二路复习读后续写中情绪描写专练写作指导

2022届二路复习读后续写中情绪描写专练写作指导读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事Have youever hadto overcomean extremechallenge inyour lifeMyteenage yearshad been insane.From schoolworkto athletics,Ihad alwaysbeen runningaround.Everything wasso difficult.Throughout myhectic teenageyears Ihave beenfaced withmany extremechallengesthat haverequired extremefocus andhard workto overcome.Ifit hadnt beenfor hardwork,none of these chailengesthat Ifaced wouldhavebeen conquered.Two yearsago,when I was afreshman inhigh school,I dealtwith anextremelysignificant injury.This tookplace inmy tennistournament inJanuary.In thecl imaxof mymatch,I joltedmy backto theleft andsoonafter felta sharp,painful shockrun through my spine.I knewat thatdifficultmoment Iseriously injuredmy back.I wasrushed offthe courtandmy parentsmade anappointment withan orthopedist（矫形外科医生）for thenextmorning.I walked into theoffice extremelynervous andsuffering fromexcruciatingpain.My tennisseason forschool startedin three months andIabsolutely neededto build up the strength.After abouttwenty minutesof waitingin theoff ice,which feltlikean eternity,the doctorwalkedinto examinemy X-rays.With asorrowful face,the doctorlooked intomine andmy motherseyes andsaid,There isa50/50chance thatLucas willbe ableto participatein this yearns tennisseason.Lucas brokehis L5vertebrae inhis lowerback.〃My heartdropped and Ifelt asadness comeover me.The doctorsaid that I wouldbe sittingout ofphysicalactivity for two and a halfto threemonths.Those threemonths werethe longestthreemonthsof my life.I wassoeager to get backto practicesfor the season.Every day,I wouldthinkabout howit was going to be whenIwasfully healthy.I askedmyself,〃Am Igoing to be outof shapeShould Ieven playthisyearI probablywonthave a successful season.〃From thatdreadful dayon,I decidedthat Iwas going to putin theworkto beback intop formand haveasuccessful season.注意

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph1:After Igot theall clearfrom myorthopedist1was going to getto work.Paragraph2:My hardwork provedto bevery effective.翻译小练习

1.训练将在两个星期后开始，我决心重返赛场

2.我对成功的渴望使我甚至在赛季前一天就开始了两个小时的比赛和锻炼

3.通过练习，我会去健身房，努力增强受伤前的力量

4.我度过了我职业生涯中最成功的一个赛季我进入了决赛

5.虽然我真的很想赢，但我知道能站在这个位置上对我来说是一个巨大的成就

6.这次受伤几乎是件好事，因为我向自己证明了我有能力实现我所追求的目标，当然是通过努力工作

7.那个赛季是我职业生涯中最有收获的一个赛季

8.在赛季结束时，我觉得自己很有成就感努力工作总有回报参考答案

1.训练将在两个星期后开始，我决心重返赛场Practices weregoingtostart intwo weeksand Iwas determinedtogetbackon thecourt.

2.我对成功的渴望使我甚至在赛季前一天就开始了两个小时的比赛和锻炼My hungerfor successmade meplay andwork outfortwohours even day beforetheseason.

3.通过练习，我会去健身房，努力增强受伤前的力量Through practices,I wouldhit thegym andtry to buildup thestrength thatI hadbefore theinjury.

4.我度过了我职业生涯中最成功的一个赛季我进入了决赛I hadthe mostsuccessfulseason of my career.I madeit to the final s.

5.虽然我真的很想赢，但我知道能站在这个位置上对我来说是一个巨大的成就Although I truly wantedto win,I knewthat itwas agreat accomplishmentforme tobe inthat positioneven notin the first place.

6.这次受伤几乎是件好事，因为我向自己证明了我有能力实现我所追求的目标，当然是通过努力工作The injurywas almosta goodthing becauseI provedto myself that I am capableofachieving goalsthat Istrive for,through hardwork of course.

7.那个赛季是我职业生涯中最有收获的一个赛季That seasonwas byfar the most rewardingseason ofmy career.

