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热点时文共享单车需要共治让城市更美骑22行更方便备战年中考英语热点时文书面表达专2023项训练【热点材料】共享单车更需共治两会上,共享单车成为一个小热点交通运输部部长李小鹏表示,共享单车是模式创新,要积极鼓励和支持,共同努力,一定能发展好从盈利模式与市场前景到传统自行车行业承受的冲击,从是否属于共享经济到文明用车与安全用车……共享单车火起来之后,可说是引发了一场全民大讨论客观地讲,共享单车较好解决了城市交通最后一公里的问题与过去多个城市推出的市政公共自行车相比,无桩的停放形式、即走即停的使用体验,成为共享单车流行的重要原因然而,成也便捷,乱也便捷车辆损毁、违规占道、私人侵占、单车押金去向不透明、单车企业运营管理不善……自去年月以来,舆论所呈现的负面问题激增没有确定法规约束下的任11性行为、资本疯狂追逐下的无序竞争,“便捷”反而成了共享单车的问题可见,共享单车还处于市场扩容的“青春期”,如何更好地融入社会公共管理,成为摆在各方面前的一道考题••••••注意文章必须包括表格,语句通顺,意思连贯;
1..你的观点和理由部分需自己补充完整;
2.词数左右,文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数380Im writingthis letterto callon everyoneto pay attentionto_________________________________________【答案】Im writingthis letterto callon everyoneto payattention tousing shared bikes.It becomesmoreand more popular.We cansee thosebikes everywhere.Not only can theyhelp us exercise our body,butalso they protect our environment.Surely,they bringus alot ofconvenience.However,there aresome problemsas well.Some peoplepark the bikes disorderly.They parkthebikes everywhere.Some peoplebreak the bikes on purpose oreven stealthe bikes.In myopinion,I thinkpeople shouldlearn howto use the shared bikes properlyand take care ofthem,we shouldalso parkthe bikesin theproper placesso that they canmake ourlife easier and makeourcity better.【详解】、题干解读题目要求写一封倡议书,呼吁人们正确使用共享单车文章必须包含表格所给1提示,可以适当发挥、例文点评例文采用三段式;时态主要以一般现在时为主;例文详细介绍了共享单车的利2弊处,并倡议要正确使用共享单车,本文结构清晰;逻辑性强、高分亮点3短语more and more popular;not only...but also;on purpose;take care of;make ourlife easiero句型倒装句Not onlycan theyhelp usexercise ourbody,but alsotheyprotect ourenvironment;so弓导结果状语从句that Iwe shouldalso parkthe bikesin theproper placesso that they canmake ourlife easierandmake ourcity bettero【点睛】首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达,例如more and more popular;not only...but also;on purpose;take care of;make等;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过ourlife easier渡,可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;最后,要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等【典型范文】近来,中国掀起了一场共享单车热潮,共享单车使人们的出行更方便,方式shared bikes也更环保但同时,随着共享单车的流行,越来越多的问题也暴露出来,某英文报以“Shared为题,举办中学生征文活动请根据下面的图表信息,写一篇英语短文内容包括共Bikes”享单车的优点和缺点,以及你的看法提示、短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯;
1、短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
2、词数不少于开头已给出,不计入总词数380,)(Disadvantages2^^.illegal(优点)Advantagesparkingconvenient;save money(乱停乱放);(殁坏)n,damage v.Shared BikesYouropinionShared BikesRecently,riding shared bikes to schools,workplaces orto gosightseeing hasbecome more and more popular.【答案】Shared BikesRecently,riding shared bikes toschools,workplaces orto gosightseeing hasbecome more and morepopular.Ridingshared bikesprovides uswith acompletely newway ofgoing outside.It makesit muchmore convenientfor peopleto goout.We can help protect the environmentby riding bikes.In someways,it canalso help us savemoney.However,the shared bikes alsoresult insome problemssuch asillegal parking.Some peopleeven keepthe bikesfbrtheir own.Whats more,some of the bikesare damagedon purposeby people.To solvethese problems,I thinkits necessaryto makesome rulesabout howto useshared bikes.Everyone issupposedto followthe rules.【详解】题目解读本文是一篇话题作文,根据思维导图可知,文章要包含共享单车的优点、缺点以及自己的观点提示的信息,文章中需要包括,时态应该是一般现在时,体裁是议论文例文点评本文分成三段,第一段介绍共享单车的优点,第二段介绍缺点,最后一段以个人观点结尾观点明确,条理清晰文章灵活运用动名词、不定式以及动词短语,使文章结构不单一高分亮点短语Whats more;on purpose;such as;result in;be supposedtoo句型不定式作目的状语To solvethese problems,I thinkits necessaryto makesome rulesabout howto usesharedbikes.;it作形式宾语It makesit muchmore convenientfor peopleto goout.【拓展训练】A共享单车和网购是中国“新四大发明,,中的两种,请从两者中任选一种,以have haschanged our lives为题用英语写一篇不少于词的短文,谈谈它如何影响着你的生活100要点它如何惠及你的生活?
