重点话题突破 01 人与动物（读后续写高频主题分类）（教师版）

A读后续写重点话题突破01人与动物1精选最新名校试题2话题故事背诵模板3分类话题情节分析4分类话题写作步骤5分类话题高分词汇6分类话题写作高分句型

1.（2023•高三重庆八中校考练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文An abandoneddog stoppedat thefront doorof theLaceys smallhouse,wagging itstail,trembling withshyness andcold.Doris Lacey,whose schoolhad beencalled offbecause of the snow,spotted thecreature andimmediately wentup tomeetit.“Where didthat comefrom Mrs.Lacey askedas soon as Doris put the dog downin the kitchen.Mr.Lacey was atthe table,cleaning hisfingernails.I dontknow whereit camefrom,“he saidmildly,but Iknow forsure whereitsgoing.^^Doris huggedthe doghard againsther.She said nothing.Because of the snow,the roadswould betoo badfor travelfor manydays.Mr.Lacey couldntget outto takethe dogto the animal shelter in the cityright away.He agreedto letit sleepin the basement whileMrs.Lacey unwillinglylet Dorisfeedit leftoverfood.Four dayspassed and the dogdid notcomplain.It nevercried in the nightor barkedat thewind.It didnttear upeverythingin thebasement.It wouldnteven followDoris upthebasementsteps unlessit was invited.It was a good dog.Several timesDoris hadopened thedoor in the kitchenthat ledto thebasement andthe puppyhad beenthere,allstretched out,on thetop step.Doris knewit hadwanted somecompany and that it had lain against thedoor,listening to thetalk in thekitchen,smelling thefood,being apart ofthings.It alwayswagged itstail,eyes allsleepy,when she found itthere.Even aftera weekhad goneby,Doris didntname the dog.She knewher parentswouldnt lether keepit,that herfathermade solittle moneyand anypets wereout of the question,and that the dogwould definitelygo to the shelterwhenthe weathercleared.Still,she triedtalking to them about thedogat dinnerone night.“Shes agooddogand notmuchtrouble,right^^Doris said,hoping one of themwould agreewith her.But Mr.Lacey shookhis head,“You knowwe cantafforda dog,Doris.You try to actmore grown-up aboutthis.Doris fellsilent,prayingI backedaway.Would hespray meDo skunksbite“Hey,Rob.I foundhim.Lefs go to figureout aplan to get himout of here.We climbeddown thesteps quietly.Its askunk,“I said.“It mighteven beMarmalade.MannaladeI explained.But wasthis really the sameskunk Wouldhe remember注意

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答“Come on,I said.Lets go to thekitchen anddo anexperiment tosee whatwould happen.”Rob and I followedas Marmaladeate hisway downstairs,through thekitchen,and outto the back yard.“Come on,“I said.Lets goto thekitchen anddo anexperiment tosee whatwould happen.In thecupboard we foundMothers custardcups.We dumpeda teaspoonof marmaladeinto eachone.We setone on theback yard,one justinside thebackdoor,and oneevery fewfeet allthe wayup to the attic.Then,very carefully,I setthe lastone infront of the skunk,Ibacked away.I didall thesevery cautiouslyin ordernot tofrighten it.The skunksniffed.He inchedforward.He lickedthecup.He atethe marmalade.Rob and I followedas Marmaladeate hisway downstairs,through thekitchen,and outto theback yard.When he wasthrough eating his last bit of marmalade,he turnedand lookedat us.What washe goingto do_He staredfor a long time.And then,finally,he gaveus a big toothysmile beforerunning awayinto therain.He reallyremembered mymotherskindness.I wasso thrilledthat Iwaved to him andsaid,See younext_time,old friend!,9【情节分析】本文以人物为线索展开作者的妈妈是一个心地善良的女人，她和一只臭鼬成为了朋友，还给这只臭鼬取了个名字有一天家里有一只动物跑进了阁楼，发出刮擦的声音，作者发现是一只臭鼬，让作者怀疑,这可能就是妈妈之前认识的那只臭鼬【写作步骤】

1.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容…来吧，‘我说‘我们去厨房做个实验，看看会发生什么’“可知，第一段可描写作者通过一个实验想要验证这是不是以前认识的那只臭鼬

②由第二段首句内容“罗布和我跟着橘子酱一路吃着下楼，穿过厨房，来到后院”可知，第二段可描写这只臭鼬吃橘子酱以及吃完之后发生了什么

2.续写线索母亲与臭鼬交朋友——父母不在家——阁楼上出现一只臭鼬——作者做实验验证臭鼬的身份臭鼬离开行为类

①倒进dump/pour

②后退back away/retreat/draw back/go back

③使害怕frighten/scare情感类

①小心翼翼地carefully/lightly/cautiously

②善良kindness/kindheartedness/goodness

③激动的thrilled/excitedI didall thesevery cautiouslyin ordernot tofrighten it.（使用了in order to作目的状语）When hewas througheatinghislastbitofmarmalade,he turnedand lookedat us.（使用了when引导时间状语从句）

