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热点话题移动支付改变消费方式让生活更31方便备战年中考英语作文热点话题押题预2022【背景介绍】移动支付是指使用普通或智能手机完成支付或者确认支付,而不是用现金、银行卡或者支票支付买家可以使用移动手机购买一系列的服务、数字产品或者商品等移动支付是互联网时代一种新型的支付方式,其以移动终端为中心,通过移动终端对所购买的产品进行结算支付,移动支付的主要表现形式为手机支付对于消费者来说,我们可以在实体店直接扫描二维码,轻松付款而无需携带现金,无需找零,无需刷卡签字,很大程度上节约我们的时间,并且可以避免假币问题带来的麻烦加之这些第三方支付平台经常会在网上做一些满减、抢红包的活动,不仅给予我们优惠,更是给我们带来了很多乐趣;另外,通过移动支付的快捷转账,我们可以轻松地实现生活缴费、车票购买、手机充值等,真正做到足不出户也能办理各种业务;除此之外,第三方支付机构还具有财富管理、教育公益、购物娱乐,提供第三方服务等功能,来满足我们不同层次的需求,极大地丰富了我们的生活【典型范文】A某英文报正在举行以“如何看待手机支付”为题的征文活动请写一篇短文进行投稿,要点如下
1.简单快捷;
2.网购和商店购物都能使用;
3.个人信息不太安全;注意
①请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
②文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
③词数80〜100,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数It hasbeen moreand morepopular to pay withmobile phones.Different peoplehave differentopinionsabout it.Id liketo sharemy ideashere.All inall,I hopemobile phonepayment can be usedmore properly.【答案】It hasbeen moreand morepopular to pay withmobile phones.Different peoplehave differentopinionsabout it.Id liketo sharemy ideashere.Paying withmobile phonesbecomes popularbecause it is simpleand convenient.We dontneedcarry cash,worry aboutlosing moneyor receivingfake money.We canuse phones to paynot onlyinonline shopping,but alsoin storeshopping.However,there arealso disadvantages,such asthedisclosure ofpersonal information,the stealof bankcard information.In general,I thinkits advantagesoutweigh its disadvantages.More and more countriesaround theworldhave launchedmobile payment.It provesthe convenienceof it.All inall,I hopemobile phonepayment canbe usedmore properly.【详解】题干解读这是一篇话题作文要求根据题目“如何看待手机支付”和提示的内容完成作文写作时要注意语句通顺,语意连贯,紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡,要注意涵盖所给提示例文点评例文采用四段式;时态选用一般现在时;将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中,适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解,表达出自己的观点态度高分亮点短语:not only...but also...;such as;In general;around theworld等句型Paying withmobile phonesbecomes popularbecause it is simpleand convenient.使用了because引导的原因状语从句In general,I thinkits advantagesoutweigh its disadvantages.使用了省略引导词的宾语从句【点睛】首先认真审题,看清文章的要求和要点;其次,理顺自己的行文思路;再次紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡;最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等,还要注意是否出现语法错误,有无重复遗漏,大小写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等近年来,越来越多的人在超市、影院、餐馆等地方消费时,经常使用手机扫码支付移动支付mobile payment深受人们喜爱假如你是李华,学校即将开展以“Mobile PaymentChanges OurLife”为题的征文活动,请根据下列表格中的提示,介绍一下移动支付并呼吁人们理性消费日益流行;改变生活移动支付扫码支付;方便快捷举至少1个生活实例理智消费;购前三思学会节约;1消费观念按需购买要求
1.语言表达准确,短文连贯、通顺;2•短文应包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,不要逐句翻译;
3.词数80左右文章开头已给出,不计入总词数参考词汇扫码scan QR codes支付pay三思think twice理智wisely AMorerecently,mobile payment is likedby manypeople._____________________________________________【答案】Mobile PaymentChanges OurLifeMore recently,mobile paymentis likedby manypeople.It isbecoming moreandmorepopular inChina.It hasmade peoplesdaily lifevery convenient.Most ofus areused topaying by scanning QRcodes.By mobile payment,we canpay easilyand quicklywherever wego.We canhave dinnerin arestaurantand paybyscanning QR codeswith oursmart phones.In acinema,we canbuy ourtickets inthesame way.Mobile paymentis changingour life.However,we shouldspend moneywisely.First ofall,think twiceabout what we wantto buy.Next,learn tosave,buy whatwe canafford.Last butnot theleast,spend onwhatwereally need,dont buyeverythingwe want.【详解】
