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(一)(课标全国)2015II•One day,little Tony went toa shoppingcenter withhis parent.lt wasver ycrowded.Tony sawa toyon a shop window.He likedit sove rymuchthat hequickly walkedinto the shop.After looksat the toyfor some time,he turnedaround andfound wherehis parents were missing.Tony wasscared andbegun to cry.A womansaw him crying andtelling him to wait outside a shop.Five minuteslater,Tony sawparents.Mom said,“How niceto seeyou again!Dad andI wereterrible worried.^Tony promisedher that this would neverhappenagain.空气空1=1-One day,little Tonywent toa shoppingcenter withhis.It wasvery crowded.Tony sawa toya shopwindow.He likedit sovery mucht hathequickly walkedinto the shop.After at the toy for somet ime,第六处此处代词代替的是故将改为them-it the school,them ito第七处删掉本文主要是谈论透过玻璃墙能欣赏到外面的景色,not因而是能欣赏到山上的雪景,故此处的否定意义不符,故去掉noto第八处与之间加意为“立即;匆忙”,in hurrya ina hurry第九处代使役动词后用动词原形作宾语补足语,fe-feel make构成.结构,意为“使某人做某事”,故将改为make sb.do sthfeltfee Io第十处:句意为尽管当我在那个教室读书时If^Although/Though还只是个孩子,但我永远不会忘记它根据语境可知,这是一个让步状语从句,故将改为或者If AlthoughThough短文改错r*1iJw—U-.Mav***a4«•一r・a im.e■—■IW・MB—■w・w・•,c-・-0i・V・・——・■—•441T V--■-…■■■■i«-c・―・**aamxaMaa■・——•«、・・・・■■■L vW-««Mlvw•Ma»wfl-»•tea*.*■—**•CWIMMwNiam*-■・-MAM-(课标全国)2015•IIOne day,little Tonywent toa shoppingcenter withhis parent.lt wasvery crowded.Tony sawa toyon ashopwindow.He likedit sovery muchthat hequickly walkedinto theshop.After looksat thetoyfor sometime,he turnedaround andfound wherehis parents were missing.Tony wasscared andbegun to cry.Awoman saw himcrying and tellinghim to waitoutsideashop.Five minuteslater,Tony sawparents.Mom said,“How niceto seeyou again!Dad andI wereterribleworried.J,Tony promisedher thatthis would never happenagain.答案One day,little Tonywent toa shoppingcenter withhis.It wasvery crowded.Tony sawa toyashopwindow.He likedit sovery muchthat hequickly walkedinto theshop.After at thetoyforsomet ime,he turnedaround andfound hisparents weremissing.Tony wasscared andtocry.A womansawhim cryingand himtowaitoutside shop.Five minuteslater,Tony sawparents.Mom said,“How niceto seeyou again!Dad andI wereworried.J,Tony promisedher thatthis wouldnever happenagain.解析第一处由下文的…以及倒数第二句中的妈妈说的话中可知托尼parent-parents hisparents were是和爸爸、妈妈一起去的,所以应该用复数形式parents第二处表示在商店的橱窗里,用介词on-in in,,第三处去掉句中使用了…结构多余故将其去掉very so...that very,第四处该动词位于介词后要用动词的形式,故把改为looks-looking aftering looks lookingo第五处或去掉后是一个宾语从句,句子意思和成分完整,应该用只起连接where-that wherefound作用的引导,也可以省略故把改为或去掉that where that where第六处本文描述的是过去的经历,连接的两个并列成分应当时态一致,故此begun-began and处用一般过去时,把改为begun began第七处由可知,此处和谓语动词并列,故用过去式telling-told andsaw第八处这里指的是前文提到的所以用定冠词修饰,表特指a-theshop,the,第九处后加这里特指托尼的父母亲所以用物主代词修饰saw hishis parentso第十处修饰形容词要用副词形式terrible-terribly worried(陕西)2015•My soccercoach retiredin lastweek.I wantedto doanything special for him at his retirementparty.My mummakes thebetter biscuits in the world,so Idecide to ask her for help.Mum taughtme somebasic stepof baking.I insistedon doing mostof the baking myself.I thoughtthe biscuitswere reallywell.My onlymistake wasthat Idr oppedsome on the floor afterI was packing them up.At aparty,my coach,with a biscuit inhis mouth,asked surprisinglywho madethem and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more ofthese biscuits/5My favoritepicture at the partyis ofmy coach and meenjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!