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第六十九讲写作一一高级句式一学习目标二考点解析I.写作要领高考评分标准中的“复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构就是指句子结构的复合性和句型的多样性不论是复杂结构的运用,如强调句、倒装句等句型、含有名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句的复合句,还是较多的语法结构,如分词和不定式等非谓语动词的运用都指向句式的转换问题不容置疑,这些复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构会增加文章的表达力度、提升文章的档次在书面表达中,运用简单句固然可以减少表达过程中的失误,但是,书面表达中不尝试使用复杂句,写作水平永远上不了档次王亚平在太空做实验,吸引了地球上的所有学生Wang Yapingmade someexperiments inspace.lt attractedall thepupils onearth.根据这两个简单句之间的逻辑关系,我们可以将这两个句子用复合句表达出一It attractedall thepupils onearth thatWang Yapingmade someexperiments inspace.(含有主语从句)一Wang Yapingmade someexperiments inspace,which attractedall thepupils onearth.(含有定语从句)我不会相信你I wontbelieve you.—No matterwhat you say,I wontbelieve.(含有状语从句)一I wontbelieve whatyousay.(含有宾语从句)为提高书面表达的档次,可根据文章中的信息要点合理使用特殊句型,如:强调句、it的用法、倒装句等他看到报纸后才知道发生了什么事He knewwhat hadhappened afterhe readthe newspaper.一He didnot knowwhat hadhappened untilhe readthe newspaper.一It wasnot untilhe readthenewspaper thathe knewwhat hadhappened.用不了多久所有这些森林都会被毁掉All the forests willbe destroyedsoon.一It wontbe/take longbefore alltheforestsare destroyed.只有以这种方式,我们学生才能愉快、有效地学习We studentscan study happily and effectively onlyin this way.f Only in thisway canwe studentsstudyhappilyandeffectively.虚拟语气是语言表达中常用的一种形式,能蕴藏更多含义,使文章表达更委婉、含蓄,从而提高文字的信息含量你没有听我的建议,因此你这次没通过考试You didn t take my advice,so youfailed inthe examthis time.f Ifyou hadtaken my advice,you wouldnt havefailed inthe examthis time.—You shouldhave takenmyadviceotherwise youwould notfail inthe examthis time.-You mightnot havefailed inthe examthis timebut youdidnttakemyadvice.n名师指导在实际写作中,要想提高文章档次,就必须在文章中灵活使用复杂句式和高级表达方式只有这样,才能从整体上提升文章的档次例如2015年福建卷写作范文中In thepicture,we cansee aboy inworn clothes,sitting ata shabbywooden tablewith apile ofbooks onit.2015年湖南卷写作范文中He saidbefore thewhole classthat onlyif weput ourheart intoour lessonscould wemake greatprogress.以及2016上海卷范文中From whathas beenmentioned above,it isfierce competitionand lackofcommunication thatgive riseto thephenomenon.Only bymutual trustand understandingcan childrenfeelthe importanceand pride attached tothem.in.即时演练按照要求改变句式l.The childrencan growup mentallyand physicallyhealthy onlyin thisway.改为倒装句
1.1suggest Ihalyou shouldmake friendswilh peoplehaving different:characlcrislics orbackgrounds.(改为it作形式主语的复合句)
3.Time isso preciousthat wecant affordto wasteit.(改为so开头的倒装句)
4.The girlis spoken highly of.Her compositionwas wellwritten.(合并为带定语从句的复合句).
5.1tcalizcd theimportance cfRnglish when]entered wenicrhigh echccl(使用强调句型,强调时间状语)
6.Although he is young,he knowshow toget alongwell withothers.(改为as弓I导的彳到装句)答禁------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------l.Onlyinthiswaycan thechildren growup mentallyand physicallyhealthy.()
2.It issuggested thatyou shouldmake friendswith peoplehaving differentcharacteristics orbackgrounds.
3.So preciousis timethat wecant affordto wasteit.4,The girlwhose compositionwas wellwritten isspokenhighlyof.
5.It waswhen Ientered seniorhigh schoolthat Irealized theimportance ofEnglish.
6.Young asheis,he knowshow toget alongwell withothers.三练习题♦It句型
①It willbe+some time+before...(D It is+adj./n.+for sbto dosth.
③It is+被强调部分+that...♦more...than anyother表示最高级倒装句♦1The libraryis tothe eastof the teaching building.一2Although we are tired,we arehappy.—巧妙的改写♦1Only改成no onebutOnly Tompassed theexam lastweek.2as soon as.••改成No sooner...than.../Hardly...when.../Immediately.../The momentAssoonashad wearrived atthe cinemathan thefilm started.
3.have sb/sth do/doneThe girlwas knockedoff herbicycle andher legwas broken..—_______________________________________________________________________
4.变换插入语的位置D However,they suggestfees shouldbe chargedlow.—_____________________________________________________________________
②I thinkthis isa goodchance foryou to show your singing talent,and howwell youvelearnedChinese.—______________________________________________________________________
5.用同位语代替非限制性定语从句Meimei,who isseven yearsold,has beenlearning toride abicycle forseveral days.—_____________________________________________________________________参考答案♦It句型
①It willbe+some time+before...It wontbe longbefore humansvisit theMars.2It is+adj./n.+for sbto dosth.It isvery importantfor usto learncomputer well,because ithas changedour lifeso much.He saidsince it was anew modelin China,itwasimpossible tofix itwithout theright spareparts.
③It is+被强调部分+that...1Itiswhat YangLiwei hasdone thatencourages usa lot.2Those wholike readingextensively sayit isthrough readingthat weget ourknowledge.♦more...than anyother表示最高级Among theoptional courses,spoken Englishand computerstudy aremore popularthan anyoneelse.倒装句♦1The libraryis tothe eastof theteaching building.一East oftheteachingbuilding isthe library.2Although we are tired,we arehappy.一Tired asweare,wearehappy.巧妙的改写♦1Only改成no onebutOnly Tompassed theexam lastweek.—No onebut Tompassed theexam.2as soonas.••改成No sooner...than.../Hardly...when.../Immediately.../The moment一No soonerhad wearrived atthe cinemathan thefilm started.3have sb/sth do/doneThe girlwas knockedoff herbicycle andhad her leg brokenherlegwas broken..4变换插入语的位置1However,they suggestfees shouldbe chargedlow.一They suggest,however,fees shouldbe chargedlow.2I thinkthis isa goodchance foryou toshow yoursinging talent,and howwell youvelearnedChinese.3This isa goodchance fbryou,I think,toshowyoursingingtalent,and howwell youvelearnedChinese.
5.用同位语代替非限制性定语从句Meimei,who isseven yearsold,has beenlearning toride abicycle forseveral days.一Meimei,a girlof thirteen,has beenlearning torideabicycle forseveral days.2002上海卷Shakespeare,a sonfrom apoor family,a manof littleeducation,wrote playsand poemsthatare readall overthe world.。