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20231.黄浦区.年已接近尾声,还记得年初你为自己定下的小目标吗?不知你是否实现了你的小目标?发一个微信挚2023友圈来回顾一下吧(文中请不要出现真实的校名人名)你的挚友圈文字内容需包括你的年度小目标;
1.
2023.你为实现年度小目标所作的努力;
2.你实现(或没有实现)年度小目标的阅历总结范文3|My new years resolutionfor2023was thatT shouldbe able to communicatewith foreignpeople inEnglish.Toachieve thisgoal,I hadasked myEnglish teacherfor help.According toher suggestions,I made up aplan.Firstly,I startedwith simplyreading Englisharticles andfound manypronunciation errorsin myreading afterlisteningto thevideo tapeof itsrecording.Then,I triedto learnphonetics andpractice onesyllable afteranother again andagain.I startedwith asingle word,then aphrase,a sentence,a paragraphand finallythe wholepassage.After3-monthpractice,I was able to read anarticle fluentlywithout making any mistakesin pronunciation.I felthappy.Next,I practicedmylistening.By listeningto apassage fourtimes,I requiredmyself to take itdown withoutspelling en*ors or anyinformation blank.Last butnot least,I installedan app called ShanbeiOral Englishon myphone to practice both mylistening andspeaking.Its likehaving conversationswith arobot.I hadto understandwhat itsaid to me andanswer itsquestionsaccordingly.After practicingfor almost8months,I hadmy firsttalking sessionwith anAmerican teacherin ourschool.I wasproud of myself.What I have learntfrom thisexperience is something as a saying goes:no pain no gain.Though the process oflearningcould bedull andtiring,its worthall theefforts afterI achieved my goal.Even if I didnt,its stilla valuablepartof my life.阅卷作文8+8+4=20The wonderfulyear of2023is drawingto anend.I rememberthat I set anannual goalto keepfit at the beginning of2023,since stayinghealthy iscrucial toensuring my study,thus betterprepare myselffor Gaokao.To achievemy goalof keepingfit,here are some effortsFve takenthroughout theyear.On thevery firstday of2023,I downloadeda fitnessappcalledKeep.Following thefitness instructionsthe appoffered,I exercisedevery othernightbefore I go to bed.Also,I didsome researchinto thedaily nutritionI needin orderto stayhealthy bothphysically andmentally,after which I deviseda moderatedieting plan.Apart from the above,Ive invitedfamily membersand friendstojoin meso that we canencourage each other andexchange fitnessexperience.So far,the recordshown on my fitnessapp showsthat Ivedone wellthis year,reaching arecord highof200trainingtimes intotal.Although attimes Ifelt likegiving upbecause oftoo muchstudy pressureand limitedtime,Im gladI havestuckto my plan.It seemsto me that anythingis possibleif Ithrow in all of my energyand passion,and most of all,perseverance.Some rulesapply to study.So I hope I will keepsuch passionand strengthto domy bestin thecoming
2023.()点评237words文本结构段落清楚,符合作文题目要求
1.)第一段明确告知自己的年度小目标是什么;1)其次段有总起句,段落中有清楚的标记词(如)告知读者自己所做的努力,且努力的行2also,apart from为都特别详细)第三段对阅历的总结可以再和其次段的三个努力匹配些,借助科技的力气();借助科学的力3a.app b.气();组团抗击惰性did researchinto thedaily nutritionc.在语言表达实力比较强的基础上,可以考虑文字的进一步精炼是否有“废话”?字数建议不超过(此学
2.200生语言实力强,中等学生左右即可)精练而精确的表达也是思维和表达功力的体现1607+8+4=19Greeting from the end of2023!Its nowthe time to concludeour yearlygoals again.On the newyearseve,Iset uptwo goalsfor theyear:to getterbetter gradesand tolose weightand Improud to announce that Ive accomplishedthe firstone.A personalhabit Id like to changeIt isroughly estimatedthat almosteveryone has a uniquehabit,and sodo I.My individualhabit,taken upin mychildhood,is bitingmy nails,which has a chronicallynegative effect on others9impression me.Comparatively speaking,my ownhabit seemsquite violentabusive when it comes to others,for sometimesI willuseneedles orsomething sharpto eliminatethe tissueswhich arebeyond myteeths touch.It isregular to a certainextent,forme tobleed orbe infecteddue tothis harmfulhabit.However,the keyfactor causingme to change is that bitingmy mailsis regardedas thebehavior oflackingself-assurance.And formany timesI have been toldonly afterchanging andkicking this awful habitcan I become moreself-confident anddeserves trustingand respecting.Consequently,I havemade a determination to take immediatemeasures,to thoroughlyabandon it.Considering thefreezingtemperature now,a pairof glovesare supposed to be greatly effectiveto hidemy fingers,and somespicy saucescan be takenadvantage of.Moreover,the resolutionand persistencethat is of greatnecessity interms of the progress.Difficult and tough asit may be,I willspare no effort andstick to it so that I will ultimatelyachieve successand improveothers9impression onme.范文四A personalhabit I would like to changeI have a bad habitthat I always putwhat I need to do todayto thenext day.The habit is socalled“Procrastination”,and I havebeenbothered byit over the years.It isoften the case thatstudents arehigh in their seniorthree.Ambitious as I am,I alwaysplan myeveryday taskfullyand elaboratelywithout anyextra timeleft.The resultis Apparent:when I am faced with somany tasksat night,I losetheconfidence andconcentration,thus makinga failpromise that I shallfinish itlater in the end.It iscrystal to me thatdoing everydetail issignificantly powerfulto meetthe finalaccomplishment.So I am tryingeverymeans to get rid of it.I will no longermake anyambitious butunrealistic plan.Indeed,I willlist thethings Ineed todomost and take sequenceto finishedthem asplanned.To plus,I believe that makingan appropriateplan is not enough,while a strong willis critical.So,I must be preparedto do whateverit takesto finishmy plan.A personalhabit I would like to changeInterms of the habitsI would like tochange,it accessedto me that I would alwaysmake aperfect planbut leaveeverythinguntil thelast moment.So as far as I am concerned,I feeldesperate tochange thedelaying habit.It iswidely recognizedthat time is themust preciousthing throughoutour life.To someextent,getting usedto puttingoffthe planis akind ofwasting time.Whafs more,finishing asupposed long-term taskin ashort hurrydoes nogood to thequality oftask itself.And therefore,I ameager to get rid of theunsatisfying habit as earlyas possible.Only throughreminding myselfcontinuously can Ibestimulated toengage in the mission.So I am figuredout acoupleof measuresincluding writingon thesticky notesand cairyingthem whereverI go,setting clocksin mycell phonesregularly,etc.I holda filmbelief that ifI could getridof the badhabit,I would benefit morein theefficient and highquality studying.
