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第五讲让多彩作文提分I层级十三,拓展成文的五大方法I近几年高考作文主要考查提纲类和(半)开放类作文,试题的开放性越来越强,如何在有限的提示信息下拓展成100词左右的短文是重中之重的问题下面主要介绍五种最有效的拓展成文法美句输入►►
1.列举具体的实例进行补充说明
①我要花一些时间和父母在一起ril spendsome timestaying withmy parents.一Ill spendsome timestaying withmy parents,chatting with them anddoing somehousework.
②我看到了一些不良行为I foundsome badbehaviour.一I foundsome badbehaviour.Some peoplescribbled on the wall;some playedonthelawnand somethrew rubbisheverywhere.
2.增添相关信息的时间地点等内容我要去购物Im goingto dosome shopping.—Im goingto dosome shoppingin thesupermarket andwont beback until5oclock in theafternoon.
3.增添事件的原因结果、条件、让步、手段目的等内容
①我将参加一些社会活动I willtake partin somesocial activities.—If possible,I willtake partin somesocial activitiesso thatI canknow moreabout society.(条件,结果)
②我需要好好休息,我要做些阅读I needa goodrest.ril dosome reading.一I needa goodrest becauseI dofeel tiredafter thehard workof allthese years.ril dosomereading forfun,as well as forknowledge.(原因,目的)
③这部电影主要关于学校的发展The filmis mainlyrelated tothe developmentof ourschool.一The filmis mainlyrelated tothe developmentof ourschool,which willgreatly helpusstudents knowthe schooPshistory betterand appealto usto makecontributions to our(结果)schooPs development.
4.追加附加成分在要点基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分,如定语(从句)、状语(从句)、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等不仅增加了词数,而且使表达更清晰、准确,主题更突出“建议多选择英语电影”可追加附加成分如下As ayoung student,I suggestthat theteacher shouldchoose moreEnglish filmsthat appealtous teenagers,thus makingEnglish learningmore interesting.
5.结尾适当发挥,写出个人感受、评价愿望倡议等©Although Iwas verytired thissummer holiday,I feltvery happyfor whatI did.(个人感受)尽管我这个暑假很累,但是我为我做的感到高兴
②I thinksuch activitiesare necessaryand meaningful.(评价)我认为这样的活动很有必要,也很有意义()31sincerely hopemy advicecan behelpful toyou andthat youcan enjoyyour newschoollife.(愿望)我衷心希望我的建议能够对你有所帮助,你能够享受在新学校的生活
④It isa dutyfor usstudents toprotect ourschool environmentand makeitclean.(倡议)作为学生,保护我们校园的环境并使之干净是我们的职责>佳句输出(2018•全国卷III)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况请给他回信,内容包括
1.学校的体育场馆;
2.主要的运动项目;
3.你喜欢的项目注意
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯【写作步骤】第一步细审题,列提纲
①首段点明原因(回复上封信件中关于你校体育运动情况)
②中段文章结构要点体育场馆、运动项目、自己喜欢的项目
③尾段表达期望之情第二步据提纲,扩句子
1.添加结果要点一学校的体育场馆A newstadium has been builtup.一A newstadium has been builtup,which hasbecome thenew landmarkin guischool(它成为了我校的新地标).
2.适当发挥要点二主要的运动项目
①随着体育馆的建立,各种各样的体育赛事得以举行With thestadium setup,a widerange ofsports eventsare_able to be held.
②乒乓球、足球和赛跑很受欢迎Ping—pong,football as well asnmning competitionsenjoy gieatpopularity.
