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60The HiddenTreasure
一、请根据两个提示句进行故事续写,词左右150Old Man Donovan wasa meanman who hated children-He threwrocks at them andeven shotatthem with ashotgun.At leastthafs whatwe had heard.His smallfarm borderedour neighborhood where my younger sister Leigh Ann and I lived when we were growingup.His farmwas long,narrow andunusual.It heldtwo treasures.One washis beautifulfruit.There weremany varietiesof fruit:pears,apples andlots moreI justcant thinkof.The fruitnaturally drewthechildren tohis land.It madethem intothieves.But my sister and I didntdare totake hisfruit becauseof thehorrible(谣传)rumors we had heardabout Old Man Donovan.One summerday,we wereplaying in a nearbyfield.It wastime tohead backhome.My sister and Iwere feelingverybold thatday.There wasa shortcut toour housethat went through theDonovan farm.We thoughthe wouldntbe(地产)(甘美的)able tosee usrun acrosshis propertyaround theluscious fruittrees.We werealmost through the farmwhen we heard,“Hey,girls!,in agruff(粗哑的)low voice.We stoppeddead in our tracks!There we were face to face(连续重击)with OldMan Donovan.Our kneeswere shaking.We hadvisions ofrocks poundingour bodiesand bullets(刺穿)piercing ourhearts.“Come hereJ he said,reaching upto oneof hisapple trees.Every summer,we wouldvisit Mr.Donovan andtalk to him,but onesummer we heard that he was sick.
二、原版品读The HiddenTreasureOld Man Donovan wasa meanmanwhohatedchildren-He threwrocks atthem andeven shotatthemwitha shotgun.At leastthafs whatwe hadheard.His smallfarm borderedourneighborhoodwheremyyoungersisterLeigh Annand Ilivedwhenweweregrowingup.His farmwas long,narrow andquaint.It heldtwo treasures.One washis beautifulfruit.There weremany varietiesoffruit:pears,apples andlots moreI justcant thinkof.The fruitnaturally drewthechildren tohis land.It madethem intothieves.But mysister and I didntdare totake hisfruit becauseof thehorriblerumors we hadheardabout OldMan Donovan.One summerday,wewereplaying ina nearbyfield.It wastime tohead backhome.My sister and Iwere feelingverydaring thatday.There wasa shortcut toour housethat went throughtheDonovan farm.We thoughthe wouldntbe abletosee usrun acrosshis propertyaround theluscious fruittrees.We werealmost throughthe farmwhenweheard,“Hey,girls!”inagruff lowvoice.We stoppeddead inour tracks!There wewere faceto facewith OldMan Donovan.Our kneeswereshaking.We hadvisions ofrocks poundingour bodiesand bulletspiercing ourhearts.“Come here,he said,reaching upto oneof hisapple trees.Still shaking,we wentover tohim.He heldout severalripejuicy redapples.Take thesehome,“he commanded.We tookthe appleswith surprisedhearts and ran allthe wayhome.Of course,Leigh Annand Iate the apples.As timewent on,we oftenwentthroughold ManDonovans farmlandand hekept ongiving usmore lusciousfruit.One day,we stoppedby tosee himwhen he was on his frontporch.We talkedtohimfor hours.While he was talking,werealized that wehad found the other hidden treasure:the sweet,kind hearthidden behindhis gruffvoice.Soon,hewasoneof ourfavorite peopleto talk to.Unfortunately hisfamily neverseemed toenjoy ourcompany.They neversmiled orwelcomedus in.Every summer,we wouldvisit Mr.Donovan andtalk tohim.He toldus allkinds ofstories weloved tohear.But onesummer weheard that hewassick.When wefound out thathe had come home from the hospital,we visitedhim rightaway.His voicebox hadbeen removed.When heplacedhis fingerson his throat hisvoice cameout asa whisper.Wecouldnt understand him,but throughhis eyeswe couldtell whathe meant.The nextwinter,word gotaround thatOldManDonovan haddied,Leigh Annand Iwere heartbrokenand decidedtogo to the funeral.We werescared becausewe didntknow ifthe familywould welcomeus.When wegot tothe funeral,the familykindly greetedusand saidthey wereso gladwehadcome.We allweptmournfully,but ourwonderful memoriesof OldManDonovancomforted us.During thosesummers withMr.Donovan mysister andI learned not to judgea heartuntil youknow it.One mayjustfind a hidden treasure.(加粗的单词为熟记单词,其它认识即可)I.Words forunderstanding单词音标词性释义单词音标词性释义吝啬的.穿透mean[mi:n]adj.pierce[pi os]vt.射击门廊shoot[f ut]vi porch[po:U]n.border[bodor vt.与…接壤company[kA mponi]n.陪伴
