武汉市武昌区2022届高三年级质量检测读后续写试题讲解+讲义- 高三英语二轮复习写作专项

武汉市武昌区届高三年级质量检测2022英语读后续写试题第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文When I was young,my motherwas goingto Floridato visitmy grandmother.I beggedher totake mewithher.Ill takeyou,but remember/9my motherwarned me,Grandma issick.I hadseen plentyofsick peoplebefore,so Ifigured itwouldnt bea bigdeal.Besides,by thetime wegot toFlorida,mygrandma wouldprobably beokay.Then wewould havefun justas weused to.I rememberedhow excitedIhad leftthe summerbefore whenmy grandmacarried meon hershoulders downthe streets.Grandma wasa greatstoryteller andher storiesmade mefeel specialwhenever shetold them.“Grandma,tell mestory」Id say,and shewould alwaysbegin thestory,Once upona timethere wasa boynamed Billy...Every storystarted witha boynamed afterme.When Iarrived at her house,my firstwordswere goingto beGrandma,tell mea story.”5When Igot toGrandmas house,she didntcome outto meetme.Even afterI ranup thesteps,shestill didntcome outto meetme.I went into herbedroom.Instantly,I wasseized byterror anddisgust,because whatI sawin thatroom wasntmy happy-go-lucky（无忧无虑的）grandmother.It wasa crumpled（褶皱的）body,thin andweak.That nightas Ilay inbed,I heardmy grandmamoaning inpain.It hadthe same effect onme assomeonerunning fingernailsacross theblackboard.It wasso annoyingthat Ijust wantedto tellher tostop.However,I didntand itcontinued allnight.A fewweeks afterwe camehome,my motherasked mewhether itwas allright ifGrandma cameto livewith us.I saidyes,but inreality I never wantedto see her again.Although my grandma livedwithusforthe nextfew months,Ineverwentintoher room.She couldntget outof bed.I didnt want toseeher.注意

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式作答Paragraph1:One day,my grandmacalled meas Iwalked byher room,but Ididnt wantto go.Paragraph2:I wasabout torun outof theroom andleave thescene behindforever whenshe beganto tella story.【试题信息】试卷名称体裁主题语境词数正文英文词数348个词，两个词给了中文提武汉市武昌区2022届高三记叙文人与社会示续写第一段首句18个词，续写第二段年级质量检测首句22个词【语篇分析】

1.what（前文主旨）母亲要去看望生病的奶奶，“我”央求她带我同去，因为“我”认为奶奶只是生了小病，且“我”还想听奶奶讲故事但奶奶并没有像往常一样迎接“我”她躺在床上，痛苦呻吟数周后母亲将奶奶带回家与我们同住，但是“我”不想走进她的房间

2.why（故事主题）亲情温暖，尊敬长辈

3.how（写作技巧）第一人称、记叙、情感变化、行为变化

4.语言

（1）人物角色1“我”性格贪玩、自私、知错能改行为小时候喜欢奶奶，期待奶奶给自己讲故事，可是奶奶生病以后表现出了自私与冷漠的一面心理从纯粹地考虑自我到心生悔意，明白了自己的错误角色2奶奶性格慈爱、温暖行为无论何时都尽自己所能给孙子关怀与爱心理kind-helpful-satisfied

（2）场景home

（3）语言风格平铺直述

5.具体内容（利用拉波夫叙事模式进行分析）点题文章无标题指向故事主要发生在主人公“我”和奶奶之间，讲述我对奶奶的情感和行动的变化进展奶奶生病前，我非常喜欢奶奶，因为奶奶可以给我带来欢乐奶奶生病后，我开始躲避奶奶，逃避照顾奶奶的责任结果最终“我”被奶奶感动，认识到了自己的错误，开始主动照顾奶奶评议本文以第一人称视角进行叙述，所以无评议

6.情节

（1）冲突“我”在奶奶生病后，不再亲近奶奶，逃避与她相处的机会

（2）行动在生病的情况下，奶奶依然为我讲故事的举动使我感到愧疚和难过，意识到了自己行为背后的自私与冷漠

（3）解决我开始主动地、无微不至地照顾奶奶【素材积累】happy-go-lucky无忧无虑have thesameeffecton sb对某人有相同的影响【范文赏读】One day,mygrandmacalled meas Iwalked byher room,but Ididntwantto go.Her voicestruck achordwith me.It wasthe voicethat Icouldnt turna deafear to（强调句）.I followedthe voiceandcast aquick glanceatherlying onthe bed.I immediatelydiverted myeyes tothe floor,avoiding anyeyecontact withher（现在分词短语作状语）.How couldsuch apale andweak womanbe mygrandma!A senseof dislikestarted tocreep intomy mind.But Icould sensethat shelooked rightat me（that引导的宾语从句）and smiledwith all the mightshe hadleft inher weakbody（省略了that的定语从句，修饰先行词allthemight）.I wasabout torun outof theroom andleave thescene behindforever whenshe beganto tellastory.Once upona timethere wasa boynamedBilly/9as sheuttered thewords ina hoarsebut warmvoice（as引导的时间状语从句），Iwasstunned....and littleBilly lovedhis grandmavery much.SuddenlyI feltsomething indescribablepulled atmy heartstrings,and tearsblurred myeyes.The momentGrandmafinished herstory,I raisedmy head,looking intoher eyesregretfully.Upon touchingher skinnyhand（upon doingsth.一就I sworeto keepher companyand takecare ofher withmy utmosteffort.。