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高考英语读后续写素材
一、场景描写
(一)自然场景A
1.夜幕降临darkness fell
2.天气寒冷The daywas bitterlycold
3.天空蔚蓝,阳光明媚The sky was blueand the sun was shining
4.大雨倾盆而下It waspouring reallyhard
5.皓月当空The moonwasshiningbrightly in the sky
6.天空繁星密布The skywas dottedwith stars
7.云散开了,太阳出来了The cloudsparted and thesunshone山丘沐浴在阳光下The hillswere bathedin the sunshine风越来越大,天空开始乌云密布The windwas gettingup andit wasbecoming cloudy
11.浓雾笼罩着整个大地The thickfog blanketedthe field
12.夜里一点声音都没有,只有萤火虫还醒着,小心翼翼的在夜空里织着一幅画.Theres nota singlesound atnight.Only thegioworms werestill awake,carefully weavingapicture in the nightsky.
13.不远处有一条小溪,在绿油油的两岸间潺潺流动
14.晴空万里,火热的太阳晒得我后背发烫Blue skystood talland far,and thesun wassearingmy back.
15.阳光下河面波光粼粼.The riverglitters in the sunshine.
16.月亮在天空中好像一盏夜灯,闪烁的星好奇地眨着眼睛Like alamp,the moonshone fromabove.The starstwinkled theireyes withcuriosity.Bthe bluesky蓝天the songsof birds鸟鸣the thunderingclouds雷霆万钧的云the fragileflowers娇嫩的花the greengrass青草the fragrantroses芬芳的玫瑰the setting/rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太阳Dark cloudswere gatheringinthesky.乌云密布The nightskywaslit upby flashesof light.一道道灯光照亮了夜空The cloudshad spreadand nearlycovered theentire sky.云彩扩散开来,几乎遮住了整个天空The sunwas nowhigh inthe southernsky.太阳正高挂在南边的天空上The sunwent in,andthebreeze becamecold.云层遮住了太阳,微风有了些凉意The mistmelted rapidlyinthemorning sun.在早晨的阳光下,薄雾涣然消散了The mountain area iscovered entirelyin densejungle.山区完全掩映在茂密的丛林中We climbedup awinding tracktowards amountain refuge.我们沿着一条蜿蜒的小道爬向山上的一处避难所The mountaintop wascovered withsnow.山顶被积雪覆盖The regionis uninhabitedexcept fora fewmountain villages.除了几个小山村之外,这个地区杳无人烟Bathed inthesunshineand delightedby fantasticscenery,we headedfor thedestination.沐浴在阳光下,享受着美丽的风景,我们向目的地出发社会场景
(二)1,整个教室一片安静Silence spreadacross theclassroom
2.整个教室安静了下来Silence fellintheclassroom
3.这是在学校的最后一天,整个班级非常难过It wasthe lastday ofschool.The wholeclass wasenvelopedIn sadness.
4.老师讲完故事后,教室里爆发出阵阵掌声.The teacherhaving finishedthe story,claps burstoutfrom theclassroom.
5.同学们争前恐后地发言All thestudents weretrying toget aword in.
6.他尴尬得涨红了脸His faceflushed withembarrassment.
二、语言描写对话标签在前
1.She said,“I would like to go with you,but Ihaven t finished my homework.”对话标签在后
2.“I wouldlike togo withyou,but Ihaven,tfinished myhomework.She said.这两句是最常见的形式,大家写出来,应该问题不大我们来看第三种形式对话标签在句子中间
3.“I wou1dliketogowithyou,“she said,“but Ihaven tfinishedmyhomework.”【提升语言描写小技巧】在对话标签中加入语气,嗓音,情感让你的描写更生动传神
①第一种加语气_“I wou1d loveto,said Emilyin a pleasant tone.“我很乐意这样做,”艾米丽用一种愉快的语气说这里用到了“in apleasanttone.,即“用一种愉快的语气”,基本结构为in a/an+形容词+tone如in apleasant愉悦的/firm坚定的/rude粗鲁的/sad悲伤的tone也可以用in atone of+名词的搭配如in atone ofsurprise用一种惊讶的语气in atone ofcuriosity用一种好奇的语气in atone ofimpatience用一种不耐烦的语气in atone ofcommand用一种命令的语气
②第二种加嗓音“I didnt meanto,she murmuredin a low voice.“我不是故意的,”她低声说这里用到了in alowvoice,即“小声地说道”或者“用一种...声音”,基本结构是:ina/an+形容词+voice如inahigh/low/sweet/loud/soft/weak voice用一个高/低/甜/响亮/软/弱的声音
③第三种加情感“I・・・I・・don tthink Im rightfor thepart,“I repliedwithembarrassment.“我・・,我..认为我不适合这个角色,我尴尬地回答这里用到了u withembarrassment,即“伴随着难堪”,基本结构是with+情感名词如withexcitement伴随着激动
④加副词“我再也不会那样做了J我回答如何丰富这句话里的对话标签呢?“I willnever dothat again,I answeredfirmly.加上了副词firmly坚定地这句话也可以这么写可将副词提到句首Firmly,I answered,“I willnever dothat again.”【语言素材积累】1“Well,“said thefarmer,as herubbed thesweat ofthe backof hisneck.此处在说的动作后,紧跟了as引导的状语从句,翻译成“一边,一边”他一边擦脖子后面的汗水一边说“好啊”2“I wantthat one,“the boysaid,pointing tothe little dog.=Pointing thelittledog,the boysaid,“I wantthat one.”此处在说的动作后,紧跟了doing的非谓语结构,表伴随3The farmerpickedup thedog,knelt downand saidinasoft voice,It syours now.”=The farmerpickedup thedog andknelt down,saying,It syours now.”此处是拿起狗,蹲下并温柔地说的三个并列动作,可以用并列谓语,也可以用第二条中的非谓语4With herhead down/With tearsin hereyes,she said,“Sorry.”小结在说的同时,可以加入伴随动作,即说话的同时自己/别人在做什么,用动作描写来辅助对话可以用as引导的从句,非谓语,并列谓语以及with的复合结构。