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37Another MiamiMoon
一、请根据两个提示句进行故事续写,词左右150Its5:30p.m.on aMonday,the peakof Miamirush hour,and mycar isspeeding upthe rampfrom U.S.1onto1-95heading northto myparents9home inHollywood,speeding abruptly turns into bumper-to-bumper crawling.A dangerousgame of lane weaving gains me a few yards on competing drivers,who unlikeme,have allthe timein theworld to getwhere theyregoing.Cant theytell Idont Cant they sensemy urgency,see mypleading eyes,the anxietyon myfaceIf only God would part the Red Sea of creeping taillights with a screaming emergency vehicle I could slip behindandfollow.My sister,a nurse,had calledunexpectedly.She wasstaying withdad for a while.Youd betterget hereJ she saidin atrembling voice.I hadjust beenthere yesterdayfor anice Sundayvisit andeverything seemedOK.This hadto beafalse alarm.It wastoo soon.I wasntready.After hangingup,I grabbedmy keysand flew down the stairs from my thirdfloor South Miami apartment,not waitingfor the elevator.Bending over the steering wheel,I raisedesperate eyesto heaven.What Isee throughmy blumngtears and my dustycarwindow astonishesme.In the darkening sky,a brilliantfull moonis gentlyrising,casting what feels almost like aprotectiveglow uponMiami9s citizens.The suddensight ofit loosensmy innerknots,and remindsme ofthe traditionIstarted yearsback whentravel becamemy passion.Even when were separatedby somany miles,sometimescontinents,,91said to my dad,we sharethe samemoon.Wherever we are,when wespot thefull moon,lets thinkof eachother,sending loveand energyacross thedistance.Thatll makeus feelcloser.,,With thatmemory,I sitstuck intraffic.But somethingchanged inmy innerheart.My sister火second calldoesnt makeme panicbecause I know Dadis atraveller too,and heis alwayswith me.
二、原版品读Another MiamiMoonIts5:30p.m.on aMonday,the peakof Miamirush hour,and mycar isspeeding upthe rampfrom U.S.1onto1-95heading northto myparents9home inHollywood,Florida.My speedingabruptly turnsinto bumper-to-bumper crawling.A dangerousgame oflaneweavinggainsmea fewyardsoncompetingdrivers,who unlikeme,have allthe timein theworldto getwhere theyregoing.Canttheytell Idont Cantthey sensemy urgency,see mypleading eyes,the_strain onmyface IfonlyGodwouldparttheRedSeaofcreepingtaillightswithascreamingemergencyvehicleIcouldslipbehindand follow.My sister,a nurse,had calledunexpectedly.She wasdown fromDaytona,staying withMom andDad fora while.Youd betterget here,“shesaidin anominous tone.I hadjust beenthere yesterdayforanice Sundayvisit andeverythingseemed stable.Still,I grabbedmy keysand flewdown the stairs from my third floor South Miami apartment,not waitingforthe elevator.This hadto bea falsealarm.It wastoo soon.I wasntready.Hunching overthe steeringwheel.I raisedesperate eyesto heaven.What Isee through the blur of tears and my dustywindshield startlesme.In thedarkening sky,a brilliantfull moonis gentlyrising,casting whatfeels almostlike aprotectiveglow uponMiamis motorizedmasses.The suddensight ofit loosensmy innerknots,and remindsmeofthetradition Istarted yearsback whentravel becamemy passion.Even whenwere separatedby somany miles,sometimescontinents,I saidtomyparents,we sharethe samemoon.Wherever weare,whenwespot thefull moon,lets thinkof eachother,sending loveand energyacross thedistance.Thatll makeus feelcloser.,,With thatmemory,I sitstuck intraffic.There9s nothingto dobut stareat themoon.It staresback,lulling mtinto astuporwith itssteady,hypnotic eye.The nextinstant myawareness shifts.Im keenlyalert...and Iknow with certainty.Awave of calm peace washes overme.I surrender,float init.Traffic no longer matters.Now,I too,have allthe timein theworld.No needto drivein aninsane hurry toget to Hollywood.Ws too late.I rest my head on the seatback and look out atthe cars around me with eyesno longer frantic.The otherdrivers remainunseeing andoblivious,probably evento themoon.But now,Dads withme.Hes tellingme notto worryabout beinglate.Hes lettingme knowthis timehes the travelerwho couldntwait toleave on his ownjourney.His wayis traffic-free.Hes takena shortdetour to meet me here beforepassingon.He saysthat forus,yesterday wasgoodbye,but wantsme tounderstand thatonhisroad ormine,were notapart.He knowsIll catchthe humorand meaningof hischoosing amoonlit nightto go——so hewont get lost inthedark,but mostlyas proofhe9s keepingour full moon tradition.Amid earthboundsouls inchingforward on the highway,I stopand go,cry andlaugh,sending loveand energyto onewhosoarson a higher way.