6.（2023•河北石家庄•统考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文I hadbeen workinginagame reserve（野生动物保护区）in South Africa formany years.Though apart ofme longedfor the busyfamiliarity ofParis,I knewmy lifewasinSouthAfrica.One nightthere was a sharpknock onmy door.I wasntexpecting avisitor.Francoise Itsme,a womanwhispered.I threwopen thedoor.Amanda Whatswrong^^Amanda,a thinyoung woman,was ourchef.She motionedfor meto comeoutside.“Theres ababy Elliehere.”“An elephant^^“Shes rightover there,tiny andterrified.“It must be ETsbaby daughter/91said.Amanda explainedthat shedheard anoise outsideher room.Shed takenher flashlight,opened thedoor andshined itacross the garden.A tinyelephant staredback ather,eyes interror.Not knowingwhat todo,Amanda hadclosed thedoorand climbedout of a backwindow tocall me.Elephants arefantastic mothers-ET wouldnever leaveher babyunattended.Apparently,the babyelephant hadsomehowslipped underthe fence.Amanda and I had to get her insidethe houseto keepher safeuntil we could get her back to her mother.Herfrightened eyesstared atus throughthe leaves.I walkedslowly towardthe Ellie.She watchedme butas soonas I waswithin touchingdistance,she ranbehind thehouse.Amanda and I ranafter her.Finally,we managedto cornerthe Ellieinthe parkingarea.She stoodcompletely still,head downand eyesflashing anxiouslyat anymovement orsound.I triedapproachingher again,and thistime she didnt resist,allowing us to gentlyget herinto myhome.I kepttalking to her,telling hershe was safe andthat we would gether back to hermum.Then I called thereservecenter forhelp and,to ourrelief,they promisedto comeright away.注意

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Realizing theEllie mightbe thirsty,I toldAmanda to gethersome milk.Soon,we heardthe soundof atruck on the dirttrack.Realizing theEllie mightbe thirsty,I toldAmanda togethersome milk.After Amandapoured the milk into a bowland put it near Ellie,however,so nervous and frightenedwas Elliethat shestepped backward,hungrily lookingat the milk.In orderto relieveEllie ofher tense,we softlycalled herand dranksome of themilk,signaling it wassafe and tasty.Whenwe placedthemilkon the ground againand hidaway,Ellie ateit up with caution.Knowing that we weresafeandkind,Ellie graduallycalm down when weapproached her.Soon,we heardthe soundof atruck on the dirttrack.Out cametwo menafter thetruck pulledoff.They remindedusthat ifher mothercouldnt findher,she wouldattack peopleand villagearound andthe bestway wasto sendEllie backassoon aspossible.After toughlysearching forEllies mother,we finallycaught theglimpse ofher figure,who wasextremelyunsettled andupset.Meanwhile,Ellie had already runoff for her motherjoyfully.We allrelieved,seeing Elliewentout of sight with her mother.节分析】本文以人物线索展开，讲述了一天夜里，阿曼达发现了走丢的小象惊恐地躲在花园的树叶丛里之后来找我帮忙为了保证小象的安全并把她带回她妈妈身边，阿曼达和我经过了一番努力，终于把她带回家并打电话给了保护中心

1.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“意识到艾莉可能渴了，我让阿曼达给她拿些牛奶”可知，本段可以写小象在家里的一些情况

②由第二段首句内容“不久，我们听到一辆卡车在土路上行驶的声音”可知，本段可以写我们和工作人员一起把小象送回到象妈妈身边

2.续写线索给小象牛奶——她紧张不敢喝--------------我们安慰示好——小象喝了牛奶并信任我们——听到救援人员的声音——一起护送小象找妈妈——找到象妈妈——我感到宽慰词类激活【高分词汇】行为类

①放置put/place/set

②走walk/step/move

③寻找search for/look for/hunt for情绪类

①紧张的nervous/tense/stressed

②不安的unsettled/uneasy/restless

③高兴地joyfully/delightedly/happliyAfter Amandapoured themilk intoa bowlandputitnearEllie,however,so nervousand frightenedwas Elliethat shesteppedbackward,hungrily lookingat themilk.（运用了after引导的时间状语从句以及部分倒装）Out cametwo menafter thetruck pulledoff.（运用了全部倒装以及after引导的时间状语从句）

7.（2023•福建宁德•统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文“Why cantI justget a dog,Mum!^^Because ofyour allergies（过敏）！How manytimes doI haveto tellyou,Violet!”Violet was filled with anger.The rainstarted tofall.Large raindropsslid down the window,just likethe tearson herface.There wasviolent angerin Violetseyes.She walkedangrily toher roomand threwherself onto the bed.Her angerwas now like an angrybull.She screamedinto herpillow asloud as she couldand threwit onto the groundwith allher strength.She dialedherbest friend Darla,who happenedto alsobe herneighbor.Darla picked up inan instant.“I couldhear everything.Darla immediatelychuckled.Ive knownyou and your mumsince primaryschool.Shesnot lettingyou geta dog.”“Was Ithat loud”Violet questionedherself indisbelief.“Youve beenasking fora dogsince youwere seven!There9snochance she was goingto justgive it to you.Plus,youhave somany allergiesthat Iveeven lostcount.^^Its justnot fair.You gettwo dogsand Imstuck withmy youngersister whohas basicallya rat.Violet announcedunappreciatively.“You haveto be grateful forwhat youhave.Anyway,Ive gotto havedinner withmy family.I cancall inhalf anhour,see youlater.”After thecall disconnected,the wordsfrom Darlasmouth aboutbeing gratefulsunk intoViolet likea drysponge（海绵）filled withwater,She rememberedthe countlesstimes that she was admitted to the hospitalfor anallergic reactionwhileher familystayed andcared forher.Violet neverreally thought aboutthethings shehad,she onlythoughtaboutthethings she didnt have.Violet hada tamilywhich accountsfor more than everything,even a dog.Family loveis strongerthan any love.Violet knewshe wasblessed tohave thislove.注意L续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答From thatday onwards,Violet stoppedasking fora dog.The allergieswere disappearingwith age.From thatday onwards,Violet stoppedasking fora dog.Instead,she askedto spendtime togetherwith her family.She startedthinking aboutwhat shehad insteadof what shedidnthave.She realizedthat familywas moreimportant thananythingelse.The loveof familywas strongerthananylove,and nowshe knewshe waslucky tohave it.So she was nolongerso capriciousand nolonger threwtemper tantrums.She began to cherishthe timewithher family andthe lovetheyshared.She beganto helpher motherdo houseworkand accompanyher sister.She and herfamilyreminisced aboutthebeautiful and memorable moments that had happened in her life.She grewup happily.The allergieswere disappearingwith age.Violets motherfinally agreedtogetadog.She wentto the pet storewithher motherto pickout apuppy.She askedthepetstore ownerfor adviceon dogcare.When theygot home,they putthe dogina kennel.Violet promisedhermotherthat shewould takegood care ofher dog.After allthe arrangementswere made,she calledher goodfriendDarla.She andDarla madean appointmentto playin thecity parkon Saturdaymorning.But shedidnttell Darlathat shehad hadher owndog,because shewanted tosurprise her.She tookherdogto thecity parkonSaturday morning.The dayDarla foundout aboutViolefs dog,she squeeledin happinessand theyboth spentthe restoftheir dayplaying withViolets dog.【情节分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Violet一直想要养一条狗，但是因为Violet经常过敏，所以她的妈妈一直不同意，对此她愤怒不止，于是打电话给自己的好朋友Darla诉说了这一切但是Darla却告诉她必须感激所拥有的，放下电话后，Violet回想起有无数次她因为过敏反应住进医院，而她的家人一直在照顾她Violet从来没有真正想过她拥有的东西，她只想着她没有的东西Violet的家庭比一切都重要，甚至包括一条狗家庭的爱比任何爱都强大，Violet知道她很幸运能拥有这份爱【写作步骤】

