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英语六级写作社会现象3——文章主体句式Body:
一、原因结果例There areprobably+[many\several\three]+[reasons\causes]+for this4-[dramatic\marked]+[increase\decline\change]4-in...
二、比较对照例[There isno doubtthat\Obviously,]+it has[its\both]+[drawbacks\disadvantages\negative effects]+[as wellas\and]+[merits\advantages\positive effects]...
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六、权威(专家)例As one+[scientist\writer\doctor\psychologist]+[wrote\commented\pointedoutvoted],...
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2000.1Direction:For thispart,you areallowed thirtyminutes towrite acomposition on thetopic How I Finance My CollegeEducation.You shouldwrite atleast120words,andbase yourcomposition onthe outlinegiven inChinese below.上大学的费用可以通过多种途径解决
1.tuition and fees哪种途径适合于我说明理由
2.Nowadays,tuition andfees for college aremuch higherthan everbefore.How tofinanceyour collegeeducation hasbecome amatter ofconcern formany.You candealwith inmany ways.You canget allof the money fromyour parents.You canapply foraloan especiallyset upfor collegestudents.You canalso acquirethe moneycompletelyby yourself,doing afull-time jobin summeror winterholiday.In addition,you canaskyour parentsfor most of itand earnthe restin yourspare timein college,by doingapart-time job.注.第一句引言
1.太多重复使用,缺乏变化2you canInmy opinion,I preferthe lastway.Having acquiredmostof the tuition and feesfrommy parents,I needntworry toomuch aboutthemoneyand canconcentrate onmystudy;ontheother hand,a part-time jobin myspare timemakes mycampus-lifecolorful.I canmake a lot offriends,improve myabilities缺点and learnlots ofknowledge.So,I choosethis wayto covermy tuition andfees.缺少连贯性一致性发展性连贯性HowIFinanceMyCollege EducationPreviouslyin China,a universityeducation wasfunded bythe government.Thissituation ischanging andstudents mustnow financetheir owneducation.As aresult,students are now facedwith thequestion howto pay for mycollege educationH注指代前文ThisThere areseveral possibleways toraise themoney topayfor fees and tuitions.Parents area sourceforcollegefunding,as is the casewith moststudents.Scholarships arealso availablefor studentswith outstandingacademic performance.Because scholarshipsare competitive,they are not availableto everyone.Studentscan alsotake outa loanfrom thebank.Banks canprovide loansto studentswithoutcollateral forthose whoneed them.And,many studentscan takeon part-time jobstohelp financetheir education.In citiessuch asBeijing,Shanghai andGuangzhou,thereare manypart-time jobopportunities forstudents bothonandoff campus.注来源,电视是我欢乐的主
1.source TVprogram ismain sourceof mypleasure.要来源重要词汇,你还单身吗?
