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英语六级写作综合改8——错Passage2Until thevery latestmoment ofhis existence,man has been
1.hasbound to the planeton whichbe originatedand developed.Nowhe hadthe capabilityto leavethat planet and moveout into the
2.indirectlyuniverse tothose worldswhich hehad knownpreviously onlydirectly.Men haveexplored partsof themoon,put spaceships
3.onin orbitaround another planetandpossibly within the decadew
4.so川land into anotherplanetand exploreit.Can webe toobold
5.planetsas tosuggest thatwe maybe ableto colonizeother planetwithinthe not-too-distant futureSome haveadvocatedsuch aprocedure asa solutionto thepopulation problem:shipthe excesspeople offtothemoon.But wemust keepin head
6.mindthe billionsof dollarswe mightspend incarrying outthe project.To maintainthe earthspopulation atits presentlevel,wewould haveto blastoff intospace7,500people everyhour ofeveryday of the year.Why arewe spendingso littlemoney onspace exploration
7.muchConsider thegreat needfor improvingmany aspectsof the
8.Consideringglobal environment,one issurely justifiedin hisconcern for themoney andresources that they arepoured intothe spaceexplorationefforts.But perhapswe shouldlook atboth sidesof包
9.the coinbefore arrivinghasty conclusions.
10.arriving at/reachingPassage3Most peoplework toearn aliving andthey Producegoodsand services.Goods areeither agriculturallike maizeormanufactured likecars.Services aresuch thingslikeeducation,medicine,and commerce.These peopleprovide
1.asgoods;some provideservices.Other peopleprovide both
2.Somegoods orservices.For example,inthe same garagea manmaybuy acar orsome servicewhich helpshim maintainhis
3.andcar.The workpeople dois calledas economicactivity.Alleconomic activitiestaken togethermake upthe economic
4.system oftown,a city,a country,ortheworld.Such economicsystemis thesum-total ofwhat people do andwhat theywant.The workpeopledoeither provideswhat theyneed or
5.之前加anprovides themoney withthatthey can buyessentialcommodities.Of course,most peoplehope tohave enoughmoneyto buycommodities andservices whichare essential
6.whichbut whichprovide someparticular personalsatisfaction,suchas toysfor children,visits thecinema,and books.The scienceof economistis basisupon thefacts of our
7.nonessential之后加everyday lives.Economists studyour everydaylives andthe
8.togeneral lifeofourcommunities inorder tounderstand thewholeeconomic systemof whichwe area part.They tryto
9.baseddescribe thefacts of the economyin whichwe live,and toexplainhow itworks.The economistmethods shouldof coursebestrictlyobjective andscientific.Passage4British peopledont drinkas manytea asthey usedto,butGreat Britainstill takesalmost twenty-five percent ofall worldexportsofthecommodity.The worldlargest producersof teaareIndia,China andthe SriLanka.
1.muchThe quantityof teais affectedby theclimate,by thelatitudeat whichit isgrown andalso bythat partofthe teabush isplucked.In fact,as DominicBeddard,a teataster,
2.worldstells us,favour caneven dependon whichday theleaf is
3.包叮plucked:here arevery considerabledifferences between
4.quaHtyteas fromthesameestate madeon differentday,he says.Processing teais acomplicated procedure.After the
5.whichgreen leafhasbeenplucked,it isprocessed in a factory.
6.flavourQuickly andcarefully,theteais reducedtoasmall brittleparticle,which isthen driedand lookslike thetea yousee inapacket.The teacompanies thenrely ontasters as
7.daysDonimic tovalue thetea.This hasto bedone onaday-to-day basisbecause offluctuations inquality.Havingto tasteup tosix hundredcups oftea aday certainlycauses
8.slowlyDominics joban unusualone!题或者把改成take=account for9as likecause sb.to do之前加
9.such不是双宾语,而是宾语和补语make sbsth
10.makesPassage5Parents canbe supportiveof suspicions.They canbehelpful tothe teacher,or arein needof helpthemselves.Sometimes,I thinkparents aretoo hardto their children.I haveseenmany parentsof thiskind.I oftenhave theproblem ofparentscoming in and tellingme whatthey reallytreat theirkids.They tellme thatthey usuallystand overtheir kindswhen theydo their homework.They checktheir workand makebig fussoverthe grades.They criticizethe kidsover everythinghavingto dowith school.My responseusually is:well,you know,he isreallya goodkid.He isfine inmy class.Maybe youshould notbetoo strictwith them.”We wantparents torealize thefact thatteachers areprofessorsat workingwith children.They haveobserved manychildrenand manyparents.Because ofthis,and becauseoftheir specializedtraining,teachers canbe realisticabout
1.bechildren.Teachers knowwhether parentswant theirchildrento dowell andto behavewell.But teachersknow
2.onless whatchildren shouldbe ableto doat differentages andstages.They dontexpect the8-year-olds to dothework
3.howthat canonly bedone bythe12-year-olds.Parents,in thecontrary,often expecttheirchildrentodowhat isusuallybeyond theirage andability.Obviously,this maymake之前加“
4.agreat harmtothechildrens development.密切监视某人stand over后面必须缺少主语或者宾语what
5.him大惊小怪make abig fuss
6.professionalPassage6Thus youexperience successas youcomplete eachchapter.While youhave completedthe overallgoal,youknow youhave progressedtoward it.
7.that
8.betterPassage7althoughthe tremendousamounts ofmoney,time andenergy givingoverto oralhealth.
9.on后面必须接句子AlthoughCritics,on theother hand,slam theprofession.It canbeconservatively estimatedthat atleast15percent ofUnitedStates dentistsare incompetent,honest,or both,says aformer
5.haventPassage8All thesetokens ofsuccess areinasense merelybribesprovided byanother person.Therefore,theycanbeeffective anduseful.
3.despite某种意义上inasensePassage9It isnot justin academythat children are beenpushed toofarand toofast.Some parentsstart theirpreschoolWe needto abandonthe falsenotions thatwe can
10.dishonestcreate exceptionalchildren byearly instructionand such之前加“childrenaresymbols ofour competenceas parents.
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