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上海市崇明区年中考英语二模试题分类汇编2021-2023书面表达2023年上海市崇明区中考二模英语试题(作文)(共分)VIL Writing20(以“一分耕耘一分收获”为题
84.Write at least60words onthe topic“No Gainswithout Pains写一篇不少于个词的短文,标点符号不占格)60成功的背后都凝聚着辛勤的付出请结合自己的亲身经历,分享你的一个“没有耕耘就不可能有收获”的故事(注意短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分)2022年上海市崇明区中考二模英语试题
十八、材料作文(以“在劳动中成长”
80.Write apassage ofatleast60words onthe topic“Grow upin labour为题,写一篇不少于个词的短文,标点符号不占格)60在日常生活中,每个同学都会参与一些社会公益劳动、学校组织的劳动活动或居家时的家务劳动等,相信你们在过程中都有所感悟和收获请你结合自身经历,谈谈你曾参与的劳动并分享一下你的所感所悟注意短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分
1.照抄阅读语篇不得分
2.2021年上海市崇明区中考二模英语试题(作文)(分)VIL Writing20(以三年以后为题写一遍不少于
84.Write atleast60words onthe topic“In threeyears time个词的短文,标定符合不占格)60你是否想象过,三年以后你的生活或者周围的世界会发生产怎样的变化?你对三年以后的自己周围的世界有怎样的期待?你能为此做些什么?(注意短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分)答案2023年上海市崇明区中考二模英语试题【答案】例文No Gainswithout PainsIthink thesaying nNopains,no gains.*means we cant getanywhere inlife ifwe dontwork hard.As weall know,scientists makeprogress onlyafter yearsof carefulresearch.We studentsget goodscoresafter monthsof hardwork.For example,I haveimproved my physics byputting inlots ofeffort.At school,I listenedto theteacher carefullyand tookdown lots of notesin class.And when I hadquestions,I askedmy physicsteacher ormy classmatesfor help.After school,I finished my physicshomeworkas soonas Igot home.Also,I didlotsofphysics exercises.Day byday,I wasmakingprogress inphysics andnow Imone of the topphysics studentsin myclass.In short,no pains,no gains.We willachieve successas longas wework hard.【详解】[总体分析]
①题材本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;
②时态时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主[写作步骤]第一步,简单说明“没有耕耘就不可能有收获”的含义;第二步,具体结合自身经历分享一下;第三步,最后作小结[亮点词汇]
①众所周知as weall know()比如2for example
③总之in short[高分句型](弓导的时间状©when Ihad questions,I askedmyphysicsteacher ormy classmatesfor help.whenI语从句)
②【(引导的时间状语从句)finishedmyphysics homeworkas soonas Igot home.as soonas2022年上海市崇明区中考二模英语试题.例文80Grow upin labourInour dailylives,we usuallytake partin somelabour activities,such asvolunteer work,housework andso on.I want to sharemy experiencewith you.Last weekend,our schoolheld anactivity.It wasto helpelder peoplein OldPeoples Home.Wegot thereat about9a.m.Then wecleaned theirrooms,told funnyjokes andsang somesongs.From theirsmilingfaces,T foundthat thisactivity wasso meaningful.From thisexperience,I realizethat doinglabournot onlymakes othersget pleasure,but alsodevelops ourbasic skills.If youwanttohave atry,please takeaction fromnow on.【详解】.题干解读本文是一篇材料作文以为题,写一篇短文,谈谈你1“Grow upin labour”参与的劳动经历以及所感所悟.写作指导本文应采用一般现在时和一般过去时,人称以第一人称为主来叙述分为三段式2第一段引出主题;第二段介绍自己在老人院做义工的经历,并描述自己的感受;第三段呼吁i读者从现在开始做起写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误2021年上海市崇明区中考二模英语试题In threeyears,timeThere isno denyingthat the world ischanging fast.I dobelieve thatmy lifewill bedifferent inthreeyears*time.On onehand,it will be moreconvenient,wecanstudy at home.Whether wego toschool orstayathomedepends onour choices.Certainly,unlike thelast specialyear,we hadto studyon linebecauseofthevirus.On theother hand,the environmentmay becomeworse especiallywhite pollution.Sadly,The numberof peoplewho liketo throweverywhere isstill rising.I hopetheworldwillbemorebeautiful.To achievethis,I needto learnmore knowledgeabout howto protectthe environment.Call onmorepeople totake partin fightingagainst pollution.Only byworking togetherwill ourfuture bebetterin3years.【详解】题干解读该题目属于记叙文写作,在写作时可以分两段式来写,第一段点题,指出L在周末会做喜欢的事情放松自己;第二段描述自己在周末喜欢做的事情以及原因.写作指导本文应该用第一人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时为主,适当使用过渡词,文章2应保持层次清楚,内容馆满,表达流畅。