9.奉贤区请将要描述图片内容,并联系生活实际谈谈你的感想参考词汇宝马;奔驰BMW BenzAs is depictedin thepicture,with astrong anddistorted comparisonpsychology,2students areshowing offtheirparents1wealth andstatues to enhance andexhibit hisworth.Compared with a girlsitting onher fathershumble bike,theyseem to go towardsparents1privilege competitioninstead oferecting decentlife valuesand outlook.In moderntimes,rich secondgeneration*Official secondgeneration,flight fatherare notfresh words,andfrequent reportsonline have always remindedus thatthis phenomenonis allaround us.They believethe childrenof richfamilies,known as the secondrich generation,can alwaysget decentjobs andsocial status ahead of the poor.Andchildren frompoor familiesthink traitslike hard-work,creativity andsound academic achievements cannever beathavinga“good father”.However,Fight fathergame,it isnot agame buta lessonteaching usto bedependent on ourselves tocreatea colorfulfeature.Emphasis shouldbe puton onescapacity rather than background,and adultshave theresponsibilityto helpteenagers buildup thecorrect valuesand viewson life.So asfor studentslike us,we should have agoodattitude towardsfamily background.Facing withmillionaires,keep eyesighthorizontal;facing withpoverty,keepheads upand nevergive up.Besides,we shouldmake fullpreparation,though asolid foundationof wealthwill helpusovercome difficulties,it isnot forperson whohas nopreparation.So anold proverbsays that the sweetestfruit isone thathascultivated byhand.
10.闵行区假设你是学生李华,你校正在下学期开设的选修课程征求学生看法,请你向学校课程部老师写一封email,提出你的课程建议你的中必需包括email课程名称
1.课程的主要内容
2.设置该课程的理由
3.Dear teacher,Its reallya surpriseto learnthat ourschool isseeking suggestionsfrom usstudents about the courseto bedevelopednext semester.The proposalsI putforward are as follows:As faras Imconcerned,most classmatesreally expectto have a coursenamed SelectedReading fromBritish andAmericanNewspaper.The contentof thiscourse can be separatedinto threeparts:current affairs,exotic culture andpractical techniquesin daily life.There arefour reasonsaccounting for my preference.Firstly,we will be informedof thelatest affairsthat ishappening in the worldvery well,through whichwe cankeeppace with the changingtimes.Secondly,we willlearn avariety of cultureandcustoms,which canhelp tobroadenour horizonsand enrichour knowledge.Thirdly,we willlearn towork outthe practicalproblems indailylifeon ourown,becoming independentof ourparents.In addition,we canenlarge ourvocabulary andimprove ourcapacity ofreadingcomprehension byhaving accessto considerablearticles writtenby nativespeakers.There isno denyingthat we will benefita lotfrom the new coursewe cantake nextterm.We wouldappreciate itverymuch ifour humblesuggestions canreceive yourfavorable consideration.Yours sincerelyLi Hua
11.浦东新区近年来,随着科技的迅猛发展,身边的新事物取代旧事物的事例层出不穷,请你简要描述一个详细实例,并说明这一新事物存在的理由Sample1In the past fewdecades,with therapid development of moderntechnology,we havestepped into the digitalage.As thepopulationof Internetusers,which arecalled onlineresidents,is goinglarger,emails arelikely tobe takingthe placeoftraditional letters.On onehand,email enablespeople to deliver theirmessages moreeasily andconvenient,as wellas loweringtheexpense.People nolonger need to go to apost officeto sendletters,which savestime forissues ofmore importance.On theother hand,email narrowsthe gapbetween peopleliving in different areas,or evenindifferentcountries.Contacts can be moreefficient,thanks to the internationalnetworks,whereas emailcanbereceived instantly.Convenient asit is,there arestill someproblems causedby emailremain tobe solved.Personal privacy,for example,canbethreatened byhackers.Generally speaking,however,we cantdeny that the emergeof emaildoes morebenefit thanharm.Sample2With therapid developmentand popularityof Internet,many physicalstores arebeing replacedby theonline shopping.Although themajority ofshop keeperscriticize theInternet commerceas afatal killer,from mypoint of view,the existingof it must have somedramatic advantages.For onething,it goeswithout sayingthat theonline online shopping bringsso muchconvenience.Compared withgoing to afar place,and caringa massof things,so comfortableis itthat we can conductshopping witha clickof mouse.For another,there isno denyingthat shoppingonline canavoid embarrassment.Internet providesyou witha privateroom.No doubtsthat youwont beshowed whenpurchasing bargainsanymore.All in all,the advancedonline marketis asign of the countrysprogress.We oughtto regarditas a means of modernlife.Only byimproving thetransportation andelectronic devicescan ouronlineshoppinghave abetter future.
