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济南市年高考模拟考试2022英语读后续写试题【高考模拟考试】第二节读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事Two monthsago,Ryder Killam,a15-year-old Frenchboy wasregistered in a newschool inHawaii.He justmoved therewith hisparents.Although hemissed hisold friendsvery much,he managedto adapttohis newschool lifeand soonmade alot offriends.However,waiting for the school bus everymorning oftenmeant realsuffering becauseRyder wasbornwithspinabifida(脊柱裂)andhehastoliveinawheelchair.Hawaiiisoneoftherainiestplacesintheworld.Thisisnotanissueforotherstudents,butforhimthiswasadifferentstory.Heoftengotwetalloverbefore the schoolbusarrived duringthe rainy days.In thatcase,he couldonly haveclasses with wetclothes onorcall hisparents tosenddry clothesto schooland findinga placeto getchangedwas alsoa bigchallengefor thisdisabled boy.To keepRyder protected from thebad weatherwhile hewas waitingfor thebus everymorning,thestudents inRyders schooldecided totake action.They firstuploaded apost on social mediaasking foranunused bus shelter butgot noreply.Notbeingabletofindone,thestudentsfromtheconstructionclassdecidedtotakeonthechallengeofbuilding acustomized busshelter forhim andquickly put their hands to work.As partof thehigh schoofsCareer andTechnical Educationprogram,the constructionclass teachesitsstudentsbasicbuildingskills.Itsmain goalistoprovidestudents withtoolsand skillsthatwillhave realapplicationsin futurejobs anda meaningful impact ontheir community.They hadalready performedseveralbuilding projectsforthecommunity.Two yearsago,they managedto builddozens ofshelters forstraycats inthe localpark.Soon enough,they cameup with an ideaof buildinga two-window shelterforRyder.注意
1.所续写短文的词数应为15()左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph1:However,these teenagersfound building this busshelter was no easy job.Paragraph2:The dayfinally came when thenew busshelter wasput touse.【试题信息】试卷名称体裁主题语境词数济南市2022年正文英文词数323,一个词给了中文提示,续写第一段记叙文人与社会高考模拟考试首句12个单词,续写第二段首句13个单词【语料来源】【语篇分析】L what(前文主旨)15岁的Ryder Killam是一个天生患有脊柱裂的男孩,他和父母搬到了夏威夷,他和同学们相处的很好夏威夷多雨RyderKillam经常在等校车时衣服被淋湿,这给他带了很多困扰为了帮助RyderKillam,他的同学们在网上发帖想要找一个不用的公交车候车亭,但是,无人回应于是,他们决定自己动手故事由此展开
2.why(故事主题)帮助同学、传递友爱
3.how(写作技巧)第三人称、记叙、描写
4.具体内容(利用拉波夫叙事模式进行分析)点题这篇文章没有标题,第一段中作者介绍了故事背景通过阅读第一段可知,本文的主人公RyderKillam虽然是新转校生,但是较快融入了新环境并交到了很多朋友指向本篇文章的指向就是第一二三段,时间是两个月之前,地点就是在雨水丰富的夏威夷,主要人物时Ryder和同校建筑课的同学们,次要人物是他的父母进展本文的进展是Ryder由于身体残疾,受雨水困扰,经常会淋湿衣裳,只能湿着衣服上学或等父母送干燥衣服来,十分麻烦因此同校的建筑课的同学们决定为Ryder做一个定做的公交车候车亭结果/结局结局部分是需要学生续写的,通过前面的情节走向,再根据续写第一段的首句“However,these teenagersfoundbuildingthis busshelter was noeasyjob.”可知,本段应该会呈现这份工作具体的难处,以及针对这些难处的解决方法,而根据第二段首句“The dayfinally camewhen thenew busshelterwasput touse”可知本段应该会讲到同学们终于建好公交车候车亭并将其投入使用的情况评议本文的最后一段就是评议的内容作者的向读者分析了这些青少年的能力情况,他们在课程里学到了基础的建筑技巧,且已经完成了不少的项目,告诉了读者这些学生是具备有建筑公交候车亭的能力的回应原文中提到了学生们已经有了一个想法,第二段的续写中候车亭的投入使用就顺利成章了第一段续写中要求考生就难处进行设想,并合理构思解决方案
5.语言人物角色1Ryder性格好相处行为尽管思念老朋友,但是很快融入了新环境并交了很多新朋友心理suffering角色2同校同学性格善良行为了解了Ryder的情况后,主动想办法尝试解决问题帮助孩子心理sympathetic,worried场景学校语言风格语言风格很平实简单
6.情节冲突同学们在网上寻找旧候车亭无果后,决定动手做一个行动同学们开始尝试建造候车亭,并遇到了难处(续写第一段)解决同学们克服万难,成功剑豪了候车亭并将其投入使用(续写第二段)伏笔前文提到同学们之前有成功完成建筑项目的经验,为后文续写候车亭的完工埋下了伏笔【素材积累】Para1manage todo sth.设法完成某事adapt to适应Para2in thatcase那样的话;在那种情况下withwetclothes on穿着湿衣服issue:n.问题challenge:n.挑战Para3keep sb.protectedfrom保护某人不受伤害take action采取措施Para4Not beingable tofind one,the students...动词现在分词做原因状语take onthe challenge接受挑战customized:adj定制的puttheirhandstowork着手工作Para5provide sb.with sth.给某人提供application:n.应用soon enough很快have ameaningfulimpacton对有意义的影响come upwithanidea想出一个主意【参考范文】〃卬el/;these leenagersfound biUldinEthisbusshe herwasnoeasp job.First,they neededtodesign ashelter suitablefor RyderKillams height形容词短语作后置定语.Then,the sheltershould bestrongenough toprotect itselffrom rainand strongwinds.More importantly,they neededto haveall thematerialsprepared.The informationwas postedonsocialmedia,calling onpeople todonate materials.This time,they receivedactive responses.After severaldays continuousefforts,they finallymade it.The finallycamewhenihe busshelier waspul iouse.0narainyday,as youcan guess,Ryder Killamburstintotearswhenhesawa customizedtwo-windowbus shelterinfront ofhiminthe rain.Itwassopretty.Everyone intheschoolbus smiledat him,and hesmiled back.It wasthe firsttime thathe hadkepthimselfdryafter movingtoHawaii.Hecouldnt feelmoregrateful u否定词+比较级”表示最高级tohisschoolmates fromhis heart.He feltit aprivilege tobe takengood careof.。