1.它是否对我们的生活有消极的影响,如果有,消极影响有哪些?
2.我们应该如何更好地应用这些“发明”?
3.提示共享单车shared bikes;网购online shopping;优势劣势advantage;disadvantage注意短文中不得出现任何与考生本人有关的真实人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分have haschanged ourlives【答案】Shared bikeshave changed our livesNowadays,there aremany inventionsthat make ourlivesmore colorfuland convenient.Among thesenew inventions,I likeshared bikesbest.They haveinfluenced ourlives themost.Last Monday,the roadwas crowded.If Igot aride inmy fatherscar asusual,I wouldhave beenlate.I rodea sharedbiketoschooland gotthere ontime.Compared withother kinds of transportation,it isvery convenientand cheapto useshared bikes.After youfinishusing it,you canleave itanywhere withina parkingarea.Most importantly,using shared bikes is good fortheenvironment.However,on theother hand,some peoplepark theirshared bikesin thewrong spot,which canmake thesidewalk amess.I hopemore peoplecan tryshared bikes.I alsoexpect thegovernment to make stricterrules forthe useof sharedbikes.【详解】.题干解读该题目属于话题作文,要求从共享单车和网购中任选一种,并以()1have haschangedourlives为题介绍一下,这种发明是如何改变我们的生活的,写作时要注意所给的要点.写作指导首先要根据要求确定题目,即哪种发明改变了我们的生活;其次确定时态,即本文应该2以一般现在时为主;第一段要开篇点题,指出我最喜欢的是共享单车;第二段通过实例来说明共享单车的优点;第三段和第四段介绍共享单车的作用及对我们生活的消极影响;最后介绍该如何更好地应用这些发明B目前,共享单车已经成为了广州市民出行必不可少的交通工具,它给人们带来便利的同时也导致了不少问题学校英语俱乐部邀请你面向国际交流生做一个演讲,题目为请注意演讲稿“Shared Bikesin Guangzhou”的用词得体性,且要具有说服力在广州很受扫二维码即可使用,很方便;
1.欢迎
2.锻炼了身体,也更加环保;用自行车时,不注意爱惜,如……(请列举点);
1.1〜2导致的问题•乱停放,如……(请列举点);21〜2请你给共享单车公司提点建议或你的希望?1〜2要求
1.参考词汇扫描scan;二维码the QRcode;文章必须包含所有提示内容,并可作适当发挥;
2.词数词以上(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3.80不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分
4.Shared Bikesin GuangzhouHello,everyone,Im gladto tellyou somethingabout usingsharedbikesinGuangzhou.__________________【答案】Shared Bikesin GuangzhouHello,everyone,Im gladto tellyou somethingabout usingsharedbikesin Guangzhou.lt becomesmore andmorepopular in Guangzhou.We cansee thosebikes everywhere.Surely,they bringus alot ofconvenience whilethere area lotofproblems atthe same time.First,its convenientto usethe sharedbikes.You canusethe sharedbikesby scanningthe QRcode.Second,it notonlycanhelpusexerciseourbody,but alsoprotect ourenvironment.However,there aresome problemsas well.Some peoplebreak the bikes on purpose oreven stealthebikes.Somepeople parkthebikesdisorderly.In myopinion,people shouldlearn howto usethe sharedbikes properlyso thatit canmake ourlife easierand makeourcity better.【详解】、题干解读题目要求以写一篇演讲稿,文章必须包含表格所给提示,可以适当1“Shared BikesinGuangzhou”发挥、例文点评例文采用四段式;时态主要以一般现在时为主;例文详细介绍了共享单车的利弊处;结构清晰;2逻辑性强、高分亮点3短语moreandmorepopular;atthesame time;onpurpose;make ourlife easiero句型倒装句it not onlycanhelpusbuild ourbody,but alsoprotectourenvironment;so that弓I导结果状语从句people shouldlearn howto usethesharedbikes properlyso thatit canmake ourlife easierand ourcity bettero【点睛】首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达,例如moreandmorepopular;atthesametime;onpurpose;makeourlifeeasier等;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;最后,要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等你喜欢骑自行车吗?