12.静安区|你是李华,接近寒假,你的好挚友刘伟写信像你询问他的寒假安排,目前有三个备选方案
①去美国某中学参与冬令营;
②应征某历史博物馆临时讲解员;
③提前学习下学期中学课程请给刘伟写回信,winter campdocent谈谈你的看法信中必需包括你建议的方案;
1.你如此建议的理由;
2.你对于执行此方案的建议
3.参考范文Dear LiuImtruly delightedto receiveyour letterasking formy adviceon yourplan onwinter vacation.Its nowonder thatall the threeplans are not onlymeaningful but also helpfulto you.However,asfarasI am concerned,among the plans,being atemporary docentin the museum wouldbe thebest choicefor you.The reasonsare as follows.To beginwith,its about the timeissue.Since itswinter vacation,the timeis limitedcompared withsummervacation,and asthe mostimportant festival-Spring Festivalis also in thevacation,we shouldntleave faraway fromhome.Therefore,attractive andmeaningful asit is,going toAmerica toattend awinter campmight notbe awise choice.Forlearning thenext-term coursein advance,though,to someextent,it isuseful.But for you,it isnot essentialand necessarysinceyou arealready anA-grade student.I dontdoubt you can alsoachieve a good academicperformance withoutlearningit aheadof time.As aresult,being atemporary docentin themuseum isundoubtedly becomingthe firstchoice.Ibelieve you can learna lotin theprogram.For tobe aqualified docent,you mustknow a lot aboutwhat youneedtoexplainto the visitors,which providesa goodchance foryou to learn.Meanwhile,you canalso polishyour communication skillsin theprocess ofintroducing thingsto others.So greatthe opportunityisthat you musttake actionsto seizeit.In orderto achieveit,I suggest you learnmoreabout themuseum bysearching information online first.Secondly,youd betterchoose oneaspect thatnot onlyyou arefamiliar with butalso isrelated to themuseumto studymore.Last butnot least,prepare wellfor theinterview in advance.Please takegood considerationof my advice.I hope you willfind theseideas useful.Best wishes,Li Hua
13.青浦区你应邀在英语课上的“每日一谈”环节中发表自己对《中国诗词大会》>The ChinesePoetry Competition《国家宝藏》等以传统文化为主题的电视节目热播现象的看法National Treasure你的发言稿必需包括■简洁介绍一个此类节目;•分析此类节目热播的缘由注文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称文章的开头已为你写好作文范文Apparently,such kindof TVprograms definitelyneed ourpraise for they helpus betterappreciate thebeauty ofChinese culture.The Chinesepoetry competition,is avivid exampleof howtechnology andtraditional cultural,once combinedtogether,can createa nationaltrend.It featurescompetitions amonghigh school students tohelp themtruly understand thevalue of traditional poemsinstead ofmemorizing them for exams.50,you mightwonder whythese showscan enjoysuch agreat popularity.Personally,I find the reasonquite simple.First,I amconvinced that it is the charmoftraditionalChinese cultureitself thatdraws usto these shows likea magnet.Traditional culture,like poems,provides uswithaglimpse ofwhat lifewas likebefore.It seemsas ifan invisiblebridgeleading toChineseculturewas thenbuilt by theseshows.For example,Every timeI reada poem,I feelmyself identifyingwith the writer,feeling what he felt,though theremight bethousands ofyears apartbetween us.Secondly,the increasingawareness onculture identityis anotherreason.Cultural identity,I assumeis whatbinds ustogetherasawhole.Imagine ifBeijing lostGreat wall,what it wouldbelike.Maybe it will becomenothing butanotherNew Yorkor Tokyo.Through exploringtraditional culture,we deepenour recognitionof whowe are,what webelong toasa family.51,from thereasons mentionedabove,I callon everyoneto supportthese programsas wellas tryour bestto preserveourtraditional culturefrom nowin caseit becomesa thingof past.If notnow,then when.If notus,who
14.虹口区假如你是李华,你的美国挚友()来信说,要在圣诞节期间来沪旅游他在网上选中了三个景点Stephen外滩、豫园和东方明珠他来信征求你的看法请你依据自身阅历,建议他舍弃其中的一个景点(要说明放弃理由);并举荐一个新的景点供他参考(说明举荐理由)留意作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级等真实信息第一篇Dear Stephen,On hearingthat you are planning to visit Shanghai duringyour Christmasholiday,Id like to giveyou someadvicebased on my experience.There aretwo aspectsaccounting formy advice.Initially,thevisit to the Oriental Pearl TV Towerin youroriginal planisntmy optimalaction.As thisscenic spotis out of fashion,and you will wastealot of timequeuing outside,its ordinaryandless attractivetour itemsarent worthyour wait.Whats more,I stronglysuggest that you shouldpay avisitto Shanghai Museum.The reasonsare as follows.On oneside,standing in the centerof Shanghai,Shanghai Museumis easyto getby variousmeansofpublic transportation.On theotherside,huge amountsof precious ancient exhibits are displayedin it,presenting the high professionandhighfame ofShanghaiMuseum.Only byvisiting itcan youget ageneral ideaof Shanghai,which containsboth modernfacilities andancientculture.Therefore,Id appreciateit verymuch ifyou wouldaccept mysuggestion.Sincerely yours,Li Hua其次篇Dear Stephen:Nothing canexceed myjoy ofhearing you will traveltoShanghai during the Christmas.I amfirmly convincedthat youshouldntgoto the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.And I really suggest you going to the Shanghai Centre.There arethree reasonsasfollowscan accountformy decision.First andforemost,the Oriental Pearl TVTower iscrowedwith peopleevery dayand it is quietoutofdate.For another,its notthe mostfamous placein Shanghai.Last butnot least,the Oriental Pearl TVTower isnot worthvisiting because its ticketis quietexpensive andyou maycant seetheview as your expectation.I reallysuggestyougoing to the ShanghaiCentre isbecauseitsthenewlandmark in Shanghai.And itsthe tallestbuildingin Shanghai.You can have abird eyeview whenyou attheShanghaiCentre.I wasvery happythat you will come.And I hope mysuggestion willhelp you.I hopethat you will have a mosthappytime during the travel.Sincerely yours,LiHua第匚篇/,—*/ntjDear Stephen:Im gladto hearfrom youthatyouwill come to visit ShanghaiduringtheChristmas.And asfor youroptions,mysuggestions areasfollows.Primarily,asanative in Shanghai,there areplenty