8.在赛季结束时，我觉得自己很有成就感努力工作总有回报I feltso accomplished at the end oftheseason.Hard workalways paysoff.参考范文Paragraph1:After Igot theall clearfrom myorthopedist Iwasgoingto gettowork.Practices weregoingtostart intwo weeksandIwas determinedtoget backon thecourt.My hungerfor successmade meplay andwork outfortwo hoursevendaybefore theseason.Through practices,I wouldhit thegymand trytobuildupthestrengththatI hadbefore theinjury.Paragraph2:My hardwork provedtobevery effective.I hadthe mostsuccessfulseason ofmycareer.I madeit tothe finals.Although Itruly wantedto win,I knewthat itwas agreat accomplishment forme tobe inthat positionevennot inthefirstplace.The injurywas almosta goodthing becauseI provedto myselfthatI amcapable ofachieving goalsthatIstrive for,throughhard workofcourse.That seasonwas byfar the most rewardingseasonofmycareer.I feltso accomplishedat theendoftheseason.Hard workalwayspays off.读后续写模拟专练2读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事IamSadie.I love oceans,especially theone nearmy grandmashouse withbeautiful shells.Why Thatswhat Iam aboutto tellyou.It allstarted whenmy parents divorced a few weeksago.I hadremained silent sincethen.So my mother decidedto sendme toFloridato livewith mygrandma.On theway tomy grandmashouse,mymothersaid,“Sadie,I knowwe arenot the best familyyou canhave andItrulyapologize.I justdo notknow howtobea mother.But remember,Sadie,whatever happened,I dolove you.〃These wordsmade mesadder.When wearrived,Grandma toldme togo upstairsand unpackmy thingswhileshe spoketomymother.When Isaw ablue andgreen paintedroom withahuge windowandacomfortable bed,I thought,Moving toFlorida mightnotbe thatbad.〃I comfortedmy-self asI walkedtowards thewindow.I openedthecurtains andsaw sky-blue wavesslowly washingaway thesand onthe beachandsea birdsflying inthe clearsky.The oceanwas onlyafewhundred metersawayfrom here.After mymother left,Grandma softlytouched myshoulder,“I wanttotake youtotheplace Icalled the Big Blue’.And Ithink youmightlike it.〃I guessyou couldknow whereit is.Before Istepped onthesand I could smellthe ocean.Together weenjoyed thesunset witha wholelotof yellowand orange.Suddenly shepicked outthemostbeautiful shellIhad everseen inmy life.It wasalmost gold,shining inthe sunlight.I couldnt movemy eyesoff it.注意

1.所续写短文的同数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键短语Paragraph1:“Want toknow howI getthrough my parents5divorce”Grandma asked.Paragraph2:“The beautiful shells heregave methe courageto liveon,Grandma said.翻译小练习

1.她对我笑了笑，接着说“在那些日子里，我感到非常悲伤，因为我的父母都不关心我，这让我想结束我的生命

2.但最后，我没有那样做为了消磨时间，我总是去海滩（我叫它“大蓝”）

3.令我吃惊的是，我发现海滩上有这么漂亮的贝壳

4.“亲爱的，你还是很开心虽然你父母离婚了，但他们都爱你

5.你妈妈今天早上给我打电话，告诉我你喜欢海洋

6.所以，我带你来了我也希望你能得到鼓舞和勇气

7.听到这话，我抬头望着蓝天和浩瀚的大海

8.突然间，我觉得有点放松和自然，并坚信我一定要振作起来，就像最美丽的贝壳，充满色彩参考答案

1.她对我笑了笑，接着说“在那些日子里，我感到非常悲伤，因为我的父母都不关心我，这让我想结束我的生命She smiledto meand continued,〃In thosedays,I feltvery sorrowfulbecauseneither ofmy parentscared aboutme,which mademe wantto endmy life.

2.但最后，我没有那样做为了消磨时间，我总是去海滩我叫它“大蓝”But finally,I didntdo like that.In orderto killtime,I alwayswent tothebeach Icalled it5theBig Blue.

3.令我吃惊的是，我发现海滩上有这么漂亮的贝壳Much tomy surprise,I foundthat therewere such beautifulshel1s onthebeachn.

4.“亲爱的，你还是很开心虽然你父母离婚了，但他们都爱你“Honey,youare still happy.Although yourparents divorced,thev bothlove you.

5.你妈妈今天早上给我打电话，告诉我你喜欢海洋Your motherrang methis morning,telling methat youlove oceans.