答案My soccercoach retiredin lastweek.l wantedto dospecial forhim athis retirementparty.M ymummakes the biscuits in the world,so Ito ask her for help.Mum taughtme somebasic ofbaking.Iinsisted on doing most of thebaking myself.I thoughtthe biscuitswere really.My onlymistake wasthat I dropped someon thefloorI waspacking themup.At party,my coach,with abiscuit inhis mouth,asked surprisinglywho made themand joked,“Imight have toretireagain nextyear justget somemore of these biscuits.”My favoritepicture atthe partyis ofmy coach and methe biscuitswith happy laughter!解析第一处去掉用等表示的时间状语前不用介词,故去掉in last,next in第二处用于疑问句和否定句中,用于肯定句中,故将anything^something anythingsomething改为anything somethingo第三处表示比较的范围是故改为最高级better-best in the world,第四处意为“决定”,此处时态应与全文时态一致,故改为decide-decided decidedecidedo,,第五处是可数名词前面有修饰故用复数形式step-steps stepsome第六处系动词后接形容词作表语,副词不能充当表语,故改为well-good bewell good第七处句意为我唯一的错误就是当我正在打包的时候掉地上了一些根据句after^when/while意可知将改为或after whenwhile第八处第一段第二句中有提到此处为第二次提到,故用表特指故将改为a-the party,the atheo,,第九处后加分析句子结构可知是谓语部分从而不再是谓语动词,just tomight have to get故只能是非谓语动词此处表示目的,故用不定式第十处此处作介词的宾语,与之间enjoy-enjoying my coach and me ofenjoy my coach and me是主动关系,应用现在分词形式(四川)2015・Hi,Janice,lt*s beena monthsince Icame tothis newschool andI reallywant share with you some ofth eproblems I have been experiencing.As Itell you last time,I madethree newfriend here.We hangout togetherduring lunch and afterschool.We*vebeenspending alot oftime singin karaoke bars.IVs beenthree Saturdaysnow andit really costsme many.And Istarted to see thisas atimewasting activity!In fact,I dontlike togoanymore,so Im afraid111lose their friendship.How do you think I should do If you areme,wouldyou talk to himPlease help with me and give me some advice.Grace答案Hi,Janice,Ifs beena monthsince Icame tothis newschool andI reallywant share with you some oft heproblems I have been experiencing.As Iyou last time,I madethree newhere.We hangout togetherduring lunchand after school.Weve beenspending alot oftime in karaoke bars.IVs beenthree Saturdaysnow anditreallycosts me.And Istarted to see thisas atimewasting activity!In fact,I dontlike togo anymore,Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.do you think I should do If youme,would youtalk toPlease help with me and give me some advice.Grace解析第一处后加.为固定搭配,意为“想要做某事”want towant to do sth第二处根据从句中的时间状语可知该动作发生在过去,故应用一般过去时tell-told lasttime第三处为可数名词,根据前面的数词可知此处应用复数形式故将friend-friends Mendthree friend改为friendso第四处:().是固定搭配,意为“花时间做某事”故将sing-singing spendsometimein doing sth改为sing singingo第五处此处说的是在卡拉唱歌这件事让作者花费了很多钱,浪费了很多时间many-much OK,指代可数名词指代不可数名词故将改为many muchmany much,,第六处逗号前说不想再去了而后面又说害怕失去友谊由此可知逗号前后为转折关系,so-but而非因果关系故将改为so buto第七处该句中为插入语,分析句子成分可知动词后缺少宾语,而How^What doyou thinkdo how,为疑问副词在句中作方式状语,作宾语应用whato第八处根据下文的可知此处为条件句的虚拟语气与现在事实相反,应用一are-were wouldif般过去时故将改成are were第九处上文提到作者交了三个朋友,再结合上文中的可知此处指代那him-them their friendship三个朋友,为复数故将改为him themo第十处去掉而固定搭配意为帮助某人某事,后宾语为人时不用介词th helpsb.with sth.help故去掉而th(浙江)2015•My oldclassroom wasinteresting becausethree side of the classroom were made fromglass.Ienjoyed sit close to the windows and looking atthe view.On thelefthand sideof the class,I couldeasy see the football field.In the mornings,it wasfull ofstudents exercising.The viewfrom theback of the classroomis also splendid.Clo setothe schoolthere was a beautiful park withmany treesaround them.Farther in the distance,I couldnot enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On theright sideof theclass wasthe road.I wasalways interestedto seethe driversin hurry inthemorning.The positionof the classroom withitsview made me feltlike I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom,I willnever forget it.