ofsceneries andyouwillcertainly enjoyyour trip.I have alreadyseen thethese spotlightsyou hadchosen and I dontreally recommendthe Yu Garden sinceyou havevisited the Bund andtheOrientalPearl TVToweras yourdestinations.On onehand,the TVTower is approximately oppositeto the Bund asyoucan bothsee themby takinga ferryovertheHuangpu Riverrather thanwasting quantitiesof time to goto Yu Garden.On theother hand the Yu Garden isnot asoccupied asthe Bundis,thus,I recommendthe1933Old Factory.It is also nearfrom the formertwo spotsand canfill yourimagination ofthe Chinesehistory.In otherword,the activeatmosphereeverywhere willarouse yourpleasure ofthe holiday.In anutshell,I willgreatly appreciateit ifyou could take myadvice.Sincerely yours,Li Hua第四篇Dear Stephen,Im happyto hearfrom yourletter.As wesaid,itsagood choiceto travelinShanghaiduring Christmasholiday.Ifgive methree optionsto choose,my opinionis give up theYuGarden.My reasonis following:even ifyouwillgo toShanghaiin Christmas,I think theBundand OrientalPearlTVTower aremore suitableto theatmosphere ofChristmas.YuGardenisatraditional ancientscenic spot.To my experience,apart fromtheBundand OrientalPearlTVTower,Ialso suggestNanjing Road.Because itsShanghais famouslabel,youcango shoppingthere.Whats more,in Christmas,Nanjing Roadwill holdmany salesabout Christmas.You alsocan enjoy the nightshow everywhere.To sumup,Im looking forward to your wonderfulvisit inShanghai,and hopeyou to take myadvice intoaccount.See youin ChristmasDay!Sincerely yours,LiHua老师版Dear Stephen,Im soexcited toknow thatyou aregoingto visitShanghaiduring Christmas.For thethree touristattractions—theBund,YuGardenandtheOrientalPearl Tower,Idlike to recommendyou tovisit thefonner twoand addShanghaiXintiandi as another destination.My suggestionto cutouttheOrientalPearlTower fromthe listare basedon thefollowing reasons.As you are afraidofheights andfeel dizzyinahigh-rise elevator,it isnot suitableforyou tovisitthe468-meter-high building.Whats more,the viewingplatform in theOrientalPearlToweris madeof glass,which makesfrightening tolook down.The reasonwhy TsuggestyouvisitShanghaiXintiandi isthatit is thefashionable landmarkof Shanghai,full ofbarstradition andmodem culturesis sureto appealtoyou.Ihopeyouwilltake myadvice intoconsideration and ImThe familythat playslookingforward to meeting youinShanghai.together sometimesYoursLiHuaand cafes.At themeantime,youcanenjoythetraditional buildingsof Shanghai.The goodcombination of内容须包含简要描述图片内容;
1.简要分析父母陪伴孩子的时间越来越少的缘由;
2.结合自己的经验,谈谈父母多陪伴孩子对其孩子的影响
3.Asisvividly describedinthepicture,54%of parentsdevote lessthan3hours toplaying withtheir children.Nowadays,itisa commonphenomenon that an increasingnumber ofparents spendless timeaccompanying theirfamilies.There areseveral reasonsaccounting for the phenomenon.To beginwith,withthe development ofthe intellectualeconomy,facedwiththe fiercecompetition amongcolleagues,parents have to takesome coursesfor furtherstudy andacquire morequalifications duringtheir weekendsandholidays soas tobe promotedand raisesalaries.Furthermore,due tothe popularityof electronicproducts,some parentsareaddicted tosmart-phones orcomputers intheir sparetime instead of keepingtheir childrencompany.Eventually,some parentshave part-time jobsafter workto supportthe familydue tothehighexpenses,such astutoring,Wechatbusiness orwaiters andso on.As farasI amconcerned,my parentswere verybusy withwork andearned aliving duringmy childhood.Thus,Ibecame independentof thembut feltlonely.So eagerwas Ito drawtheir attentionand loveatthe bottom of my heart.Interms ofmy experience,I stronglyrecommend thatparents shouldcommit more time toaccompanying theirchildrenhowever busythey are.Not onlycan ithaveapositive onshaping their personality butalso isbeneficial totheir mentalandphysical health.Nothing ismore importantthan parents9love.To realizethe goals,much efforthas beenput inthroughout theyear.First of all,I changedmy attitudestowardsvarious subjects.Ive spentmore timeon them,as youmight alreadyknow,and tryto findmy ownstrength andweaknessesand strivedhard toovercome myweak points.In addition,Ive foundmy ownpace ofstudying,which Iregardasthe most preciousreward ofthis yearseffort.Secondly,I begantotakea moreactive part in sportsthis year.Itook everyopportunity I havetoexercise,andtakesports lessonsatagym nearmy apartment.Though I havent losemuchweight,I feelmyself muchhealthier thanever before.To concludehow Ivemade theseprogress,here comesmy yearsmotto:no pains,no gains.No matterhow harditmight be,stick tothe goaland neverquit,and neverdream ofshortcuts tosuccess.So ifyou want to achievesomething,just tryhard,no matterwhat theresult mightbe,youre surelygoingtobenefit fromtheprocess.Good luckeveryone,and点评I wishyouahappy,successful newyear in2023!241words有读者意识,明确知晓是在挚友圈发的年度总结,所以开头结尾很应景1,段落结构总体比较清楚,符合作文题目要求2,第一段告知了自己的两个年度目标1其次段中有总体句、标记词如便利读者阅读但总体表达都比较模糊,建议可2first ofall,in addition,以更加清楚化详细化变更的行为不详细是因为目标不详细导致的;特殊是其次点,假如学生把目标定位,今年我要参与多少节健身课,或者我要完成多少公里的跑步,那么行为可以更详细,对是否可以达到自己年度目标的检测也可以更明确第三段的阅历总结与之前努力的匹配度不高假如要写那么其次段里应当有详细的自3no pains,no gains,己在遭受瓶颈或者难以坚持的时候是如何咬牙坚持下来的建议可以另起一段4Good luck文本字数偏长3,7+6+3=16At the beginningofthis year,I havemadeup my mind to achievea goal.That wasI hopedthat Icould losemyweight.With thepassing by,I haveachievedmygoal.The followingaresome ofmyconclusion ofthis objective.To reachmy objective,I workedout aseries ofplans.To beginwith,I designeda healthydiet menu,which excludedunhealthyfoods that I wasfond ofbefore.Thats thebasic oflosing weight.Secondly,I wentto parkor sportingplacesregularly todo varioussports.As weall know,the moreexercise youdo,the moreheats youwill consume.Last butnotleast,I tookan activepart in every kinds of schoolactivity which can not only helpme loseweight butalso enrich my life.From thisexperience,1conclude thatonce youhaveagoal,you shouldstick toevery hardshipso thatyou mayreachthe mountaintop.The processmaybe full ofdifficulties andyou arelikely want to giveup.Go ahead,and thenyouwill点评find there is nothing can hitdown you.191words段落结构比较清楚,符合作文题目要求b其次段中的标记词不恰当第三个努力的行为2,to beginwith,secondly,last butnot leastI tookan activepart in的内容不恰当,部分与every kindsof schoolactivity whichcan notonly helpme loseweight butalso enrichmylife.