3.添加原因要点三你喜欢的项目Im interestedin basketball.一Im interestedinbasketballbecause ithasbeengiving mestrength toface thechallenges inmy life(因为它在一直给我力量来面对生活中的挑战).第三步添过渡,终成篇Dear Peter,I amexceedingly delightedto hearfrom you.You askedme in your lastletter aboutthephysical exercisein ourschool andthe followinginformation maygive youa roughsketch.To beginwith,a newstadium hasbeen builtup,which hasbecome thenew landmarkin ourschooLMoreover,withthestadium setup,a widerange ofsports eventsare ableto be held,ofwhich ping-pong,football aswellasrunning competitionsenjoy greatpopularity.As forme,Im interestedin basketballbecause ithasbeengiving mestrength toface thechallenges inmylife.All inall,I sincerelyinvite you to come toourschool andsee itfor yourself.,YoursLi HuaI层级十四/循纲蹈句的“提纲作文”I提纲作文主要以应用文为主,其命题形式多为文字提示,文体主要为书信、通知、日记、发言稿等常见的应用文体应用文在写作时要突出重点,开门见山提出写作目的近几年高考作文中,提纲作文是常见的命题形式,因此掌握提纲式作文的组织、架构和写作技巧是非常必要的IB典例示范(2021・南昌高三模拟)假定你是李华,你打算参加你校下周要举行的主题为“We AreAllDream Chasers”的英语演讲大赛,你已经写完初稿,请根据以下提示用英语给你的外教Miss Lucy写一封邮件
1.参加大赛目的;
2.请她帮忙纠正发音、润色语言等;
3.约定拜访时间、地点注意
1.词数100左右;
4.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯K思路导航
1.审题立意——“三定”审题
①定体裁提纲类应用文(电子邮件);
②定人称第一人称为主;
③定时态一般现在时为主
2.谋篇布局——“三段”谋篇
①第一段——表明写信原因;
②第二段——主体段落展开参加大赛的目的;请她帮忙;约定拜访时间、地点;
③第三段——表达期望IS美文输出(提纲作文)Dear MissLucy,Im planningto participatein theEnglish SpeechContest tobe held in ourschool nextweek.The topicis aboutWe AreAll DreamChasers”.I amwriting toask youto dome afavor.To improvemy spokenEnglish andmy skillin makingpublic speeches,I wantto graspthisgreat opportunity.Fve finishedmy draftand Iam wonderingif youcan helpme polishthelanguage and solve theproblems inmy pronunciationaswell.Is itpossible formetocall onyouat3p.m.this Saturdayinyouroffice Iknow youhave abusy scheduleand Idappreciateit ifyou couldconsider it.Looking forward to yourreply.Yours,Li HuaI层级十五,收放自如的“(半)开放文”I高考英语写作命题近几年更趋向于(半)开放类这种写作题型要求考生在给出的特定情景下按特定的要求,较为开放地叙述事件、组织写作IB典例示范(2021•合肥高三模拟)假定你是李华,你校将举行70周年系列校庆活动,你想邀请你的外教Henry一起参加请你给他写封邮件,内容包括
1.时间和地点;
2.活动安排注意
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯IB思路导航
1.审题立意——“三定”审题(半)开放作文的审题最为关键,审好题相当于成功了一半审题时应做到三定
①定体裁半开放类应用文(电子邮件);
②定人称第一人称为主;
③定时态一般现在时和一般将来时为主
2.谋篇布局——“三段”谋篇(半)开放作文的关键是确定主题,然后根据主题列出要点和提纲对于命题式(半)开放作文,首先准确理解题目意思,抓住题目中的关键词,然后结合实际组织材料本文可分为三段
①第一段——表明写信原因;
②第二段一一校庆的时间、地点和活动安排;
③第三段一一表达期望n美文输出[(半)开放文]Dear Henry,rd liketo inviteyoutotake partin theseactivities celebratingthe seventiethanniversary ofmyschool.Theyre goingtobeheldinthe schoolmeeting hallon May16th,which willstart at900am andlast till600pm.All theteachers andstudents willbe attendingthe activities,andsowillpart of our schoolsgraduates.There willbe manyactivities tobeheldintheform ofpictures,real objects,videos andso on,which willgive us a birdview ofthe developmentofourschoolsince
1949.Well appreciateit ifyou couldgive usa speech.Im lookingforwardtoyour arrival,which Ithink willsurely bringusagreat honor.Yours,Li Hua。