3.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“从那天起，Violet不再要求养狗了”可知，第一段可描写Violet开始重视和家人一起的时间

②由第二段首句内容“随着年龄的增长，过敏症状逐渐消失”可知，第二段可描写过敏症状逐渐消失后，Violet终于有了自己的第一条狗

4.续写线索重视和家人一起的时间——不再任性、不再乱发脾气——帮助妈妈做家务、陪伴妹妹——快乐成长——过敏症消逝、妈妈同意她拥有宠物狗——挑选小狗——开心回家——安置小狗——和好朋友约好一起玩耍【高分词汇】行为类

①意识到realize/be awareof

②珍惜cherish/treasure

③陪伴accompany/be in the company of情绪类

①任性的capricious/self-willed

②高兴happiness/joy【高分句型1】She and herfamilyreminisced aboutthe beautifulandmemorablemomentsthathadhappenedinherlife.（运用了that引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】She startedthinking aboutwhatshehad insteadof whatshedidnthave.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）But shedidnttell Darlathat shehad hadher owndog,because shewanted tosurprise her.（运用了that弓I导的宾语从句和because引的原因状语从句）

8.（2023•江苏•统考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文It wasChristmas Evemorning,and Iawoke with a mission:to findmy lostcat,Baby-Girl.As Igot ready,I couldhearicy rainpelting the windows.Baby-Girl wasout theresomewhere inthe storm;I couldjust feelit.Sure,ithadbeen acoupleof weekssince shedgone missing,but Istill hadfaith.This wasthe seasonfor miracles,after all.About twoweeks ago,my sweetkitty disappearedfrom my parents9house in my hometown.Baby-Gil hadbeenstaying with them whileI wasbetween apartments.At the time,I livedand workedin anothercity.I wassaying withfendsuntil Irented myown house.Baby-Girl hadgotten outof myparents housethe daybefore I was setto driveback hometopick herup.My dadand I had spentthat entirevisit searchingfbr her.Dad was a“realist”,which meanthe spenta wholelot oftimetrying toprepare mefbr theworst.Shes eitherbeen hitby acar orbeen takenin bysomeone whofound her,“he said.I rolledmy eyes.He could do with a littlemore faith!Besides,though I couldnt explainit,I knewId seeBaby-Girl again.She couldsurvive allon herown.If anycat coulddothe impossible,it was my Baby-Girl.Even afterI returned to myhouse withouther,deep downI hadthis undeniablefeelingthatwe would bereunited oneday.Now,home againfor theholidays,I wasdetermined to pick upmy searchright whereId leftoff.I grabbedBaby-Girls catcarrier andloaded itinto thecar,and thenasked mydad todrive metotheshelter.At theshelter,a staffmember tookustosee thecats.We walkedthrough rowsof cages.My eyesscanned catsof allcolorsand sizes.None of them was my Baby-Girl.Then Inoticed aroom farther back.I pushedahead.“Sweetheart,thafswhere theykeep thecats thatjust came in,Dad said.Your catwouldnt bein there.”注意

