高三名校协作体-读后续写Lying+at+the+cost+of+honesty+讲义 高考英语作文复习专项

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[1]Missy was absolutely mybest friendin thewhole world.We hadknown each othersince firstgrade,and weliterally dideverything together.We frequentlyvisited eachothershomes,we kneweachothersfamilies likethey wereour own.The interestingthingabout ourrelationship,however thefact wasthat theolder wegot,the moreour valuesseemedto differ.We stillenjoyed alot of the samethings,but Iwasabit moresettled whilesheloved beingassociated withpopular peopleand things.Although shewas basicallyagood person,she hadno problemwith forcingthings togo herway.

[2]Perhaps thisis whyit seemedthat herfamily actuallytrusted memore thanthey（凹痕）trusted her.So,on theday whenMissy showedup atmy housewith ahuge dentinher father^car,I knew that wewere infor atroublesome time.

[3]She hadbanged thecar intoa treewhile outthat day,and sheknew herfather wasgoingto havean explanation.So shestopped bymy housein orderto makeup astory thatwouldlessen herfathers rage.Missy decidedto tellhim thatwhile in a parkinglot,someone musthave backedinto thecar anddented it.Looking atthe dentwith some（打消）crashed leavesand barkstill stickingthere,I attemptedto perishher thought.I；dont thinkyour fatherwill buyit.Dont worryshe insisted,even ifmy daddoesnttrust me,hell trustyou.My rolewas toconfirm fbrher.Now keepin mindthat Ihadstrong objectionsto lyingand Iwanted absolutelynothing todo with the situation.I lovedherparents justlike myown,and Idid notwant tobe aparty tothis liethat Missywascreating.Nevertheless,after muchrequest anda generalquestioning ofmy loyaltyto ourfriendship,I decidedthat theleast I could dowas toact asa silentwitness.That way,Iwasnt actuallylying;I justwasnt tellingthe fulltruth.Paragraph l:An houror solater,we presentedMissys fatherwith thecar andthe inquirybegan.Paragraph2:Her fatherlooked atme withgreat disbelief.一句话归纳下原文▼发小撞坏父亲汽车，求我帮她圆谎友谊与道德沉默还是坦白？文本关键词:

1.lying-truth

2.friendship-relstionship

3.honesty

4.trust

5.silent-silence参考范文▼An houioi solater,we presentedMissys fatherwiththecar andthe inquirybegan.Herfather examinedthe dent,his browsfurrowing indeep concern.He looked at Missy,hiseyes filledwith amix ofastonishment anddisbelief.Missy,with anervous smile,repeatedthe storywe hadmade upearlier.As shespoke,Icouldsee herfathers trustwaver,his eyessearchingfor anysign ofdeception.With everyutterance thatescaped herlips,a pangofguilt andregret washingover me,I painfullystruggled withthe internalconflict ofloyaltyto myfriend andthe moraldilemma ofmaintaining alie.Word count:92Hei fatherlookedatme withgieat disbelief.In thatpivotal moment,the innerstrugglebetween loyaltyand honestyreached itstipping point.With aheavy heart,I musteredthecourage to speak the truth,for Iknew thatthe foundationof any relationship is built on trust.I confessedto Missysfather,recounting theevents asthey truly unfolded,sparing nodetail.The roomwas envelopedinaprofound silence,while theweight ofmy confessionlingeredin theair.It wasa difficultlesson tolearn,but throughthis experience,I discoveredtheimportance ofintegrity andthe truemeaning offriendship.Word count:95值得积累的语料点睛▼父亲震惊+怀疑的动作、表情、情绪描写注意第一段蓝色部分的两个独立主格句发小撒谎的过程（注意怎么避免对话，飞速推进）注意第一段红色部分的那个非常简洁的句子这块同学们在处理的时候很容易过分细节，显得啰嗦这篇文章的主角是「我」，围绕的是我的「内心挣扎」发小就是妥妥的工具人，没必要着太多笔墨，容易冲淡主题，且字数不好把控我内心挣扎的层层推进真相和盘而出的系列动作同学们在处理我的内心挣扎的时候，最常见的问题是写得过于突兀，没有层层推进的「过程感」但你可能会很纳闷，续写部分就两段，还能写出什么花儿来？其实也不需要你怎么花大力气，简单两句话其实就可以处理出这种层层推进的过程感第一段结尾处我开始陷入挣扎，到发小父亲看我时，情绪到达顶峰这波操作就可以了接下来大家在处理「我把真相和盘而出」这个桥段的时候，很可能要么处理成了对话，要么处理得啰里啰嗦由于篇幅有限，大家一定要学会把这种啰里啰嗦的内容大刀阔斧往前推进的写法唯一需要注意的是，动作是有先后顺序的你要把真相和盘而出，动作简单分解一下，是不是得先鼓起巨大的勇气（鼓起勇气肯定有原因吧），然后才说明真相With aheavy heart,I musteredthe couragetospeakthetruth,for Iknewthatthe foundationofanyrelationshipisbuiltontrust.I confessedto Missysfather,recounting theevents astheytrulyunfolded,sparing nodetail.有价值的套路句（具体可参看前一篇文章）这里重点复习下上篇文章中提到过的上价值的套路句语料「这次的经历给了我宝贵的教训」这次经历▼this experience/event/incident/encounter给了我▼注意冒号前一般过去时，冒号后一般现在时（放之四海皆准的普遍真理）注意下这里介词用This experienceimparted a valuable lesson to me:...to注意下这里介词用This experienceinslilled inme avaluable lesson:...in注意这里主语是人宝贵的▼I gainedavaluableinsight fromthis experience:...valuable/meaningful/precious/priceless经验教训▼lesson/insight所以这篇文章最后上价值的句型也可以利用上一篇的语料进行改造，比如随便写一个This experienceimparted avaluable lessonto me:never compromiseyour principlesdue toexternalinfluence.It wasa challenginglessontograsp,but itallowed meto uncoverthesignificance ofintegrity andgain adeeper understandingofthegenuine essenceof黑色部分的句子可写可不写friendship.。