书面表达之求助信导学案-高三英语二轮复习

书面表达之求助信答案（•辽宁省六校协作体高三期初联考）假定你是李华，将参加学校举行的英文演讲2019比赛，已写好演讲稿给教你英语口语一年并已回国一个月的外教写封邮件，Mr.Daniel请他帮你审核稿件并做出必要的修改注意.词数左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯11002审题I.Review:体裁要点

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4.参考句式首段ILX ImLi Huafrom yourEnglish writing class last term.X ImLi Hua,a studentfrom yourwriting classlastterm.I amLi Hua,a studentcurrently studyingin yourwritingclass.X Fmapplying for a part-time jobat aforeign companyduring thesummer vacation.XWith thesummer vacationaround thecorner,I intendto applyforapart-time jobin acertainforeign company,which Ibelieve will be agolden opportunityfor mypersonalgrowth.X I have just completed my application letter and resume.I have justcompleted my application letterand resume,which hasbeen attachedto thisletter.写作目的

3.X Im writing toseek yourassistance.X Fmwriting toseek yourassistance,hoping thatyou cankindly offer me somerevisiontips regardingmy applicationandresume.X Fmwriting to ask whetheryou areable to do me a favorto offerme somerevision tips.中间段主旨句

1.X Hereare myproblems.X Hereare theproblems thathave beendisturbing melately.X Iwish youwould be so kind as togive mesome suggestions/help onthe followingproblems.要点内容

2.文字1X Forone thing,I wouldappreciate itif youcould help me improvemy vocabularyandgrammar usedin myapplicationletter,which isof greatsignificance to me.X Imafraid thatthere mightbe somethe grammarand vocabularymistakes inmy干扰.application materialsas aresult ofmother tongueinterference格式2X Foranother,would youbesokindasto tellme ifmyapplicationletter hasbeen writteninthe correctappropriate formatXTheres likelyto besomething wrongwith theformat consideringthat itsmy veryfirstattempt atthis typeof formalwriting.结尾段Hopefully,your kindhelp wouldbe offeredto me.Thanks for your considerationkindness.Looking forwardto yourreply atyour earliestconvenience.［常见困难句型拓展］

1.1have trouble/difficulty in doing sth.,which hasannoyed/bothered/upset mefor quitealong time.

2.1find itextremely challengingfor meto do sth.

5.1have somedifficulty withsth.写前IL Pre-writing套用词组.做某事有麻烦给某人帮助

12.have trouble/difficulty indoing sth.do sb.a favor/give sb.a hand寻求帮助遇到一些问题

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4.ask for help/seek forhelp encountersome problems面临困难.忙于做某事

5.6be faced with difficultiesbe busydoing sth./be engagedindoingsth.渴望做某事集中精力

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8.be anxiousto dosth./long todosth.concentrate on/focus on套用句式我写信想请您帮我一个忙

1.I amwriting toask you todo me a favor.I amwriting toask youto lend/give mea hand..我遇到三个困扰我的问题首先，……其次，……最困扰我的是……2I amencountering thieeproblems which trouble mea lot.To beginwith,・・・Whats more,...What troublesme mostis....因此，我将感激不尽，如果你能提供些怎样克服以上问题的建议3Therefore,I willbe muchobliged ifyou canoffermesome adviceon howto overcometheproblems above.词组参加演讲比赛.修改

1.2attend aspeech contestdo somecorrections.抽出时间做某事审核稿件

24.spare time todosth.go throughthe draft句式.语言无法表达我对你的思念1Words failto convey my missing foryou.No wordsare strongenough to conveymymissing foryou.Beyond descriptiongoes mymissingforyou.仿写语言无法表达我的焦虑/高兴Words failto conveymy anxiety/delight..自你回国已经一个月了2Words failto conveymy anxiety/delight.仿写自你在这儿读书已有三个月了It isthree monthssince youstudied here.下周我将参加学校组织的英语演讲比赛

3.仿写上个星Next weekI willattend anEnglish speechcontest organizedby myschool.期，我参加了在学校举行的篮球比赛Last weekI tookpart ina basketballgame heldin theschool.写中III.While-writing谋篇布局三段式.说明写信的目的一一寻求帮助1详细地说明自己的困难

2.表示感谢并期盼回复

3.写作模板:Dear XX,叫I amLi Ha Seniar3student studyingin YumianProvince.Words failtoconvey求助的事项方面.my worryingfeeling whenI havetrouble inBathed inan anxiousatmosphere,Imwritingthis lettertoask youtodomeafavor.I amfacedwiththree problemswhichtroublemealot.To beginwith,...Whats more,...What troublesme mostis...Therefore,I willbe muchobliged ifyou canhelpme.Hopefully,your kind and timely help willbe offeredto me.I ampraying foryourprompt reply with full appreciation.Yours truly,Li Hua成篇Dear Daniel,（语言无法表达我对你的思念_____________________________________（自你回国已经一个月了）（我写信是想请after teachingus spokenEnglish fora year.你帮个忙）工下周我将参加学校组织的英语演讲比赛）Ihavecompleted myspeech draftbut_Faced withthe aboveproblems,Im eagerthat your kindand timelyhelp willbe offeredto me.I ampraying foryour promptreplywith fullappreciation.Yours truly,Li Hua写后（）III post-writing请检查你单词拼写、语法、上下文衔接、对某些句子进行润色和升华后，誉写在下面Deal Mi.Daniel,How timeflies!Its beena monthsince youwent backhome aftere yearsteaching usspokenEnglish.How areyou recentlyImwriting toaskyouforhelp.I willattend theannual EnglishSpeech Competitionheldin ourschool nextweek,and Ihavejustcompletedmyspeech draftHowever,Im notquitesure aboutthe sentencesand structuresused.I knowyou arean expertin thisfield,so wouldyoube kindenough tospare sometimetogo throughthem anddo somenecessarycorrection forme Thedetails arein theattachment.Hopefully,yourkindandtimelyhelpwillbeofferedtome.I ampraying foryourprompt leplywithfullappreciation.Best wishesto youand youifamily!Yours,Li Hua。