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大家好,今天我跟大家分享年全国高考英语写作部分考情分析第一部分短文改错2023年份甲乙甲乙甲乙202320232022202220212021文章体裁记叙文记叙文记叙文说明文说明文记叙文固定搭配代词短语搭配介词被动语态名词单复数1时态动词主谓一致非谓语动词介词动词2代词时态形容词时态动词不定式连词3名同的数定语从句动词时态形容词最高级动名词介词4形容词冠词短语名词形容词比较级时态5连词连词非谓语动词非谓语动词时态动词6定语从句动词时态状语从句连词连词固定搭配7介词副词副词非谓语动词冠词形容词8冠词非谓语动词并列连词非谓语动词名词复数人称代词9主.谓故形容伺限定词代词形容词祈使句10总结从最近三年真题考察情况可以看出,文体以记叙文为主,考点考察主要以动词时态、定语从句、名词、动词、非谓语动词为主,其次就是主谓一致、代词、介词、固定搭配等等考点,要求考生对英语语法考点深层次领会,建议每次学习完语法点都要以思维导图的方式进行默写领会,以及做一些的关于高考英语语法的模拟练习它不同于短文填空考察的面可以说是非常广泛,注意全面掌握语法点二,真题演练高考英语短文改错的解题技巧全文浏览(快速阅读),注重每一句意的整合
1..逐句精读,注重每一句的形式整合(成分、词性、篇章模式..…)2有个小规律每句话基本上都有一个错误,每个长句基本上都有两个错误
3.考点个数
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①名词+谓语动词+非谓语动词个错误
②其他考点会有个错误=4・55-6有个小提示就是把短文改错变成开心消消乐这样来操作,每句话都根据考点分布规律逐个套
5.上去,逃不中的就进行下一个考点进行尝试考点分布名词、动词、形容词、副词、介词、连词、冠词、代词、并列、逻辑、定语从句、
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2023.你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动请你以一位中国历史人物为题写52一篇短文投稿,内容包括.人物简介及事迹;1意义或启示
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100.题目已为你写好2【答案】Confucius isa well-known figurein Chinesehistory.His teachingsemphasized the importance ofmoralvalues,respect forelders,and socialharmony.Confucius traveledthroughout thecountry,impartinghis wisdom to countlessdisciples andleaving aprofound impacton Chinesesociety.The significanceof Confuciuscannot beoverstated.His teachingsshaped themoral andethical foundationof Chinese culture,fostering respect for authority,harmonious relationships,and thepursuit of knowledge.Even today,his ideascontinue toguide individualsand communitiesin Chinaand beyond.Confucius^life offersvaluable lessons.He stressedthe self-cultivation,respect forelders,and thepursuit ofknowledge,which serves asa guiding light in our fast-paced andinterconnected world.His teachingsremindus oftheimportanceof integrity,compassion,and socialresponsibility.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿详解】词汇积累
1.著名的well-known-famous人物玲figure person强调emphasize-stress基石出foundation fbasis句式拓展
3.简单句变复合句原句His teachingsshaped themoral andethical foundationof Chineseculture,fostering respectforauthority,harmonious relationships,and thepursuit ofknowledge.拓展句His teachingsshaped themoral andethical foundationofChineseculture,which fosteredrespectfor authority,harmonious relationships,and thepursuit ofknowledge.【点睛】【高分句型1]Confucius traveledthroughout thecountry,imparting hiswisdomtocountless(运用了现在分词作伴随状语)disciples andleaving aprofound impacton Chinesesociety.【高分句型2]He stressedthe self-cultivation,respectforelders,and thepursuitofknowledge,which(运用引导的非限制性servesasaguidinglightinourfast-paced andinterconnected world.T which定语从句)第二节书面表达
72.请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受注意.词数左右;
1100.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数2【答案】When Iwas in my primaryschool,T hadan opportunitytoattenda musicalcontest heldin myschool.That wasthefirsttime Iwatched alive musicalperformance.The fantasticplayers touchedme deeply.I asked my parents allowing meto take up apiano lessonfor beginner.In thebeginning,itwasquitedifficult toread thenotes onthe stave.However,it didnot demoralizeme.I spentmost ofmy leisurehoursto practicepiano.Although myfingers werepainful afterfew hourspractice,I feltsatisfied ifI couldplaya musicpiece completely.Even thoughI willnot pursueas mylife career,I willstill continuelearning andplaying pianoasmy hobby.It issimply becausemusic isthe bestmedication formy soul.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文,请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受【详解】词汇积累
1.机会opportunity—chance使沮丧demoralize—discourage满意的一satisfied content空闲的leisure—spare句式拓展
2.合并简单句原句The fantasticplayers touchedme deeply.I askedmy parentsallowing meto takeup apiano lessonfor beginner.拓展句The fantasticplayers touchedme deeply,so Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupa pianolessonforbeginner.点睛【高分句型11When Iwas inmy primaryschool,I hadan opportunitytoattenda musicalcontest held(运用了引导的时间状语从句)inmyschool.when[高分句型2]Although myfingers werepainful afterfew hourspractice,I feltsatisfied ifI couldplaya musicpiece completely.。