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Writing——Write aletter ofadvice写作指导建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告建议信可能是写给个人,也可能是写给某个组织或机构,信的内容要包括写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly,或等依次陈述建议,具体为:secondly,thirdly to begin/start with,then,later,last butnot least第一段表明写作意图陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气第二段应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告注意千万不要让别人以为你是在投诉,而不是提建议第三段对提出的建议进行总结要注意有礼貌,使读者容易接受话题词汇话题句式反馈feedback n.建议suggestion n.建议proposal n.冒昧做某事venture v.有益的beneficial adj.建议advise v.建议suggest v.推荐,劝告recommend v.wise adj.明智的段首常用语
1.11am writingto expressmy viewsconcerning...2You haveasked formy adviceabout...and Iwill tryto makesome suggestions.表达“建议”常用语
2.11think themost suitable...for youis...21would liketo suggestthat...3You,d better.../It9s betterto...4As faras Iam concerned.../In myopinion...5For onething...,for another...6If Iwere you,I would...7It seemsto methat youcould...段尾常用语
3.11think itwould bemore beneficialif youcould...21believe youwill takemy adviceinto account/consideration.31hope youwill findthese proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.41will bemore thanhappy tosee improvementsin thisregard.51will beready forfurther discussingthis matterinto details.典例展示为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了专栏假设你是该“HEARTTOHEART”栏目的编辑收到一封署名为的求助信信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰近Jamie,Worried日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响请用英文给该同学写一封回信内容要点如下表示理解并给予安慰;提出建议并说明理由
1.
2.注意.词数个左右;
2100.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数4参考词汇.脾气,情绪temperStep One审题谋篇体裁建议信话题对生活和学习的建议时态一般现在时人称第二人称Step Two词汇运用
1.控制你的脾气_______________________________
2.体育锻炼___________________________________
3.有效的_____________
4.去除_____________
5.保持乐观_________________________
6.积极的生活态度_____________________________Step Three句式表达完成句子
1.
①最重要的是学会控制你的脾气The mostimportant thing is________________________________________.
②你不可能做或者说出你会后悔的事You maynot door say.
③事实情况是人人都会有这样的一段时期,在这期间事事不顺,因此你不必担心过多is thateveryone willhave one of those periods__________,so youdont haveto worrymuch.句式升级
2.用合并句
①和
②4so that/in orderthatThe mostimportant thingis to learn to control your temper you maynot door sayanything youllregret.
⑤把句
③用改写成主语从句iteveryone willhave oneof thoseperiods when things seem tobe going wrong,so youdont havetoworry much.Step Four连句成篇(注意使用等关联词)first,second,andHi Worried,Im sorryto knowthat yourehaving sucha badtime atthe moment._______________________Yours,Jamie一■■■■参*考*答*案,.一・・Step Two词汇运用
1.control your temper
2.physical exercise
3.effective
4.get ridof
5.remain optimisticabout
6.a positive attitude towards lifeStep Three句式表达完成句子
1.;1to learnto controlyourtemper2anything youllregret3The truthwhen thingsseem tobe goingwrong句式升级2,
④so that/in orderthat51t istrue thatStepFour连句成篇One possibleversionHi Worried,Im sorryto knowthat yourehaving sucha badtime atthe momnrit.The truthis thateveryone willhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,so youdont haveto worrymuch.Themost importantthingistolearntocontrolyourtemperso thatyoumaynot door sayanything youllregret.Here arethree usefultipsFirst,talk tosomeone youtrust abouthow youfeel.This isa goodway ofletting youranger outwithouthurting othersor yourself.Second,go outdoorsand playteam gameswith yourfriends asphysicalexercise isan effectiveway toget ridof anger.And third,remain optimisticabout yourfuture.Such apositiveattitudetowardslifecan behelpful inlifting yourspirits.I hopeyoull soonfeel calmerand carryon asnormal.Yours,Jamie。