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答I insistedit didnthurt tolook andstepped into the room.Sensing theirdoubts,I wasready toprove shewasmycat.【范文模板】I insistedit didnthurt tolook andstepped into the room.Suddenly,there came a familiarmeow.I followedthe soundandmy eyesfell ona littlecat withbig greeneyes.She wasskinnier thanI remembered,but it was Baby-Girl!My eyeswelledupwithtears.I openedthe cagedoor.Baby-Girl practicallyjumped into my arms.I heldher closeas Dadlookedon.Theres justno way...,“he mumbled.The shelterstaff wereskeptical too,saying thecat hadjust beenbrought induringthe morningstorm.Sensing theirdoubts,I wasready toprove shewasmycat.I grabbedthe carrier.Td trainedBaby-Girl towalk insidethecarrier.Sure enough,when shewas letdown,she madea dashfor thecarrier andrushed rightinside.I wasoveijoyed tohaveherback.It wasa miraclethat shehad managedto surviveon herown forso long,andI was filledwith admirationforher strengthand determination.I thankedmy luckystars that I hadnever givenup hope,andthatIhadcome back to theshelterone lasttime.【情节分析】本文以人物为线索，这篇文章讲述了作者寻找失踪猫咪Baby-Girl的经历在圣诞节前夜，作者醒来时决心要找到失踪的猫咪，相信它仍在暴风雨中的某个地方虽然已经过去了几周，但作者仍然有信心在之前的探访中，作者和父亲一起寻找Baby-Girl但父亲是一个“现实主义者”，他试图让作者为最坏的情况做好准备作者深信，如果有任何一只猫咪能够完成不可能的任务，那就是他的Baby-Girl尽管作者未能在动物收容所中找到她，但他仍然相信他们将有一天能与所爱的宠物重聚【写作步骤】

3.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“我坚持认为看看没有关系，并走进了房间”可知第一段可描写作者在那个房间中发现自己心爱的猫咪

②由第二段首句内容“察觉到他们的怀疑，我准备证明她是我的猫”可知第二段可描写作者通过自己与猫咪的互动证明这只猫就是自己丢失的那只

4.续写线索走进房间——熟悉的声音——抱在怀里——被怀疑——训练——开心【高分词汇】行为类

①喃喃自语mumbled/mutter/maunder/mussitate

②怀疑skeptical/disbelieving/suspicious

③抓住grabbed/capture/catch/seize情绪类

①狂喜的oveijoyed/delighted/joyful/elated

②眼泪tears/weeping/sobbing/crying【高分句型1】It wasa miraclethatshehad managedto surviveon herown forso long,andI wasfilledwith admirationforherstrengthand determination.（运用了It was...that的强调句）Sure enough,when shewas letdown,she madea dashforthecarrier andrushed rightinside.（运用了when弓I导的时间状语从句）

9.（2023•黑龙江佳木斯•佳木斯一中校考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文Most ofus neverforget theperson thatwas there for usin ourdarkest times.Apparently,penguins（企鹅）dont either.On atypical day,off thecoast ofa smallBrazilian island,Joao Pereirade Souza headed outfishing.He wasdisheartenedto findthat anoil leakhad pollutedthe waters.Staring out attheoily waves,he decidedit wasnot agood daytofish.But walkingon thebeach thatday,he founda strugglingpenguin,covered inoil andstarving.Joao tookthe penguinhome,and spenta wholeweek gentlycleaning itand nursingit backto health.He nameditDindim,a Portugueseword meaningice pop”.Dindim isa Magellanicpenguin,a speciesknown forliving inthe seasofSouth America.In orderto breed（繁殖），they mustreturn toPatagonia,5,000miles fromJoaos home.After aweek ofrehabilitation（康复），Joao patientlytook Dindimbacktothe seaand taughtit how to swimagain.When Dindimcould swimquite well,Joao tookit outinto the sea byboat anddropped itoff toencourage itto swimbackto itshome.But whenhewasbacktoshore,hefoundthe penguinwaiting for him.Joao madetwo moreattempts later,buteach time the birdwould justreturn toJoaos home.It seemedthat Dindimhadalreadyformed afamily bondwith Joao andwouldnt leave.Joao hadno choicebut to keep the little creature.During thefollowing months,Dindim wouldfollow behindJoao tofishon thecoast joyfully.Dindim alsoliked tolie onJoaos lap,letting Joaogive itshowers,allowing Joaoto feedit fishandto pickit up.Joaoandhis familyenjoyed thecompanyofDindim.But deepinside Joaosheart,he knewDindimbelonged tothe wild.Gradually,the hotsummer dayswitnessed thechange ofits newfeathers.Was ittime tosay“goodbye”？注意

1.续写词数成为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Suddenly onemorning,Joao foundDindim disappeared.A fewmonths later,Joao heardsome familiarcries inhis backyard.【范文模板】Suddenly onemorning,Joao foundDindim disappeared.tcHas itreally left”Joao wondered,his mind mixing withsorrowand joy.In orderto breed,he knewthat Dindimhad to go back,but itstill madehim heartbroken.Looking attheempty nest,he refused to leave.After a while,he bent down,pickedupa fewfeathers from theground,and turnedback totheroom.When puttingthe featherinto ajar,he saidto himself,Fine,its finallygrown up.”A fewmonths later,Joao heardsome familiarcries inhis backyard.He hurriedlyran tothe backyard.What caughthiseyes were a group of penguins looking around!One evenstaggered uptohimand lookedup athim,as ifasking,Oldfriend,do youremember me”It wasDindim!He quicklybentdown,gently strokingits feathers.Later,these penguinslivedthereforawhileand leftsome beautifulmemories.So,just likeDindim,a penguinremembering whosaved itwhenin trouble,lefs alwaysbe grateful.【情节分析】本文以故事发展为线索展开，讲述了Joao出海打渔时救助了被油污污染且饥饿的小企鹅Dindim,他把小企鹅带回家悉心照顾，使它恢复健康，茁壮成长但因为需要繁衍，小企鹅必须回到自己原先居住的地方有一天它突然离开了Joao虽然深知这是必然，还是很难过过了几个月，让人意料不到的是这只企鹅竟然回到了Joao的家里，因此本文呈现了一个小企鹅心怀感恩的故事【写作步骤】

