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高考英语作文常犯错误【注】以下各例中,a表示错误的或不宜提倡的句子,b表示正确的或值得模仿的句子
1.动词谓语的时态是否有错a We college studentshad enough time to take a part time job,no matterhow busywe wereb Wecollegestudents haveenoughtimetotakeaparttimejob,no matterhow busywe are...写议论文一般都是用现在时态只有举例,提到过去的事才会用到过去时a Thisstory happensin a farm whichis not far away from downtown.bThis storyhappened inafarmwhich wasnotfarawayfromdowntown.一般用过去时写个人经历的故事,在论述同一事情,即发生在同一时间里的事时,前后半句在时态上要保持一致
2.主语和谓语,名词和代词,以及人称是否保持一致a Theeating habitof Chinesepeople havechanged in the pastdecade.b Theeating habitof Chinesepeople haschanged in the pastdecade.a Nowfruits and vegetables can be seeneverywhere whenit is in season.b everywherewhenNow fruitsandvegetablescanbeseen theyare inseason.3修饰语是否放在正确的位置上.At theage ofsix,my fatherbegan togive meEnglish lessons.a When I wasfive yearsold,my fatherbegan togive meEnglish lessons.b句子,At theage ofsix放在这个位置上,变成了“我父亲六岁的时候”改变说法,不a管主语和谓语隔开多远,主语当中还有修饰成分,谓语要和真正的主语在数上保持一致可以解决这个问题writing skill,regular practiceis necessary.a Toimprove ones writing skill,one mustmake regular practice.不定式短语的逻辑主语决不是regular practice,为了把逻辑关系表b Toimprove one,s达清楚,要么把不定式短语改成If onewants toimprove hiswritingskill,要么把主句改成one mustmakeregularpractice.
4.表示相同的意思,是否用了平行语法结构a Withthe computer,one can do shopping,b Withbanking andread athome.the computer,one cando shopping,cando shopping,banking andreading athome.banking andread athome,用语法平行结构来衡量,用动词原形read是不妥的,为了和doshopping,do banking保持结构上平行,接下来的一个内容要用do reading.
5.可数名词与不可数名词是否用得正确a TVpresents uswith manyuseful informations.b TVpresents uswith alot ofuseful information还有evidence,advice,knowledge等都是不可数名词,都不能用复数另外,many,a greatnumberof,another,few等只能与可数名词配用Fn a great amountof,agreatdeal of,less,much,等应与不可数名词配用a Makingour citiesgreener is not aneasy work.b Makingour citiesgreener is not aneasy job.work用作可数名词是“作品”这类意思,而表示“工作”时,不可数同样,在Word hasbeen sentoutthat thosewho cheaton examswill bepunished.这个句子中,要用单数word表示“信息”a Eachpeople hashis ownopportunities.b Eachperson hashis ownopportunities.people作“人民”、“人们”解时,是集体名词,不能与each配用a people或peoples表示民族、国家在正式语体中也不能说less people,而应说few peopleo
6.冠词是否用得正确a Bookknowledge isimportant,but weshould alsolearn somethingin thesociety.b Bookknowledge isimportant,but weshould alsolearn somethingin society.用定冠词the,是特指意义,而这里没有这个特指意义同样,在WhenIwas in the highschool,I alwayshave abeautiful pictureof thecollege life中,两个the者B应去掉a Ifthere wereno electircpower,we wouldhave todo everythingby thehands.b Ifthere wereno electricpower,we wouldhave todo everythingby hand.表示用手by hand,走路on foot,上课in class,上学go toschool,住院at hospitable等,都不用定冠词a Ifthere wereno electricpower,factory wouldstop producinggoods,car,bus andtrain wou1dstop running.b Ifthere wereno electricpower,factories wouldstop producinggoods;cars,buses andtrainswould stoprunning.用可数名词时,要么前面有冠词the,a,an或代词his,her,my,要么以复数形成出现不能像中文名词那样没有语法变化
7.句子的主谓宾是否齐全a TVnow playsan importantrole inour dailylife,Because wecannot livewithout it.b TVnow playsan importantrole inour dailylife,because wecannot livewithout it.中文用“因为”引出的句子可以独立,但英语不行,作为从句,只能附属主句a Ifno electricity,all activitiessuch aswatching TVand seeingmovies willbe impossible.b Ifthere is no electricity,all activitiessuch aswathcing TVand seeingmovies willbeimpossible.if noelectricity如果没有电,但句中的no不是动词,也就是说这个从句缺了谓语
8.过渡词是否用得合适a Althoughan opportunityis rare,butwe mustbe readyto seizeit.b Althoughan opportunityis rare,we mustbe readyto seizeit.同样,汉语可以说“虽然但日,而英语要么用although,要么用but,两者不能同时用
9.词语的搭配是否正确a Westudents shouldlearn/study asmuch knowledgeas possible.bWestudents shouldacquire/obtain asmuch knowledgeas possible.“学习知识”是考生作文中经常要表达的,但不少人用错英语中能和knowledge搭配的是obtain,acquire,gain等c Witha risein thenumber of cars andbuses,traffic inShanghai hasbecome moreand morecrowded.d Witha riseinthenumber of cars andbuses,traffic inShanghai hasbecome increasinglyheavier.里的“速度快”,英语不说The speedofcarsis fast/quick.而是说“The speedofcarsishigh/fantastic.〃或〃cars aremuch faster./z
10.是否重复使用了表示意思的词语a In my opinion,I believethe presenteducational systemis inneed ofreform.b Inmy opinion,the presenteducation systemisinneed ofreform.I believe的意思已包括在Inmyopinion里了,用一个就可以了a Thereason whypeople chooseto liveinthecountry isbecause thereisnopollution nornoisethere.b Thereason whypeople chooseto liveinthecountry isthat thereisnopollution nornoisethere.reason,why,because都是指同一意思至少要去掉一个
11.词性是否用得正确a Eatmore vegetablesbecause theyare good foryour healthy.b Eatmore vegetablesbecause theyare good foryour health.a MissLi teachesour English.b MissLi teachesus English.
12.句子是否有明确的主语a Too easy or too difficultisnogoodforus.b The books which are tooeasy ortoo difficultare nogoodforus.Tooeasyortoodifficult是形容词短语,不能作主语,尽管汉语可以说“太容易或太难对我们都不利因此,加上Thebookswhichare,主语就有了a Reading books can acquire knowledge.b Throughreading onecanacquire knowledge.看上去句子有了主语Readingbooks,但这是假主语,因为acquireknowledge的主语需是人汉语的主语和谓语的关系可以是主题和评论的关系,可以说读书能获得知识但英语不行,一定要有逻辑主谓关系
13.一个句子是否确保只有一个动词a Peoplethink goto the movie will cost alot ofmoney.b Peoplethink thatgoing tothemoviewillcostthem alot ofmoney.汉语一个句子里可以集结几个动词,形成连动结构“到那里去看电影响”或兼语结构“叫我去看电影”,但英语不能这样用aThere aremany people take part in sports and games now.c Manypeopletakepart insports andgames now.同样,汉语可以说有许多人参加体育活动但英语一个句子只能保留主要动词,或用从句动词uThere aremany peoplewho takepartinsportsandgamesnow.。