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19The AngePsVoice
一、请根据两个提示句进行故事续写,词左右150Music hasalways beenan integralessential part of my family.As a little girl,Iremember my mother singing with the(女高音)choir,her clearsoprano blending with the others in praise.As Igrew older,she and I wouldsing whilewe didthe dishes orhung clotheson the line.When my brother Deanwas born,he was also amusical soul,and helearned toplayguitar as well assing.In goodtimes andin bad,there wasalways musicin ourhouse.It shapedus,comforted us,and gaveus an outletfor feelingsthat mightotherwise havegone unspoken.(自闭症)After Deanbecame a father,we learnedthat hisoldest son was on the autismspectrum.My nephewDjdid nothandle socialsituations well,and sometimeseven forhim tospeak aloudto morethan justthe familywas astruggle.He workedvery hard to overcome his fears,so muchso thatthe yearhe waseight,he decidedhe wantedto bepart of theChristmas musicprogram atchurch with the otherchildren in his Sundayschool class.The parthe hadbeenoffered was one thatrequired him to singa verseall onhis own—a solo.My brothercarefully explainedto him that todo thiswould meanthat he would besinging infront of the wholeaudience;there would be noone singingwith him.Dj consideredthis verycarefully.After acouple ofdays,he decidedthat he wouldaccept thepart.He explainedto usthat hebelieved he could doit becauseit wasa veryspecial occasion,and hewould practice until he was as perfect as hecould be.For overa month,he and his fatherpracticed together.Every eveningwould findthem lockedaway in the musicroom,my brotheron guitar,and mynephews smallvoice comingfrom somewheredeep downinside his little body.Hegained confidence,and whenthe dayof theconcert arrived,he wascertain allwould gowell.My brotherwaitedbackstage with him that night untilit wasalmost timeto goon.After givingDj double thumbs-up,he came out tosit withthe rest of the family to watch and take photos.When Djwas to sing,other angelsfiled out,with wingson shouldersand shininghalos onheads.Being silent,the pianiststarted overagain,and the cue camea lowvoice filledthe air.
二、原作品读The AngeFsVoiceMusic hasalways beenan integralpartofmyfamily.As alittle girl,I remembermymothersingingwith the choir,herclear sopranoblendingwith the othersinpraise.As Igrew older,she andI wouldsing whilewe didthedishesor hungclotheson theline.When my brother Deanwas born,he wasalso amusical soul,and helearned toplay guitaraswellassing.In goodtimes andin bad,there wasalways musicin ourhouse.It shapedus,comforted us,and gaveusanoutlet forfeelingsthat mightotherwisehave goneunspoken.自闭症After Deanbecame afather,we learnedthat hisoldest sonwasonthe autismspectrum.My nephewDj didnothandlesocial situationswell,and sometimeseven forhim tospeak aloudto morethan justthe familywasastruggle.Heworked veryhardtoovercomehisfears,so muchso thatthe yearhe waseight,he decidedhe wantedto bepartof theChristmas musicprogram atchurch with theotherchildren in his Sundayschool class.The parthe hadbeen offeredwas onethatrequired himto singa verseall onhis own—a solo.My brothercarefully explainedto himthat todo thiswould meanthat hewouldbesinging infront of the wholecongregationsthere wouldbe noone singingwithhim.Dj consideredthis verycarefully.After acouple ofdays,he decidedthathewouldaccept thepart.He explainedto usthathebelieved hecould doit becauseit wasa veryspecial occasion,andhe wouldpracticeuntilhe