1.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“突然有一天早上，Joao发现Dindim不见了”可知，第一段可描写Joao发现企鹅离开之后的场景和心情

②由第二段首句内容“几个月后，Joao听到自家后院有一些熟悉的叫喊声”可知，第二段可描写企鹅Dindim重新回到Joao家里的场景

2.续写线索救助Dindim照顾养育DindimDindim离开Joao很不舍Dindim回到Joao家——感悟【高分词汇】行为类

①.心想wander/guess

②.回至Uturn backto/return to情绪类

①.悲喜交力口的mindmixwith sorrowand joy/be bitter-sweet

②.感恩的be grateful/be thankfultheweather wouldnever clear.注意L续写词数应为150左右；2,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答However,the sunwas shiningthe nextmorning.Later thatafternoon,Mn Lacey came back with the same dog.However,the sunwas shiningthe nextmorning.Doris wassitting aloneintheliving roomtrying notto cry,but shewasnot strongenough.Her facewas wetand red,her eyesfull ofdepression.Outside,she heardthe trunkof thecar slamshut,oneof the doorsopen andclose,the oldengine coughand chokeand finallystart up.Hearing thecar traveldown theroad,she could do nothing but cryherself tosleep,and herdreams werefull ofsearching andsearching for things lost.Later thatafternoon,Mr.Laceycamebackwiththe samedog.Dorisputher handtohermouth.She couldntbelieveher eyes.uYou didnttake heraway”she asked.I didJ her father answered.The worstlooking placeIve everseen.Tendogs ina cage.Smell wasenough toknock youdown.And theygive ananimal sixdays to live.Then theykill itwith somekind ofashot.I wouldntleave anant inthat place,so Ibrought thedog back.Doris excitedlyran toherfatherand gavehima superbig hug.What anunexpected surpriseit is!【情节分析】本文是一篇记叙文Doris Lacey在家门口捡到一只流浪狗，父母都不同意在家里养它，但因为下雪路滑，爸爸同意小狗住在地下室小狗在地下室很乖，Doris Lacey对它产生了感情，想要养它，但是她知道她家里的经济条件无法养它天气好的时候，爸爸把小狗送收容所了，Doris Lacey很伤心，但没想到后来爸爸又带着小狗回来了【写作步骤】

1.段落续写由续写第一段首句内容“然而，第二天早上阳光明媚”可知，第一段可以描写爸爸要把小狗送走了，Doris虽然不舍但也没办法留下它，只能独自伤心器蜩皿・When puttingthe featherinto ajar,he saidto himself,Fine,ifs finallygrown up.（由when引导的时间状语从句使用了省略句的结构）What caughthis eyeswereagroupofpenguinslookingaround!（由连词what引导的主语从句和现在分词作状语）

10.（2023•湖南娄底•统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文My husband andIwandered thetropical gardensof SanDiegos BahiaResort Hotel.We cametoalarge pool.A wetnoseappeared outofthe water and aseal（海豹）climbedup ontoa rockto greetus.Look!”I cried,delighted.“Her name is GracieJ myhusband said,reading asign by the fencethat enclosedthe pool.A momentlater,anotherseal swampast.And thatmust beBilly,“he added.Gracie doveback intothewater and chasedafter Billy.We watchedin wonderas theyraced aroundthe poolhappily.The nextday I found myselfback atthe sealspool.Gracie andBilly wereenjoying the morning sunshineonalargerock.Iwassurprised tolearn thatGracie andBilly wereblind.They werethought tohave sufferedaheadinjury instormy Alaskawaters,which causedthem tolose theirsight.They neededto betaught tosurvive ina worldof darkness.I feltsorry forthem,as theycould nolonger return tothesea.At the same time,Iwasamazed howthey hadadapted totheir newenvironment.They movedeasily andbeautifully,their lackofsightseeming to be noproblem atall.I spenthours watchingthem playinghappily inthe pool,nosing largeredand blueballs.Three years later,in spring,a seriousillness damagedmy eyes,making mealmost blind.My eyeshad tobe protectedfromsunlight,so I couldnt gooutside.I satin mybedroom withthe shadesdrawn,unable toread oreven watchtelevision.Iwasterrified.What ifI lostmy sightcompletely Howwould Ipossibly manageI feltso depressedthatIbegantolosehope.注意

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Then I remembered somethingthat gaveme thehope Ineeded.So I made upmy mindto livelike thosetwo seals.【范文模板】Then Iremembered somethingthat gavemethehope Ineeded.Yes,I thoughtofthe two seals.They gotused totheirnew life inthe pool regardless ofthe great changes when they were unable togo backtotheseawhere theywere supposedtobe.Whats more,they managedto enjoya happylife thoughthey livedin darknessasaresult oftheir blindness.Now Twasfaced withthesamesituation.Luckily,thetwo seals hadset agood examplefor me.So I made upmy mindtolivelike thosetwoseals.Though Iwas keptfrom theoutside world,I didfind pleasurein mysmall world,enjoying chattingwith friends,singing withmy family,listening tomusic,and eatingdelicious food.Theseals divingand swimmingaround theirpool remindedme ofexercise.So I climbed upand downthe stairsevery morningtokeep fit.Eventually Ibecame confidentagain aboutmyself.Thanks tomy twoinspiring friends,I learnedhow toenjoylife when going through a difficult time.【情节分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和丈夫在一个泳池里看到两头海豹开心地玩耍，却很惊讶地得知,它们已经失明，再也不能回到大海，作者感叹于它们可以适应黑暗，仍然生活得很快乐三年后，作者也因病几乎失明，很害怕，情绪低落【写作步骤】