6.所以，我带你来了我也希望你能得到鼓舞和勇气Therefore,I broughtyou here.Also Ihope youcan getinspiration andcourage.

7.听到这话，我抬头望着蓝天和浩瀚的大海Hearing thisI looked up atthe blue sky and the vast sea.

8.突然间，我觉得有点放松和自然，并坚信我一定要振作起来，就像最美丽的贝壳，充满色彩Suddenly,I felta littlerelaxed andnatural,and heldthe firmbelief thatI must cheer up,just likethemostbeautifulshell,full ofcolor.参考范文Paragraph1:“Want toknow howI getthroughmyparents divorcevGrandma asked.She smiledto meand continued,〃In thosedays,I feltvery sorrowfulbecauseneither ofmyparentscared aboutme,which mademe wantto endmylife.Butfinally,I didntdo1ikethat.In orderto killtime,I alwayswent tothebeach Icalled itJ theBigBlue.Much tomy surprise,I foundthat thereweresuchbeautifulshells onthe beachv.Paragraph2:“The beautifulshells heregave methe courageto liveon,〃Grandmasaid.Honey,you arestillhappy.Although yourparentsdivorced,they bothloveyou.Your motherrang methis morning,telling methat youloveoceans.Therefore,I broughtyou here.Also Ihope youcan getinspiration andcourage.〃Hearing thisIlookedupattheblueskyandthevastsea.Suddenly,I felta littlerelaxedand natural,and heldthe firmbelief thatImustcheerup,just likethemost beautifulshell,full ofcolor.情绪描写七大秘诀秘诀

（一）情感似人“手”人们常被情感掌控，受其制约而中文中的“掌控”就是来源于“手掌”于是，情感就可以比喻成一双无形的手，也就非常贴切了我们发现用于手的一些动作可以直接应用于某种情感这类现作有表示“抓住”娄的动词seize,grasp,grip,take holdof表示覆盖cover表示“撕成碎片tear intopieces我们来看下面几个例句（l）Fear grippedher heart.她心中充满恐惧（grip抓住）

（2）Jealousy seized her.她妒火中烧（seize抓住）

（3）A wildjoytook holdof her.她十分快乐

（4）A feeling of panicseizedher.她突然惊慌失措

（5）Anxiety toreher intopieces.她焦虑不安身心憔悴（tore是tear的过去式，表“撕扯”）

（6）Anger andbitterness coveredupon meforweeks.我好几周都沉浸在愤怒和痛苦中（bitterness是bitter“痛苦的”名词形式）秘诀

（二）情感似对手汉语里也有类似的说法“我被什么情绪打败了”将情感比喻为人的对手，那么人与情感之间的关系仿佛在比赛或斗争但是汉语中，这种表达中情绪更多是负面情绪，而英文中，则没有这个限制我们来看常见的动词有哪些？被情感对手“击败”于是，动词通常是get the better of或者get thebest of（都表示“胜过”）例如浙江2020年1月高考续写文本中就写至UHe stoodup,hugged hisparents,and smiled,trying notto lethis emotionsget thebetter ofhim.（他站起来，抱住爸爸妈妈，并露出笑容，努力不让情感控制他）在这句里，就用到了get thebetter of的结构，表示“胜过”我们再看几个例子

（1）Enthusiasm getsthebetter of me.我太激动了（enthusiasm热情）

（2）Boredomoften getsthebestof them.他们常感到非常无聊.（boredom无聊）

（3）His curiositygot thebetterofhim.他异常好奇，（curiosity好奇心）秘诀

（三）情感似压迫者我们可以控制情感，反过来，情感也可以变得强大，反客为主，成了统治者，压迫者，我们被情感控制这是动词可以是oppress压迫，甚至是deprive（表示剥夺，deprive通常与of搭配），还可以是prey（捕猎，折磨）我们来看下面几个例句

（1）Worrying deprivedhim ofsleep.他焦虑万分，难以入睡

（2）Excitement deprivedme ofall powerof speech.我激动得什么话都说不出来

（3）Astonishment andhorror oppressedher.她惊恐不安（oppress压迫）

（4）Anger andbitterness hadpreyed uponmecontinually.我感到愤怒和痛苦（prey本意是“捕猎”，在这里引申为“折磨”非常形象的表达，“愤怒”和“痛苦”像猎人一样，而“我”成了猎物，不就是我被这两种情绪折磨着吗？）秘诀