1.题干解读本文是一篇材料作文围绕“移动支付改变我们的生活”为题写一篇短文
2.写作指导本文主要用一般现在时分为两段式第一段介绍有关移动支付的情况,并举例说明这种支付方式的方便快捷;第二段呼吁人们要理性消费写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误C假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Jenny正在做一份关于中国移动支付mobile payment的问卷调查survey,你是她的重点采访对象.内容包括
1.你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的情况;
2.移动支付带来的好处;
3.你的看法参考词汇微信Wechat支付宝Alipay二维码QR code注意
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯Dear Jenny,How isyour surveyon mobile payment goingYours faithfully,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jenny,How isyour surveyon mobile payment goingIm gladI canhelp withit.It isgenerally believedthat Chinais thelargest mobile payment market.Nowhere elseis thecashlesstrend moreobvious thanin China.Most ofus areused topaying byscanningQRcodeswhatever webuy-books,clothes,and electronicdevices,to namea few,which isa glimpseinto thelifeof mostChinese likeme andmy family.With thewidespread useof mobile payment,Wechat orAlipay isthe mostconvenient andsafestway topay.We rarelyneed tocarry awallet orcash atall.Besides,never willwe worryabout gettingfakenotes orhaving tocount change.In short,mobile payment has greatlychanged peopleslife inChina.Personally,I thinkmobile paymentshould beencouraged.First,it haswon overconsumers withitsconvenience.Another advantageis thatthere areoften discountsif youmake mobilepayment,as majoronlinepayment platformsare competingto havemore consumersuse theirservice.I hopemy explanationcanbeof somehelp toyou.Wish yougood luck.Yours faithfully,Li HuaD假定你是李津,你在某英文网上论坛看到大家在讨论人们使用非现金支付越来越普遍的现象,你打算在论坛里跟帖讨论,内容包括1非现金支付的好处;2非现金支付的弊端;3你的观点注意1字数100左右;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3开头与结尾已给出,不计入字数With fewerand fewerpeople usingcash,Non-cash paymentsare becomingincreasingly popular,especially inChina.Posted byLi Jin【答案】With fewerand fewerpeople usingcash,Non-cash paymentsare becomingincreasingly popular,especially inChina.Non-cash payment has manyadvantages.First ofall,we canpay for whatever webuy withonly asmart phone.Second,it reducesthe riskof losingmoney,and itcan preventreceiving counterfeitmoney.And thebest partis thatwe dontneed towoiry aboutnot havingchange anymorewhen takinga bus.However,non-cash paymentalso hasmany disadvantages.The moneycant arrivein time.It isnotconvenient for some elderly people who do not use mobile phonesto use it.In addition,it cannotprotectpeoples privacy.As forme,I prefernon-cash payment.I thinkit isan indispensablepart ofmodern life.Posted byLi Jin【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文要求考生在网上论坛里跟帖讨论非现金支付好处和弊端并表达自己的看法【详解】
1.词汇积累现金cash—ready money减少、降低reduce—lower不可或缺的indispensable一essential保护defend-protect
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句The moneycant arrivein time.拓展句The moneycant arrivein time,which makessome peopleuneasy.【点睛】【高分句型1]First ofall,we canpay for whatever webuy withonly asmartphone(.运用了whatever引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】It isnot convenient forsomeelderlypeoplewhodonotusemobilephonestouseit.(运用了who引导限制性定语从句)EDirections:Write anEnglish compositionin120-150words accordingto theinstructions givenbelowin Chinese.目前中国的移动支付(mobilepayment)非常盛行,越来越多的年轻人选择使用移动支付,有的人认为移动支付给人们带来了便利,而有些人认为这种方式存在安全隐患请你谈谈对这一现象的看法内容包括
