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学业质量调研抽测(第一次)英语读后续写试题第二节读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事My fatheris apractical man.He cantexplain calculus(微积分),but hecan tellyou howmuchpressure aboiler needs.He cantdraw anarchitects plan,but hecan tellyou ifthe pipesand wiringwillsustainthe structure.He puthimself throughnightschooltobecome anengineer,but thatwasonlyafter heworkeda slumber,an electrician,and amechanic.One daywe walkedby atoy storewindow.Sitting inthe cornerwas themost unusualdollhouse rdeverseen.Itwasshapedlikedanupturnedlog(原木).Littleovalwindowsdecoratedwithnicecurtainsandframed bytiny balconieswere cutinto it.Oh,Daddy,“I said,isnt itbeautifiil Doyou thinksome warm-hearted manwill bringit tome”Dad lookedat the$100price tag,silent-thats a rather big figure inthose days.I thinkeven thewarm-hearted mancouldnt affordthis house,“he joked,lifting uphis beltas heoften doeswhen hesnervous.4tMaybe oneday,sweetheart.On theNew Yearsmorning,1awoke earlyandraced downstairs.In thedim light,1made outa lotofwrapped boxes-but nonelarge enoughto containmy dollhouse.Dad couldsee mydisappointment.Hepulledme ontohislap andgently toldme how,as aboy,he hadwanteda redwagon,but hisfathercouldntafford one.He saidhe madehis ownfrom woodand oldwheels hefound.4tril makeone fbryou,“Dadassured me.And rightafter theNew Year,despite allthe unfinishedprojects athome,he startedit.I naively(幼稚地)thoughtitwasaneasytoytomake,buteverystepofthelongprocesswasconsiderablymorecomplexthan I had anticipated.Night afternight,Dad wouldcome homefrom hisjob deadtired,yet hedalwaysfind timeto workon thelog house.In thedark yellow electric light,Dad wasalways busycreating mydollhouse.注意
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph1:1hesitated,wondering ifI should help my father.Paragraph2:In all,it tookus onemonth ofhard work.【试题信息】试卷名称体裁主题语境词数重庆市高2022届学业正文英文词数342,三个词给了中文提示,续写第一记叙文人与自我质量调研抽测(第一次)段首句9个单词,续写第二段首句10个单词【语篇分析】
1.what(前文主旨)作者和父亲逛街买新年礼物的时候,作者看上了100美元的不寻常的玩具屋作者的父亲买不起这个玩具屋,作者有点失望父亲决定自己加班给作者做一个玩具屋
2.why(故事主题)亲情篇,为亲人付出
3.how(写作技巧)第一人称、记叙、描写
4.具体内容(利用拉波夫叙事模式进行分析)点题这篇文章没有标题,作者将文章的信息浓缩在了第一段中通过阅读第一段可知,本章讲述的是mypracticalfalhero指向本篇文章的指向就是第二三段,时间是新年前的某一天,地点是玩具店门口,作者看上了100美元的不寻常的玩具屋主要人物是父亲和“我”进展本文的进展是父亲买不起昂贵的玩具屋,我感到失望,后来父亲决定做个玩具屋给我结果/结局结局部分是需要学生续写的,通过前面的情节走向,知道做这个玩具屋有一定的难度,但父亲一直挤时间做这个玩具屋根据续写第一段“I hesitated,wondering ifI shouldhelp my father.”可知,作者经过心理挣扎后决定帮助父亲做这个玩具屋根据第二段“In all,it tookus onemonth ofhard work.”的提示语可知,结局是父子俩花了一个月的时间终于成功完成了玩具屋,作者看到这个自己和父亲亲手做的玩具屋后的喜悦及得到的启示评议本文的第一段和最后一段都是评议的内容作者向读者分析了父亲是一个怎样的实践、动手型的人,告诉了读者父亲制作玩具屋的过程尽管父亲下班回来疲惫不堪,尽管玩具屋耗时耗力,但父亲仍然坚持制作,因此作者受到了感动想要加入制作回应原文中提到了父亲是一个动手能力强,从小就会自己制作自己想要的玩具,说明父亲是有制作玩具屋的可能性的又提到了玩具屋的精美,所以制作过程不容易也是合理的因此第一段的续写中作者受到父亲的影响和感动,从之前的失望转变成想帮助父亲完成制作就顺利成章了第二段续写中要联系到前文提到玩具屋非常昂贵,但和家人一起亲手完成的玩具屋意义更加重大
5.语言人物角色1父亲性格聪明,努力,心灵手巧的,关心家人行为上夜校、努力工作、制作玩具屋心理diligent一practical—determined—caring角色2“我”性格天真、懂事行为看中玩具屋、买不起时的失望、看到父亲做玩具屋时的反思心理confused一expecting—disappointed一hesitant一satisfied proud场景玩具店、家语言风格语言风格很平实
6.情节冲突父亲决定自己动手做玩具屋,但过程太长太难行动在父亲的影响下,我决定也加入帮助父亲一起完成(续写第一段)解决经过共同的努力,成功制作好玩具屋(续写第二段)伏笔前文提到父亲的动手能力和吃苦耐劳,为后文续写最终完成玩具屋的制作埋下了伏笔【素材积累】Para1practical心灵手巧的,善于制作的pressure压力architect建筑师,设计师sustain支撑,维持electrician电工mechanic机械师Para2Sitting inthe cornerwas themost unusualdollhouse Tdever seen.倒装句式句意角落里是一个我见过的最不寻常的玩具屋Little ovalwindows decoratedwith nicecurtains andframed bytiny balconieswere cutinto it.过去分词短语作后置定语句意玩具屋有小阳台围成了椭圆形的小窗户,还有漂亮的窗帘装饰着Para3warm-hearted热心肠的,好心的Para4price tag价标aratherbigfigure一大笔钱He joked,lifting uphis beltas heoften doeswhen hesnervous.伴随状语Para5dim暗淡的唐暗的make out(勉强地)辩认wnip包裹disappointment失望He saidhe madehis ownfrom woodand oldwheels hefound.定语从句assure确保,向…保证Para6despite即使;尽管considerably很;相当多地Complex复杂的;难懂的anticipate预期;期待night afternight夜复一夜【参考范文】I hesitated,wondering if1shouldhelpfather.Ideas hadbeen flashingthrough mymind andhardlycould1make aperfect decision(倒装句).After muchthought,I decidedto workwith myfather tocompletemy dreamdollhouse.Ihadstrong beliefthat wewould dowell inmaking it(同位语从句).Rushing homeafter schooLI didit atonce.Seeing mejoining init,myfatherwas touched.(现在分词短语作时间状语)Every nightafter that,we workedtogether undera darkyellowelectriclight,tired buthappy(形容词短语作伴随状语).all,it tookus onemonlh ofhard work.The finishedresult proveda stunningsurprise(令人震惊的);.Its areal tokenof loveand dedication(象征).I learneda lotof skillsthat Iwouldnt havebefore.Icouldnt helpcrying andhugged myfather tightly.Touched bythe warmatmosphere,myfathersmiledwith pleasure,knowing hisson hadgrown upand grownreliable enough(现在分词短语作状语).Wealth isn\always wherehappiness comesfrom,and loveis somethingthat reallymakes agreatdifference(表语从句).。