他们常用的连词,老师在进行补充并歹U关系and,notonly...but also...,besides,also,Whats more,in addition转折关系but,however although,though,even though,even if因果关系because,so,since,as,therefore选择关系or,either...or...总结连词的作用连接词使文章更具连贯性和衔接性,增强文章的逻辑性,使文章思路清晰Step
7.学生们完善各部分写作内容beginning::3分钟This year,the novelcoronavirus putmany peoplein danger.Some ofthem gotsick oreven died,so wemustrealize/know theimportance ofhealth.Now letme tell you some ways to keephealthy.body8分钟Firstly,we musteat breakfastevery morning.Because itsbad forour stomachsnot toeat it.Secondly,weshould walk or ride our b汰estoschool insteadof takinga bus.Besides,after school,we couldplaybasketball withclassmates foran hourto relaxourselves.In addition,wed bettereat morehealthy food,lessjunk food.Finally,in publicplaces,we mustwear masks,and we should alsowash ourhandsmore often.ending:2分钟All inall,we shouldtry tohave goodliving habitsand try to makeourselves healthierandhealthier.Step
8.给出范文
1.学生齐读
2.学生分段
3.学生找出连词和过渡句For exampleHowtokeephealthyThis year,the novelcoronavirus putmanypeoplein danger.Some ofthem gotsick evendied.Sowe mustrealize theimportance ofhealth.Let metellyousomewayshow tokeephealthy,beginningFirstly,we musteat breakfastevery morning.Because itsbadforour stomachsnot toeat it.Secondly,we shouldwalkorrideourbikes toschool insteadoftakingabus.Besides,after school,wecould playbasketball withclassmates foran hourto relaxourselves.In addition,wed bettereat morehealthyfood,lessjunkfood.Finally,in publicplaces,we mustwear masks,and weshould alsowashour handsmoreoften.bodyAll inall,weshouldtrytohave goodliving habitsand tryto makeourselves healthierandhealthier.endingBlackboard板书设计WritingHow tokeep healthyKeypoints:Firstly,wemusteatbreakfasteverymorning.Becauseitsbadforourstomachsnottoeatit.教学反思^prnndlv\A/P:hmild\A/^IknrridpmirhikpitnQrhnnlinctpadnftakinaahiK这一次学生思考的时间和写的时间都比较充分每个段落先让少数学生展示自己写的内容后,其他同学进行了点评,然后再给出老师的范文,这样有利于学生把握要点和中考评分标准。