主题无关如enrichmylifeo第三段的总结基本与其次段的努力行为没有关系依据其次段的内容,阅历应当是管住嘴,迈3,to general,开腿字数偏多,建议左右4,1605+6+2=13At the endof2023,1cant helpthinking theaim what I haveset aboutmakingagreat professin mathbefore the2023come.Math isa terriblefor me tostudywell,lb study math well,as1firmly believe,only bypracticing more,can Igain agood mark.In orderto realizethis aim,I getup earliereveryday so thatI canhavemoretime todothe mathexercise.I askteachermany questionsabout themath.My motheralways encouragemetostudy mathwhen itcomes tothe problemofmath.I alwaysfeel nervous,because I think itis verydifficult for metostudy mathwell.But beingencouraged bytheparents andteacher Ihave confidence.Finally,I realizedit.I wantto sharemyexperiencetothe students whichhave the same problemas me.Practice makesperfect.If wewantgain agoodmarkwe shouldpractice more.162words点评涵盖了作文题目要求的三个部分1,其次段的内容须要重新梳理,做了三个努力每天早起做数学题目;有问题勤问老师;心理焦虑时向妈2,a.b.c.妈倾诉要说我做了什么,而不是文中My motheralways encouragemetostudymathwhenitcomestotheproblem ofmath.o由此,第三段的阅历总结是;多向他人求助3,a.practice makesperfect b.4+4+l=9The yearof2023will beover.Ialwaysthink itisayear with my ambition.I stillrember theday which is the first of
2023.On thatday Ipraied Icould get higher scoresinthetest.I mademyplanto getclose tothe topoftherank.For thesake ofgood marks,whatImusthaveisaserious attitude.It wasthe mostimportant thingsfor meto insisttheplan.I decidedtoreadbooks ofEnglish.It wasthe mostdifficult subjectfor me.I recitedthe wordsand vocabularydayby day.And thereading is an anotherproblem.Because ofthe lackof vocabularyI couldntunderstand thepassageclearly.I startedreading theEnglish lessonsineverymorning.Thats goodday for methatIcouldnever forget.Although I still notget myplan,Istillwantto gethigherscore innext exam.It wasmy ambition,I believeI candoit nextyear.Even thoughthe lifeis toughtome.179words点评结构性缺失,没有“阅历总结二1,其次段的内容须要重新梳理.每天背多少单词;每天早晨读多少时间英语;.每周或每两周或每个月2,ab.c读本英语书
12.普陀区学校图书馆美丽的学习环境和丰富的文献资源为学生们综合素养的提升供应了良好的平台为了进一步提高图书馆的服务水平,图书馆现向学生们征集建议假如你是李华,写信给图书馆负责人对图书馆的现状进行分析,并就此提出一些好用性的改进建议Dear Sir,In responseto yourcollecting suggestionsto furtherimprove ourschool librarysservice quality,I amwriting toputforward myhumble advice,hoping tobe ofsome value.Our schoollibrary,with beautifulenvironment anda widerange ofbooks andreference materials,serves asa goldenplatformto promotestudents overallability.However,there arestill someproblems remainingunsolved.The availableseatsare alwaystight,some vacantones areoccupied bystudents withtheirpersonalstuff andto makethings evenworse,some ofthem donot appearinthelibrary atall.Besides,sometimes itis noisybecause thediscussion areaisnotseparated,which makesstudents whilelearning hardto concentrate.Also,the networkin ourlab doesntwork wellthat itsnot easytohave accesstoitwhen weare collectinginformationonline.For theabove situation,I suggestan exclusiveroom shouldbe appointedasameeting roomwhere students areallowed todiscuss.Moreover,rules shouldbe made about theusage ofthe seatsthatifone personleaves hisseat over20minutes,the seatcanbe available toothers.And ifpossible,put somefund toupdate ourexisting network.I wouldbe soglad ifmyadviceis adopted.I appreciateyour devotiontotheconstruction ofour libraryand mayourlibrary bebetter andbetter.Sincerely yoursLiHua
3.徐汇区俗话说“万事开头难”All things are difficult before they are easy.你是否同意这一说o法?请用英语写一篇短文,内容包括你对这句俗语的理解;
1.结合生活中一个详细事例加以说明
2.留意请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称范文1【上中一模最高分分】20As anold sayinggoes,“All thingsare difficultbefore they are easy.The widespreadnotion revealsthe truththat wearelikely toencounter setbackswhen westart todo somethingbut if we facethem with perseverance anddetermination,we willfindtherest ofthe workeasier.Personally,I amstrongly infavour ofthe proverband my own experiencecan wellserve ascase inpoint.When I wasa SeniorOne student,I madeup mymind tosetupa sciencefiction communityin ourschooLI thoughtitwouldbe apieceof cake,but thefirst fewweeks followingmydecisionturned outtough.To mydisappointment,few studentsshowedinterest inthe community.Filled withthe bitternessof failure,I wasalmost goingto giveup butthebottomofmyhearturged meto keepcalm andgo on.After weeksof struggleand everypossible meanstried,I managed to findseveralmembers andonce westarted tohold activities,more studentsbecame interestedand joinedour community.What canbe learntfrom myexperience isthat perseverancecarries trueweight inour pursuitof success.Life isneverlike thosefairy talesand wein realityall tendtomeetfrustrations andsetbacks inour lives.Tricky asthe situationmightseem inthe beginning,we mustalways bearin mindthat“Every cloudhas asilver liningand ourefforts wontgo invain.Nevertheless,ifwegiveuphalfway,chances arethat wellnever seethe easinessfollowing thedifficulties andhe whoiseasily beatentotheground byhardship iscertain toend upachieve nothing.To sumup,the saying“All thingsare difficultbefore theyare easyusaperfect reminderthat thingsall seemtough atthe beginning.Faced withdifficulties,we shouldcheer upand workwithperseverance.Thus,success isbound tobewithin armsreach.9+9+2334words范文2It issaid that:all thingsare difficultbefore they9re easy”,I couldntagree withit more.Life isno plainsailing,nothingcanbe achievedwith easeunless youhave thequality ofdevotion andperseverance.Once Iwent fishingwithmy father.Initially,I wasvery excitedand full of confidence,figuring Fishing,how hardcanit beYou justsit thereand waitfor thefish tobite.Ifs apiece ofcake/However,asyoucan guess,I hadsat thereforalmost onehour,yet Igot nothing.Soon I was distraughtand impatient.Just when I wasabout toquit,myfatherturnedaround andsaid,“Be focusedand wait.Having nothingelse todo,I didwhathesaid.I calmedmyself downandre-concentrated on the pole.Two hourslater,I gainedmy reward.The experiencehas indeedtaught mesomething.That isall thingsare difficultbefore they9re easy.As longas youdevoteyourself andhang on,youll succeed.