答案My oldclassroom wasinteresting becausethree of the classroom were madeglass.I enjoyedclose tothe windowsand looking atthe view.On thelefthand sideof theclass,I couldsee thefootballfield.In themornings,it wasfull ofstudents exercising.The viewfrom theback of the classroomalsosplendid.Clos etothe schoolthere wasa beautiful park withmany treesaround.Farther inthe distance,I couldnotenjoy the viewof snowy mountains.On theright sideof theclass wasthe road.I was alwaysinterestedto seethe driversin hurryinthemorning.The positionof the classroom withits view川made melike I was dreaming.I was only a child whenI studied in thatclassroo m,Iwneverforget it.解析,第一处是可数名词前面有数词修饰,故应改为复数形式side-sides sidethree第二处墙壁由玻璃制成,看得出原材料,故将介词改为from-of fromof,第三处后接动名词作宾语故将改为和构成并列sit^sitting enjoysit sitting,looking atthe view结构第四处是动词,需要用副词来修饰,故将改为easy-*easily seeeasy easily第五处全文用的都是过去时态,故将改为与全文时态保持一致is-was iswas,第六处此处代词代替的是故将改为them-it the school,them it0第七处删掉本文主要是谈论透过玻璃墙能欣赏到外面的景色,因而是能欣赏到山上的雪景,not故此处的否定意义不符,故去掉not第八处与之间加意为“立即;匆忙,,为固定搭配in hurrya ina hurry,,第九处使役动词后用动词原形作宾语补足语构成结构意为“使felt-feel makemake sb.do sth.某人做某事”,故将改为felt feelo第十处:句意为尽管当我在那个教室读书时还只是个孩子,但我永远不会忘If-Although/Though,,记它根据语境可知这是一个让步状语从句故将改为或者If AlthoughThoughhe turnedaround andfound hisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscared andtocry.A womansawhimcryingandhimtowa itoutsideshop.Five minuteslater,Tony sawparents.Mom said,5,“How niceto seeyou again!Dad andI wereworried.Tonypromised herthatthiswouldnever happenagain.解析第一处由下文的以及倒数第parent-parents hisparentswere…二句中的妈妈说的话中可知托尼是和爸爸、妈妈一起去的,所以应第二处:onfin表示在商店的橱窗里,用介词ino该用复数形式parents,第三处去掉句中使用了…结构多余,故将very so…that very其去掉第四处该动词位于介词后,要用动词的looks-looking aftering形式,故把改为lookslooking第五处或去掉后是一^宾语从句,句子where-that wherefound意思和成分完整,应该用只起连接作用的引导,也可以省略that故把改为或去掉wherethatwhere第六处本文描述的是过去的经历,连接的两begun^began and个并列成分应当时态一致,故此处用一般过去时,把改为begunbegan第七处由可知,此处和谓语动词并telling-told andsaw列,故用过去式第八处这里指的是前文提到的所以用定冠词修a-theshop,the饰,表特指第九处后加这里特指托尼的父母亲,所以用物主代词saw his修饰his parentSo第十处修饰形容词要用副词形式terrible^terribly worried-陕西2015•My soccercoach retiredin lastweek.I wantedto doanythingspecial forhimathis retirementparty.My mummakes thebett erbiscuitsintheworld,so Idecide toaskherforhelp.Mum taughtme somebasic stepof baking.I insistedondoingmostof thebaking myself.I thoughtthe biscuitswere reallywell.My onlymistake wasthat Id roppedsomeonthefloor afterI waspacking themup.At aparty,my coach,with abiscuit inhis mouth,askedsurprisingly whomade themand joked,“I mighthavetoretire5againnextyear justget somemoreoft hese biscuits/My favoritepicture atthe partyis ofmy coachandmeenjoythebiscuits withhappylaughter!答案My soccercoach retiredin lastweek.I wantedtodospecialforhim athisretirementparty.My mummakes thebiscuitsinth eworld,so Itoaskherforhelp.Mum taughtme somebasic ofbaking.Iinsisted ondoingmostof thebakingmyself.I thoughtthebiscuitswere really.My onlymistake wasthatIdroppedsomeo nthefloor I waspackingthemup.At party,mycoach,with abiscuit inhis mouth,askedsurprisingly whomadethemandjoked,“I mighthavetoretireagain nextyearjustgetsomemore ofthesebiscuits.My favoritepicture atthe partyis ofmycoachandmethebiscuitswithhappylaughter!解析第一处去掉用等表示的时间状语前不用介词,故in last,next去掉in第二处用于疑问句和否定句anything^something anything中,用于肯定句中,故将改为something anythingsomethingo第三处表示比较的范围是故改为最局better-best intheworld,第四处意为“决定”,此处时态应与:decide^decided decide级全文时态一致,故改为第五处是可数decidedo step-steps step名词,前面有修饰,故用复数形式some第六处系动词后接形容词作表语,副词不能充当well-good be表语,故改为well goodo第七处句意为我唯一的错误就是当我正在打after^when/while包的时候掉地上了一些根据句意可知将改为或after whenwhileo第八处第一段第二句中有提到此处为第二次提到,a-the party,故用表特指故将改为the atheo,第九处后加分析句子结构可知是谓语部just tomighthaveto分,从而不再是谓语动词,故只能是非谓语动词此处表示目get的,故用不定式第十处:止匕处作介词的宾enjoy-enjoying mycoachandme of,语与之间是主动关系,应用现在分词enjoy mycoachandme形式
