读后续写+A+gift+for+Grandpa+讲义 高三英语二轮复习写作专项

潍坊市年高考模拟考试2022英语读后续写试题第二节读后续写（满分分）25阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事A GIFTFOR GRANDPAThesummer vacationwas coming.Jack andhis brotherBerlin werefilled withexcitement astheythought ofvisiting their grandparents again.The bigday cameat last.After thehappy familygot ready,they setout fbrthe grandparents9homeeagerly.On theway,the brotherswere excitedlytalking aboutthe funthey hadwith theirgrandparents.A littleblue housewith atall whitechimney finallyappeared.Behind theproperty wasthe forestcarryingtheir goodmemories with Grandpa.They arrivedat thedriveway,at theend ofwhich Grandpawaswaiting forthem joyfully.Jack andBerlin eachgave Grandmaa bighug andthen sweptto the living room,shouting excitedlyGrandpa,we areback!”Seeing hisgrandsons,Grandpa waswild withjoy andtried toget up with allhis strengthfrom thechairbut invain.A helplessexpression flashedacross hisface.Grandma explainedthat hishealth wasdecliningrapidly andthat hemaybe couldntstand upon hisown forever.But Grandpadeclared（倔强地），stubbornly Ican!”Certainly,he wasstuck in his boyishway.Mum andGrandparents werehappyto meetagain aftera longtime.They sattogether andchatted aboutwhat happenedrecently.The brotherswere soonbored with adult conversation,went out and wanderedinto theforest.Talltrees stretchedup tothe heavenswith largebranches crossingeach other,while youngones rosestraightlike soldiers.Grandpa wasonce agreat explorerfull ofwisdom.He couldtell wherethe birdscame fromonlyby theircalls andsongs.The trees,birds,lizards,lots ofbugs...How manymerry momentsthey spentwithGrandpa in the kingdom!But nowGrandpa couldntget up.This madethem worried.We needto thinkoutaway tocheer himupJ Jack said.Grandpa isa birdlover,so wecan catchhim abird,“Berlin suggested.“But hehates birdsbeingcaged!”Jack shookhis head.（拐杖）注意Then abright ideacame toJacks mind.Why notmake acane outof ayoung tree!”所续写短文的词数应为左右；

1.150续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

2.Paragraph1:Berlin thoughtit wasa goodidea.Paragraph2:Jack andBerlin handedthe caneto Grandpa.【试题信息】试卷名称体裁主题语境词数正文英文词数两个词给了中文提示,续344,潍坊市年2022记叙文人与社会写第一段首句个单词，续写第二段首句78高考模拟试题个单词【语篇分析】（前文主旨）

1.what和弟弟暑假期间去看望他们的爷爷奶奶到那里后他们得知，爷爷因生病已经无Jack Berlin法起身他的健康每况愈下，可能永远站不起来了但爷爷坚信自己能站起来和决Jack Berlin定送爷爷一份礼物让他开心想抓一只鸟给爷爷，可是担心爷爷不喜欢鸟儿被关在笼中他Jack又想到可以用树棍给爷爷做一个拐杖（故事主题）

