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第六十八讲写作一高级词汇一学习目标二考点解析I.写作要领写作时,如果仅局限在把内容交代清楚的水准上,只选用一些普通的、直截了当的词,或一律使用简单句平铺直叙,那么写出来的文章就会像一碗白开水,呆板、单调、没有可读性要想把一篇文章写好,不仅要使文章的意思表述清楚,而且还要尝试在表述中使用高级词汇和复杂句型,给文章增添文采,给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象在写作中,要想写出“出彩点”就要注意挖掘自己现存的词汇潜力,多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,这样在表达时更具有力度,能够增加文采我无法容忍他对我们说话的方式I can not bearthe wayhe speaksto us.在表达时,我们可设法用no longer put up with这一短语动词取代not bearIcannolongerput up withthe wayhe speaksto us.他在课堂上没有听我讲He didntlisten towhat Isaid inclass.(一般)He turneda deaf ear towhat Isaid inclass.(较好)第二句中用短语动词turn adeafearto就比普通短语not listento显得高级我突然有了个好主意Suddenly I had a goodidea.(一般)Suddenly Icame upwith agoodidea.(较好)All ofa suddenagoodidea occurred tome.(较好)在表达相近或相同意思时,要尽量避免过多地重复使用某一个单词,应学会选择使用其他恰当的同义词或近义词或词组来表达,这样能让阅卷老师感觉到你词汇量丰富,表达手法多样化我喜欢看书而我弟弟喜欢看足球比赛I likereading whilemy brotherlikes watchingfootball matches.(词汇重复)I amfond ofreading whilemy brotherenjoys watchingfootballmatches.(词汇多样)另外,我们可以利用单词的多种词性,或利用构词法进行词性转换这样就会摆脱千人一面的窘境,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉虽然工人的数量大大减少,但是产量却稳步提高Although thenumber ofworkers hasdecreased sharply,yet theoutput hasincreased steadily.(用动词词性)Although thenumber ofworkers hasundergone asharp decrease,yet theoutput hasexperienced asteadyincrease.(用名词词性)写作中多使用具体、确切的词汇,少用笼统、概括性词汇;多用蕴含感情色彩的词语,少用中性词如good指人时,我们可用以下形容词^:kind,honest,generous,selfless,brave,warm-hearted,sympathetic,honorable,humorous,smart,gentle等;good在指事物或事情时,我们可用以下形容词替换:great,fantastic,splendid,marvelous,excellent,wonderful,meaningful,enjoyable,nice等这样用词可表达得生动形象给平淡无味的语句添加“美味”,给评卷老师留下深刻印象以下句子中的形容词虽然都可以用good代替,但远不如现有的形容词出彩他是个热心的老师He isa warm-hearted teacher.我希望每个人都能玩得开心I hopeeveryone canhave awonderful time.n名师指导在表达中使用高级词汇,能反映出一个考生内在的底蕴,体现考生运用语言的能力和水平因此,我们要重视高级词汇的使用在选择高级词汇表达语意时,就应做到避“简”就“繁”,就是说尽量选择得体、规范、较长的词,少用常见、俗套的词如:我们机会相当大多数考生可能表达为We allhave thesame chance.”,这句中的词汇都是司空见惯的词汇,读起来毫无新意,但是,如果表达为“We allpossess thesameopportunity.就会给阅卷者一种印象------------------------------------该考生词汇量大高分必备的24个亮点词汇普通词汇高级词汇普通词汇高级词汇chance opportunitychoice alternativeideaopinion peopleindividuals名词result consequenceeffect influencehavepossess replacesubstitutebear put upwithunderstand makesense of动词take...intodevelop promoteconsideraccountenough adequaterich abundantproperappropriate importantvital/significant形容词absorbing/interesting difficultchallengingappealingfinally eventuallyhardly barely副词immediately ina flashnowadays currently连词so thereforeand aswell asin.即时演练选用适当短语取代句中画线部分fix oneseyes upon;putupwith;consist of;be devotedto;make useofl.The littleboy lookedat thepicture onthe wall.
4.All hislifb wasgiven tothe Partyseducational cause.・
5.We willjsg hervast experience,答案■:
1.fixed hiseyes upon
2.consists of
3.putupwith
4.was devotedto
5.make useof三练习题
1.occur替代think ofSuddenlyI hadan ideathat someone had broken into my house.玲
2.devote替代spendHe spendsall hisspare timein reading.玲
3.seek替代want/look forTheywanted to hide themselves behind the trees.玲
4.average替代ordinaryIm anordinary student.
65.but替代veryThe filmwe sawlast nightwas veryinteresting.玲_____________________________________________________________________________
6.seat替代sitOn hisway toschool,he foundan oldlady sitting by the road,looking worried.玲玲
7.suppose替代shouldHe shouldhave drivenmore slowly.玲
8.appreciate替代thankThank youvery muchfor youhelp.玲
9.the case替代trueI dont think it is true.玲
10.on替代as soonasAs soonas hearrived,he beganhis research.-
11.due to替代because ofHearrived latebecause ofthe storm.f
12.cover替代walk/readAfter walking10miles,we allfelt tired.玲
13.contribute to替代be helpful/usefulPlenty ofmemory workis undoubtedlyhelpful toEnglish study.玲
14.round thecomer替代coming soon/nearbyThe summervacation iscoming.Do youhave anyplans1玲Li Mingstudies ina schoolnearby.
215.come to light替代discoverThe familywere sopleased whenthey discoveredthe lostjewels.玲参考答案
1.occur替代think ofSuddenlyIhadan ideathat someonehad brokeninto myhouse.-An ideaoccurredto me that someonehad brokeninto myhouse.It occurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.
2.devote替代spendHe spendsall hisspare timein reading.玲He devotesall hisspare timeto reading.
3.seek替代want/look forTheysoughtwantedtohidethemselvesbehindthetrees.
4.average替代ordinaryIm anaverageordinarystudent.
5.but替代veryThe filmwe sawlast nightwas veryinteresting.玲The filmwe sawlast nightwas nothingbut interesting.The filmwe sawlast nightwas anythingbut boring.
6.seat替代sitOn hisway toschool,he foundan oldlady seatedsittingbytheroad,looking worried.
7.suppose替代shouldHe issupposed toshouldhave drivenmore slowly.
8.appreciate替代thankThank youvery muchfor youhelp.玲We appreciateyour helpvery much./Your helpis muchappreciated.
9.the case替代trueI don/tthinkitisthe casetrue.
10.on替代as soonasAs soonas hearrived,he beganhis research.玲On hisarrival,he beganhis research..
11.due to替代because ofHearrived latedue tobecause ofthe storm.
12.cover替代walk/readAfter coveringwalking10miles,we allfelt tired.
13.contribute to替代be helpful/usefulPlenty ofmemory workis undoubtedlyhelpful toEnglish study.玲Plenty ofmemory workwill undoubtedlycontribute toEnglish study.
14.round thecorner替代coming soon/nearby
①The summervacation isround thecornercoming.Do youhave anyplans2Li Mingstudies ina schoolround thecorner nearby.
15.come tolight替代discoverThe familywere sopleased whenthey discoveredthe lostjewels.玲The familywere sopleased whenthe lostjewels cametolight.。