(三)(四川)2015•Hi,Janice,Its beena monthsince Icame tothis newschool andI reallywantsharewithyousomeof theproblemsIhave beenexperiencing.As Itell youlasttime,I madethree newfriend here.We hangouttogether duringlunchand afterschool.Weve beenspendi ngalot oftime singinkaraokebars.Its beenthree Saturdaysnowand it really costsme many.And Istarted tosee thisas atimewasting activity!In fact,I dontlike togo anymore,so ImafraidIll losetheirfriendship.How doyou thinkIshoulddoIfyou areme,would youtalk tohimPleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grace圣崇■木-1=1Hi,Janice,Its beena monthsince Icame tothis newschool andI reallywantsharewithyousomeof theproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.As Iyoulasttime,I madethree newhere.We hangout togetherduring lunchandafterschool.Weve beenspending alot of timeinkaraokebars.Its beenthree Saturdaysnow anditreally costsme.And Istarted tosee thisasatimewastingactivity!In fact,I dontlike togo anymore,ImafraidIlllosetheirfriendship,doyouthinkIshoulddoIfyoume,would youtalktoPleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grace解析第一处:后加为固定搭配,意为“想要want towant todo sth.做某事”第二处根据从句中的时间状语可知该动作发生tell-told lasttime在过去,故应用一般过去时第三处为可数名词,根据前面的数词friend-friends friendthree可知此处应用复数形式故将改为friend friendso第四处:是固定singfsinging spendsome timeindoingsth.搭配,意为“花时间做某事”故将改为第五处sing singingo此处说的是在卡拉唱歌这件事让作者花费了很多many-much OK钱,浪费了很多时间指代可数名词,指代不可数名many much词故将改为many much,第六处逗号前说不想再去了而后面又说害怕失去友谊,so-but由此可知逗号前后为转折关系,而非因果关系故将改为so buto第七处该句中为插入语,分析句子成How-What doyouthink分可知动词后缺少宾语,而为疑问副词,在句中作方式状do how语,作宾语应用whato第八处根据下文的可知此处为条件句的虚拟are^were wouldif语气与现在事实相反,应用一般过去时故将改成arewere第九处上文提到作者交了三个朋友,再结合上文中的him-them可知此处指代那三个朋友,为复数故将改theirfriendshiphim为themo第十处去掉固定搭配意为“帮助某人with helpsb.with sth.某事,后宾语为人时不用介词故去掉而help th
(四)(浙江)2015•My oldclassroom wasinteresting becausethree sideoftheclassroomweremade fromglass.I enjoyedsitclose tothe windowsandlookingattheview.On thelefthand sideoftheclass,I couldeasyseethefootballfield.In themornings,it wasfull ofstudentsexercising.The viewfrom theback oftheclassroomisalso splendid.Close totheschoolthere wasabeautifulparkwithmany treesaround them.Farther inthe distanee,I couldnot enjoytheviewofsnowymountains.On theright sideof theclass wasthe road.Iwasalways interestedtoseethedrivers in hurryinthemorning.The positionoftheclassroom withits view mademe feltlike Iwas dreaming.If Iwasonlyachildwhen Istudiedinthat classroom,I willnever forgetit.摩索■口木-My oldclassroom wasinteresting becausethree oftheclassroomweremadeglass.I enjoyedclosetothewindowsand Iookingattheview.On thelefthand sideoftheclass,I couldseethe footballfield.In themornings,it wasfull ofstudentsexercising.The viewfrom theback oftheclassroomalsosplendid.Close totheschoolthere wasa beautifulparkwithmany treesaround.Farther inthe distance,I couldnot enjoytheview ofsnowymountains.On theright sideoftheclasswas theroad.Iwasalways interestedtoseethe driversinhurryin themorning.The positionoftheclassroom withitsviewmademelikeI wasdreaming.IwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthat解析第一处classroom,I willneverforgetit.side-sides side是可数名词,前面有数词修饰,故应改为复数形式three第二处墙壁由玻璃制成,看得出原材料,故将介词from-of from改为ofo第三处后接动名词作宾语,故将改为sit-sitting enjoysit sitting,和构成并列结构lookingattheview第四处是动词,需要用副词来修饰,故将easy^easily see改为easy easilyo第五处全文用的都是过去时态,故将改为与全文is-was iswas,时态保持一致。