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新写作评分标准解析SAT在新的评分中,将分数分成了三个维度和SATEssay Reading,Analysis这里,我们通过对于评分标准进行简要分析,来看一篇高分Writing的应该具备的条件Writing下图是评分标准关于部分的要求(依次为分,SATEssay Wring43分,分)2我们对评分标准中的每一条进行对比分析4Theresponseincludesaprecisecentralclaim.3Theresponseincludesacentralclaimorimplicitcontrollingidea.2Theresponsemaylackaclearcentralclaimorcontrollingideaormaydeviatefromtheclaimorideaoverthecourseoftheresponse.通过对比我们看到,新要求有一个明确的SATEssay这个就是原文作者的观点对于这个观点,同precisecentralclaim,claim学们其实大可不必担心,因为在每篇文章后面的中会明确给出prompt作者的如中的文章claim,0G上图中划线部分就是文章中作者所要表述的观点,各位同学记住一定要对这个观点进行而不是直接哦!paraphrase copy我们看一组例子GOOD:ltiscrucialthatnewsorganizationsincreasetheamountofforeignnewscoverageprovidedtoAmericans.BAD:Thisisanarticletalkingaboutforeignnews.4Theresponseincludesaskillfulintroductionandconclusion.Theresponsedemonstratesadeliberateandhighlyeffectiveprogressionofideasbothwithinparagraphsandthroughouttheessay.3Theresponseincludesaneffectiveintroductionandconclusion.Theresponsedemonstratesaclearprogressionofideasbothwithinparagraphsandthroughouttheessay.2Theresponsemayincludeanineffectiveintroductionand/orconclusion.Theresponsemaydemonstratesomeprogressionofideaswithinparagraphsbutnotthroughouttheresponse.通过对比我们可以看出,新要求学生在写作中包含SATEssay什么样的和才askillfulintroductionandconclusion,introduction conclusion是好的呢我们不仅需要包含上一条评分标准中的还要说明作者claim,如何去论证自己的观点,下面就是一个很好的例子PeterS.Goodmanbuildsasolidargumentforthegrowingneedforforeignnewscoverageandutilizesconcreteevidencejogicalreasoningandpersuasiveappealstonotonlyexposethepaucityofinternationalnewsneeds,butalsoconvincehisaudiencethatitiscrucialthatnewsorganizationsincreasetheamountofforeignnewscoverageprovidedtoAmericans.在具体分析作者的论证过程中,还需要注意文章的使用progression,恰当的是一种有效的方式,如transitionalwordsGoodmanbeginsbyclearlylayingout;Goodmancloseshisargument;4Theresponsehaswidevarietyinsentencestructures.Theresponsedemonstratesaconsistentuseofprecisewordchoice.Theresponsemaintainsaformalstyleandobjectivetone.3Theresponsehasvarietyinsentencestructures.Theresponsedemonstratessomeprecisewordchoice.Theresponsemaintainsaformalstyleandobjectivetone.2Theresponsehaslimitedvarietyinsentencestructures;sentencestructuresmayberepetitive.Theresponsedemonstratesgeneralorvaguewordchoice;wordchoicemayberepetitive.Theresponsemaydeviatenoticeablyfromaformalstyleandobjectivetone.通过对比我们可以看出,新要求学生在写作中有多变的句SATEssay式和精确的词汇选择但同学们要注意的是,多变的句式并不意味着全文充斥着倒装句、强调句式等,中明确指出,需要SATOG如avoidasimple/epetitivesubject-verbstructure,PeterS.Goodmanoffers...;Heappeals...;Goodmangives...;Hetalks....这种单一的主谓结构会使得文章枯燥,我们可以合理的使用从句、非谓语动词和介词短语等完成考试中要求的句式变化,如Whileonemightviewthisasselfish,SummersreassuresthereaderthattheyarenotaloneinfeelingthiswayFurthercontributingtohisargument,...同样,精确的词汇选择并不意味着复杂的单词,而是能够准确地表述意思的表达,如下面就是中给出的0Gprecisewordchoice:dramaticdecline,discussthecontextofthedecrease,usesthisirony,honesinonexamples,makeamorepowerfulimpressiononthereader,appealstotheindividual,alwaysreferencingthepracticalneed.最后,评分标准中提到也就是说在写aformalstyleandobjectivetone,作中不可以给出自己的观点,而且尽量避免口语化的表达4TheresponseshowsastrongmandoftheconventionsofstandardwrittenEnglishandisfreeorvirtuallyfreeoferrors.3TheresponseshowsagoodcontroloftheconventionsofstandardwrittenEnglishandisfreeofsignificanterrorsthatdetractfromthequalityofwriting.2TheresponseshowsalimitedcontroloftheconventionsofstandardwrittenEnglishandcontainserrorsthatdetractfromthequalityofwritingandmayimpedeunderstanding.评分标准中最后提到的就是语言的规范,也就是语言表达的正确性,可以看到,分的文章几乎没有语言表达错误,分的文章没有大的语43言表达错误(其实还是存在一些小的错误),分的作文就存在很多2语言错误了同学们容易犯的错误主要有SpellingMistakes,等Syntacticallyawkwardsentences,Run-onsentences,Sentencefragment总的来说,新在的评分中希望考试做到SATEssay Writingl.Makeaclaim.2anizeyourargument.
3.Switchupyoursentences.
4.Choosesmartwords.
5.Useanacademictone.
6.Usegoodgrammar.。