1.简要描述你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的现象
2.通过与传统方式的比较,谈谈移动支付给人们带来的利与弊(参考词汇:微信Wechat;支付宝:Alipay;二维码QRcode)【答案】With thedevelopment ofChinas economy,Wechat andAipay arevery popularwith everyoneinthe street.More andmore peopleare choosingtopaythe bill by using mobilepayment,which istakingthe place of paper currency.Some thinksthat itactually makeslife convenient,others believethat itsasecurity risk.Compared withtraditional payment,mobilepayment has its advantages and disadvantages,I thinktheadvantages areas follows.Firstly,itisconvenient foreveryone tobuy whatyou want.Secondly,using mobilepayment canavoid receivingfake moneyand beingreceived fakemoney.Thirdly,If usingthe mobilepayment,everyone cango shoppingwithout anypaper cuirencyto preventthe moneybeingstolen.There isno denyingthat mobilepaymenthasitsdisadvantages.It willtake morerisks protectingyourprivate possessions.For example,you mightbe monitoredwhile payingforwhatyou have boughtso that your account could be stolen.The mobilepaymentisunder constructionnow,people shouldtreat itin anobjective attitude.【分析】这是一篇议论类的作文写作【详解】第一步审题审题的目的是获取重要信息通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息第一」,简要描述你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的现象有的人认为移动支付给人们带来了便利,而有些人认为这种方式存在安全隐患2,通过与传统方式的比较,谈谈移动支付给人们带来的利与弊3,总结自己的观点第二,人称以第三人称为主,兼用为第一人称和第二人称第三,时态为一般现在时第二步布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量这篇写作段落数量为三段第一段,简要描述身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的现象有的人认为移动支付给人们带来了便利,而有些人认为这种方式存在安全隐患第二段,移动支付给人们带来的利第三段,移动支付给人们带来的弊第四段,总结自己的观点第三步确定关键词汇和短语be popularw汕,choose todo sth,by doingsth,taking theplace of,papercurrency,convenient,security risk,avoid doingsth,prevent sthfrom beingdone,risk doingsth,privatepossessions,monitor,account,under construction.Compared withtraditional payment,mobile paymenthasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages,itisconvenientforeveryone tobuy whatyou want.第四步确定较为高级的句子which引导的非限制性定语从句More andmore peopleare choosingtopay the billby usingmobilepayment,which istaking theplace ofpaper currency.If弓I导的条件状语从句If usingthe mobilepayment,everyone cango shoppingwithout anypaper currencyto preventthemoney being stolen,that为连接词的同位语从句There isno denyingthat mobilepaymenthasitsdisadvantages,while引导的时间状语从句,what引导的宾语从句和so that弓I导的结果犬语从句you mightbe monitoredwhile payingforwhatyou havebought so thatyour accountcould bestolen.第五步连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly,for example.第六步注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦【点睛】文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰使用了较为高级的句式如which弓|导的非限制性定语从句More andmore peopleare choosingtopaythebillbyusingmobilepayment,which istaking theplaceofpaper currency.If引导的条件状语从句If usingthemobilepayment,everyone cango shoppingwithout anypapercurrencyto preventthe moneybeingstolen,that为连接词的同位语从句There isno denyingthat mobilepaymenthasitsdisadvantages,while引导的时间状语从句,what引导的宾语从句和so that引导的结果状语从句you mightbe monitoredwhile payingfor whatyouhaveboughtsothatyouraccountcouldbestolen.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。