2.why关爱家人，直面挑战，永不言弃（写作技巧）

3.how第三人称、记叙、描写.具体内容（利用拉波夫叙事模式进行分析）4点题这篇文章自身有一个标题，读者通过标题可以很清晰地获取全文的主题通A giftfor grandpao过阅读第一段可知，本章讲述的是和两兄弟为爷爷准备礼物的经过和结果Jack Berlin指向本篇文章的指向就在前三段，时间是暑假的一天，地点就是在爷爷奶奶家，a littleblue house主要人物和两兄弟以及爷爷，次要人物是父母和奶奶withatall whitechimney,Jack Berlin进展本文的进展是和弟弟在得知爷爷因病无法站立后，想办法制作一个礼物给爷爷，Jack Berlin让爷爷开心，鼓励爷爷乐观地面对疾病和生活结果/结局结局部分是需要学生续写的，通过文章的最后一句（拐杖）Why notmake acane outof ayoung，再根据续写第一段的首句“可知，两兄弟就这一提议达tree!”Berlin thoughtit wasa goodidea.”成一致,开始为爷爷制作拐杖他们做了什么？他们选择了怎样的树？如何制作的，做好了吗？根据续写第二段的首句可确定第二段的写作思路一一“Jack andBerlin handedthe caneto Grandpa”爷爷得到拐杖后想到了什么？爷爷能否用拐杖站起来？大家的感觉怎样？评议评议贯穿了材料全文前四段中作者陆续用到excitement,eagerly,fun,joyfully,swept这些词语来表现出两兄弟对于爷爷的喜爱和依恋的情感第四段中to,shouting excitedlywild with也表现出了爷爷对两兄弟感情的回应同时，面对自己的疾病，作者用了joy stubbornly,stuck in来展现爷爷不服输的劲头，也顺理成章地为两兄弟制作拐杖帮助爷爷站起来埋his boyishway下了伏笔回应本文给出的材料部分并没有与现实的回应学生在续写的部分可以适当地加入回应，不加也可语言

5.人物角色1Jack性格热情，开朗，聪明，细心行为拥抱奶奶、冲进客厅、大声呼唤爷爷，拒绝抓鸟，提议制作拐杖心理一一excited eagerly bored—merry角色2Berlin性格热情，开朗，乐于助人行为拥抱奶奶、冲进客厅、大声呼唤爷爷、建议抓鸟心理一一excited—*eagerlyboredmerry角色3Grandpa性格坚强，倔强行为努力站起来心理一helpless stubborn场景爷爷家与爷爷奶奶见面；小树林里制作拐杖语言风格语言风格平实.情节6冲突爷爷见到孙子很开心想要站起来迎接，却因病无法站立行动两兄弟开始制作拐杖（续写第一段）解决两兄弟将做好的拐杖送给爷爷，爷爷成功地站起来（续写第二段）伏笔第六段提到爷爷曾是一名优秀的森林探险家，为后文两兄弟想到用树枝制作拐杖埋下伏笔【素材积累】Para4冲进客厅Sweep tothelivingroomPara5徒劳无功In vain.他有点孩子气了（他像个孩子一样执拗起来）He wasstuck inhis boyishwayPara6他们和爷爷在森林王国里度过了How manymerry momentsthey spentwithGrandpainthekingdom!多少美好的时光啊！【参考范文】Berlin thoughtit wasa goodidea.When thetwo brothersreached anagreement,they quicklyranback totheirgrandparents5house,got thetools theyneeded tomake the cane,and ranback tothe woods.Jack said,What kindof treeshould wepick fbrthe walkingstick”Berlin thoughtfbr amoment andsaid,“I thinkwe shouldchoose a straight tree,so noknots willscratch Grandpashands.Jack noddedhis headinagreement.They foundastraighttree andset towork.They cutthe treedown,and witha knifethey（引导took thebark off.It wasa wonderfultree,which wassmooth andwas justof theright sizewhich非限制性定语从句）.They thoughtGrandpa wouldlove it.Jack andBerlin handedthe caneto Grandpa.When Grandpatook thecane,his handsshook withjoy,thinking,This ismade bymy grandsonsthemselves.How preciousit is!”Jacksaid,Grandpa,wehope thiscane willhelp youstand upand comewith usto explorethe woods.”Grandpa smiledanddecided togive ita tryso asnot tomake hisgrandchildren disappointed.He heldthecaneinhisright（复合结hand andthe armof hischair inhis lefthand.He stoodupwithstrength onhis legswith构）.Everyone wassurprised andexcited tosee Grandpastand up.At thatmoment,Jack noticeda tearcomingfrom thecorner ofhis grandmaseye.。