wasasperfectashecouldbe.He saidhe knewhis daddywould helphimtobe thebest singerpossible.For overa month,he and his fatherpracticed together.Every eveningwould findthem lockedaway in the musicroom,mybrotheron guitar,and mynephews smallvoice comingfrom somewheredeep downinside his little body.Hegainedconfidence,and whenthe dayof theconcert arrived,hewascertain allwould gowell.My brotherwaited backstagewithhimthatnight untilit wasalmost timeto goon.After givingDj doublethumbs-up,he cameout tosit with the rest ofthe familyto watchand takephotos.When itwas finallytime for Dj to sing,he and thelineof angelsfiled out,with featheredwings perchedon littleshouldersand tinselhalos ontousled heads.They eachstepped forwardto sing their verses—until thetime camefor Djtosing.The musicplayed on,he heardhis cueto sing,and hefroze.His littleface grew pale,and wecould seethe panicin hiseyes as the silencegrew.He seemedto get smaller aseach note played out.The pianiststarted the intro again and played thecue,but stillnothing cameout.The entirecongregation seemedto leanforwardin anticipation.The silenceseemedenormous.The pianiststarted overagain,and whenthecue came,a lowvoice filledthe air.It wasmybrother,singing thesong inhissons place.Everyone turnedto see who was singing,but mymother andI werefixed onthe littlest angel on stage.Witheach wordhis fathersang,Dj stoodalittletaller.The colorcame backto hisface,andhis eyes began to sparkle.He openedhis mouth and began to sing along,hislittlevoice growingstronger witheach word.He finished his verses,stepped backinto line,and therest ofthe angelseach took their turn.The showended tothunderous applause,with thekids bowingdramatically,accepting theirpraise for a job well done.From theback seatofthecar onthe wayhome thatnight,I lookedat myfamily withnew insight.My brother——thisgiant ofafather,who hadonce beena goofy,tow-headed littlemonster whotook everyopportunity toprank meandtorment me,but whoalso climbedinto bedwith meafter havingnightmares andcried ifhe couldntfollow meeverywhere—had showneveryone whatlove wasthat ChristmasEve night.His eyesmet mineintherearview mirror,and hereached ahand backbetween theseats tohold mineforamoment.No wordsneeded tobe spoken.The understandingbetween uswas louder than thevoices ofthe choirthatnight.(加粗的单词为熟记单词,其它认识即可)L Wordsfor understanding单词音标词性释义单词音标词性释义不口」或缺的迈步integral[I ntigrol]adj.step[step]V.合唱团呆住choir[kwai ar]n.freeze[fri z]v.’女高音提/」、,百刃、soprano[s pronou]n.cue[kju]n.H(使)融合,协调.恐慌blend[blend]v.panic[paeni k]n某种人音符soul[sou1]n.note[nou t]n.塑造前奏shape[f eip]V.intro[i ntrou]n.(情感的)发泄口倾斜outlet[au tlet]n.lean[li n]v否则;不然期待;预期otherwise[A dowaiz]adv.anticipation n.[aen,ti sipel fn]处理巨大的handle[haendl]V.enormous[Ino mos]adj.难事.闪烁struggle[strA gl]n.sparkle[tspa:kl]vi歌曲的段落.雷鸣般的verse[V3S]n.thunderous[10A ndorss]adj.独唱鞠躬solo[sou lou]n bow[bau]V.(教堂的)会众突然地congregation n.dramatically adv.[.kDggrige IJ n][dr maetlkoli1增加愚蠢的gain[gel n]V.goofy[9U fi]adj..列队排出「.头发蓬乱的flle[fai1]vi tow-headed touhedid]adj,置于(顶上)对…恶作剧perch[p3tf]vi prank[pragk]V.闪亮的戏弄tinsel[ti nsl]adj.torment[to ment]vt.vi..光环噩梦halo[hei lou]n nightmare[nal tmeor]n.「力毛茸茸的工背面tousled taud]adj.rearview avju:]n.短语释义短语释义锁起来做完;演完lock awayplay out在内心深处向前倾deep downlean forwardfileout列队排出fix on固定;注视IL Readto appreciate:Fill inthe blanksaccording toChinese translations.给双手点赞后,他出来和家人坐在一起观看和拍照1DjAfter givingDj,he cameout tosit withtherestofthefamilytowatchandtakephotos.Action我和妈妈定睛注视着舞台上最小的天使