1.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“然后我想起了一件给了我希望的事”可知，第一段可描写作者想到了三年前见到的那两只失明的海豹，回忆起它们接受命运给与的苦难，适应黑暗并开心地生活玩耍

②由第二段首句内容“所以我下定决心要像那两只海豹一样生活”可知，第二段可描写作者决定积极生活,融入社会，强身健体，实现自我价值

2.续写线索想到失明的海豹——反思自己——决定向海豹学习——调整心态——积极生活——感悟【高分词汇】行为类

①习惯于get usedto/get accustomedto/adapt to

②想起think of/remember/recall

③返回get backto/returnto情绪类

1.感谢thanks to/owing to/showing myappreciation to/show my gratitude to/begratefulto

2.积极become confident/act positively【高分句型1】They gotusedtotheir newlifeinthepoolregardlessofthegreatchangeswhentheywereunabletogobacktotheseawhere theywere supposedtobe.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句及where引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】Though Iwas keptfrom theoutside world,I didfind pleasurein mysmallworld,enjoying chattingwith friends,singingwith my family,listening tomusic,and eatingdelicious food.（由though引导的让步状语从句及分词作状语）【高分句型3】Thanks tomy twoinspiring friends,I learnedhowtoenjoy lifewhengoingthroughadifficulttime,（when弓［导的时间状语从句的省略）由续写第二段首句内容“当天下午晚些时候，Lacey先生带着同一只狗回来了”可知，第二段可以描写爸爸带小狗回来后Doris的惊喜，以及爸爸解释没把小狗留在收容所的原因

2.续写线索天气转晴——Doris因无法留下小狗而努力压抑自己的情绪——爸爸开车带小狗离开——Doris终于忍不住哭了起来一一爸爸带着小狗回来——爸爸解释了原因——Doris感到惊喜【高分词汇】行为类

①除了做外无能为力coulddo nothing butdo.../couldnt doanything butdo...

②搜寻search for/in searchof

③把带走take away/send away

④击侄ijknock down/knock over情绪类

①沮丧depression/frustration/gloom

②兴奋地excitedly/in excitement/thrilledlyHer facewas wetand red,her eyesfull ofdepression.（使用了“名词+形容词短语”独立主格结构）Hearing thecar traveldowntheroad,she coulddonothingbut cryherself tosleep,andherdreams werefull ofsearchingand searchingforthingslost.（使用了现在分词短语作时间状语、省略不定式符号to的结构coulddonothingbutdo和动名词作宾语）

2.（2023•江苏•统考二模）We havea Norwegianelkhound（柴犬）named Torgy.Elkhounds arebeautiful.They aremedium-sized,strong,square-looking dogs.Their thick,silver-gray fur（皮毛）has apure whiteundercoat,making akindofflag thatmoves upanddownwhenthey run.They runeverywhere.In fact,they aregood atroaming（闲逛），and Torgyis betterthan mostofhis breed.In August,the heatwave started.For quitea fewdays,Torgy starteddisappearing inthe afternoon,andhewouldntshow upagain until we weregetting supperon thetable.Every day,Torgy hungaround duringthe coolofthemorning,butas thesun roseto itsfull height,he gotup fromhis favoritespot underthe elmtree,stretched,shook himselfall over,andran outofthe yard.There wasno waterfrom thestream ormud from the fishingpond.No dustfrom thecountry roadsor weedsfrom thewoods.Why couldTorgy comehome remarkablyclean asadogonthemove“Where haveyou been,Torgy”I turnedhis headtoward meand lookedhim inthe eyes*He lickedmy nose4A weeklater,Mom tookus ona walkdowntown.It isonly fourblocks fromour housetothemiddle ofthe town,which ishow smallit is.We walkeddown DivisionStreet,which broughtus rightbytheWebb FurSalon,the neweststorein townandtheonly onewith airconditioning.In themiddle ofsummer,it wasnteasy tosell furs.It wassaid Mr.Webb,the store owner,was offeringsomediscounts inordertoattract customers.The airconditioning alsoprovided acomfortable environmentfor thispurpose.“Lets seewhich furIm goingtopickout today,“Mom saidassheapproached thedisplay windowwhere theexpensive,fur-hanging mannequins（人体模特）were onshow.She lookedinthe window andstopped deadin shock.Paragraph1:Her mouthkept openingand closingbut nosound cameout.Paragraph2:Your doghas beenmaking himselfat homein ourwindow fordays JMr.Webb explainedwithabig smile.【范文模板】Her mouthkept openingand closingbut nosound cameout.I followedher gazeand foundthat therewasadog justlike our Torgy sitting inthewindow ofthe store.We enteredthe storeto figureout whetherit wasour dog.Seeing ourcoming,the storeowner greetedus warmlyand askedwhat wewanted tobuy.But wesaidnothingand juststared atthedog inthewindow,confirming thatitwasour dog Torgy.Confused,the ownerasked whetherwe knewthedog.Yes,it isour dogTorgy,“My Momreplied.“Your doghas beenmaking himselfat homein ourwindow fordays JMr.Webb explainedwithabig smile.“Thatcan explainwhy itleaves everynoon andcomes backclean insuch hotdays J I said.It justcameinand satinthewindow,quiet andlovely.That madeall ofour customerslike it,and broughtmuch profitfor me.I mustthank yourdog.Mr.Webbsaid happily.Mom andI bothfelt proud,thanked the storeownerand leftwith Torgyat last.【情节分析】本文以动物为中心展开，主要讲述作者家里有一只很漂亮的名为Torgy的挪威柴犬，在炎热的夏天，Torgy总是会在中午最热的时候出门，下午回家，但是身上总是干干净净的，对此作者感到好奇一天作者陪妈妈去买皮草时，终于明白了原因【写作步骤】