范文3The oldsayinggoeslike allthingsaredifficultbefore theyare easy,“which suggeststhat thehardest timeoneneeds gothrough isthebeginningofatask.As forme,I simplyhold theopposite opinion.Personally.I believethat itsalways easyto makea resolutionbuthard tocarry itout strictly.Because ofthe commonpassion atthebeginning,efforts arewillingly made.Nevertheless,itis perseverancethat isneeded tocomplete it.The topicnaturally remindsmeofthe dayswhen Istruggled forphysical examination,in whichIneedtoget a highscoretobe addicted to my dreaminghigh school.I makeupmymind firmlythree monthsbeforetheexam thatI wouldgojogging everynight andkept ondoing sofor onemonth.When theinitial passionfaded andthe tirednessstroke meeveryevening.Iwasso eagertotakea breathfromthe exhausted trainingand almostgave uptheplan.It wasthe strong-willpower thatkept megoing on.This unforgettableexperience taughtme theimportance ofperseverance,which confirmsmethatthings areespeciallydifficult inthe middlestage.范文4As thefamous sayinggoes“All thingsare differentbefore theyareeasy.From my perspective,the proverbmeansthat wereall inexperiencedand mightmeet numerousfrustrations beforehandling thetask well.There isno exceptionthatwe havetogothrough acertain periodto familiarizeourselves withthe practice,during whichthe perspectiveis mostrequired.Take myself asanexample,once Iwas assignedtodelivera speechonmyEnglish learningmethod.Never hadI gotsuchexperience before,Iwas totally overwhelmedbythetask.Despite theshyness andlack inconfidence,I knowit clearthat the capabilityof expressingoneself tothe publicisofgreat importancein futurework.Therefore,I startedto practicetryingto keepoff nervousness.I lookedout forvideos onTED tomusic,the gestureof speakersand spokealoud beforemyparents.Thanks to these hardships,!managedto give asatisfying speech.One mustbe equippedwith enduranceand faithfulnessduringthecourse ofexploration.Few ofus areborn tobegenius.4杨浦区.马拉松竞赛须要志愿者发放矿泉水,学校校庆须要招募引导员请你从中选取一个感爱marathon好的志愿者岗位,写信给负责老师完成报名,并在信中详细谈谈你的理由范文1Dear sir,Hearing that the marathonmatch andschool celebrationneed alotofvolunteers andguides,I thinkI amqualifiedfor theposition ofguides andit willbe mygreat honortodothe job,so Iwrite toyoutoenter for the guide.First,1haveagreat sense of direction,which enablesmetolead actorsand actressto arriveat theirpositionswithout difficulties.Its veryessential whenthe backof stageis crowdedwith peopleand differentkindsofdecorationsand allthe performersare hurryingto dressthem upand get their neededthings ready.Second,Ihave the experienceof beinga guidebefore and I knewhow todeal withunexpected accidentsandmistakes.Such experienceis helpfulto calmmyself downto arrangethings in order.Besides,I amfamiliarwithmyschoolmates andhavegreat abilitiesto communicatewith them,which makesit possibleformeto findthe rightpersonand talkto them to relievetheir nervefortheperformance.According toalltheabilities above,I thinkIm suitablefortheposition and1really hopethatyoucan give me achanceto usemy powerto adda touchto ourSchool Celebration.Thank youfor readingmy letter.Yours sincerelyLiPing范文2Dear Sir,Ive learntthat ourschool isrecruiting guidesforthecelebration ofschool anniversaryandImwriting to give aself-recommendation.First ofall,an acutesenseofdirection andmy familiaritywith allthe locationson campusput mean advantage.Considering thatsome ofour alumnusmay takea longand tiresomejourney toattend ourcelebration,Iamsure thatmyair ofdelight willsweep themoff tirednessinno time.Besides,informing themofthechange inrecent yearsand sharinganecdotesabouttheschool canremind themof theirprecious memorieshere sothat theywillnolonger beshrouded inasense ofunfamiliarity.Furthermore,itismy outstandingcommunicationskillsand abilityto articulatethat distinguishme.I wouldntforget toleave themprivate spacefor nostalgiaafter fulfillingmy obligations.Iwouldbegreatlyobliged ifyou wouldallow me this goldenopportunity toenhance mysocial skillsand tocontributetotheasavolunteer.Yours sincerelyLiPing范文3Dear Sir,Iamwriting to apply forthe volunteerwho givesmineral water to marathonrunners.Why ithink amqualified for thisposition canbe concludedinthefollowing threeaspects.First andforemost,i aman experiencedchoice bothin marathonand inthe workof volunteering.Although i havenever runa marathonbefore,i haveaccompanied myuncle toattend thisevent formany times,soiam quitefamiliar withtherunning routeand somecommon knowledgeofit.Second,i possessthe knowledgeof firstaid andand havegreaterpatience withpeople.Once somethinghappens,i willbe ableto givea helpinghand tothe medicalteam toreduce risktolargest extent.Its alwaysadvisable tomake fullpreparations forfear ofunexpected accidents.As thejob requiresstandingfor along timeinthesunlight,waiting forevery participateto passby,patience isundoubtedly amust,which isfortunatelymy merit.Last butnotleast,ihaveastrongand healthybody whichenable meto standthe hotweather andtheexhaust,keepinghelping theparticipants untilthe marathon is over.Ireallyrespect theparticipants notonly fortheir doggedperseverance butalso fortheir hugecourage tosign upformarathoniwish oneday icouldtakepartinthe eventas well.But beforethat,i feellike servingasavolunteer tocontributemyowneffort soastoshow myrespect.Hope