2.available Areyou stillavailable打工,还可以用
3.take part-time jobdo outjob\hold temporaryjob校园内外
4.onandoffPersonally,I believea scholarshipisthebest wayto fundan educationas itnotonly paysforfeesandtuition,but alsoencourages studyinghard.My Viewon FakeCommoditiesThe prevalenceof fake commodities hasbeen abig problemin oursociety.Almost everyday newspaperscarry articlespertaining tofake commodities.Although measureshave been implemented to deal with this problem,it stillremainsa seriousthreat.Fake goodsare harmfulon manylevels.People sellfake commoditiesto makeaquick profitwhich underminesthe economyand fake goods canalso bedangerous tooneshealth.The effectis ageneral mistrustamong consumerstoward sellersand thefreemarket ingeneral.In addition,many fake commodities have been exportedoverseaswhich hasresulted ina poorreputation forgoods comingout ofChina andhashad anegative influenceon exports.There areseveral waysto addressthis problem.Laws andregulationsshould beimplemented/make/work outto banthe manufacturingand distributionoffake goods.At thesame time,consumers shouldbe educatedto enhancetheawareness ofidentify thesefake goods.With toughlaws andan educated public,fake goodswill becomea thingof thepast.用改写My ViewOn FakeCommodity BrainDrainBrain DrainBraindrain is a delicate problem withwhich ourcountry isconfronted.In thelastten yearsor so,a lotof scientistsand technicianshave swarmedinto developedcountriesfor furtherstudies orresearch work,let alonenumerous promisingstudents.And therearenoindications thatthey willbe back home beforelong.Our countryhaspaid theexpenses oftraining thembut lostthem.How didthat comeaboutIt isself-evident thattheir delayof comingback isdue tothose favorableworkingand livingconditions whichare essentialto research work.Sophisticatedequipment makesit easierfor oneto gainacademic achievements.Ourcompetent scientistsabroad areoffered higherrewards andgreater opportunitieswhich contribute to their success in career.It seemsthat itisn*t impossibleto solvethe problemand attractthe scientistsandthe likeback homeso longas greatimportance isattached tothe intellectuaPsdeservingtreatment andeffective measuresare takento providethem withexcellentpay and agreeable conditions.My Viewon FakeCommoditiesThe prevalenceof fakecommodities hasbeen abig problemin oursociety.Almost everyday newspaperscarry articlespertaining tofakecommodities.Although measureshavebeenimplemented todeal withthis problem,it stillremainsa seriousthreat.Fake goodsare harmfulon manylevels.People sellfakecommoditiesto makeaquick profitwhich underminesthe economyand fake goods canalso bedangerous tooneshealth.The effectisageneral mistrustamong consumerstoward sellersand thefreemarket ingeneral.In addition,many fakecommodities havebeen exportedoverseaswhich hasresulted ina poorreputation forgoods comingout ofChina andhashad anegative influenceon exports.There areseveral waysto addressthis problem.Laws andregulationsshould beimplemented/make/work outto banthe manufacturingand distributionoffake goods.At thesame time,consumers shouldbe educatedto enhancetheawareness ofidentify thesefakegoods.With toughlaws andaneducated public,fakegoodswill becomea thingof thepast.用改写My ViewOn FakeCommodity BrainDrainBrain DrainBraindrain isa delicateproblem withwhich ourcountry isconfronted.In thelastten yearsor so,alotof scientistsand technicianshave swarmedinto developedcountriesfor furtherstudies orresearchwork,let alonenumerous promisingstudents.And therearenoindications thatthey willbe backhome beforelong.Our countryhaspaid theexpenses oftraining thembut lostthem.How didthat comeaboutIt isself-evident thattheir delayof comingback isdue tothose favorableworkingand livingconditions whichare essentialto researchwork.Sophisticated equipmentmakesit easierfor oneto gainacademic achievements.Our competentscientistsabroad areoffered higherrewards andgreater opportunitieswhich contributeto theirsuccessin career.It seemsthat itisnt impossibleto solvethe problemand attractthe scientistsandthe likebackhomeso longas greatimportance isattached tothe intellectuaPsdeservingtreatment andeffective measuresare takento providethem withexcellentpay andagreeable conditions.My ViewOn BrainDrainThe prevalenceof brain drain hasbeen adelicateproblemin oursociety.Almost everyday newspaperscarry articlespertaining tobrain drain.Althoughmeasures havebeenimplementedtodealwiththis problem,it stillremainsa seriousthreat.It isself-evident thattheir delayof comingback isdue tothose favorableworkingand livingconditions whichare essentialto researchwork.Sophisticated equipmentmakesit easierfor oneto gainacademic achievements.Our competentscientistsabroad areoffered higherrewards andgreater opportunitieswhichcontributetotheir社会现象和个人两个方面来阐述successincareer.There areseveral waysto addressthisproblem.Laws andregulationsshould beimplemented/make/work outto banthe intellectuaPsdeservingtreatment.At thesame time,pepole shouldbe educatedto enhancetheawareness ofthem withexcellent payandagreeableconditions.With toughlawsand aneducatedpublic,braindrainwill becomea thingofthepast.。