2.My motherandIwere thelittlest angelon stage.Action.他的小脸骤然苍白,随着沉默的加剧,他眼中的恐慌越发清晰可见3His littleface grew,and wecould seethe panicinhis eyes as the silencegrew.Expression+Emotion.他的脸又恢复了血色,他的眼睛开始闪闪发光4The colorcame backto hisface,andhiseyes began to.Expression演出在雷鸣般的掌声中结束,孩子们深深地鞠躬,接受众人对其出色表演的称赞
5.The showended to,withthekids bowingdramatically,accepting theirpraise fora jobwell done.Environment+Action全场观众似乎都期待着向前倾
6.The entirecongregation seemedto forwardin.Action.随着音符的结束,他的身形似乎越变越小了7He seemedtoas each noteplayed out.MetaphorIII.Language use1Application ofthe keywords:Fill inthe blanksaccording to the Chinesesentences地毯与墙壁的颜色搭配得十分协调
1.The carpetwellwiththecolour ofthe walls.无论喜欢与否,家庭影响了我们的生活,决定了我们成为什么样的人
2.Like itor not,our familiesour livesand makeus whatwe are.我背着几个沉重的包吃力地爬上山去
3.I upthe hillwiththeheavy bags..他们的努力帮助人质获得了自由4Their effortshelped thehostages theirfreedom..博物馆开门了,参观者鱼贯而入5The doorsofthemuseum openedand thevisitors beganto in..我们小心翼翼地从碎玻璃上走了过去6Wecarefully overthe brokenglass.门慢慢开启时我吓呆了
7.I withterror asthe doorslowly opened..枪声惊吓到马匹8The gunfirethe horses..能清楚地看到一名警察记下了经过车辆的车牌号9One policemanwas clearlyvisible thenumber platesof passingcars.烛光下,她的首饰光彩熠熠
10.Her jewelleryinthecandlelight..他们默默地垂头而立11They stoodin silencewith theirheads.2Imitation ofthe scenes
1.The musicplayed on,he heardhis cueto sing,and hefroze.He seemedto getsmaller aseachnoteplayedout.His littlefacegrewpale,and wecould seethe panicinhiseyes asthe silencegrew.The pianiststarted theintro againand playedthecue,but stillnothing cameout.模仿比赛倒计时铃声响了,艾伦呆呆地站在台上,说不出一个字来我能看到他眼中的失望,大声呼喊他的名字,但是没有任何回应
2.He openedhismouthandbegantosingalong,hislittlevoice growingstronger witheach word.He finishedhis verses,stepped back into line,and therestofthe angelseach tooktheir turn.The showended tothunderous applause,withthekidsbowing dramatically,accepting theirpraise fora jobwell done.模仿我先表演了一段独舞,再退回行列中和其余的伙伴们一起表演群舞表演一结束,雷鸣般的掌声便从台下爆发出来Key:
一、读后续写When Djwas tosing,other angelsfiled out,with wingson shouldersand shininghalos onheads.They eachsteppedforward tosingtheirverses——until thetime cameforDjtosing.With musicplaying on,he heardhis cuetosingbutwas frozentothespot.His littleface paled,and panicwas inhiseyesasthesilence graduallyruled thewhole church.Thepianist startedtheintroagainandplayedthecue,but stillnothing cameout.The entireaudience seemedto leanforwardin anticipation.Being silent,the pianiststarted overagain,and thecuecamea lowvoice filledthe air.All ina splitsecond,everyoneturned toseewhowassinging.My eyesfixed onthelittlestangelonstage,hiseyesbegantosparkle.Opening hismouthand singingalong,his voicegrew stronger.No soonerhad hefinishedhisverses thanhe stepped backintoline,and theotherstooktheirturn.The showended tothunderous applause,withthekids bowingdramatically,accepting theirpraisefor ajobwelldone.Tears blurringmy eyes,the surpassinglove betweenthe fatherandthesonwaslouderthanthe voicesofthe choir.168wordsIII.
1.doublethumbs-up
2.fixed on
3.pale
4.sparkle
5.thunderous applause
6.lean anticipation
7.getsmallerIV.
1.The countdownbell rang,and Alanfroze,standing stunnedonthestage,unable toutter anyword.I couldsee thedisappointmentinhiseyes andexclaim hisname,but nothingcameout.
2.I firstperformed asolo dance,and thensteppedbackintolineto performa groupdance withmy restofthepartners.As soonastheperformance wasover,thunderous applausebegantoerupt fromthe crowds.。