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英语六级写作社会热点话题5——用改写My ViewOn FakeCommodity BrainDrainBrain DrainBraindrain isa delicateproblem withwhich ourcountry isconfronted.In thelastten yearsor so,a lotof scientistsand technicianshave swarmedintodeveloped countriesfor furtherstudies orresearch work,let alonenumerouspromising students.And thereare noindications thatthey willbe back home beforelong.Our countryhas paidthe expensesof trainingthem butlost them.How didthatcome aboutItis self-evident thattheir delayof coming back isdue tothose favorableworkingand livingconditions which are essential to researchwork.Sophisticatedequipment makesit easierfor oneto gainacademic achievements.Our competentscientistsabroad areoffered higher rewards and greater opportunities whichcontribute totheir successin career.It seemsthat itisn*t impossibleto solvethe problemand attractthescientists andthe likebackhomeso longas greatimportance isattached totheintellectuars deservingtreatment andeffective measuresare takento providethemwith excellentpay andagreeable conditions.社会现象和热点话题My Viewon BrainDrainThe prevalenceof brain drain hasbeen abig problemin oursociety.Almost everyday innewspapers carryarticles pertainingto brain drain.Although measureshave beenimplemented todeal withthis problem,it stillremainsa seriousthreat.A multitudeof factors,both individual and socialcontribute tobraindrain.Forone thing,a largeof scientistsand technicianshave swarmedinto developedcountriesfor favorableliving andworking conditionswhichareessentialtoresearchand work.Sophisticated equipmentalso makesit easierto gainacademiaachievements.For another,a greatmany topuniversities indeveloped countriesofferhigherrewardsandgreateropportunitieswhichcontribute totheir successincareer.个人和社会现象、生理和心理individual andsocial physicaland、学术和职业两个方面来阐psychological personal/academic andprofessional述There areseveral waysto addressthis problem.Rules andregulationsshould beimplemented tocontrol.At thesame time,people withoutstandingacademic perfomingshould beeducated togain theirwillness ofcomingback.With toughlaws andan educatedpublic,braindrainwill becomea thingof thepast.[讲义]
15.A+{Number\multitude}+of factors,both+{physical andpsychological\academic andprofessional\individualandsocial}+{affect\influence\contribute to\promote},---.发展中国家穷国less developed country leastdevelopedcountry。