2024届高考英语作文专项复习读后续写助人类--热爱起重机的哈罗德讲义素材

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文A lotof peoplelook forwardto retirementafter decadesof working.But onthe otherhand,there areothers whoare stillso passionateabout theirfield-its difficultfor themtohang uptheir hats.很多人在工作了几十年后都盼望着退休但另一方面，还有一些人仍然对自己的领域充满热情，他们很难放下帽子Depending onthe career,it couldbe possibleto continueworking ifone reallywantsto.That isunless healthissues ariseand leavethe personno choicebut towalk away.根据职业的不同，如果一个人真的想继续工作，也可以继续工作除非出现健康问题，让他别无选择，只能离开Sadly,this iswhat happenedto a man namedHarold.Unfortunately,he foundhimself（起重机）no longerable towork asa crane operator becauseof hishealth.He feltlonelybecause his children didnt visit him much.不幸的是，这就是发生在一个叫哈罗德的人身上的事情不幸的是，他发现自己再也不能当起重机了（起重机）操作员，因为他的健康他感到孤独，因为他的孩子们不常来看他Thanks tothe kindnessof astranger,Harold wasable torelive hisdays ofworking onthejob site.多亏了一个陌生人的好意，哈罗德得以重新体验他在工地上工作的日子It allstarted whencrane operatorShawn Beveridgeof Ohiokept noticingamanin awheelchairsitting outsideof anursing home.Day afterday,the manwould sittherewatching thejob siteand thecranes moveabout forhours.这一切始于俄亥俄州的起重机操作员肖恩•贝弗里奇不断注意到一名坐在轮椅上的男子坐在疗养院外日复一日，这名男子会坐在那里看着工地和起重机移动数小时Shawn wasconfused whythe elderlygentleman showedup everyday,and finallybecamecurious enoughto introducehimself.肖恩弄不明白这位老先生为什么每天都会出现，终于好奇地做了自我介绍“Since dayone whenI arrivedon thisjob site,Fve noticedhim sittingthere everymorningfrom7am,he takeslunch whenwe doand doesnt leave until I shut the cranedownand headout.Shawn wrotein hisblog.nI originallyhad thoughtto myself,Hesjust acurious oldman andwanting toenjoy hisdays outsideVS beingcooped upin hisroom.1Well aftera coupleof days,I myselfgot curious,so Iwalked overand introducedmyselfto him.”在他的博客中写道“从我来到这个工作站的第一天起，我就注意到他Shawn每天早上点就坐在那里，我们一起吃午饭的时候他就吃午饭，直到我关上起重机7出门才离开“我最初想，”他只是一个好奇的老人，想在被关在房间里的外VS面享受他的日子“几天后，我自己也感到好奇，所以我走过去向他介绍了自己Shawn learnedthat themans namewas Haroldand thetwo endedup conversingforabout twoand ahalf hours.肖恩得知这名男子名叫哈罗德，两人聊了大约两个半小时注意续写词数应为左右；

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150.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答2Para1:Another thinghe foundout wasthat Harold was previouslya craneoperator,but hadtoquit dueto hishealth.Para2:So,he decidedthat hewould makea dealwith Harold.第一段他发现的另一件事是，哈罗德以前是一名起重机操作员，但由于健康原因不得不辞职第二段因此，他决定和哈罗德做一笔交易文本分析故事大意哈罗德是一名起重机驾驶员，因为健康原因不得不离开心爱的工作岗位但他每天都会来到工地，坐在轮椅上，观看起重机作业这引起了肖恩的注意两人攀谈了起来，肖恩得知哈罗德很多事情决定帮助他重返珍爱的岗位，再次获得自信主题帮助他人会点亮自己的精神世界伏笔

1.He feltlonely becausehischildrendidntvisithimmuch.

2.He takeslunch whenwe doand doesn*tleaveuntilIshutthecrane downand headout.续写情节第一段由第一句可知，重点写哈罗德向肖恩解释他对起重机的热爱，以及自己令人绝望的病情肖恩听到这里的反应以及做出的决定第二段有第二句可知，重点写两人达成的协议，肖恩让老人教授自己驾驶起重机的技能,自己则会给老人带来咖啡和早餐最后升华主旨重点短语are passionateabouthang uptheir hatshealthissues ariseleavethe personno choicebut todowork asanursing homefeellonelyend upconversing好句翻译（见原文和答案）不幸的是，这就是发生在一个叫哈罗德的人身上的事情

1..多亏了一个陌生人的好意，哈罗德得以重新体验他在工地上工作的日子

2.事实证明，哈罗德患有一种多年来一直在折磨他的疾病

3.他喜欢看他过去喜欢做的事情，从未想过自己能再看到起重机或在起重机周围

4.小小的善举会有很大的帮助，没有什么比振奋别人的精神更有益的了5参考范文Another thinghe foundout wasthat Haroldwas previouslya craneoperator,but hadtoquit dueto hishealth.As itturned out,Harold hada diseasethats beeneating awayathim foryears.Harold explainedto Shawnthat hewas nearingthe endof hislife andthat hewasoveijoyed tobe inthe presenceof a crane again.He enjoyedseeing whathe usedtolove todo fora livingand neverthought hedever beable tosee orbe aroundacraneagain.Let alonebe soclose toseeing onein action.Shawn wassaddened tolearn thatthoughHarold hastwo daughtersand ason,they haventvisited himfor thelast sevenyears whenhehas beenin anursing home.So,he decidedthat hewould makea dealwith Harold.Shawn toldHarold thathewould comesit andchat withhim everyday afterhis shiftwas overso Haroldcould judgehimon howhis cranework wasthat day.That wayShawn couldlearn fromHarold.Inexchange,Shawn wouldget thesenior ablack coffeeeach morningand lunchtwice aweekfrom whereverHarold wanted.In thisway,Shawn hadthe opportunityto makethis man*slast daysenjoyable.In Shawn*s company,Haroldwasno longerlonely,while Shawnlearneda lotfrom thisformer experiencedcraneoperator.A littleact ofkindness cango alongway——and there*s nothingmore rewardingthan brighteningsomeones spirits.。