iwillbeyour firstchoice.Yours sincerelyLiPing范文4Dear sir,Ive heardthatthecoming marathonrace needsvolunteers tohelp givewatertoathletes.Im interestedin itandIhopeI couldbe offeredthis position.Ihaveto admitthat Vma hugefan ofmarathon.But sinceFm notthat suitablefor suchexhausting sport,I cantenter theracemyself.So Iwanttojoin thevolunteer teaminordertogetclose tosuch anexciting event.It wouldbeagreatexperience ifI wereabletobe chosenandtofeel theheat ofthe raceandtheenthusiasm ofthe attendants.Besides,I dohave experiencesin volunteeringduring amarathon.I didit severaltimes inthepastfew years.I knowhow togivethe waterwithout disturbingthe athletes.Its always better tohave anexperienced oneinstead ofseveralfreshmen whoarenotsure whenand wheretogivethe water.I believewe willbe ingood cooperation.So please,consider myapplication andgivemea chanceto provemyselfasan excellentvolunteer.Im lookingforwardto yourreply.Yours sincerelyLiPing
5.崇明区明启中学安排在寒假的年月日至年月日(年月日为中国春节)期间组织20232520232182023216一批学生到美国的结对学校进行为期两周的沟通学习,但详细的沟通内容还在研讨之中Jenison PublicSchool现学校要求想要参与的学生自行向负责该项目的王老师写申请书,并就沟通的内容提出建议,然后再由学校商讨确定沟通学生的名单假设你是该校学生李敏,想要参与该项目,给王老师写申请书你的申请书需包括想要参与该项目的愿望;想要参与该项目的理由;就沟通内容提出详细建议注文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校Dear Mr.WangIm Li Min.Hearing thatyouareplanningtoorganize agroup ofstudents toJenison Pubilc School,USA,foracademic exchange,Iwouldreally liketoapplyforthisopportunity.My parentsandIhave discussedthe matterand theystrongly approve ofmyparticipation inthis activity,whichliterally meansI willmiss thefamily reunionthis SpringFestival.Since Ihave neverexperienced togo abroadforexchange study,Iwillsurely benefitquite alot bylearning andcommunication ina differentstudy atmosphere,let aloneJenisonPubilcSchoolenjoying thelongest history,the greatestreputation andthemostexperienced teachingmode.Problems suchas communicationbarriers andcultural shockmustbefelt andready tobe solvedduring twoweeks,sothat American students andIcanachieve mutualunderstandings inthe fieldofcultureand education.Whafs more,Ihavealready workout aschedule toenrich this program foryour furtherreference.A specialfoodplan isontheway forAmericanstudents.They willbe exposedtothewonderful ChineseCuisine,enabling themto haveataste ofa differentfood culture.The mostimportant ofall,Ihavea wishto representour students toenhancethe Sino-US relationship.Andpersonally,I firmlybelievethatwith suchadetermination,thisprogramwill improvemy studyinterest,and cultivateamore matureand independentpersonality.I sincerelyhopeyoucan givemethishonor.Iamlookingforwardto yourearly reply.Yours,LiMin长宁区6近年来,人工智能发展快速,人们日益关注对人类将来的影响马云认为,人类创Artificial IntelligenceAI建出的机器,不行能超越人类霍金则表示“人工智能的完全发展可能预示着人类的终结”Stephen Hawking你同意谁的观点,请说明理由范文1With thefast-paced development of ArtificialIntelligence,human-beings concernsabout itsinfluence arealsogrowing.While othersare persuadedinto MaYuns believingthatthemachines createdby human-beings cantexceedhuman intelligence,Iwillalways sticktomy personal opinionthatthesufficient development of ArtificialIntelligencemay causethe endof human-beings,thesameas StephenHawkings perspective.Firstly,many peopleonly haveseen theAls benefitsof chantingusabold coursetoamore convenientand easylife,but they havent seenthattheAI hasrobbed mostworkersjob,which ledthemtoa miserablelife offailing tosupporttheir families.Then ittriggered afresh argumentthat AIwould replaceus inevery industryand peoplefrom allwalks oflifemight losetheir jobs,being shortof incomeand evenfood.Secondly,I don*t believethatwecan alwayscontrol theAL Theproblem isthat nowwe justhave inventedit butreallyhavent knownabout whetherit hasits ownmindto think,while itactually knowswhat weare thinkingabout.If itisaware ofits abilityto damageus allby takingcontrol ofour life,wewillbe finishedeasily.All inall,we cantturn ablind eyetotheseconcerns.There isnot betterchoice thandoing somethingto changetheprevious situationsothatwecanspare peopletheir anxietyand livewiththehelp of AI conveniently.范文2With ArtificialIntelligence developingrapidly inrecent years,concerns overthe influenceof AIonourfuture lifehaveballooned.In JackMAs opinion,AI wontsurpass humanbeings anddominant the world,while fromStephenHarkings point of view,the completedevelopmentofAI maylead totheendof humandominance.I approveofthelatter opinion,although itsounds alittle bitincredible.First ofall,AI,though createdby humans,is superiorto humanbeings inmany fields.From thebasic mechanicalwork,in whichtheyaremore precisethan us,to thoseintelligence games,where AIpha Gogas beatentwo ofour world-classGo masters.These factsall indicatethe giganticpotential ofthedevelopmentofAI,and thus,I believeits possiblefbrAis tosurpass usinallrespects.Whafs more,Ais mayhavethewilling tooutweigh humanbeings.In astudy carriedout byscientists,two Aiscommunicatedwith eachother andeventually developedtheir ownlanguage.While theyarent fullydeveloped now,wemust keepalert aboutinsteadofjust chasingthe profits.Surely,Iamnot ignoringthe benefitsAis havebrought toour lifeor protestingagainst thedevelopmentofAis.Justremember that,a stitchin timesaves nine,keeping alertfromthebeginning isalwaysbetterfrom thanmaking upfor themistakesAis mayprobably make..松江区7目前,依据规定,上海中学生必需在三年内完成一项课题探讨才能拿到中学毕业文凭Project Research对此,大家看法不一请谈谈你对此规定的看法,并陈述你理由作文范文1According tothe newlyreleased regulations,only whenshanghai seniorhigh studentsfinish aproject researchinthree yearscan theyreceive thegreat educationdiploma.Many parentsmay holdthe viewthat itsa wasteof timedoing so,thus havingan adverseeffectonstudentsacademic performances.However frommyperspective,the benefitsoutweigh thedrawbacks interms ofall-rounddevelopment.My reasonsareasfollows.First andforemost,students tendto learnknowledge andskills fromthe textbookssothattheyhaveno ideahowtoapply whattheyve learnedtopractice.Fortunately,thenewreform offersthem aplatformwhere they can combinetheory withpractice,which isagoodway toenhance theirmental andphysicaldevelopment.Secondly,what students can acquirefromthe research ismore thanspecific knowledgein onecertain field.Only inthis waycan theyget toknow thesignificance ofteam spiritsand somethingnew aboutthis amazingworld.In conclusion,I stronglyapproveofthis regulationin thatstudents canhave accessto whatthey desireto learnandimprove theirall-round developmenttoalarge degree.