（四）情感似动物情感也会有动物的一些特点，会悄无声息地“爬”到你身边，即用动词crawl/creep（爬），有时还会咬（gnaw）、吞噬（swallow/swallow）你例如

（1）Happiness crawlsup tothe tipsof hisbrows.他喜上眉梢（字面意思是“幸福爬到他的眉毛尖”）

（2）A slightfeelingoffear slowlycrept onhim.他慢慢感到一丝恐惧（crept是creep过去式，意思是“爬”）

（4）Self-doubt beganto gnawaway ather confidence.自我怀疑正在蚕食她的自信心

（4）Fear swallowedher.她非常惊恐（字面意思是“恐惧吞掉了我”，是不是很形象？）秘诀

（五）情感似光线有人说“积极的心态像太阳，照到哪里哪里亮；消极的心态像月亮，初一十五不一样”所以说，情感和光线变化密切相关我们也有这种生活体验在sunny（晴朗）的天气，人们会感到开朗高兴，情感像光一样散发（radiate）与传播（spread across）,而在cloudy（阴云密布）或者dark（光线晦暗）则让人心情阻塞、郁闷不快例如

（1）Joy shonefrom hisbrow.他喜上眉木肖

（2）Happiness radiatesfrom herface.荣光换发（radiate发散，发光）

（3）Smile spreadacross hisface.他满脸笑容当然还有用“人或物”作主语的

（4）She hasbeenina darkmood thisweek.她这周心情一直不好（a darkmood用黑暗来形容心情mood,当然是“心情不好”）

（5）Hisface cloudedover whenhe heardthe news.听了这个消息，他满脸愁云（这个句子把云cloud这个名词当做动词用，over覆盖，cloud over这个词组把“乌云密布”这种形象就表现出来了）秘诀

（六）情感似重担在中文中，我们有时候说某种负面情绪的时候，可以这么表达“很压抑，压得我喘不过气来”，这里的“压”显示出，在描写情感时候，赋予它重量感英文也是如此忧虑、悲伤、愤怒等消极情感犹如重担bear on（压在…上面），需要人们carry（承受），而这些情感负担的unburden（卸去）、lose（失去）则会让人感到轻松、获得解脱例如:

（1）Grief bearsheavily onher.她承受着悲伤的巨大压力还有以“人”作主语的

（2）He wasburdened withworries他心事重重（burden装在，负重非常有意思是，在汉语中，“心事重重”中的“重”是一个多音字，也读zhong,“负重”的重”）

（3）The managercarried hisanger.经理怒火冲冲

（5）After Ilost mytemper,I feltlighter.发脾气之后，我感到轻松多了（lost mytemper字面意思好像是“失去了脾气”，其实就是情绪失控，发脾气）

（5）Unburdening herselfof her anger gaveherasense ofrelief.释放了怒火后，她感到一种解脱（第二个例子中提到了burden装在，负重，加上了否定前缀un,意思为“卸去负担”）秘诀

（七）情感似液体在汉语中，如果用一个成语来形容两个人感情很好，我们可以用“水乳交融”，水和乳都是液体同样的道理，在英语中，情感也常常被比作液体常见的名词有波纹（ripple）或wave（波浪）或flood（洪流），常见的动词有涌出（well up）,surge（涌动）甚至sweep（冲；卷），有时fill/brim/takepossession of（注满/盛满/占满）容器，有时overflow/well（漫出/溢出）容器，在高温下甚至会boil（沸腾）.我们来看下面的例句

（1）Panic surgedupwithin him.他惶恐不安（surge涌起，字面的意思是“恐惧在他身体里涌起”）

（2）The terriblescene filledher withfear.恐怖的场景使她十分害怕

（3）A waveof panicswept overher.一阵惊恐袭上她的心头

（4）The lonelinessandgrief comesin waves.阵阵孤独与痛苦袭上心头当然还有用“人”做主语的

（1）His heartis overflowingwith joy.他满怀喜悦

（2）Icouldfeel angerboilingup insideme.我感到怒火中烧（字面意思是“愤怒”已经“boil沸腾了）

（3）He wasbrimming withsorrow whenshe lefthim.她离开他时，他满怀悲伤（brim是“边缘”的意思，作动词表示“溢出”悲伤这种情绪从内心溢出来了）。