1.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“她的嘴不停地张开和闭合，但没有发出任何声音”可知，第一段可描写作者和母亲在皮草店发生的事情

②由第二段首句内容“你的狗在我们的窗户里呆了好几天，”韦布先生笑着解释道”可知，第二段可描写店主和作者他们解释狗在他的店里的情况

2.续写线索发现——困惑——解疑——感谢——离开词汇】行为类

①进入enter/come in

②感谢thank/appreciate情绪类

①困惑的confused/puzzled

②高兴地:happily/gladlyI followedher gazeand foundthat therewasadog justlikeourTorgysittinginthewindowofthestore.（由that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】We enteredthestoreto figureout whetheritwasourdog.（由whether引导的宾语从句）

3.（2023•广东佛山•模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文In2000,when Iwas aroundseven yearsold,myparents,sister,brother,andIwere coming back froma T-ball gameonelate springafternoon.That wasour usualweekend adventurein suburbanPearl River,New York,about25miles fromNewYork City.But unlikeother weekends,on thisday asurprise waswaiting inour driveway:Two adultwild geeseanda gosling（幼雁）.The adultswere frightenedby usand flew away,but theirbaby wastoo youngto flyand couldntfollow.We areno strangerstotheways ofwildlife,so we knew howto avoidcontact withthe goslingin caseit cameacross usandwas lostto itsfamily forever.Hours passed,and nightfell.With it cameadeep chillandafear ofwatchful predators（捕猎者）.The tinylittle thingwaswandering aroundontheroad,unaware ofwhat couldhappen.It wasclear thatthe goslingneeded protection,warmth,and foodto makeittothemorning,so webrought himonto ourbackyardand setupa temporarywire fenceto encloseandprotect him.We allslept withone eyeopen tillmorning.And thenanother morning.And another.Each day,wewouldtrytoforcethe gooseover tohis parents,who keptcomingbackto ouryard.He wouldntgotothem,though,and theywouldnt comecloseenough toclaim him.We keptthis upfbr fivedays,but noluck.By then,the younggoose hadclearly decidedwewere hisnew family,so wehadtogive hima name.My eight-year-old sister,Joanna,called thelittle guyPeeper becausehewould followus aroundtheyardmaking apeeping noise,nonstop.We alsodecided thatPeeper wasa boy.I dontknowwhy;it justfelt right.Days turned into weeks,and weeksturnedintomonths,until almosta yearpassed.注意1,续写词数应为15左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Everybody in my familythought Peeperwould staywith usforever.Last year,it cameasashock whena familiaradult gooseappeared atmy yard.【范文模板】Everybody inmyfamilythought Peeperwould staywith usforeven Beforeweknewit,thelittlething hadgrown intoabig birdwith twopowerful wings.One day,when Dadthrew Peeperintotheair,he justflewawayand didntcome back.With nightfalling,all ofus becameincreasingly worried.We lookedforhim,called hisname andeven peepedlike him,anxiously expectinghis return.But the special buddynever appearedagain.Suddenly losingthespecialcompanion,everyone wasvery,very sad.It tooka longtime beforewe acceptedthe factthat hewas missing.Meanwhile,we couldonlypray hefound hisparents andwent offon hisnatural way.Twenty yearspassed,and Peeperbecame afond memoryfor myfamily.Last year,itcameasashock whena familiaradult gooseappeared atmy yard.He didall ofthesamethings.Peeperused todo inPeepers oldways,and muchtomysurprise,he evenresponded tomthe namePeeper.It becameclear to methat my old best friend had returned,20years later.This experiencehas beenas meaningfultomeas anythinginmylife.Looking beyondour reachhigh inthe sky,birds havefeelings likehuman beings,so domany otherliving things.Wehuman beingsshould learntogetalong wellwith them.We needeach otherscare andprotection.【情节分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家无意中救下了一只幼雁，并对幼雁呵护有加，幼雁也把作者一家视作自己的家人后来，幼雁长大了，离开了作者一家多年后，幼雁又回来了【写作步骤】

1.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“我们家的每个人都认为Pe叩er会永远和我们在一起”可知，第一段可描写Pe叩er突然离开了作者一家

②由第二段首句内容“去年，当一只熟悉的成年大雁出现在我的院子里时，我感到很震惊”可知，第二段可描写Pe叩er突然又回来了，作者一家感到非常惊讶2,续写线索遇到大雁一家——幼雁被留下——带着幼雁回家——精心照顾幼雁——突然，幼雁离家返回家行为类

①意识到know/realize

②回来come back/return

③出现appear/turn up情绪类

①担忧的worried/concerned

②悲伤的sad/sorrowfulIt tookalongtime beforewe acceptedthe factthat hewas missing.（运用了before引导的时间状语从句和that引导的同位语从句）【高分句型2】It becameclear tome thatmyoldbestfriendhadreturned,20yearslater.（运用了that弓|导的主语从句）