作文范文2Aside fromacademicachievements,Shanghai high schoolstudentsare requiredto accomplish a Project Research inthreeyears,otherwise,they cannotgetthe diploma forgraduation.Although manythink illofthe requirement,I supportitbecause showsan attemptto sparkstudents9underlying qualities.First,Project Researchmotivates studentstothinkindependently andto learnteamwork.Since ProjectResearchcovers allwalks oflife,students canselect asocial phenomenonoraspecific sciencesubject tostudy.Moreover,ifstudents generatea researchgroup,theycanlearn howto copewith cooperation.Second,it fostersthe spiritof exploring.Instead ofjust lookinghow itworks,studentsareforced todo iton theirownand exploretheir projectsthoroughly togetasatisfying result.Third,it equipsthemforuniversities orcolleges.Contrary tothe routinestudy ofhigh schoolstudents,universitiesdemand self-discipline andexploration.Its childishto waitfor teachersto tellyou whatbook toread andwhat willbeexamined.In brief,ProjectResearchisaninnovative approachto urgestudentstobroaden theirhorizon andto escapefrom theheavystudy burden.作文范文3According tothe rules,highschoolstudents inShanghai aresupposed toaccomplishaproject researchwithin threeyears;otherwise theywont gettheir highschool diplomas.There areseveral advantagesin project research.The firstadvantage isthat researchactivity canprepare studentsforuniversity education.The secondone isthat researchcan trainstudents waysof thinking.However,the negativeaspectsof projectresearch arealso apparent.Students9timeislimited andstudying occupiesmostoftheir time.As aresult,theydont haveenough timefor ahigh-quality projectresearch.They maycopy fromeachother.As tome,Ithinkthe disadvantagesoutweigh theadvantages.Nowadays,studentscanset asidenotimefor projectresearch.Authorities hadbetter havefurther discussions.作文范文4According toa latestregulation,thediplomafor seniorHigh Schoolcan onlybe issuedafter the studentsfinishing aprojectresearchwithin3years.It dividescriticizers:some applaudtherequirement,while othersare critical.As forme,Iwouldliketojoin thelatter group.Firstly,under thecurrent teachingscheme,the studentsare requiredtolearnup to10subjects,which hasalreadyserved asa heavyburden formost students.Therefore,if themust isexerted indiscriminately,itwillundoubtedlycombine thepressure forthose students.Whats more,under thecurrent educationemphasizing variousstandards forjudgingthe students5qualities,its bettertoselect variedcontents concerningtheresearch,thestudentsresults ofwhich areopen.Consequently,itisdefinitelyunreasonable tosimply relatethe issuingofthediploma towhether theresearches arefinished.In aword,the regulationnotonlyexercises extrapressure tothestudents,butalsoproves tobe againstthepresent variety-encouraging education..宝山区8某英文报正举办题为『的征文竞赛请你依据征文题目写一篇短文,参与该征“Apersonal habitdliketochange”文活动,详细要求如下
①简述你想变更的这一行为习惯;
②说明你变更这一习惯的理由及措施范文一A personalhabit IdliketochangeRecently,Fve alwaysconsidered changingmy personalhabit,that iswatching TVtoo longafter school.Fromthelong-term pointofview.I dothink thatI oughttotakeup readingratherthanjust watchingsoap operason TV.My reasonsare listedas followsIn thefirstplace,I dontthinktheshows ofevery kindare reallyworth watching.In addition,I findthat amajorityof themTV offerstomecant playan extraordinaryrole asthe startingpointofthe voyages.Compared withTV,bookscan shapethe worldwhich isfullofemotional,imaginative andhistorical,opening upa bridgewhichislinked tothe realworld.Moreover,as isknown toall,setting too much timeaside justfor watching TV isa wasteof time,especially Iminthe criticalperiod ofSenior Three.Inthelong term,it mayhaveabad effectonmy academic studieswhenIlose myselfintheworld TV creates.Obviously,watching TVhas muchmore disadvantagesthan advantages.So Ishall spendmoretime inreading muchmore meaningfulbooks andsparing noeffort tostudy better.At thislevel ofanalysis,it mustbeawiser choiceformetochangemypersonalhabit-watchingTVtoo long.To putitinanutshell,IhopethatIcan succeedin highlightingsomething moremeaningful insteadof puttingtoomuchemphasison theworldTVcreates forme whichis comparativelyskin-deep,compared withthe treasurein booksand happinessofstudy.范文二A personalhabit IdliketochangeIt isthecasethat wateris tofish whatthe phoneis tome.With thedevelopmentofelectronic devices,the smartphoneissoappealing thatI canthelp butsurf theinternet onit beforeIgoto bed.However,this badhabit hasmadeadifference tomy study,whichcanbe concludedfrom2aspects.Obviously,itshortens mysleep timegreatly.As aresult,my efficiencyand passionfor studyare cutdown owingtothetiredness andexhaustion.From anotheraspect,playing phoneitself maydistract myconcentration frommyacademicstudy,whichleads tomy failureintheexams.Accordingly,Ihaveto sparenoefforttogetridofthis badhabit.As faras Imconcerned,it mightbe usefulto turnoffthe phonebefore bedtime.Consequently,thereisno doubtthatIwill fallasleep soonand havea soundsleep,whichare ableto empowermetobefullof energynext morning.But whatIamsupposedtofocus onistheenhancement ofmyself-regulation.Only whenI learnto managemy timewell,canIreally arrangemy scheduleinaproper way.In conclusion,the personalhabit Idliketochange doesharm tobothmyhealth andmystudy,whichIwill makeupmy mindto remove.范文三:。