1.古色古香的.摘下quaint fkweint]adj removefnmuv]vt.放置variety n.种类place[plei s]VtW raloti]传言低语rumors[ru:mo]n.whisper[wi spor]n.胆大的.意指daring[dew g]adj.mean[mi:n]Vproperty[pro poti]n.地产greet[grit]Vt向・・・问好美味的哭泣luscious[11A f9S]adj.weep[wept]vt..低沉粗哑的悲痛地gruff[9rA f]adj mournfully[mo:nflli]adv..连续重击.判断pound[pau nd]vt judge[d3A dj]Vt短语释义短语释义朝回走穿过head backgo through穿过继续run acrosskeep on面对面顺便拜访facetoface stopby抬起(手)立刻reach upto rightaway朝…走去(消息)传开go over to getaroundhold out伸出(手)III.Read toappreciate:Fill in the blanksaccording toChinese translations我们突然停住了脚步
1.We stoppedinourtracks!Action我们非常惊讶,带着苹果一路跑回家
2.We tookthe appleswith hearts andranhome.Emotion+Action我们还在发抖,向他走了过去
3.,we wentover tohim.Action我们都悲痛地哭了,但是有关老人的美好记忆使我们感到宽慰
4.DonovanWe all,but ourwonderful memoriesof OldManDonovanus.Emotion+Thinking和先生在一起的那些夏天,我和姐姐学会了在不了解他人之前不去随便评判别人
5.DonovanDuring thosesummers withMr.Donovan mysisterandI learnednot toa until youknow it.PhilosophyIV Languagein use1Application ofthe keywords:Fill inthe blanksaccording tothe Chinesesentences向母亲投去焦虑的目光
1.Jack Jackananxious lookat hismother.把手伸进口袋里拿出一张纸
2.Maria Mariareached intoher pocketand outa pieceof paper.我们走错方向了
3.We wereinthewrong direction.不相信地摇摇头
4.Mark Markhis headin disbelief.她跑着,心在狂跳
5.She ran,her heartin herchest.几缕阳光穿透了烟雾
6.A fewrays ofsunlight thesmoke.伸手去抚摸猫
7.Luisa Luisaout herhand tostroke thecat.我把宝宝抱在怀里
8.I thebaby inmy arms..他把手搭在她的肩上9Hehis handon hershoulder.我们走进房间,迎接我们的是一片寂静
10.Complete silenceusas weentered theroom.我们要分别的时候他痛哭了一场
11.Hebitterly whenit wastime forus toleave.2Imitation ofthe scenes1・“Come here,“he said,reaching upto oneof hisapple trees.Still shaking,we wentover tohim.He heldout severalripejuicy redapples.Take thesehome,“he commanded.We tookthe appleswith surprisedhearts andran allthe wayhome.Of course,Leigh AnnandIate theapples.模仿描写我帮邻居打扫卫生无意间发现一张钱便偷拿,而后归还邻居时,邻居却送我一个球拍的场景Key:
一、读后续写“Come here,“he said,reaching upto oneof hisapple trees.Still shaking,we wentover tohim.He heldout severalripejuicy redapples.Take thesehome,“he commanded.We tooktheappleswith surprisedhearts andran allthe wayhome.Of course,LeighAnnandIate theapples.As timewent on,we oftenwentthroughold ManDonovans farmlandandhad moreconversations withhim.While talking,we realizedthatwehadfoundtheotherhiddentreasure:the sweet,kind hearthidden behindhis gruffvoice.Every summer9we wouldvisit Mr.Donovan andtalktohim,but onesummerweheardthathewassick.When wefoundoutthathe hadcomehomefromthehospital,we visitedhim rightaway.His voicebox hadbeen removed.When heplacedhis fingersonhisthroat hisvoice cameout asa whisper.We couldntunderstandhim,but throughhis shinningeyeswe couldtell whathe meant.During thosesummers withMr.Donovan mysisterandI learnednot tojudge a heartuntil youknow it.One mayjust findahiddentreasure.169wordsPossible version2Without anydelay,we rushedtothehospital,where welearnt thathehadjust gonethrough asurgery onhisthroat.Looking athis deadlypale face,I,overwhelmed withsympathy andmercy,constantly reassuredhim thateverythingwould bebetter offsoon.Mr.Donovan,too weakto uttera singleword,exchanged glanceswith uswith hiseyes wetwithtears asif sayingthank you”.Fortunately,it didnttake longbefore Mr.Donovan wasback tohis oldcheerful self!Without thosesummers withMr.Donovan,mysisterandIwouldnt havelearnednottojudgeaheartuntilyouknow it
二、原作品读
1.dead
2.surprised,all
3.Still shaking
4.wept mournfully,comforted
5.judge,heart⑴
1.shot
2.drew
3.were heading
4.shook
5.pounding
6.pierced
7.reached
8.held
9.placed
10.greeted
11.wept
1.“Come here,hesaid,signaling tome tocome tohim.Still ashamed,I wentovertohim.He heldouta brandnew bat.Take ithome Jhe smiled.I tookthe batwith surprisedand gratefulheartsandran allthe wayhome.Of course,I likedit somuch.。