4.（2023•湖北•模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文On myway tothe park,I sawOllie sittingonthesteps ofhis house.Its finallynice springweather,“Icalled.“Wantto skateboard^“ShhhJ hesaid softly.Youll scarehim away!”Iwas about tosay Whowhen Inoticed thecutest littlebird inthe worldjust sittingon Olliesshoulder.“Whoa!Iwhispered.Where didhe comefrom”He landedon thisflowerpot,said Ollie.And when I bentdown tomake surehewas OK,he justjumped rightonto myshoulder!”This onedefinitely actslike someoneslost petJIbelieved.I agree/9said Ollie.His ownermustbeso worried!”“Hi,I saidtothe bird ina gentlevoice.C€I wishyou couldtell usyour name.And rightthen,the birdchirped（L喳口U）back.Ollie smiled.I dontexactly speakbird language,but Impretty surehe justsaid hisnameis Blue.“Is Ollieright”I asked.If yourname reallyis Blue,will yousing usa song”And Iknow thissounds unbelievable,butBlue seemedto understand-because rightthen,he chirpeda lotmore!When Olliesgrandma,Abuela,stepped outsideand sawthebird,shewasvery astonished.This isabigadventurefor sucha smallbird!”she said.Lets getyou anice drinkof waterand givethe animal shelter a call.^^Abuela broughtoutadish ofwaterandthe phone.Soon wegot throughtothe animal shelter.Sorry^the mansaid.No birdshave beenreported missingthis week.You mayas wellput flyersup inyour areaandyoucan alsocheck theFoundAnimal recordingsevery day.”Luckily,Abuelas friendMichiko,knowing allabout birds,came overwithaspare cage.His nameisBlueJ Ollietoldher,“you know,untilwefind his owner.,,“What anadorable bird!”Michiko screamed.注意

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.开头已给出Paragraph1:That afternoon,Ollie andImadelots ofFound Birdflyers.Paragraph2:Another weekpassed beforeOllie gota callfrom theanimalshelter.That afternoon,Ollie andImadelots ofFound Birdflyers.But Abuela,armed withthe skillsof attendingto birds,took goodcare ofBlue.The chirpingbird sangsongs inthe cagelikeahappy angel.Ollie said,“We decidedtokeepthebird,but westill shouldspare noeffort tofind hisowner sincehisownercould havebeen veryupset withouthis company.Although feelingsorry forthat,we putup allthe flyers.And fora monthandahalf,we keptchecking theFound Animalrecordings.Nonetheless,no oneclaimed Blueyet.Another weekpassed beforeOllie gotacallfromtheanimalshelterOllie instantlyknew someonehad claimedBlue.After meetingwiththeowner,amazingly,wefoundBlue wasreallythebirds name.The ownerexplained Blueaccidentallyflew outofthecar.She gaveusathankful hug,with Bluehopping andchirping onher shoulder.No wordscould fully express mygratitude to you for finding Blue,without whomIcouldhave leda lonelylife!”she wept.Both ofuswere unwillingto leaveBlue butwewouldbe muchdelighted tosee thatBlue reunitewith hisprevious owner.【情节分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了我在去公园的路上偶遇爱心男孩Ollie,得知Ollie无意间发现了一只迷途的小鸟，我和Ollie对小鸟不仅照顾有加，并且积极为它寻找主人并最终成功归还的故事i.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“那天下午，Ollie和我做了很多发现鸟的传单”可知第一段可描写我与Ollie积极地为小鸟找主人的情况以及Ollie和奶奶对于小鸟的照顾以及小鸟的一些表现

②由第二段首句内容“又过了一个星期，Ollie才接到动物收容所的电话”可知第二段可描写小鸟主人终于出现以及双方见面时的情况及送还小鸟时我和Ollie的不舍和留恋

2.续写线索对小鸟的照顾——打算留下小鸟——积极寻找主人一主人出现——送还小鸟——人鸟分别的不舍和留恋开心回归行为类

①.照料take careof/look after/attend to

②.尽最大努力spare noeffort/gotogreat length/try onesbest

③.哭泣weep/water/shed tears情绪类

①.为感到抱歉:feel sorry/feel guilty

②.不愿意的unwilling/reluctant

③高兴的delighted/pleased/happy【高分句型1】But Abuela,armed withthe skillsof attendingto birds,took goodcareofBlue.（运用了过去分词短语作后置定语）No wordscouldfullyexpressmygratitudetoyouforfindingBlue,without whomIcouldhave leda lonelylife!（运用了介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句）

5.（2023•河北•校联考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文Whenever Ispread marmalade（橘子酱），I thinkof mymother.She wasa wonderfulwoman,a five-foot-tall angel.She evenbefriended askunk（臭鼬）.One dayshewasout backpicking beanswhen sheturnedtosee askunk nomorethana yardaway.The skunkhad amarmaladejar stuckon hisnose.Mother tookpity onhim.Stillon herknees,she inchedacrossthegrass,reached out,andturned thejar verycarefully.The jarslid off.The skunknodded athank-you,then turnedand slippedintothewoods attheback ofthe garden.None ofspraying（喷）business.Not onmy wonderfulmother.She toldthat storyover andover.Andshe alwayscalled theskunk Marmalade.Thats notall.There wasthetime,maybe threesummers later,whenIwasabouttwelve.It wasa rainymorning.Dadwent towork,and Motherwent shopping.My friendRob cameover sowecouldrun theelectric traininmyroom.All ofasudden,a scratchingsound camefromthe attic（|阁楼）.“Sounds likesome kindof animal,Rob said.Yeah.Lets takea look.”Out inthe hall,I openedtheatticdoor—very slowly.The noisestopped.I climbeda fewsteps.My eyeswere atfloorlevelt Isaw nothingbut boxesand trunksand anold dollhouse*Iclimbedtothetop ofthe stairswith Robafter me.Silence.“Lets lookaround,I said.Ifoundtheanimalbehind abox nearthe chimney.You guessedit.Black witha whitestripe downits back.Was hescared Youbet.At leastthafs howIrememberit.。