高中毕业生调研考试读后续写试题讲解+讲义- 高三英语二轮复习写作专项

武汉市届高中毕业生调研考试2022英语读后续写试题第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文Shoveling（铲）snow hadalways beenthe bestpart aboutwinter.Now thatI thoughtit wasfun,butmy dadsreaction toa cleandriveway keptme going.He hatedshoveling snowmore thananything.So,Itook itupon myselfat eightyears oldto doit forhim.Every timeI sawsnow fallfrom thesky,I knewtheuniverse wasready toput me to work.I wouldrun andput on my jacket,snow bootsto preparemyself forthe workahead.But everysingletime,before Iwent outside,I wouldstop bymy oldersisters roomto seeif shewanted tohelp me.I knewshewould sayno,but Ialways askedanyway.One daythere wasa lotof snow,and therewas noway Iwould beable toclean itall bymyself.Itwas gettingdark,and Ihated thethought ofmy dadhaving toshovel thesnow aftera longdays work.SoI didthe routineand knockedonmysisters door.As Iexpected,she gaveme the same oldno”.Annoyed,I askedagain.Without sayinganything further,she gotup,pushed meout of the roomand slammed（砰地关上）the doorin myface.I stoodthere silentlyfor asecond.Then,I turnedaround,went outofthehouse,and setout inthecold totackle theenemy thatlay inmy driveway.But I couldnt calmdown.I wasreally angrythat shewouldleave meto battlethis alone.All Iwanted wassome help.The moreI rememberedevery noshehad eversaid tome,the angrierI became.I foughttirelessly,my shortarms swingingfrom sideto sidewhile thewind cutagainst mycheeks.After onelong hour,I wasnot evenhalfway done.Looking atthe victorioussnow,I thoughtof Dadsdisappointment.注意

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式作答Paragraph1:Feeling bitterand desperate,I couldntstop my tears.Paragraph2:My sisterand Iwent outside.【试题信息】试卷名称体裁主题语境词数正文英文词数330个词，两个词给了中文提武汉市2022届高中毕业生记叙文人与社会示续写第一段首句9个词，续写第二段首调研考试句6个词【语篇分析】

1.what（前文主旨）父亲常把铲雪的任务交给“我”，而“我”通常会找姐姐帮忙，但姐姐每次都拒绝帮“我”有一次，路上的雪太多了，而天也在慢慢变黑，“我”再一次向姐姐求助，但姐姐还是拒绝帮“我”一起铲雪寒风中，“我”独自一人铲雪，越想越生气

2.why（故事主题）互相帮助，亲情温暖

3.how（写作技巧）第一人称、记叙、情感变化

4.语言

（1）人物角色1“我”性格热于助人、关心家人、勤劳肯干行为向姐姐求助，希望一起合作扫雪，但遭到姐姐粗暴拒绝，十分生气，表达不满后姐姐与“我”一起完成了扫雪任务心理passionate,industrious—angry—angrier—calm—bitter,desperate-happy角色2姐姐性格自私、懒惰、知错能改行为妹妹求助时自私地拒绝帮忙，但在妹妹的感化下帮助妹妹共同扫雪心理selfish-regretful-happy

（2）场景雪地

（3）语言风格形容词较多、心理描述较多、重情节变化

5.具体内容（利用拉波夫叙事模式进行分析）点题文章没有标题，但是在前三个自然段已经基本将故事的起因描述清楚了指向故事发生的背景为冬日，因为主人公希望姐姐能够帮助他共同完成铲雪任务而引发了冲突，续写内容为主要人物如何解决矛盾的进展主人公“我”与姐姐首次沟通无果后，出现了较大的情绪波动，人物的心理变化推动了矛盾爆发结果“我”与姐姐沟通后，最终姐姐认识到了自己的错误，两人共同完成了扫雪任务评议本文以第一人称视角进行叙述，所以无评议

6.情节

（1）冲突“我”希望姐姐帮助我铲雪，姐姐不愿意，甚至将“我”锁在房门外

（2）行动“我”实在生气，与姐姐沟通

（3）解决在“我”的沟通下，姐姐认识到自己的错误，并与我一同完成了铲雪的任务【素材积累】keep sbdoing sth使某人坚持做某事take sthupon oneself某人自己承担某事prepare oneselffor sthahead某人为某事自己提前做好准备【范文赏读】Feeling bitterand desperate,I couldnft stopmytears.My inneranger drovemetothe edgeofmadness.I rushedto mysisters room,expressing mylong-buried dissatisfactiontowards herabsencefrom mysnow shovelingexperiences（非谓语动词短语作状语）.Then,I stoppedmy accusation,stillweeping.Please dontcry.Every teardropof yoursis areminder ofhow selfishI was.Im sorry.Wouldyou giveme anotherchance togo shovelingwith yousaid mysister withgentleness andsincerity inhervoice.My sisterand Iwent outside.I wasntalone inthis battleany more.By thetime wefinished（时间状语从句）,my backwas aching,muscles soreand bodyexhausted（独立主格结构）.However,I wasextremelyhappy.That wasthe beautyof companionship.And fromthe brightsmile bloomingon mysistersface（非谓语动词短语作定语），Icouldtell thatshe feltthesameway（宾语从句）.Arm inarm,we walkedinside asdarkness fell,waiting forour fatherto comehome（非谓语动词短语作状语）.。