(加粗的单词为熟记单词,其它认识即可)I.Words forunderstanding单词音标词性释义单词音标词性释义坡道,斜坡突然地ramp[remp]n.abruptly[o brAptli]adv.(车)首尾相接.小巷,车道bumper tobumper[bA mpor]adj.lane[lei n]n卜紧急crawl[kro:1]vi缓慢移动urgency[l3d3ons i]恳求的.焦虑pleading[pli dirj]adj.strain[strei n]n「.缓慢移动的尾灯creeping kri:pl rj]adj taillight[tel llait]n.紧急情况.溜走n.viemergency slip[sli p][i m3d39nsi].出乎意料地不祥的unexpectedly advominous[a:ml nos]adj.[,A nlk spektIdll]稳定的抓住stable[stei bl]adj.grab[graeb]vt警报.俯身alarm[olam]n.hunch[hA ntf]vi方向盘绝望的steeringwheel[sti ng]n.desperate[desporot]adj.模糊挡风玻璃blur[bl3:r]n.windshield[wi ndji:ld]n.使惊愕变里startle[sta:rtl]Vt.darken[da:kon]v(心)揪紧看见knot[na:t]n.spot[spo t]vt使平静改变lull[1A1]vt shiftU Ift]Vt恍惚,昏迷催眠的stupor[stu:p^r]n.hypnotic[hi pna:ti kadj.1疯狂的发狂的insane[l nsei n]adj.frantic[fraenti k]adj.平稳的意识steady[stedi]adj.awareness[o weonis]n.警觉的.未察觉的alert[o,13t]adj.oblivious adj[o blivi os1投射cast[ka st]vt protective[pro tektiv adj.保护的]松开绕行loosen[lu sn]vt detour[di:tu r]n.,地面上的证据earthbound adjproof[pruf]n.[130,bau nd]缓慢移动高飞,高涨inch[I ntj]vt soar[so:r]Vi.短语释义短语释义加速确定无疑speed upwithcertainty提醒某人..…迷路remind sb.of sth.getlostin盯着…看stare atI.Read toappreciate:Fill inthe blanksaccording toChinese translations.我的车速骤减,随即在首尾相连鲜有缝隙的车流里龟速移动1My speedingabruptlyturnsintobumper-to-bumper.Action•我拿上钥匙,没有等待搭乘电梯,就快步从南迈阿密公寓楼冲了下去23I my keys anddown thestairs frommy third floorSouthMiamiapartment,not waitingfortheelevator.Action.我俯身靠在方向盘上,绝望地看向天空透过模糊的泪水和蒙尘的挡风玻璃,眼前的一切让我惊呆了3the steeringwheel,I to heaven.What Isee throughthe blurof tearsandmydustywindshield startlesme.Action+Emotion.我把头靠在座椅上,望向窗外的车辆,双目不再狂热和急切4I____________________________________________theseatbackandlook outat the carsaround mewithno longer.Action+Emotion一阵平静的感觉流遍我的全身,我屈服下来,沉浸在那样的情绪里
5.A waveof calmpeace me.I surrender,float init.Emotion.在黑寂的夜空中,一轮圆月缓缓升起,为迈阿密街道上的车辆镀上了一层保护色6In thesky,a brilliantfull moonis gentlyrising,whatfeels almostlike a protectiveglow uponMiamis motorizedmasses.EnvironmentIV.Language inuse1Application ofthe keywords:Fill inthe blanksaccording to the Chinesesentences几个星期慢慢地过去了
1.The weeksby.她小心翼翼地慢慢向绳子挪过去
2.She movedforward,towards therope.她抓起自己的钥匙冲了出去
3.Sheher keysand rushedout.泪水模糊了她的视线
4.Tearsher vision.皎洁的月光洒进房间里
5.The moonawhite lightinto theroom..一开始他紧紧地握着我的手,但后来慢慢地松开了6He heldmy handvery tightlyat firstbut graduallyhis grip..天色暗了下来,飘落下一些雨滴7The skyandafewdrops ofrain fell..她身体前倾,伏在写字本台上8She leanedforward,overthedesk.2Imitation ofthe scenes
1.Hunching overthe steeringwheel,I raisedesperate eyestoheaven.What Iseethroughthebluroftearsandmydustywindshield startlesme.In thedarkening sky,a brilliantfullmoonis gentlyrising,casting whatfeelsalmostlike aprotectiveglow uponMiamis motorizedmasses.描写我孤独绝望地待在房间,突然一束阳光照射进.
2.Still,I grabbedmykeysand flewdownthestairsfrommythirdfloorSouthMiamiapartment,not waitingfor theelevator.This hadto bea falsealarm.It wastoo soon.I wasntready.描写我上班迟到,匆匆离家的情景Key:
一、读后续写With thatmemory,I sitstuck intraffic.But somethingchanged inmy innerheart.When staringat themoon whichiscasting brilliantlight,a waveofcalmpeacewashesall myanxiety andworry.I surrender,float init.It is at thistimethat Irealize trafficnolongermatters.There isno needfor meto drivein ahurrytogettoHollywood.Dad willunderstandme nomatter whereweare.I restmy head onthebackseat andlookoutatthecarsaroundmewitheyes nolongermad.My sisterssecond calldoesnt makeme panicbecause Iknow Dadisatraveller too,and heis alwayswithme.Iknow,hes nowthetravelerwho couldntwait toleave onhis ownjourney.His wayis traffic-free.Hes takena shortdetourtomeetmeherebefore passingon.were notapart.He knowI understandwhy hechoose amoonlit nightto go-just keepingour fullmoon tradition.Still inchingforward onthe highway,I stopand go,cry andlaugh,sending loveandenergy toone whosoars onahigherway.168Read toappreciate:
1.bumper-to-bumper,crawling
2.grabbed flewdown
3.hunching over,raised desperateeyes
4.restmyheadon,witheyes nolongerfrantic
5.washed over
6.darkening,castingLanguage inuse
1.Application ofthe keywords:
1.crawled
2.inching
3.grabbed
4.blurred
5.cast
6.loosened
7.darkened
8.hunching
2.1mitation ofthe scenes
1.Resting myheadonthe knees,I raisedmy hopelesseyes.Suddenly,a rayof sunlightshone intomy room,mybody,likeabunch ofglittering goldthread,not onlylit upmy room,but alsowarm myheart.
2.I grabbedmy handbag,slammed thedoor andflewdownthestairsfrommythirdfloortothegarage.After settlingdown,I flooredthe accelerator,hoping notto bestuck inthe traffic.。