你听说过共享单车(sharedbikes)吗?(共享单车有需要的人通过扫描单车二维码,就可租骑的一种自行车)现在学校的栏目就“共享单车”这一话题,向我们征集文稿请根据Focus以下提示,以为题,写一篇短文“Shared bikes”要点提示在南京,有许多共享单车,且越来越受欢迎原因骑单车花钱少,出行方便;有更少的污染;有益于健康问题到处停放,难以保持城市整洁;有人弄坏单车,甚至偷走(steal)或带回家具体要求.所写内容必须包括上面提示的所有要点,可适当发挥;.词数左右,开头已给出,不计入1280总词数;.文中不得出现学生本人姓名及所在学校的名称3Shared bikesDoyou likeriding bikesHave youever heardof sharedbikes______________________________________【答案】Shared bikesDoyou likeriding bikesHave youever heardof sharedbikes InNanjing,there areso manysharedbikes,andthey arebecoming moreandmorepopular withpeople.Now moreandmorepeople enjoyridingbikesinstead ofdriving carstomakeshort journeysin cities.Riding bikesisvery convenientand costsless money.It cannotonlyreduce thepollution,but alsobe goodfor ourhealth.But inourlife,it causessome problemsas well.For example,some peopleput themeverywhere andmake the city amess.Somepeople breakthem,and evensteal themor takethem home.I thinkif thegovernment takesaction todeal withthese problems,thecitywill becomemoreand morebeautiful.【详解】,题干解读该题目是写一篇英语短文,要求根据提示内容,以为题,写一篇短文,可适当发1“Shared bikes”挥.写作指导本文是描述一种社会现象,所以主要用第三人称来叙述,更客观一些;时态采用一般现在时为2主;根据话题讨论时,应描写细致,贴合实际,合情合理;并且短文需要叙述完整,保证条理清晰D最近,“共享单车(厂风靡锡城,大街小巷随处可见五颜六色的自行车请你根据以下表格bike-sharing信息写一篇关于共享单车的英语短文种类种;约万辆;64人们使用方便;花费少;
1.得到锻炼,有利健康;
2.优势减少交通压力;
3.
1.弊端有些人做违法的事;
2..使用完,保持自行车排放有序;1建议
1.短文开头已给出,省略号处共须句话作适当发挥;
2.2〜3词数个左右;
3.
904.参考词汇减少reduce;压力stress/pressureNowadays,bike-sharing hasbeen popularin Wuxi.A largenumber ofcolourful bicyclescan beseen everywhereinthe streets.________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays,bike-sharing hasbeen popularin Wuxi.A largenumber ofcolourful bicyclescan beseen everywhereinthe streets.There aresix differentkindsofbicycles.About40000bicycles havebeen/are inservice/use.Bike-sharing hasbroughtsome advantages.People canuse themeasily butpayalittle.Riding isa goodexercise andisgoodfor ourhealth.It helps to reducetraffic stress.It alsohelpstoprotecttheenvironment.But ithas causedsome problems.Some peoplecan*t usebicycles properly.Others evendo somethingagainst thelaw.I hopethat peopleshould keepbicycles in orderafter ridingthem.We shouldtake goodcareofbicycles.【详解】本文属于材料作文,要表达共享单车的优点、缺点以及建议根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如以及advantages,be goodfor,help todo,properly,against thelaw,inordertake good等增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯careof点睛写作时可以从以下几个方面做起认真审题审好题是写好书面表达的关键审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求构思提纲有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键初写短文一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然修改润色修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等E同学们,城市里出现了一道靓丽的风景,共享单车以崭新的外观和低廉的价格深受大家欢sharedbikes迎,方便了人们的出行但随之而来的安全隐患也使人担忧作为一名有正义感的中学生,请你写一封倡议书,呼吁人们正确使用共享单车problems adviceparkthebikeseverywhere parkin theproper placesbrokenby userstakecareofthebikes。